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Zeio; 2nd character
Topic Started: Oct 19 2005, 05:20 PM (99 Views)
Kuro Tsuta
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Name: Zeio Rose (zay-o)
Alias: ----
Race: Human
Transformations: N/A
Element: ----
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 125 lbs
Build: Average- yet more on the skinny side.
Eye color: Purple-redish
Hair color: Red
Hair style: Half up in a pony tail, and the rest hangs down to her elbows in slight waves..
Appearance:
Zeio Rose
What you can't see in the picture: Form-fitting black pants and tight black boots.

Personality: Zeio can be mysterious, yet with a slight attitude when the situation calls for it. She can stand up for herself, usualy seeking no help from others- A loner as you might call her, Though she does enjoy the company of a man from time to time. She simply adores Vampires, Most think this is because she has a gothic nature, Not to mention past aswell. Zeio tends to scare most people away because of this, But not all. She enjoys to go to bars, Even though she is under-age and not able to drink.
Alignment: Good neutral
Weapon: An onxy-black scythe, the blade having a thick outline of Ruby. She uses this for most of her attacks. The blade is detachable aswell, Though it sometimes might pop off in the middle of a battle stimultaniously.
Skill Type: Athletic
Fighting Type: Heroic/beserker
Zenni: 1,000

--Stats--

Power lvl: 3,000

Strength: 850
Endurance: 600
Int: 1,300
Will: 1,050
Ki: 750
Speed: 1,450


Attacks:

Onyx revenge- When her scythe is out of reach, Zeio creates a black vortex that stuns her opponents sight so she has time to get to her scythe or attack the opponent. (lasts for one post)

Tainted heart- With her palms at her heart, Zeio forms a black-colored Ki ball and launches it towards the opponent.

Rose razor- With her fingers, Petal shaped Ki balls are formed and shower down apon the opponent at lightining-fast speeds. They are extremely sharp, and when in large groups extremely dangerous.

Kuro Chi (dark/black blood)- When Zeio has a flesh wound open, Or any of her own blood near-by, She can take the blood and drain it -or pump it- full of energy, Thus impurifiying it. She uses this 'dark blood' as a weapon, Morphing it into a Ki ball and firing it at the opponent. Her blood is toxic when it is impurified, It acts as an acid, it can melt through the first layer of skin cells so the opponent is 'tender' and cannot move as easily, though it can still be able to move. Zeio can only use a small ammount of blood, seeing as she is human and it's her life sorce. If she were to drain the energy, she would form a layer of Ki over it just so it can fly safely towards the opponent where the Ki simply wears off before it hits and all that's left is the blood. Though it can go two ways, if she increases the energy of the blood, she can use it as a Ki attack aswell, Though it won't have the acid affect it will be like a reagular Ki attack

Triple Grim Chaos- The blade of Zeio's scythe detaches and multiplies two times, Creating two new blades of the scythe- a grand total of 3 blades. These blades fly toward the opponent, and Zeio controls them with hand gestures. If her hand gestures were to stop, So would the attack. The blades would fall and combine back into their reagular form. (But they only stay elevated on their own for three posts. Then the blades fall too the ground and morph back into a single blade.)

Techniques:
Flight- The ability to fly

Ki sensing/hiding- The ability to hide and sense one's Ki

Healing- By giving up her own health to transform it into an orb, Zeio can speed up the healing process of one's wounds, this also includes enternal injuries and bleeding, Though she can't heal herself. Once someone is healed, Zeio is often out of power and even able to pass or black out for hours. Not only that, But Zeio will inheiret her patients pain when they are healed.

