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Sabaku Marukyru; "The Hope of the Sabaku"
Topic Started: Aug 31 2006, 02:30 PM (70 Views)
Rippah Da Kid
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Name: Sabaku Marukyru
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan: Sabaku
Preferred Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Personality: Do to Marukyru’s childhood he is usually emotionally detached, not letting people read his feeling and simply not showing any. Although he is very capable of feeling and picking up on the emotions of others he just rather not show it. He is usually a calm and collected young man who tried to be respectful to all, but down inside him burns a deep hatred and prejudice. Burden with future of his clan and inheriting the prejudice for anyone outside of his clan from his father, and his own deep hatred for anyone tied to the Kappa Kurisu family. There is also a apart of Marukyru that longs and thirst for combat and sometimes blood!

Appearance: Posted Image

He stands at 5'11 and weighes a little under 160 pounds. MaruKyru's eyes are crimson symbolic to the flame which burnes intensely in his heart. Much like Gaara His hair is short, he has black hair which is quite spiky. His clothes consist of a two piece outfit which is dark grey and blue. The shirt is sleevless and the pants stop a little over his ankles. His build is more slinder and ripped than bulky and made like a endurance runner do to the heavy strain on his body from his jutsu.

Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 1
Intellect: 12
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength: 10
Stamina: 10
Agility: 10

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 10
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 0
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 10
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 3

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 10
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 20
Custom: 0

Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu

Suna No Yoroi (Armor of Sand)
Description/Seals: [Ram, Dragon, Boar]. This jutsu uses chakra to cover the user with a thin, but very dense, layer of protective sand. While a good defense, it puts an unignorable burden on the user's stamina, both through chakra absorption and the fact that the sand makes them heavier and hampers their movement.
Requirements: Sand 10, Bloodline 10
Effect: Blocks great deals of damage, but cuts Stamina and Agility down to half.
Cost: 15 every time used


Sand Shield
Description/Seal: [Bird, Tiger]. The sand rushes towards the user and creates a barrier around them. Capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and projectiles, this sand shield can become stronger than steel. Avoiding it completely with extremely high-speed attacks, or merely overcoming the shield with incredible brute force can defeat it.
Requirements: Sand 10, Bloodline 10
Cost: 5


Replacement Jutsu
Description/Seals: [None] Moving at High Speeds you can move out of the way of an opponents physical attack and replaceyourself with an object. You move so fast that it looks as if you had turned into that object.
Effect: None
Cost: 10

Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit

Shield of Sabaku:
Description: [Natural] A sort of double-edge sword, this amazing Bloodline Limit allows the user to control and manipulate sand around him. The sand acts on its own accord spiraling around the user at high speeds, deflecting all light weaponry and most Taijutsu, Heavy weaponry are slowed down considerable. Although the limit is quite powerful it comes with a cost if not monitored the user could easily run out of chakra in a battle especially if other jutsu are preformed through out the battle.
Requirements: 10 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: When activated, A portion of sand automatically blocks attacks and reduces the damage. Light Weapons are easily deflected.
Cost: Four every post used.


Sand Manipulation
Description: [Focus] The user possesses the ability to control all sands, whether it is drawing it in to surround him/her or sending it rushing at an object or opponent in a tidal wave. Of course this limit is limited by the source of sand it could prove quite powerful in the desert but produce little to nothing if in moist area or another area where sand is not located. The user can target and send a wave of sand at a foe from above it can even be deployed from below as long as the sand covers the area where the target is located.
Requirements: 20 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: Allows the member to control the movement of Sand. At Twenty, one can mearly move it in small masses, but someone at 200 Bloodline could create a devestating Sand Storm that could cover an entire city in moments.
Cost: 1 Every use.

Abilities
None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron



Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items
Gorge
Description: Large container made of iron which is used to carry sand, usually carried on back.
Effect: allows user to deploy sand jutsu using the sand in the container.

History


“Prelude”

Fate…Fate is a cruel thing some may say, but others would tell you that it is just a punishment for sins. Whatever the cause fate can be broken down into a simple cycle: Birth, Life, and Death. These three things are almost always guaranteed, whether your fate is to live for 80 years or 80 hours this cycle of cruelty must be completed. That brings us to destiny a predetermined course of events often held to be an irresistible power or agency… Fortune if you will. These two agents play a huge role in anyone person’s life but even more in the life of Sabaku Marukyru. Do to the sins and deadly ambitions of others Marukyru’s fate was to live and die as the last of a dieing breed, and do to his own ambitions his destiny is to restore the Sabaku clans to its originally thriving days or die trying to do so.

