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Learning The Gentle Fist; Move Training (solo)
Topic Started: Sep 3 2006, 08:04 PM (32 Views)
Hyuuga, Andoru
Big Shot
Andoru ran towards the area he had been going to train over the last few days. He wanted to finally master the Gentle Fist this day, and was not going to stop until he mastered it. A longing to learn the fighting style of his family was running through him. He sped into the forest, following the same path as usual. Soon he came upon the clearing where a tree had once stood. Though he had no idea what caused the tree to be nothing more than a stump now, he used it to practice. He had gotten better at flowing his chakra slower recently, and had a deep hope that he would master it with training.

“I swear I’ll learn it today. I’ve been studying on it, and working hard as of the last few days. I’ll get it right today.” He whispered to himself, a slightly smile on his face. If he talked at all, he usually spoke soft and quiet. Normally he would also keep his face some-what hidden.

He began his training. What he started with was small jabs to the center of the tree stump. His first hit let out more chakra than it was supposed to, resulting in his legs dropping down. He collapsed, panting already. Coughing heavily, he pulled a jug of water he had strapped to his pants to his lips. Already he needed a drink… It seemed pitiful. He placed his drink down to his right, away from where he would stand.

With his teeth clenched he slowly rose back up to his feet. Sending another jab, his chakra flowed better. A smaller jolt of chakra was sent out of his fingertips in replace of the usual large amount that would waste most of his chakra. He grinned, and sent another jab. It was the usual amount again. He collapsed, sweating and panting. His chakra was being wasted at this rate. Taking a moment, he rested to regain some chakra, his eyes closed as he did so. Slowing his breathing and heart beat rate helped out.
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Hyuuga, Andoru
Big Shot
During the next hour his chakra returned slowly, though he still panted slightly. Rising to his feet once more, he attempted to go into the fighting stance he had seen his father use so many times before. Entering this stance the best he could, he prepared to jab the wood again. He sent his fingers flying towards the stump.

As his hand flew, he sent more chakra than usual into it. It all went to his fingertips, and just bunched up in a ball at the end. This would prove to be a problem in the attack, but the child did not know of this.

Upon contact a large blast of blue energy shot out. Andoru collapsed, falling down upon his back. He lay there, panting heavily. Squeezing his eyes shut, he thought about what he had just done. He had just blasted out the remainder of his current Chakra. It seemed so idiotic as he thought back on it. Unfortunately, he would need to rest much longer than before.

As he lay on the ground, looking into the afternoon sky, he thought back on what had happened more thoroughly. His chakra flow had been reckless, and would not have done much damage to an opponent… The only outcomes of his attacks were a waste of chakra, and thus sudden exhaustion. He needed to control his flow better, but he had no idea how to….
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Hyuuga, Andoru
Big Shot
Three hours passed before Andoru’s chakra slightly returned. He rose to his feet and tensed his muscles as he entered the stance once more. A look of determination quickly came across his usually shy-looking face. His hand bolted towards the log. This time less chakra had been released in the blast. Unfortunately, it still was not a correct Gentle Fist attack…

He continued jabbing the wood, his chakra wasting away. The more chakra he used, the more pain came across him. Muscles tensed, teeth clenched, and using the Byakugan he wasted the rest of his chakra.

He spun to lean against the stump of the tree. Sighing, he slid down to rest yet again. A need of so many resting breaks seemed weak… Sorrow filled his heart as he felt the same feeling he had felt all throughout the years he’d failed in the academy. It made him seem worthless and useless. He sighed, then cleared this from his thoughts.

Still resting, he began to think of what he had done wrong making sure he remembered the event completely, just like before. He had not controlled it enough. It was still reckless and worthless. Slowly, still thinking hard, he unknowingly slipped into a slumber out there in the forest.
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Hyuuga, Andoru
Big Shot
During his sleep nothing happened. No one came to the area, and nothing hurt him. He slept as peaceful as possible leaning against a rough tree stump on the dirt, only falling asleep because of exhaustion. Sleeping in such a reckless area would not help much at all, but would regain some strength.

The time he awoke was around noon the next day. He nearly jumped up, but all his limbs ached, and he was able to feel his pulse on his dirt covered sweaty arms. His head pounded, his hair drenched in sweat. Lifting himself slowly, he rubbed his eyes to fully wake himself. He sighed, turning back to the stump. He had done no more than chip a few pieces off… It was almost too pitiful to look at. Anger filled his thoughts. He had no talent. He had no skills. According to nearly everyone he knew, he was no more than a waste of air. He slammed his fingers into the stump.

To his surprise it was slightly better than the best he had done so far. He stopped, stunned by this, as his mouth formed a weak smile. Surprised he could do this at such a weakened state, he took a moment to study what he had done. His anger had made his attack sloppy, but he had focused more. That is when he noticed something…

He went into the stance once more, this time taking a while to focus his chakra into his fingertips. It slowly and painfully moved to his arms. Thrusting and jabbing his fingers into the wood, a large blast of chakra exploded from his fingers. Although he had focused the chakra there, he had not controlled it. Most his chakra blasted out in that one attack.

The explosion had knocked Andoru to his back three feet away. He panted heavily, fighting for breath while his back ached from being blasted upon the ground. His vision blurred slightly, though he fought to stay conscious. Lying there, he rested, staring up into the bright blue sky. Chakra slowly returned into his system, and he slightly regained strength. Instead of returning to training, he continued lying there for a while longer.
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Hyuuga, Andoru
Big Shot
It was almost time for supper when he finally sat up, and his stomach growled. He turned to a pouch attached to his belt that he had brought with, and removed from it an apple. Sitting there he began to slowly eat it. Tears began to form in his eyes. He was fourteen and still unable to use the Gentle Fist fighting style… To him, he was indeed a failure. Unsure of if his parents would be disappointed, the tears slid down his face. Wiping them away, he decided to try once more. He tossed the apple to the ground.

“I will learn this technique. I will prove that I can be useful… Every one will be surprised that I can become stronger.” Surprisingly Andoru had said this at a regular volume. It was much louder than he usually spoke, and it surprised him slightly.

He stood up slowly, his legs shaking. It was amazing that he had not collapsed unconscious from the strain he had put on his body, but he managed to get into the stance again. He put all his strength into focusing his chakra to his hands, as well as control it to only release as much as would be needed. Tightening his muscles, he prepared to strike. His right hand shot forward, quickly jabbing the wood. Immediately his left hand shot out.

A combination of the two hands continued on, as the correct amount of chakra shot out instead of a large blast that would do nothing more than weaken him. He kept hitting the wood, his chakra amount lessening. Some time passed, and he stopped, panting. Only a small amount remained in his body now, and he was aching all over. Sweat dripped from his hair and face as he grinned. He had just learned how to properly use the Gentle Fist.

After taking an hour to rest up, he began to head home slowly. On his way back he only walked, instead of running as he had done on his way to the tree stump. He was proud of himself, but wished he would be stronger than this. Upon reaching his house, he entered and immediately went to his room, collapsing on his bed. He fell asleep quickly, and would not wake until after lunch the next day. He had held himself up longer than his body had wanted, and had exhausted it greatly.
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