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History:
Zeio was born on October 31, The baby of a family of five kids. She was spoiled as a child along with her siblings, untill one day her parents decided flee from her home town, Transylvania. They moved out into the country, Where they remained somewhat dormat and away from the modern life-style. Zeio Rose was one of the few lucky children who happened to be born into a rather wealthy family. Her parents enojyed to stay in rather expensive (yet creepy) mansions, Such as those proclaimed to be haunted.
Zeio found out about vampires when she was young, And that would explain her love for them today. Her gothic nature came from the abuse she received at a young age. Not physical abuse, But mental. Zeio grew up around cruel people, And her parents were hardley ever home. They traveled alot with their jobs, and left Zeio alone with her abusive siblings. She was only eleven at the time, and her siblings were making a fool of themselves. Parties, Raids, and even once they commited a murder together.
The young Miss Rose loved to read. She would spend days filling her head with the contents of books just to learn, Even a few journals and documentaries on the style of Ki fighting. Her siblings never recodnised her for this great deed. But Zeio was young, and craving for attention. So she made lies and stories, She claimed she could see apparations and spirits that haunted the house. And with her new found power, Ki fighting, She could prove it- Somewhat. She would create Ki balls and play tricks on her siblings just for fun.
After she began school, Zeio would always sneak out of her house and sneak into different 'haunted' mansions that were near her's. She loved it- The adrenaline, That feeling you have when your hair stands on it's tips. The way you shake and yelp, with white knuckles. Zeio would tease her gothic friends, taunting them and telling them tales about her ventures. That soon stopped, the day Miss Rose's parents moved again. She had to rebuild a new life, Making new goth friends at her new high school. Though it was tough, Zeio made it out alive. Since Zeio is now 18, She has finally moved out and is living with her butler in a haunted mansion of her own.
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Onyx revenge- When her scythe is out of reach, Zeio creates a black vortex that stuns her opponents sight and hearing so she has time to get to her scythe or attack the opponent. (lasts for one post)
- That is a bit too much, unless serious constraints are put on it. I would normally say no, but people could use Ki senses to get out of this, it just seems a tad bit unfair. But, what are your opinions on it?

Kuro Chi (dark/black blood)- When Zeio has a flesh wound open, Or any of her own blood near-by, She can take the blood and drain it -or pump it- full of energy, Thus impurifiying it. She uses this 'dark blood' as a weapon, Morphing it into a Ki ball and firing it at the opponent. Her blood is toxic when it is impurified.
- So, it is fired out? How exactly is it used as a weapon, and how does the toxicity work?

Triple Grim Chaos- The blade of Zeio's scythe detaches and multiplies two times, Creating two new blades of the scythe- a grand total of 3 blades. These blades fly toward the opponent, and Zeio can control them with hand gestures. (But they only stay elevated on their own for three posts. Then the blades fall too the ground and morph back into a single blade.)
- And to control them and keep them attacking, she has to keep doing the gestures?

Also, about your healing. You might want to be a bit creative about that, because that is on the borderline. Why? Because we want to have serious restrictions on healing powers and attacks, just because of really how abusable they are, intentional or not. So, the more creative, the more likely it will be accepted.
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(1)- Well, I could change it to just sight, so they could still hear. The affects will last as stated, One post, though.

(2)- The blood acts as an acid, it can melt through the first layer of skin cells so the opponent is 'tender' and cannot move as easily, though it can still be able to move. Zeio can only use a small ammount of blood, seeing as she is human and it's her life sorce. If she were to drain the energy, she would form a layer of Ki over it just so it can fly safely towards the opponent where the Ki simply wears off before it hits and all that's left is the blood. Though it can go too ways, if she increases the energy of the blood, she can use it as a Ki attack aswell, Though it won't have the acid affect it will be like a reagular Ki attack. If you would like me to change anything, or just do it over again completely i'm fine with that.

(3)- The hand gestures must be kept up at all times, Lets say someone from behind her ties her arms up, she can no longer perform the gestures and the scythe-blades will fall to the ground and become one again.

(4)- Er, how about she can only heal someone half-way? If a person is almost dead, she can only revive half of their power, but that would also be taking up half of her power too. Or she can only do it once every board? That seems fair.
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Hmm... For Onyx revenge, just don't abuse it, okay?

The blood thing seems fine since it doesn't do any serious damage, and it is a nice idea.

The scythe thing seems fair, because if she is hit or distracted, unless she is uber focused, it will end it.

The healing, alright. The limitations you have is alright. You can heal someone full way even, but keep in mind that the more you heal them, the less powerful she becomes, so if she heals someone from near death to life, she will be knocked out for a good amount of time. So, she in a sense would take on the pain that she is relieving from them. That sound alright?
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Yep, I'll edit it now.
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Power lvl: 3,000

Strength: 850
Endurance: 600
Int: 1,300
Will: 1,050
Ki: 750
Speed: 1,450

Sound okay?
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Indeedy it does.
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Alright. 30 seconds, starting.... NOW!
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