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Shadou; The African-American Saiyan
Topic Started: Oct 28 2005, 12:17 PM (84 Views)
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Name: Shadou
Alias: Tha Black Saiyan
Race: Human/Saiyan
Transformations:
Element:
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Height: 6'2
Weight: 245 lbs
Build: very Well
Eye color: Black
Hair color: Mostly black with a little purple
Hair style: Pointed Up like Adult Gohan's hair
Appearance: Posted Image
Personality: Smart but cocky. Never afraid of anybody & is a bit of a smart-attic. Shadou always loves a good fight, the chance to get stronger, & thrive for a challenge. He also can be serious, but that's only when he thinks about the "Satsu no Hadou" that is within him.
Alignment: Good
Weapon(s): None
Skill Type: Athletic
Fighting Type: Quick Thinker/Ansatsuken (aka Assasin)
Zenni: 0

Stats


Power lvl: 1,500
(Please re-add the stats together however way suits you, do NOT touch Power lvl though. POL is detrmined by adding all stats together and dividing by 2)
Strength: 300
Endurance: 600
Int: 450
Will: 450
Ki: 600
Speed: 600

Attacks
1. Hadouken (fireball): A small fireball that can pack a punch. Been in the family for generations
2. Shoryuken (dragon punch): Here his body begins to grow a firey red & as he charges towards his opponent, all of that energy transfers towards his fist. Thus, forming the Shoryuken. It's as strong as the Hadouken.
3. Shinryuken (Supreme Rising Dragon Punch): Here his body begins to grow a firey red but this energy is bigger than the Shoryuken. When he charges at his opponent, his fist will look like a yellow dragon. It's as strong as the Shakunetsu Hadouken
4. Shakunetsu Hadouken (Super fireball): A medium size fireball that packs more power than a regular Hadouken.
5. Shinku Hadouken (Ultra Fireball): A larger & much powerful version of the Shakunetsu Hadouken that resembles a beam rather than a fireball. A few within the family were able to mastered this move.
6. Shin Shoruken (Great Dragon Punch): How this attacks starts is similar to the Shinryuken but the energy transfers in Shadou's fists. From there, he connects with a punch to the ribs, then to the chest & finally to the chin going upward.

Techniques
1. Flight: Has the ability to fly by using his chi.
2. Sixth Sense: He can sense the chi of those who have it.
3. Ashura Senku (Ashura Sky Flash): A teleport method in which his body will show grey images of himself as he teleports (like Akuma's teleport). This technique can only be done for short distances.
4. Solar Flare: A last effort to elude stronger opponents by blinding them with an extremely bright flash
5. Spirit Telepathy: It's like regular relepathy but the person Shadou communicates with can see a spirit version of Shadou. Only for long range telepathy.
6. Shungokusatsu: Translation, Hell Murder. This technique is ONLY used under desperate measure while showing uncontrollable rage. So it's really rare when this technique is used. At that time, the power of "Satsu no Hadou" (Murderous Energy) will rise up & uncontrollably will be unleased where anything can happen. He goes on a blind rage & attacks anything in sight. A move that is deadly to his opponents....& to himself.

Items: None

History: Born on Earth, this being was originally named Shadou. At a young age, he was able to you his ki energy. His father, who was a half-saiyan, taught him how to use his ki-energy & taught him the arts of Ansatsuken. One day, his father, told Shadou that he sensed a small presence of a demon within his son. At the age of 8, his parents died due to the hands of a Changling named Cubus. At that moment, Shadou unleased the power of "Satsu no Hadou" for the first time. Therefore, using the move, Shungokusatsu , killing Cubus in an instant. When it was all over, the power of "Satsu no Hadou" faded, & Shadou's body was unstable & Shadou was close to death. However, due to the healing capabilities of a Saiyan, Amuka survived. Now wonders the world, looking for an answer on how to rid himself of the "Satsu no Hadou." Dispite the fact that it will always be within him & one day, it will consumes him.
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I'm Nocturne, and I shall be reviewing your moves today. Alright, two things.

You do know that you can start with 6 attack and 6 techniques? If not, then now you do!


Attacks
1. Hadouken: Similar to a Kamehameha wave. Been in the family for generations
-Needs a bit more description. A main reason that Kamehameha is off limits is because of the huge power it can have, since it is the ultimate of 'charging attacks'. Is it just a basic Ki Beam?

2. Solar Flare: A last effort to elude stronger opponents by blinding them with an extremely bright flash
-This would be a technique, not an attack. ^.^

Techniques
3. Ashura Senku: Translation, Ashura Sky Flash. A teleport method in which his body will show images of himself at which it appears he's moving at super speed. This technique can only be done for short distances
-Zanzoken mostly? After Image I mean.

4. Shungokusatsu: Translation, Hell Murder. This technique is ONLY used under desperate measure while showing uncontrollable rage. At that time, Shadou will unlease the power of "Satsu no Hadou" (Murderous Energy) where his Ki Energy & Speed doubles. Thus, when he delivers the final blow, he instantly kills (depending on how weak his opponent is at that point of time).
- No instant kills. Sorry. ^.^; And all power up moves have to be just as equal gain as get really. And no, that doesn't mean half one, double the other, because that can lead to a switch of 30 Atk for 4,000 spd. :P

~.^ Wel, that's it. Love the idea of your character, so can't wait to hear from you next.

Edit : Oh, one last thing, more personality please. ^.^
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ok I changed it
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2. Shoryuken (dragon punch): Here his body begins to grow a firey red & as he charges towards his opponent, all of that energy transfers towards his fist. Thus, forming the Shoryuken
-Seems fine, but just how powerful is it?
3. Shinryuken (Supreme Rising Dragon Punch): Here his body begins to grow a firey red but this energy is bigger than the Shoryuken. When he charges at his opponent, his fist will look like a yellow dragon.
-Err... Same question as above.
6. Shin Shoruken (Spirit Dragon Punch): Rival the spirit bomb, this attack requires nature's energy to be transfer in Shadou's fists. From there, he connects with a punch to the ribs, then to the chest & finally to the chin going upward.
-Nope nope nope. Sorry. Spirit Dragon punch, still way too powerful. It is along the lines of what is going to be classified as a Class S move, the ultimate of the powerful.... So ya. Sorry. ^.^;

Techniques
5. Spirit Telepathy: It's like regular relepathy but the person Shadou communicates with can see a spirit version of Shadou
- That is only for long range telepathy?
6. Shungokusatsu: Translation, Hell Murder. This technique is ONLY used under desperate measure while showing uncontrollable rage. At that time, Shadou will unlease the power of "Satsu no Hadou" (Murderous Energy) where anything can happen. He goes on a blind rage & attacks anything in sight. A move that is deadly to his opponents....& to himself.
-Seems fine, but keep it in check.
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lol hopefully this is ok..thanks for checking
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Seems alright now. These stats alright?

Power lvl: 2,700

Strength: 750
Endurance: 1,050
Int: 700
Will: 800
Ki: 850
Speed: 1,250
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yeah sure...thanks alot
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