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Lena Kiriya; I think she's feminist or something.
Topic Started: Aug 30 2006, 11:07 PM (68 Views)
NeraNeiygo
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Name: Kiriya, Lena
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Clan: Neiygo
Preferred Jutsu Type: Taijutsu mixed with Lightning Jutsu.
Personality: Lena is a very opinionated young lady. From an early age, she felt the need to explain to everyone her views on issues. Very straightforward, she will usually be the first to want to call a bluff or burst a bubble. She rarely lets people in emotionally, but when she does it would be impossible to stop her from talking. She is mostly serious or stern, but she also knows the value of having a good time. Lena values those who search after their dreams, though she doesn't seem very enthused about fullfilling them herself. Apparently that will change in time.

Lena will often accompany her talking with hand gestures and shoulder patting. If in an argument she can't talk or yell her way out, she will resort to punching, which while very brutish can prove quite effective in her eyes. She would like to think she has a sense of justice, but she barely realizes the concept of good and bad. So far, to her, it's only been who has made her angry and who hadn't.

Appearance: Lena stands at 5'0 and has a attractive figure brought about by physical conditioning. Her hair is red, cut to her shoulders, and is also slightly curly but is known to frizz. She has hazel eyes as well as small amounts freckles that accompany each cheek of her face. She is usually found wearing a simple grey housewife robe with pajamas underneath, which is somewhat deceptive, but is what she is used to wearing. It also helps her move more quickly in such comfortable attire. She doesn't show much emotion in her speech, despite her habit of talking. Her facial expressions are often animated, however. Her hands have slight scars from a life raised on working. It wouldn't be suprising if at first glance one thought of her as a normal girl; heck, it's probably what she wants people to think.

Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakara: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 5
Intellect: 12
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength: 25
Stamina: 15
Agility: 20

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 5
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 8
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 1
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 0

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 5
Sound: 0
Sand: 0
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 0
Custom: 0

Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu

Thunder Clap [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Hare] After performing the seals, your hands become charged full of electricity, causing a loud thunder-like noise whenever you throw punch. This adds some extra damage to your melee for the next three posts.
Effect: Causes a shocking effect.
Cost: 6


Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
Name: Diving Falcon Strike
Description/Seals: [None] This technique is very powerful and can easily fracutre a bone if an opponent does not defend properly. The user must have his back facing the opponent and flip backwards, while spining in the air so that he lands with his heal smashing into the opponent. The flip that is performed is known as a 'flair' and it is when you start off doing a back flip or front flip, and land as if you had done the other.
Effect: Basic Taijutsu Attack
Cost: 0

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit


Abilities
Light Step
Description/Seals: [Natural] After reaching a certain point, your steps become so light that you make no sound when you walk or run. You still make vibrations which can be heard by certain 'special' shinobi.
Requirements: 20 Agility
Effect: Makes your Steps light as a feather
Cost: None

Walk on Walls
Description/Seals: [Focus] With this, you can walk on Walls and such. The effects of this are the same as the Water Walk.
Requirements: 10 Intelligence, 6 Will-Power and 10 Agility.
Effect: Allows you to walk on Walls.
Cost: None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items

History
Lena Kiriya was born in Konoha between the relationship of a normal mother and a father who was very involved in Ninjutsu. As she was raised, her father tried to make her believe that the only goal a woman could hope to fullfill should have nothing to do with being a Ninja. As such, he did not teach her seals or Ninjutsu, despite her desire to do so. However, her mother did not believe those views, and so whenever Lena’s father would go out, her mother would teach her everything she had seen the father do. While these lessons weren’t particularly effective, Lena learned how to make a seal and one lightning jutsu.

With a small amount of knowledge of Ninjutsu and Lightning, and no way to learn any more jutsu than the limited amount her mother knew, she was forced to simply physically empower herself. Every day, after her chores, she would continually train her body with exercises to make her body strong. When she would come home with a weathered body from training, she would simply tell her father she was doing chores, but her mother knew better. They would trade secret smiles whenever Lena came back from her training.

Over the years, Lena became a physical powerhouse. Her chores were completed with ease, and she even could easily do “male” tasks such as cutting wood. Since her father died in Konoha's final war before she could reveal her secret to him, she was never truly reprimanded for disobeying him. She believes, however, that if her father saw her now he would change his belief. Her goal is simply to be as strong as she can be to prove that women can be as powerful as men; if not, more.
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Mattox
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Well, your core problem is that Konoha was only brought to ruins within the past year, and up until then it was perfectly fine. Please revise the history.

Also, holy crap, she's HUGE for a 13 year old. 5'7" is quite tall for any girl, let alone a 13 year old. Seriously, you may want to revise that.

Also, it seems odd that an attractive girl, as you put it, has such low Charisma. However, that's just my opinion, and you don't need to change that.

Your Appearnence and Personality both leave something to be desired, especially the former. I highly advise you to elaborate more. It doesn't have to be as long as mine or Maniac's, but it wouldn't kill you to add a few more lines.

Eveyrthing else checks out.
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NeraNeiygo
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There ya go! :D
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Mattox
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Omoshiroi desune...

Approved. Everything seems to be in order. However, you do know you'll have to learn any bloodline related things as you would a normal jutsu, as you don't know you possess them at the time.

Don't think I didn't catch Neiygo listed there under clan. Regardless, your character amuses me, and I look forward to your future endeavors. Welcome to NSL.
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NeraNeiygo
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Ah, I wasn't trying to sneak Neiygo in there, but it would be kinda hard to list stuff for a clan that's being worked on. So I decided that if I ever did get one approved, her bloodline would be more of a discovery thing for it. It would be, as you said, "starting from square one." She would realize she could do whatever the bloodline would be, and build it from the ground up since nobody in her life can really say "This is how you do that." I kinda took what you said to heart, so I thought I'd try a character who barely knew what she was doing Ninja-wise. As for the whole physical power thing--well--the stats had to go somewhere. :P
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Mattox
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It amuses me that Kenji was the strongest Shinobi here, and you've immidiatly surpassed him. I can forsee a lot of conflict between them..

I need to lock this now, as your character has already been approved.
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