“Downfall of a mighty Clan”

Marukyru’s grandfather was a noble and honorable follower of Gaara so when he died and the Sand village join the unified continent under the KageKage, he sent his son away to the Desert Canyon who only about twenty at the time. He and the other devoted followers of Gaara rebelled against Kurisu blinded by pride and devotion only to be slaughtered effortlessly by Kurisu’s men. Mean while knowing that the KageKage would send ANBU to the sand village to silence any other radicals Marukyru’s father Kyoshiro evacuated the people of the village who refused to bow to the corrupt KageKage. The once proud Sabaku Clan was now forced to live in the outskirts of the desert canyon like rats.

The noble people of the Sand village set up a village far from the rest of civilization, and attempted to live their lives. Kyoshiro urged by grief started to rally the last survivors of the sand village, he wanted to lead an assault on the KageKage’s strong hold and avenge the death of his father. But the people of the sand village did not support him it seemed that the grief had gotten to them, and killed their passion. With know followers Kyoshiro decided he would go alone to face the horrible Kurisu, but the day he was leaving his wife Katoma told him she was expecting a baby. Kyoshiro decided to stay and raise his child until it was time to go and avenge his father.

“Born to die Bred to fight”

Marukyru was born into a clan who survived genocide and into a world ruled by a tyrannical KageKage. So it was no surprise that his father decided to train him in the way of the Shinobi at a tender age of eight. Marukyru showed promise as a Shinobi and was considered a child prodigy in his village thus the village dubbed him Marukyru “The hope of Sabaku”. As Marukyru aged on the more ruthless the training and his father’s attitude towards him got, his father would make him perform jutsu in the scorching and unbearable heats of the desert until he passed out. These techniques might sound cruel to some but his father knew what he was doing, Marukyru was a Shinobi and a Shinobi is considered the ultimate weapon. Kyoshiro implemented these beliefs in Marukyru at a young age forcing him to be emotionally detached to everything around him except for the suffering of his people. This only fed the anger and hatred in Marukyru’s heart this was indeed a horrible burden to put on such a young boy’s shoulder, to successfully be the future of his clan he had to think like a murderer and let all his emotions go. Marukyru went along side his father on many missions and in each mission he proved more useful and powerful then even his father would have dreamed. Marukyru showed that the Sabaku people were only taping into a little of their bloodlines power and that’s when Marukyru’s destiny changed. Seeing this powers a few of the mean and Kyoshiro got together and planned to attack the KageKage with the help of Marukyru.

“Final Confrontation”

The sun blazed down on the village in the desert as the men of the village and Marukyru said good-bye to the elders, the women, and the children of the village. They were on their way to avenge the death of their forefathers who died at the hands of the KageKage trying to protect what was most sacred to them. They went to the fortress of the KageKage and stormed it cutting down and killing Shinobi and citizens alike, but they never made it to the KageKage. The soldiers of the fortress met them and out numbered them, Marukyru’s jutsu held them at bay, as the other men were lead by his father to find the KageKage. After a few minutes of intense battle Marukyru’s jutsu prevailed and for the first time in his life he had not only killed a man but he killed a fleet of men. The people who witnessed this slaughter began calling him the “Desert Demon”. Marukyru was a little shaken by what he had done but nevertheless he kept going on with the mission without hesitation. When Marukyru reached the room in which his comrades and father were in, his soul was almost ripped from him. What he witnessed was unbearable for anyone especially a kid his age, his comrades were torn to shreds they all lay motionless on the floor, which was painted with the crimson liquid in which gave them life. Marukyru was frozen and overwhelmed with grief and began to sob as he slowly walked over to his father, who he held in his arms. His farther smiled at Marukyru and spoke: “My lovely son don’t cry, for I have found peace along side Gaara and your grandfather. The ANBU did this to us…so I want you to have my sword and escape form here-NOW!” With that Kyoshiro departed to the afterlife and Marukyru grabbed his sword and escaped from the fortress back to his home.

“Destiny forms”

One year has passed since the death of the KageKage and the incident with his comrades. Now Marukyru trains in the art of the Shinobi trying to help his clan reach its former glory!
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Mattox
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It's Kappa Clan, not Kurisu clan. Kurisu is just a name.

You can also add one more jutsu.

I'm still reading your history
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Rippah Da Kid
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My chrcater would have no knowleged of that seeing how isolated his childhood was and im going to save that jutsu slot.


-Just don't it would be fun to have my chrcater know of any other clans
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Mattox
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..he would still know his full name...

Ah whatever, do as you like.

Anyways, you got my approval. Everything Adds up, more or less.

It would seem Kenji and Marukyru will indeed be enemies, and history will repeat itself. Kenji's Father was Kurisu I's bodyguard, just as Kenji is Kurisu II's. I look forward to the match-up.
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Rippah Da Kid
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Can't wait indeed...although it will be akward Marukyru will fight kenji and Kurisu with extreme prejudice!
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Mattox
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Kenji will never back down from a challenge.
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Everything is in order.. nice character ;)

I aprove and will place in accepted characters now :)
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Rippah Da Kid
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thankyou guys...its almost ashame that our chrcater will never have the chance to be friends!


-thats fate and destiny for ya.
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