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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 23 2005, 10:30 PM (158 Views) | |
| Link | Oct 23 2005, 10:30 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Link Alias: Hero of Time Race: Ryne/Neris-Jin Transformations: WereWolf Link Were Wolf Link_2: During full moons. Blood Lust Link: Only happens when he is down to last breathe and an about to die, the part of Ganondorf that was past into his body awakens thirsty for blood. Link The Knight:After using the Seven year silence technique he acquires this form making him 1.5 times stronger then before and seven years older in looks. Oni Link_1 Oni Link_2: After using the Oni mask Link's sword changes and he looks to to be about 28 more older look and getts twice as strong. Element: none Gender: Male Age: 227 Human years but has appearance of a 17 year old teenage boy. Height: 5'10 Weight: 187 Build: Medium, muscle tone defined Eye color: Blue Hair color: Blonde Hair style: Straight back with a couple of bangs in the front. Appearance: Link Water Tunic New Fire Tunic Personality: Link as a very courageous person(duh Tri-Force of courage). He down to help anybody else that in need and really needs the help. He's so selfless, and can really do nothing wrong at all. He very cheerful at times and so bashful so when it's time for play he''ll play, but when it's time to repel evil back into the deep dark caverns and which then came from he is ready to banish evil. Alignment: Good/Lawful Weapon(s): Master Sword, Ocarina of Time Skill Type: Determined Fighting Type:Heroic Zenni: 1,000 Stats: Power lvl: 1,000 Strength: 300 Endurance: 600 Int: 600 Will: 550 Ki: 375 Speed: 575 Attacks: Hyrulian Spin Out: Link, starts sword with his sword first as he does all these fancy moves. Then he stops and crouches holding his sword in one hand behind him, as the tri-force appers on his forehead and left hand. He then uses his ki control technique to to make a white aura spin around the blade of the sword. Then with a push of his right leg he spins on the left leg . Slashing the ki about a 10 foot radius on surrounding enemies. Tri-Force Light of Gods: Link holds his sword directly in front of him. As the Tri-force on his head, left hand, and the Master Sword all start to glow. Then using his ki control technique . The white ki appears around his sword. Then with quickly and deadly precision he draws the Tri-Force in the air with the ki. The blank spaces then fill up as the whole tri force appears out of thin air from where he had drew it. The three points of the Tri-Force all light up as white comes from the of all three come back in his direction. Link puts the Master Sword back in its sheath. The three white lights stops right in front of Link as they starts to combine into a white ball of light. Link holds his hands out then without warning he forces the ball of light ball of energy through the middle of the Tri-Force into. Tri-Force Stasis Lock - Link creates a giant Tri-force symbol.He sends it over his enemy and locks it over them trapping them.{Same effect as Galactica Donut} Fairy Blow – Link sheaths his sword and hooks on his shield to his back.He charges up ki infront of his chest as fairy dust begin to surround him.The orb in front of him absorbs the fairy dust and glows a bright floashy blue.Link controls it with his hands and compacts it smaller.he then charges it more as he thrusts his hands forward firing the blast.behind the blast trails a line of pixie dust. Hyrulian Bash – Link takes out hiss word as he runs.he charges energy up as the shield is re-inforced through his ki-control.He runs as the shield grows a ki-blade sticking out. He rams the shield into the opponent with great force. Light of the Godess- Link eyes turn all white as everything around him starts to shake. The ground starts to crackle as electricity surges through his body. And undying glow stars to engulf link. As his sword turns into a beam of powerful light. Links body starts to blink. As his the bangs of his hair and his cap flutter through the wind created from the energy. Then Link charges at his opponent and slashes down with the light. Techniques: Four Swords: With a flick of his sword he can create four other clones of himself. All not as strong as the original but strong enough to last in a fight. But to keep this state he must keep sword in hand at all times, if one drops the sword he quickly combines back with the original Link. Animal Charmer: By using the Ocarina of Time to charm any animal to do his bidding weather it be attack somebody or just to use them as a ride. Ki Control: Ability to reinforce weapons with ki to make them stronger. And it also allows him to charge sword and send ki-slashes at his opponents. Song of Time: Uses Ocarina making it from nighttime to daytime/ and from daytime to nighttime. Seven Year Silence: Link quickly finds a rock then stabs the rock with the sword. He then plays the song of Time as a golden aura appears around the sword. Link holds up hand as the Tri-Force appears on his left hand and forehead, the shard of Courage is glowing on both his head and hand then with a flick of the wrist. Link pulls the sword out the rock aging sevens years instantly going into knight mode. Mirror Shield Reflect: Uses mirror shield to reflect ki