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Endou Taitikus; Character Discription
Topic Started: Feb 16 2006, 10:01 AM (79 Views)
Taitikus
Braver
Name: Endou Taitikus
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan: Endou Clan
Village: Waterfall.
Main Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Genin
Special Abilities: Telepathy: The ability to use the mind's eye to retrieve information, from the present situation and area, to distant places and times, in the past and future.
Appearence: About 5 feet 5 inches, Pale Skin, Dark Wavey Hair (like Rock Lee's before his bowl cut), Leather and Metal Armlets, Red Shirt with Black Stripe Design, Leather Jacket cut off at the Sleeves, Tribal Markings on the face, three dots under each eye and a line leading outward of the face. Dark lines around the eyes,(need more sleep ><) and mildly thick eyebrows. Irises are yellow on the inside closest to the pupil and blue on the outside starting in a quarter way out from the iris, (when using special abilities the yellow dominates the blue).
Money: 100 Yen

Stats

Chakara: 50/50
Strength: 4
Agility: 6
Control: 5
Will: 4
Endurance: 7
Intelligence: 10

Equipment
Two nearly identical Katanas with a Blue and Red gems fasioned into the hilts. Sharp, and Light ^-^

Known Jutsu

Jutsu Slots:

Clone skill (Bunshin no jutsu)
Rank: Genin
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Everyone is required to know this. Requirement to Graduate as a Gennin. This is a basic jutsu. It creates illusions of the caster, in other words: clones. These are basic clones that aren't real. If they are hit by something, they automatically disappear.

Examine Skill
Rank:Genin
Type:Family Jitsu
Discription: This Jitsu allows the user through use to determine the weaknesses and strengths of thier opponent. This is part of the Second Sight ability of the Endou Clan.

History
Taitikus in the past was a nomadic ninja with his imediate clan members, serving as spies for other villages. As such he doesn't have many allies because he always moves away before any are made. Now come to stay at the Waterfall Village Taitikus will hopefully stay here to train and live out the rest of his time until adulthood. His clan is a known for thier abilities to use Telepathy, often people he doesn't know will come up to Taitikus and ask him for thier fotune. ><
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Mattox
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I have a few problems with this.

1.bloodline jutsu/special abbilities doesn't usually count towards your max jutsu slot. I recommend picking something from the list.
2. As I've stated before, it's very rare that a person would use two Katana, seeing as it's a two handed weapon, and it loses its strength, speed and technique when used with only one hand. Also, the gems would be expencive, and I don't think it would be fair to start with something you could sell and then make money off of.
3.The odds that a Genin level Shinobi would survive doing the jobs you've stated, let alone survive living nomadicly, are extreamly slim.
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Mystic
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1.Bloodline Jutsu's DO count towards the jutsu limit. The Abilities do not. (Just so ya know)
2. 2 Katana's (although not bieleavable to some) are allowed to be used. Just a form of Dual-Wielding. It has its positives and Negatives so as along as you remember that during Rp. I have no problem with it.
3.Gems cost money.. Get them later.
4.History would be fine as long as you explain more in-depth.
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Mattox
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Indeed Mystic, but emphasis on bloodline JUTSU, not abilities.


And I realise 2 Katana are possible to be used, but it's completely impractical.
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[-Cloud-]
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Is that even an official Clan?
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Mattox
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Uh...not that I'm aware of no
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Panda Bard
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as far as the dual katanas are concerened it would be more practical for the use of one katana and one shorter, correct me uf this is the wrong name, tanbo. a great deal of sammurai were known to use that combonation of a one handed sword in the non dominant hand and the hand 1/2 katana in the other.

I also belive what mattox was attempting to state is the proficency would most likely require ambidexterity and more training then any gennin has under his belt.

Hope that clears things up
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Mystic
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Feb 16 2006, 06:13 PM
as far as the dual katanas are concerened it would be more practical for the use of one katana and one shorter, correct me uf this is the wrong name, tanbo. a great deal of sammurai were known to use that combonation of a one handed sword in the non dominant hand and the hand 1/2 katana in the other.

I also belive what mattox was attempting to state is the proficency would most likely require ambidexterity and more training then any gennin has under his belt.

Hope that clears things up

Idea for a topic on the staff section.. Ambidextrous
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Mattox
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I'm assuming you mean Tanto. And while I do agree that would make more sence, a Katana is still a two handed weapon. The proper technique of using one is to slice, not to hack. And to do that, you need both hands. With one hand, you're merely hacking, and you defy the purpose and technique of a Katana. With two hands, you pull one hand and push the other, somewhat like a lever. This gives a far superior cutting power, and it's aslo faster. The Tanto used by Samurai were usually used as either throwing weapons or to block in a stalemate between two Samurai.
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Cain
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-_-

You are focusing too much on such a trifling thing, who cares if the use of two Katanas isn't practical? This is what he has chosen. I don't know about you but regardless of the fact that a sword although lesser in power when swung at me I would treat it with caution and not want to be hit with it.

He knows now from this...debate, that they won't be as useful when used against another BUT, that's why we have stats and this skill system comming in. He WILL be able to use both and with great skill eventually so that it was as if he were wielding one. For now it wont be so good...but he knows that and can be left as so. Just so you know Paul, not all Katana are two handed weapons...but meh I don't feel like arguing the point with you.

As for the gems, what? You're worried that they cost money? Why? So far in THIS RPG no one has been able to sell anything nor have they really tried to. So really it isn't that much of a big deal...but what's this how'd he get them in the first place? Family heirloom? He stole them? The gems are fake? We don't really care because most other people already accepted have items that are way out of their price range too? Something like that...

Now onto the important things!

Taitikus, your special ability isn't allowed neither is your examine skill jutsu as that clan doesn't exist. You will have to post the FULL details of your clan in the Suggest a Clan thread in the Questions, Suggestions forum. When and if your clan is accepted then you may place them in your profile. For now I suggest you remove them if you wanna get RPing quickly.

Also, where is your personality? Is your character a robot? Please add in your personality.

Your history isn't so bad, but it could be longer, say 5 more lines. That way you don't have to skim over the mention of your clan or your characters travels as a drifter. Which I think would be best because then you can show various skills and whatnot you have gained from working with other countries and such...maybe even include the acquiring of those Katanas.

Thankyou.
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Mattox
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not all Katana are two handed weapons


Actually Cain, YES, they were ALL two handed weapons. A Tsurugi was the equivilant to a one handed sword in Japan.

And as for his clan...I didn't have to get mine approved, Cloud just approved it here.

Also, in case you didn't notice, his telepathic abbilities have nothing to do with his clan, as it isn't a Ninja skill, so I see no problem with it.

And we've gone over this several times, you cannot have exeptional weapons to start off with, they must be as basic as can be. Those gems would add value, and so they cannot be included in the sign up sheet.

Now please stop correcting me, especially when I'm right, and you're wrong.

And for bloody hell's sakes, quit calling me Paul, that's not my name.
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Taitikus
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. . .

Sorry '.';

I didn't realize i'd missed so much, and with the swords (temperary lapse of sanity) I accidently used the wrong name. ^-^;

I'll try to fix all these problems and have a revised copy by monday.

Sorry agian I didn't mean to cause any trouble or step out of line.
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I dunno if anyone stated this or not, but the special ability is a no. You wern't supposed to change it :P
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