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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 26 2005, 04:00 AM (65 Views) | |
| Poe | Oct 26 2005, 04:00 AM Post #1 |
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Big Shot
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Name: Lezo Sin Alias: Defiance Race: Human Transformations: Element: Gender: Female Age: 16 Height: 5'4" Weight: 50 Kilos Build: Slim Eye color: Blue Hair color: Blonde Hair style: Straight Appearance: Good looking. She seems to be in a perky mood most of the time. She ussually wears bright clothing, anything really that she feels the people around her will like to see. She has large breasts. Personality: Bouncy, optimistic, kind-hearted. She is a sweetheart, though she can be naughty aswell and not to mention a B*tch if she truly wants. She is very agressive and dominant over her male opressers. Alignment: Good Neautral Weapon(s): Skill Type: Aphletic Fighting Type: Flirt - She is a chick with some attitude and being rather aggressive, she finds herself even flirting in battle. From touching her oponenents softly, and ussually stroking their ego. This doesn't really apply to the same gendar though, in anycase, she does what any normal chick would. Kick, slap, bite. Zenni: 1,000 Stats Power lvl: 1,500 (Please re-add the stats together however way suits you, do NOT touch Power lvl though. POL is detrmined by adding all stats together and dividing by 2) Strength: 25 Endurance: 25 Int: 1500 Will: 45 Ki: 5 Speed: 1400 Attacks Witty Fingers - Going up to her oponenet with the utmost care, she begins to massage them into submission. Techniques Flirty - Flaunting her stuff, she tries to trick male oponents into feeling some weakness to her female charm. No Sex - One of the most used moves at her disposal, from giving a person the cold shoulder and acting as though they hurt her badly, she then forgives them... leaving the target in a weak position. Telekeniusus - Using her mind, she is able to make stuff move at her will. Telepathy - Using her mind, she is able to enter people's minds, read their thoughts and feelings and even speak to them. Cat Fight - Only used on other women, she begins insulting them to a point of feeling really bad and shamed. Ussually involving the use of calling them fat, ugly, or even a mole. Mind Mould - Yes, just like the Trekies, by focusing on a willing person's mind. Lezo is able to imprint somebodies own memories onto her own mind in a matter of minutes. Items History: Lezo has had a fairly normal life, being raised by her parents like any normal kid and having really nothing amazing happen. The only thing that is worth mentioning is the fact when she was walking back home from school one day, and she feel over head first on the ground. Ever since bumping her head, she had unlocked something that had allowed her mind to make things move at will. She also was able to enter people's mind at her own descretion. The last and hardest thing that she found out, was the fact she was now able to move alot faster then she ever could before. She does alot of working out. |
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| Cain | Oct 26 2005, 06:57 AM Post #2 |
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
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Ok you need alot of work. you may have 5 more attacks if you wish...but that's up to you. As for your history, you will need to put alot more work into that, that is if you want any decent starts to be awarded to you. Now this is just me but, your personality and Appearance are lacking...Good looking to me doesn't exactely tell me how she looks. And 'seems in a perky mood' is more of a personality trait...but then again that is just me. Fix these and you'll be good to go. Thanks. |
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| Poe | Oct 26 2005, 11:26 PM Post #3 |
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Big Shot
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The attacks I got are fine. I added more to my history. Appearance I can understand, so I re-did that. I didn't really see what was wrong with the personality though, but I added some stuff anyhow. Now don't get on your high-horse because I annoyed you with my suggestion. Forgive and forget. |
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| Cain | Oct 27 2005, 06:42 AM Post #4 |
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
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*Gets on his high-horse* Oh now you've done it. But in all actualness I would prefer if you just kept quiet about it...I'll forgive easier that way. Power lvl: 2,050 Strength: 125 Endurance: 125 Int: 1780 Will: 145 Ki: 25 Speed: 1901 There are your beginning stats...keep or try again? |
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