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| Silver Wolf | Sep 16 2006, 07:21 PM Post #1 |
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One puppet and sand obsesive.
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With permission from ripper, I'm creating this character and once this gets approved, I will kill off my other character afterwards. Name: Sabaku, Kairai Gender: Male Age: 10 Clan: Sabaku clan Preferred Jutsu Type: Weapon Jutsu(puppets) Personality: Sabaku Kairai is a silent and focused personal, always prefering to practice ninja puppetry then focus on his well-being. He treats everybody coldly except a fellow puppet master, who he takes advice from, by battling. Unlike the rest of his family, he prefers not to kill but to defeat and immobilize the opponent. He has a cold attitude toward his entire family, and the only person he plans to respect in his entire life is master puppeters, the teamates he hopes to one day receive, and the village head, as long as he isn't weaker than him, his older brother, and the village elder. He considers her as a role-model. The only things he cares about are his puppets and his power to control the sand. He knows and fears that if he runs out of sand, his goal to find a purpose, will be destroyed. Appearance: Kairai wears black pants with a kunai pouch on his left leg, and a brown shirt with a sleevless, diamond patterned, ninja jacket. He has jet black hair in a long ponytail. He wears an armband with an emerald on it with a sharp spike on the end. He wears plain sandals, prefering to switch them out for ninja shoes when training. Money: 100 Yen Rank: Genin Chakra: 50 Mental: Charisma: 4 Intellect: 10 Will-Power: 4 Physical: Strength: 4 Stamina: 4 Agility: 4 Skills: Ninjutsu: 4 Genjutsu: 4 Taijutsu: 4 Summoning: 0 Sealing: 4 Medical Practice: 0 Weapon Practice: Sword Skill: 0 Axe/Hammer Skill: 0 Fan Skill: 0 Pole-arm Skill: 0 Instrument Skill: 0 Armor Skill: 0 Shield Skill: 0 Ninja Skill: 5 Jutsu Types: Fire: 0 Water: 0 Earth: 0 Wind: 1 Dark: 0 Light: 0 Ice: 0 Thunder: 0 Sound: 0 Sand: 2 Plant: 0 Bloodline: 2 Custum: 0 Known Jutsu Ninjutsu none Genjutsu None Taijutsu None Medical Jutsu None Summoning Jutsu None Weapon Jutsu None Bloodline Limit none Abilities Object Control Description/Seals: [Focus] This is the control of non-living or willing objects. This is most known for Puppet masters. You create strings made of chakara that connect to an object (As many as up to ten, one for each finger, twenty for those of the Yon Clan). This will allow you to create all sort of movement with objects. Requirements: Intelligence of 10 and Ninja of 5 Effect: Allows the control of Objects Cost: 1 every post used. Equipment/Items Human Puppet x1 Description: a puppet filled with kunai, shuriken, sand, and stored chackra that can either hand them to Kairai or throw them itself. The stored chackra can be returned to Kairai or used to reinforce the wood. Weight: Medium Type: Wood filled with chackra to make it as hard as Iron but will drain chackra when hit. Weapon Inventory Kunai X10 Description: Light Throwing Daggers Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Throwing Stars X10 Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Armor/Clothing Normal Clothing Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: None Items None History Sabaku Kairai has always been alone. Whether it was his family, his village, or a friend, he's always treated them coldly. He was never like this until he was 3 years old. That is when he lost a purpose. But this all stopped when he met his sensei and his brother witnessed his battle against her. Sabaku Kairai was born into the decendents of Gaara of the sand, the 5th Kazekage from the now abandoned sand village. He was born into a poor family of ninja, yet all of them were expert ninja. Everybody except him. His entire family had been born with a mastery of their sand, for they all received their own sand at birth. When Kairai was presented with his sand, he started waving his arms with a look of focus in his eyes and his sand spread everywhere. His parents had to use their own sand to carry his sand back to him. For several years, his parents and siblings looked down on him. When a new Sabaku was born, he would always get a first hand look at how well they could control their sand at birth. Every time, his younger siblings could surpase him. Day after day he practiced with his sand, trying to surpase his siblings. Day after day, he kept trying to surpase anybody but the only people he could surpase where regular people with no ninja skills. One day, his parents took him to the Sabaku clan elder. He didn't know where he was or why he was here. The elder grabbed a piece of paper and had him control his sand onto that. He then did so. It was a simple skill that everybody knew. Then, using her own sand, she whipped him with a quick slash. He yelled out in pain, his parents with looks of shame on thir faces. Every newborn could use thier sand to create a barrier or a thin amount of armor using their sand. He couldn't do either. A thin line of blood started falling down his cheeck. Using her sand, she soaked it in his blood. Then hovering her sand over the piece of paper, she let the blood drip off her sand onto the paper and his sand. She then had him take his sand off the paper and told him to hold the paper in his hand. She told him to focus chackra into the piece of paper. He did so, then he felt dizzy. He started walking wobboly, his eyes closing more every second. The elder started doing hand seals. Kairai was so dizzy he couldn't even see the handseals. She then yelled something and a triagram appeared on the floor surrounding him, then he passed out, with his eyes staring at he elder, feeling himself feeling as though he where falling down in slow motion. Before he passed out, he saw a small piece of paper be cut in half. When he next awoke, his parents where at his bedside, arguing. When