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| Hooperhmp | Sep 10 2011, 01:07 AM Post #1 |
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OOC --- IGN: hooperhmp OOC name:hoop Past Minecraft experiences: I've had minecraft for about a year and have played it for that time on single player and online servers. Past RP experiences: I have had this server and i have also played on a few other servers. What can you offer to Egypt:I can offer a hard worker who will do as he is told and work hard for the good of Egypt. Activity in hours per week:20 - 25 Age:15 Gender:Male Contact information: Hooperhp@hotmail.com What factions have you previously joined, and why did you leave them:Rome i left because something with my Minecraft broke and i was forced to buy it again so i did and i thought i should have a new start in Egypt. IC --- ICN (In-character name):Amon Ptah Character's age:23 Character's appearance: Amon Ptah is a tall man of dark skin he stands at 6 foot 8, he has dark brown hair almost black that he has cut short, a scar over one of his cheek that he got in a childhood accident, he has a well muscled body that is Fit from Working in the fields and from doing a little warrior training with his father, Amon wears a simple homespun Tunic that was a gift from his father when he turned 18 it is a simple thing but as the last gift from his parents It is a loved thing apart from that Amon goes bare chested Normally. Character's ambitions: Amon's ambitions are for him to rise Up in Egypt and one day lead a army against the men who attacked and killed his family, he also want one day to have a loving family with a few sons that will look up to him as a role model, Amon also wants to when he is a old man to retire to a farm and live out his life in Peace. Amon's Ambitions in Egypt are for him to Join the army and Rise through the ranks till he commands them as a unstoppable army, He is going to do this by never backing down and doing whatever is asked of him till he rises Character's personality traits: Amon's Traits are that he is a Hard Worker And will not stop till he has done the job that was set for him, He is also a Loyal man and will die for his Pharaoh If his Pharaohs life is threatened by anyone, Last but not least Amon has a deep annoyance with men who slack at there jobs, Amon has a annoyance with Slackers because if the men in the village Watch tower had not fallen asleep at there post then the Raiders might have been spotted which would of aloud the villagers to escape from the death the raiders gave to them. Character's background: Amon as a young child grew up in a small farming community he was alone most of the time as he grew up as his whole family were working on the farm because of this Amon had to look after himself and fend for himself,Amon also at a small age started to work on the farms where his brothers and father worked all this hard work had made Amon Strong and tough, When Amon was 14 he began his warrior training with the Village Guards for the next few years Amon's body was put to the test doing exercises and learning how to use all matter of weapons from the sword to the bow, Amon soon became the best swordsmen in all the village. When Amon was 19 the village was attacked by a troupe of raiders, Amon who had been out hunting came home to find the village devastated from a survivor he found out that they came out from every direction and that the men in the tower had not warned them because the were asleep the survivor recalled how the raiders ran through the street killing and looting all before they fled with the loot they had stolen. Amon then decided that there was nothing left for him in the village so he took his meager possessions and left taking the road that he knew would take him to the Great city in Egypt so he set of on the long journey Amon heard from travelers of the glory of Egypt's walls and the splendor of what lay inside, he heard of the wise ruler and the powerful army so Amon knew in his heart that he had found a place that he could belong. I Hope you enjoy and let me join Egypt Long live the Pharaoh Edited by Hooperhmp, Sep 11 2011, 01:33 AM.
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| ChocoboKnight7 | Sep 10 2011, 01:16 AM Post #2 |
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Your background was horribly cliche but still relatively enjoyable. No one is perfect, right? Sorry to hear that you had to purchase Minecraft again, that is unfortunate. The good news is that you have decided to join the great faction of Egypt and I believe you will be accepted just as soon as TrompeOeil gets around to looking over your application. Good luck! Edited by ChocoboKnight7, Sep 10 2011, 01:00 PM.
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 10 2011, 01:20 AM Post #3 |
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It was so annoying i was like aaaarrrgh. I hope to get accepted to so i may server Egypt well. |
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| TrompeOeil | Sep 10 2011, 12:58 PM Post #4 |
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As far as I can tell your character is naked, whip up a nice description of his clothe, jewelry, whatever to add some more length to your Appearance and help me get a better fell of your character. Ambitions are nice, yet I feel that it's missing something. Perhaps add ambitions he has in Egypt itself and perhaps a bit on how he plans on doing them? Personality, apart from where I think you're kissing up (:P) is simple and fair. See if you can add more as to why he doesn't like slackers.. Background is as Choco says, horribly cliched, yet it has potential. Explain a whole lot more on his childhood, how it influenced him to be a hard worker and perhaps more on his actual warrior training? Write more about the raiders, about the actual raid itself and what Amon did during it. Then about his trip to Egypt. |
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 11 2011, 01:34 AM Post #5 |
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I have Edited have a read and tell me anything that can be improved |
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 12 2011, 01:10 AM Post #6 |
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Is there anything else i can do to improve my application TrompeOeil because i want it as good as i can get it. |
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| ChocoboKnight7 | Sep 12 2011, 01:46 AM Post #7 |
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Woah. This app hasn't been looked at in a while. I apologize for that. You have Choco's feather of approval. Spoiler: click to toggle
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 12 2011, 02:19 AM Post #8 |
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Thanks hopefully Trompe Will like it too |
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| ChocoboKnight7 | Sep 12 2011, 02:27 AM Post #9 |
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If I like, then Trompe will probably like it. I tend to be more picky and mean than he is. :p |
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 12 2011, 03:13 AM Post #10 |
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so you like it and hopefully trompe will like it so You + Trompe + Like = Me
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| ChocoboKnight7 | Sep 12 2011, 03:16 AM Post #11 |
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Well, after actually having roleplayed with you; I can safely say that I vouch for your ability to roleplay and I am confident you will be a benefit to our faction. |
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 12 2011, 03:32 AM Post #12 |
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Aww thanks man i hope ill be a good contribution to the faction to |
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| TrompeOeil | Sep 12 2011, 04:43 AM Post #13 |
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Yes, now tell me when you log in usually? |
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| Hooperhmp | Sep 12 2011, 05:36 AM Post #14 |
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Well i normally log on after school when i get back at 4 to around 8-9 and on week days i will log on around 1-2 and go to 8-9 oh yeah i am from Australia too so different timezone to most people to |
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