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Nerima! Magistra Nelly Magi; The infamous (non-kinky) gender flip
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Topic Started: Apr 14 2012, 07:02 PM (1,139 Views)
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Japanese Teeth
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Apr 18 2012, 04:25 PM
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I can guarantee you that that will never become a relevant issue.
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rikalous
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Apr 18 2012, 07:06 PM
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Yeah, this is fanfiction for Negima, not To-Love-Ru. It's not going to get any more lowbrow than an entire chapter devoted to breast groping. 
Since Torako is apparently going to be a catgirl, I assume that m!Koyomi is going to be the resident dogboy.
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Apr 18 2012, 07:55 PM
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Perhaps, if by some miracle I manage to make it that far.
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Apr 18 2012, 11:53 PM
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I hope you do. I happen to enjoy this fic.
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Apr 19 2012, 11:15 AM
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I do have to point out, however, that it would be hilarious to have Torako meeting Kotaro.
"... She's a girl. She's a cat. And she's still manlier than you are, Kotaro-kun."
"Oh come on!"
Especially if they happen to meet when she's in heat...
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Yes I am. I said I would, and I hate going back on my word. IANCE, you pustulating whoreson, I am going to find you when this is over. They will make a torture porn movie about your death, and they will have to tone it down to maintain suspension of disbelief.
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There there. Go do evil things in the name of the government to feel better.
There Be Whales Here
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rikalous
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Apr 19 2012, 03:08 PM
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Is it still incestuous if you bang an alternate you of an entirely different species? Discuss.
Although by the time Torako's old enough to go into heat, she'll probably have hooked up with Natsuo.
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Apr 19 2012, 03:10 PM
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Banging yourself, even if it's your perfect clone, is not incestuous. It's masturbation.
And a bitch in heat won't care about that.
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Yes I am. I said I would, and I hate going back on my word. IANCE, you pustulating whoreson, I am going to find you when this is over. They will make a torture porn movie about your death, and they will have to tone it down to maintain suspension of disbelief.
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There there. Go do evil things in the name of the government to feel better.
There Be Whales Here
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rikalous
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Apr 19 2012, 03:59 PM
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A clone, you say? Someone with identical genes but a separate mind? We've got a word for when that happens in nature. Twin. I ain't seen anybody call Fuuka/Fumika masturbation.
Also, Torako's probably not going to be a bitch, and should know enough about her own physiology to take precautions.
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Apr 19 2012, 04:08 PM
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Once Torako gets properly introduced, I'm almost certainly going to write a bonus scene of her meeting Kotaro. Given a few...particularities about her character that I have in mind, it's going to be interesting.
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Apr 27 2012, 06:11 PM
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Okay, finally got back on writing this. Finally.
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Haru knocked on the door to Nelly's room. He had long since grown tired of reiterating his theories to his friends. At first it had been amusing to watch Yuu squirm, but it at the moment it appeared that he was coming to terms with it. Haru supposed he should be happy that he had finally gotten through his friend's skepticism, but more than anything he was bored with the fact that he was no longer getting the desired reaction. He wasn't used to such subtle pleasures. He wanted something with a bit more punch, which was why he had decided that since he had nothing else to other than homework, he would go back to pestering Kon about that incident. Which was why he was standing outside the door waiting rather impatiently for someone's response.
He knocked again, louder this time. This time he could hear a few seconds of rustling, and then a grumpy voice.
“What is it?”
It wasn't really the “Come in” that he had been hoping for, but it was close enough. He opened the door and stuck his head into the room. He was greeted by the sight of Asuma messily shoving a pile of boxer shorts into the top drawer of his dresser, grumbling to himself as he did so.
“Uh, what are you doing?” Haru asked.
“What does it look like I'm doing?” Asuma snapped without bothering to turn around. “I'm putting my damn underwear away. Stupid rat...”
“What stupid rat?”
“That stupid rat!” Asuma waved a hand at the couch, and for the first time Haru noticed a small, white, ferret-like creature curled up on top of a pair of neon pink teddy bear boxers. “It's Nelly's pet from back in England. Dumb thing keeps stealing my underpants for some reason.”
“Does it have a name?” Haru narrowed his eyes at the animal. It looked vaguely familiar, but he couldn't quite place it.
“Milly. The actual name is probably longer, but that's what Nelly calls her.”
“How did she get it here? Did somebody visit drop it off or something?”
“Hell if I know. Ever since Nelly-sensei showed up I just stopped asking questions about stuff like that.” He slammed the drawer closed with a bang. The corners of some of the boxers were still sticking out, but Asuma obviously didn't care. He finally turned around, and Haru noted that he looked just as disgruntled as he sounded. “What are you doing here, anyway? You looking for Nelly-sensei? Because she's at a teacher's meeting or something-”
“I'm looking for Kon, actually. Library club stuff.”
“Oh, he's...busy. Come back tonight.”
“Really? I didn't think that he had anything-” As Haru's eyes wandered lazily around the room, he was distracted by a certain shiny object. “What the hell happened to your bat?”
“Chachataro just, uh...I mean...” As soon as the words were out of his mouth, Asuma started to backpedal. “He just borrowed it, and-”
“He did this?” Haru picked up the bat and looked more closely at the distinctly hand-shaped imprint on the barrel. “That's...impressive. Never knew that you could even do that to a bat. You get into a fight with him or something?”
“No, no...” Asuma shook his head. “Look, there was just a misunderstanding, and the bat got a little messed up. Don't worry about it, okay?”
“Okay, okay, forget I asked.” Haru replaced the bat and took a step back. “You have any idea when Kon will be back?”
“No idea. Probably sometime this evening.” Asuma said with a shrug. “Now, I kinda have homework to do, so I'm going to have to kindly ask you to get out.”