blast, but his shield does it in a special way. The shield absorbs the ki blast then sends back in a form of a white beam of energy. (This only works for weak ki blasts that are half of Links endurance) Racial Advantages: Senses - A Ryne is racially blessed with enhanced senses of smell, hearing, and sight. They would be excellent hunters, should they ever let themselves be lowered to mere hunters/gatherers. Toughness/Durability/Strength - Because Ryne excel in physical combat, they are tougher, stronger, and more durable than most other races. Their skin, while it resembles humans in color and texture, is much much harder and more able to withstand extreme conditions. Power Increase - Much like their Saiya-jin enemies, when a Ryne is physically dominated and beaten to near death, or when a full healing is necessary to retain life, they gain an increase to pl. When they die and are revived, they gain a bigger increase. Items: |
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| Link | Oct 23 2005, 10:38 PM Post #2 |
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Braver
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| Link | Oct 23 2005, 10:49 PM Post #3 |
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| Link | Oct 23 2005, 10:52 PM Post #4 |
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| Link | Oct 23 2005, 10:55 PM Post #5 |
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| Forbidden | Oct 24 2005, 09:00 PM Post #6 |
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Sorry, you will have to rewrite the entire history into an original document. The History you are using is copyrighted by Nintendo and is not your own Story, You did not create it. You must make your OWN history and OWN storyline for your character. Using characters from Video Games is fine, but completely jipping off the entire Storyline of the game, which you cannot prove you wrote, is just simply unfair to those who had put so much time and effort into their well written ORIGINAL histories. |
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| Link | Oct 24 2005, 10:30 PM Post #7 |
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Out of all the sites I've been to they've never said anythign about the history because it makes sense. You can't tewll the history of Link without telling the real history of Link the way Nintendo wrote it, but you saying it liek we bite the whole story wwe changed the end thats why the history is thew way it is because it has to end with use fighting from the last game and I energies throwing us into another dsimension. I understands you dont want me coming the rp strong right off the back so look let's make a deal how about we keep our histories and you give us both 4,000 pl or 3,500 that seems fair. |
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| Kenny | Oct 25 2005, 12:56 AM Post #8 |
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The thing is you only wrote the end of it, and the rest of it, what is a magority of the entire thing is completely taken off of somebody elses work. It's like me going on a site and writing down an entire post copied from LotR, then thinking, because I made a new ending worth four paragraphs. We say that you bit it all because you did, but just added a little. That story is most likely copy writed anyway, not to mention somebody elses work... obviously. From your writing style of attacks and the ending, to most of that in the middle is completely different. We don't give credit for copy and pasting, we give it to writing your own work. Here is the deal. The deal is that you write your own history. Really, you can have Link and all, but make it his own and new history (Written by you, and note, only you). I don't know how you can base the world of Hyrule to DBZ, really, does that make sense. A magic portal that sends them to the DBZ realm? That doesn't make sense... at all. We have a character that is Cloud from Final Fantasy, but they created an originally written history. The history wasn't based around their life in FF, but a different history based around DBZ but with the character name and look. Thankyou. |
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| [-Cloud-] | Oct 25 2005, 04:44 PM Post #9 |
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Hey, If you want.. we could always just grade you on what you wrote.. those measily small paragraphs. Which would get you like 2k PL seeing you put little effort into making this character. Sorry, Me and many others didn't spend countless hours typing up Histories long enough to be several chapters in a book, get little over 4k PL and have some random new guy come in and try and get the same for putting as much effort that we did in our starting paragraph... sorry doesn't work that way. Play fair like everyone else, or do not play fair at all. Oh and do NOT tell us what you SHOULD get.. our word is law.. if you looked at the boards Rules and Guyidelines like a good boy.. you would have noticed that you agreed to a contract when you made that account.. so maybe you should go over it. |
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| Kenny | Oct 25 2005, 10:09 PM Post #10 |
