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Unequally Rational And Emotional Thread; It's Negima with Everything Else Added!
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Topic Started: Apr 15 2012, 06:40 PM (11,705 Views)
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 27 2012, 07:22 PM
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No, it's fine, it's just hard. I have to manually add in new paragraphs since this whole post copies as one long paragraph instead of several.
Perhaps just send it by Doc X? The reason we stopped using that was because the uploader has unreliable, but that problem's gone, right?
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OverMaster
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Sep 27 2012, 07:28 PM
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Oboy. Whee.
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The latest few Doc Xs Darkenning has been sending me have been working fine, yeah.
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What is the point anymore?
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 28 2012, 02:18 AM
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Hmm… OM, I'm looking at the file up next, and it seems to still need a sequence. I've mark it in green on the file in the link I gave you. We either remove that part, or you give a sequence before that explaining what happened.
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OverMaster
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Sep 28 2012, 04:10 AM
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Oboy. Whee.
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Oh, that bit. Since I wrote it in advance, and I failed to edit it out later, it referenced events that didn't make it into the final cut. Yeah, it can go out, no prob.
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What is the point anymore?
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 28 2012, 06:12 AM
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Cool. No other needed additions, then?
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OverMaster
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Sep 28 2012, 08:53 AM
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Oboy. Whee.
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Not really, nope. Thanks.
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 28 2012, 06:00 PM
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OM, I'm taking a brief break because today is my birthday, but the chap should be ready tomorrow or the day after.
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OverMaster
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Sep 28 2012, 06:01 PM
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Oboy. Whee.
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Don't worry. Happy Birthday!
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 28 2012, 06:04 PM
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Thanks. I've still gotta write my profile anyway. Can I also write the recap of the next/last chap? I want to try for a proper epilogue to our collaboration.
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OverMaster
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Sep 28 2012, 06:07 PM
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Oboy. Whee.
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Sure, the dance floor is yours.
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Merctrin
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Sep 28 2012, 06:07 PM
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It's your birthday? Cool. Happy Birthday!
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Sep 28 2012, 06:30 PM
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Mundus Magicus.
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Shidou Hikaru knew how it felt, seeing how something fell in what looked like slow camera out of her reach, just as she was powerless to stop it in time. It happened all the time back when she was a clumsy child, and she'd break a vase or something else valuable at her home. Time seemed to slow down just enough to let her experience the mild terror, to try and fail, to see the object crashing down against the floor, even up to the shards flying in all directions, after which time would retake its normal pace just in time for her brothers to scold her.
Granted, her brothers all loved her, in a perfect healthy and sincere way, and their scoldings never went past the gentle recriminations, but still, they meant the world to a young and sensible Hikaru.
Now, it all was much worse. Because she was watching, in that same apparent slow camera, how Kiryuu Nanami's body, just pierced by an ice spear through the upper body, in between her right breast and shoulder, plummeted down accompanied by a strangled gasp. She was able to see perfectly well how her recent companion hit the garden's ground, the Derflinger sword slipping from her fingers. But despite everything, Hikaru, or anyone else for that matter, couldn't stop her fall in time.
"NANAMI-SAMA!" a horrified Tsuwabuki ran to his crush's side, holding one of her hands tightly. Yukino came to Nanami's other side, checking her pulse with all the experience of an assistant to Suzushiro Haruka. Due to her stubbornness and zeal, Haruka-chan got into a lot of fights in the line of duty. And due to Haruka-chan's strenght, Yukino often had to tend to battered victims of the Justice and Order Steamroller.
After a few gasps of pain, Kiryuu clenched her teeth, squeezed Yukino's hand, and hissed, "Kikukawa-san... P-Please look after Shidou-san..."
Tsuwabuki sobbed, waited for the inevitable "... and Tsuwabuki-kun...", failed to hear it, looked down, and saw Nanami still alive but refusing to say anything else, just keeping Yukino's hand firmly clutched, biting her lower lip. That only added to his heartache.
"Ah ha ha ha ha!" Alcyone laughed, standing over them, confident and haughty. "You are too weak, little girls! This is like eradicating helpless vermin!"
"Silence, you monster!-!" Presea roared, charging her along Hikaru, both of them swinging blades at once, but failing to meet their target as Alcyone blew them back across the garden with a hand thrust and a yell of "Wind Hurricane!" The resulting burst of icy air toppled them in opposite directions.