“You do homework now?”
“Ha ha ha.” Asuma muttered mirthlessly. “Nelly wanted me to get it done before she got back from her meeting so she could check it over.”
“Don't you have all weekend for that?”
“Nelly apparently has some stuff she's doing over the weekend, so I have to get it done today. So goodbye.”
“See you later, then?” Haru ducked out of the room. There were all sorts of weird thoughts running through his head as he walked back to his own room. Something was very much not right.
I'm going to have fun with this.
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Apr 28 2012, 05:21 AM
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You are naming f!Kotaro Torako? Hehe. XD
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The only true insult to an individual is to deny his potential to be beyond what he is now.
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Apr 28 2012, 06:00 AM
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It would be fairly fun to see their differences.
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Yes I am. I said I would, and I hate going back on my word. IANCE, you pustulating whoreson, I am going to find you when this is over. They will make a torture porn movie about your death, and they will have to tone it down to maintain suspension of disbelief.
- Shadow Crystal Mage wrote
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There there. Go do evil things in the name of the government to feel better.
There Be Whales Here
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Apr 28 2012, 06:18 AM
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Indeed it would be. Oh, yes it would be.
This is definitely going to change her interaction with Kaneda, that's for sure. XP
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Apr 28 2012, 06:22 AM
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Of course. If it didn't, then the gender change would be pointless, wouldn't it?
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Yes I am. I said I would, and I hate going back on my word. IANCE, you pustulating whoreson, I am going to find you when this is over. They will make a torture porn movie about your death, and they will have to tone it down to maintain suspension of disbelief.
- Shadow Crystal Mage wrote
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There there. Go do evil things in the name of the government to feel better.
There Be Whales Here
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Apr 28 2012, 07:18 PM
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Update once again.
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Kon sat quietly in the one of the side rooms of the Tatsumiya shrine. On the low table in front of him lay an ink stick, antique brush and inkstone, a small cup of water ,and an assortment of rectangular paper tags. On his left, the tags were blank and neatly stacked. On his right, they were smeared with ink and scattered rather haphazardly across the table, which was also smeared with ink. A few feet in front of him was another low table, facing his own.
Setsumaru sat at that table, facing Kon. The table held the same assortment of items as Kon's, albeit in much neater fashion. His eyes were focused on the paper tag which he was currently inscribing. With practiced strokes, he wrote a series of symbols onto the tag. He placed the brush on the inkstone, leaned forward, and blew gently on the paper. Satisfied that the ink was dry, he held it up for Kon to see.
“This is a barrier seal, my lord.” He said in a a flat voice. “Placing this on a doorframe will create a barrier in the doorway via the summoning of low level magical spirits. The strength of the barrier is dependent on both the skill of the caster as well as raw magical potential. I must ask you to please reproduce this, sir.”
“You don't need to call me 'lord' or 'sir'.” Kon said. Setsumaru showed no sign that he had even heard the words.
Kon sighed and hunched over his table, doing his best to imitate the careful lettering that Setsumaru had drawn. The final result was a bit wobbly, and there was a rather large thumb smudge on one of the symbols, but other than that, Kon figured it was close enough. He started to lift the paper and immediately set it bad down as the ink began to drip. He blew on the paper a few times and lifted it up again.
“Is this good?”
“It is a good first attempt, my lord.”
Kon couldn't quite tell if he was being sarcastic. Setsumaru stood up and gingerly took the seal from Kon and carried both of them to the door.
“Allow me to demonstrate, sir.” He continued. “If you would not mind, could you please stand just outside this door?”
“Of course.” Kon sprang up, glad to be on his feet again. His legs had been falling asleep. He all but skipped over to the doorway.
“Thank you for your cooperation, my lord.” Setsumaru bowed. “I know it is not my place to make requests of you.”
“Don't worry about it.” Kon answered as he stepped through the doorway. “You're the one who's teaching me. If anything, I should be calling you 'sir'.”
Setsumaru twitched a bit at the statement, but otherwise ignored it. He lifted up the tag that he had made himself and with a slap hung it on the top of the doorframe. There was a pulse of magic and a faint gold glow flashed in the doorway.
“This is what a typical barrier seal looks like. The barrier is weak and easily broken, but in the event that the barrier is destroyed, the person who activated the charm will be notified.”
Kon took a step forward and attempted to reach a hand through the door. His hand met something vaguely tangible and slowed to a stop, as if he had just shoved his arm into a pillow. He pressed against it, and it gave a little, but only slightly. He removed his hand and took a step back. Setsumaru reached up and removed the seal. The barrier disappeared with a pop. Kon stepped cautiously back into the room.
“And now we will see how well your seal works.” Setsumaru reached up to place the tag on the doorframe.
“Don't I get to do it?” Kon asked.
“As this is your first time creating one of these charms, there is a chance, however slight, considering your skill, that the seal may not work correctly. It is only for your own safety, my lord.”
“Oh, Okay.” Kon took another step back from the door. He wasn't nearly as confidant in his ability as Setsumaru apparently was. As Setsumaru lifted the tag up, Kon could see that it was nearly illegible. He really needed to practice writing with a brush more often. Setsumaru attached the charm to the door. For a moment, nothing happened. Then the charm exploded with a smokey bang, leaving a large char mark on the wall above the door. Setsumaru turned around slowly to face Kon. The lank length of hair that usually hung over on side of his forehead was now standing straight up, and his forehead was smudged with soot.
“Oops.” Kon bit his lip to keep from chuckling. “I guess I need to work on my handwriting.”
Setsumaru's expression didn't change as he began to wipe the grime off of his face.
“Yes, that would probably be a good idea, my lord.”
Yeah, I'm going to have fun with this.
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