they saw him awake, they stopped and explained what had happened. His element was naturally sand, they said, but that piece of paper could read a secondary type of element. Apperantly, his secondary element was wind, which explained why he had difficulty controling his sand. Kairai was determined to find out why they where arguing. Faking going to sleep later that day, he felt an argument brewing between his parents. He awoke, silently approaching the door that lead to his parents room. Thinking quickly, he used his sand to make it a one way only so that his parents wouldn't hear him but he could hear them through the door. He listened carefull, trying not to fall asleep. "He must be killed! He will only bring shame to our clan!" a high pitched female voice said. "Mom" he murmured. He felt himself as though he was in vertigo. He felt as though he was falling apart. He kept listening, his face hardening and becoming colder every second. "No! He's our son. He can eventually learn to control his sand!" he heard a deep voice cry out. He regained some control but not all of it. Yet he remained shocked. His mom had always cared for him better then his father. She treated him more warmly than his father. But now she wanted to kill him. He was confused, and he felt himself falling apart. He slowly walked back to his room and went to sleep. But before that, he stuck his sand into the window joints and door joints, sealing himself of, making himself feel safer. When he woke up in the morning, he waved his arm and all of the sand he used to block the doors returned to him and hovered around his body. He stood up with a look of suprise on his face. He could control the sand more easily. Then he remembered the paper. He realized that his sand had been soaked in his own blood and that was what had helped him control it better. With a look of hunger to test his skills, he headed outside and started manippulating his sand anyway he could think of. He then tried making armor around himself. He started waving the sand, but before he could turn it solid, it collapsed. He decided to try later. He went to eat breakfeast. It was early in the morning so nobody was there. He ate breakfeast and headed toward the the elders house. Feeling confident, he headed out and headed toward the sand elders house. As he approached her house, a sandstorm whipped up. He tried getting closer, but the sand wouldn't let him. He started yelling the village elders name for 10 minutes, then the sandstrom cleared. He saw a mirage, he could easily tell that apart, as a illusioned sand serpent approached him. Then, the village elder appeaed out of it. She asked him why he was here. He said he wanted to challange her to a match. He said that if he could defeat her, then he would surpase anybody. She looked at him with wide eyes, and then finally declared fine child, we shall battle! I won't kill you once I win... so I'll go easy. He angrily whipped up his sand in a veil around him and prepared to fight. (Sample RP is here) After losing, she declared, you have fought well for such a small child. His brother stared with a look of suprise on his face as well as of respect. So well in fact, that she declared that he was deserving of a reward. Chose whatever you want. He asked if it may be three. So be it, she said. "First", he stated, I want to ask you if you may make me a basic puppet with storage comparments and a poison supply inside it" Second I want you to be my Jonin Sensei once I finish the academy. Third, I would like to ask if you could tutor me with my puppets and my sand." "Fine. She said. Be here tommorow at 6 O'clock sharp in the morning. Bring your sand, buy some wire or try to bring a chackra herb. and bring a rare stone. It'll be used for something important. Now off, remember to practice by yourself. and call me Sunaarashi sensei. Heading of with his older brother, he started speaking with him. He told him that he had heard his parents about what they thought of him. He stared at his brother in shock. He didn't even notice him that day. He told him that after witnesing his battle, he was deserving of not dying. After that, they pledged to protect each other. For 2 years, Sunaarashi sensei and Kairai trained with their puppets and sand. He was proggresing slowly, but he was doing a good job in her opinion. She said he reminded her of herself when she was his age. She told him that she also had her secondary element as wind. She said she was the only person that could create sandstorms and other jutsus by combinig her elements. She then told him now that he was 10, he would be starting in the ninja academy in two days. She also gave him a special armband. Realizing that that was the emerald he had created and given her, she had turned into an armband meaning he was a student of one of the founders of the village. He practiced with his puppet all day, then the next day, he practiced all day with his sand. His sensei now felt like a mother to him so he proudly wore his armband to the first day in the ninja academy. He went to sleep the night before with a confident smirk on his face. This would be simple he thought. Sample RP Sabaku pulled of his Sandals as he stared accross the barren desert at the elder. Her wrinkled face was full of concentration. She stared at him. She started doing handseals all of a sudden. He quickly jumped bejind a dune as a thick sandstorm appeared. He poked his head out of the dune and stared at the sandstorm. All he could see was a bunch of sand. "You should keep your eyes all around, boy. Not just in one area." His eyes opened wide juts as she knocked him downwith a sharp kick to the back. He managed to land on his hands and clumsily stumble onto is feet. He then started moving his hands, and sand started rising out of the ground. He twisted it around him and prepared in the traditional stance. The elder started creating hand seals and a giant amount of sand poured out of the ground and