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Oopse, sorry, wrong forum. XD jk We would love for you to roleplay here though. Just as Cloud says, it seems unfair to the other players to give your 3.5k with a five minute thing that you wrote yourself, then you got people who had made 21 paragraph things that took them hours and they get 4.5k. It would be too inconsistent to give somebody who had made 4 paragraphs 3.5k and somebody who had made 21 4.5k. =D |
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| Link | Oct 27 2005, 11:49 PM Post #11 |
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Okay, Okay. I was gonna do another histrory anyway I just wanted to see if I could get away with it I fiina get working on it now, but while I do can you guys check my moves and Tech now so I'll know what to change |
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| Forbidden | Oct 30 2005, 12:18 AM Post #12 |
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Sure, no problem. Hyrulian Spin Out: Link, starts sword with his sword first as he does all these fancy moves. Then he stops and crouches holding his sword in one hand behind him, as the tri-force appers on his forehead and left hand. He then uses his ki control technique to to make a white aura spin around the blade of the sword. Then with a push of his right leg he spins on the left leg . Slashing the ki about a 10 foot radius on surrounding enemies. - Seems fine. Tri-Force Light of Gods: Link holds his sword directly in front of him. As the Tri-force on his head, left hand, and the Master Sword all start to glow. Then using his ki control technique . The white ki appears around his sword. Then with quickly and deadly precision he draws the Tri-Force in the air with the ki. The blank spaces then fill up as the whole tri force appears out of thin air from where he had drew it. The three points of the Tri-Force all light up as white comes from the of all three come back in his direction. Link puts the Master Sword back in its sheath. The three white lights stops right in front of Link as they starts to combine into a white ball of light. Link holds his hands out then without warning he forces the ball of light ball of energy through the middle of the Tri-Force into. - Just how powerful is this? Tri-Force Stasis Lock - Link creates a giant Tri-force symbol.He sends it over his enemy and locks it over them trapping them.{Same effect as Galactica Donut} - General estimate of how long. Fairy Blow – Link sheaths his sword and hooks on his shield to his back.He charges up ki infront of his chest as fairy dust begin to surround him.The orb in front of him absorbs the fairy dust and glows a bright floashy blue.Link controls it with his hands and compacts it smaller.he then charges it more as he thrusts his hands forward firing the blast.behind the blast trails a line of pixie dust. - General power assesment please. Hyrulian Bash – Link takes out hiss word as he runs.he charges energy up as the shield is re-inforced through his ki-control.He runs as the shield grows a ki-blade sticking out. He rams the shield into the opponent with great force. - Seems fine. Light of the Godess- Link eyes turn all white as everything around him starts to shake. The ground starts to crackle as electricity surges through his body. And undying glow stars to engulf link. As his sword turns into a beam of powerful light. Links body starts to blink. As his the bangs of his hair and his cap flutter through the wind created from the energy. Then Link charges at his opponent and slashes down with the light. - Just how powerful is it? Techniques: Four Swords: With a flick of his sword he can create four other clones of himself. All not as strong as the original but strong enough to last in a fight. But to keep this state he must keep sword in hand at all times, if one drops the sword he quickly combines back with the original Link. - Seems fine as well, but just need a general strength in comparison to the original link. Animal Charmer: By using the Ocarina of Time to charm any animal to do his bidding weather it be attack somebody or just to use them as a ride. - Maybe, depends on the animal. No way you are taming a dinosaur. Ki Control: Ability to reinforce weapons with ki to make them stronger. And it also allows him to charge sword and send ki-slashes at his opponents. - Seems fine. Song of Time: Uses Ocarina making it from nighttime to daytime/ and from daytime to nighttime. - Hmm.... That would be the Sun's Song by the way, and all it would be able to do is create an illusion of night or day, not change time itself. Seven Year Silence: Link quickly finds a rock then stabs the rock with the sword. He then plays the song of Time as a golden aura appears around the sword. Link holds up hand as the Tri-Force appears on his left hand and forehead, the shard of Courage is glowing on both his head and hand then with a flick of the wrist. Link pulls the sword out the rock aging sevens years instantly going into knight mode. - And knight mode is exactly? Mirror Shield Reflect: Uses mirror shield to reflect ki blast, but his shield does it in a special way. The shield absorbs the ki blast then sends back in a form of a white beam of energy. (This only works for weak ki blasts that are half of Links endurance) - Seems fine, but we don't use stats like that in attacks here, at least no like that. |
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