Presea, however, quickly pushed herself back to her feet, supported on her sword. "You... You keep digging your own grave deeper and deeper, lackey..." she grunted.
From where it had been dropped, Derflinger called out, "Hey, someone pick me up already! In the hands of an able user, I'd finish that witch up in no time! Seriously! Yo, someone pay attention to the legendary weapon of the bunch...!"
Motsu walked up to it. "Don't worry, Excalibur! I'll pluck you up to lead the forces of good to victory! In a really good way! A-hup we go...!" he grabbed the hilt and pulled it up, only to drop on his butt and then his back without moving the weapon even a single inch, exhausted to his limits after that single try. "Ah, and so, my legend comes to a finish! After this epic struggle, I think I will go sleep at Avalon! But I shall return when the land needs me again! In a good way...!"
"If I could move by myself, I'd chop you up to pieces, seriously, man," Derflinger told him.
Meanwhile, Shichimi made her slow way next to Nanami's gulping head. "Ah. Does it hurt a lot, mya...?"
Nanami clenched her teeth and snarled something that badly tried to be a "What the hell do you think?-!"
"I see," the tiny furry thing nodded, slow and sedate. "Would you, then, like to feel better? I think I can do that..."
"You can?-!" a hopeful Mitsuru cried.
"Well. I can try, at least-nya," Shichimi said, slowly lowering her head. "You will forgive me if I do this, won't you?" she said, a single moment before her diminutive mouth descended on Nanami's, her tongue delicately lapping the cold lips of the teenager.
Yukino's and Tsuwabuki's eyes bulged out as much as those of Nanami herself.
Motsu scared on with a mixture of annoyance and interest for a few moments before snapping his fingers. "Ah! Revived by a cat kiss in a good way! I think I once watched this in a Michelle Pfeiffer movie! Or was she Hale Berry?"
"Seriously, dude, I'd so slice you apart," Derflinger said.
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Shadow Crystal Mage
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Sep 28 2012, 06:32 PM
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Thanks Immi.
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Sep 28 2012, 11:20 PM
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I didn't finish it like I wanted to, but I did start it.
The Negima/Doctor Who crossover, as (sorta) promised. As usual, if anything seems wrong or messed up, let me know.
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Chapter 1 Space
It was nighttime, such as it was inside the TARDIS. But not everyone was sleeping.
In fact, three girls were tinkering with the TARDIS proper. One of them was staring at a screen mounted above the controls, while another was flat on her back with her head and shoulders stuck into the TARDIS. The remaining girl was underneath the transparent floor shining a light up into the TARDIS.
All three were cheerleaders. At least they were when they were at Mahora. Now they, and the rest of their class, were traveling companions to their teacher. Even if he preferred to be called Doctor.
“It's making a humming noise. Is it supposed to do that?” Misa asked from her position under the floor.
“He did say it was going to do that when we entered conceptual space.” Madoka's voice came from her position inside the main controls
“How is it coming Madoka?” Sakurako asked her friend on the floor.
“I think I have everything taken care of here.” Madoka said as she reached up and flipped a switch before sitting up. “Misa? Can you start attaching the thermocouples now?”
“Which ones do I attach?” Misa asked.
Madoka glanced at a piece of paper before she answered. “Two, seven, and eleven.”
“Ok.” Misa said as she got to work.
Sakurako came around to Madoka. “Need a hand up?” she asked.
“Please? I think my back is trying to lock into this position.” Madoka said.
Sakurako pulled her friend up before shifting her attention back to the controls. As she flipped a switch on one of the panels, Madoka asked, “Is that a new skirt? I don't think I've ever seen you wearing that?”
“Oh this thing?” Sakurako said with a giggle. “I've worn it a few times before. You must not have noticed.”
Madoka frowned in thought as she peered at her handiwork under a control panel. “It looks familiar. But I don't remember you with that skirt on.”
“Well, don't worry about it too much. It's only a skirt.” Sakurako said as she went to another panel and adjusted something there.
“That's my skirt you're wearing!” Misa shouted.
Right then the lights went out and the TARDIS stopped making noise.
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Madman with a box? I'm a madman with a semi, a pretzel bender and a Heart of Gold!
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Hyp3rB14d3
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Sep 29 2012, 09:51 AM
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Not secretly a sentient cat
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...Wait a second!
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Ryouga Quest
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