then swaying her hands, she mixed her sand with the giant well of sand. She raised the sand carefully, her arms moving like windmills. She started morphing the sand, shaping it into a long something. While she was busy doing this, Kairai carefully sneaked accross to another dune, then, thinking off a way to stop the elders creation in progress, he quickly decided on something. He started dashing at a nearby dune in open daylight were anybody could crealy see him, despite her bad eyesight. She finished froming her monster. It had fangs as long as Kairai, a body ten times longer than her house. His arms as long as him. The dragon roared into the sky, then started rotating his head, looking for the scent his master instructed him to find. Kairai started creating handseals behind the dune, watching the dragon in sheer horror, watching its levatating body spiraling around, its pupiless eyes rotating around, looking for blood. He created handseals, sending his sand underground in the elders direction. Then he ran out on top of the dune with a kunai in hand, the dragon facing him. "foolish boy, you just brought yourself demise!" The elder yelled. Smiling confidently, he created one hand sign. His sand exploded out from the ground underneath her, sending her flinging strait at her dragon. She dispersed the dragon before impact and started creating handseals. A small carpet of sand started forming underneath her. She floated down gently, then all of a sudden dashed at him. With no time to react he quickly started creating handseals. The elder pulled out a kunai and headed toward his neck. Before it made impact, sand crawled up kurais leg. When the elder made contact, the kunai snapped. To her suprise, a thin armor of sand snapped. When Sabaku opened his eyes, he saw a dust trail. He stared in wonder at his hands. They were a bit more tanned then before his battle. Realizing what he had just done, he dispelled the jutsu. His sand hovered around him, very weakly due to his little amount of chackra left. Meanwhile, the elder looked as tough she was considering something. All of a sudden, she pulled out a scroll and cut her finger. She ran the blood down the scroll and created handseals. All of a sudden, a dark figure appeared. She started waving her fingers, and the puppet dashed toward him. Without noticing, the puppet was behind him with a kunai next to his throat. "Game over", the Elder stated. Suddenly, behind him, he heard clapping. As he turned around, he saw his older brother. |
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| Rippah Da Kid | Sep 17 2006, 09:29 PM Post #2 |
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Don't CoC Jock!
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Looks good...but you'll need an sample RP...like I told you :P |
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| Silver Wolf | Sep 18 2006, 12:56 PM Post #3 |
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One puppet and sand obsesive.
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I'm not done with the history. I still got to include how he discovered puppets. |
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| [-Cloud-] | Sep 23 2006, 01:18 PM Post #4 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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Nice app so far, but your puppet is too advanced for a basic starting weapon. You can have it use the Kunai and throwing stars that you start with, but the wire will have to go. Also, what is with the drain chakara thing? |
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| Kilala | Sep 24 2006, 06:38 AM Post #5 |
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Weet!
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so you started learnig about puppets in the old sand village before big bro went out to Konoha? Or is this the new sand village that isn't built yet? Because if it's the old one, I destroyed it with Abyssal Dune Serpeant. Good though and you should add your sample rp. |
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| Silver Wolf | Sep 24 2006, 01:40 PM Post #6 |
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One puppet and sand obsesive.
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The puppet uses chackra strings to be controlled. The puppet is made out of wood, but it is reinforced with my own chackra making it as hard as steel. Butt whenever it gets damaged, the chackra gets drained out of me instead of damaging my puppet. The wires was a mistake. I meant to put sand. I was thinking about puppet controling. Oops. (goes fix) |
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| Mattox | Sep 24 2006, 03:04 PM Post #7 |
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Eternal Legacy
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using that logic I could reinforce my chain with chakra to make it as hard as adamant, which I can't. |
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| Silver Wolf | Sep 25 2006, 06:31 PM Post #8 |
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One puppet and sand obsesive.
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Sabaku pulled of his Sandals as he stared accross the barren desert at the elder. Her wrinkled face was full of concentration. She stared at him. She started doing handseals all of a sudden. He quickly jumped bejind a dune as a thick sandstorm appeared. He poked his head out of the dune and stared at the sandstorm. All he could see was a bunch of sand. "You should keep your eyes all around, boy. Not just in one area." His eyes opened wide juts as she knocked him downwith a sharp kick to the back. He managed to land on his hands and clumsily stumble onto is feet. He then started moving his hands, and sand started rising out of the ground. He twisted it around him and prepared in the traditional stance. The elder started creating hand seals and a giant amount of sand poured out of the ground and then swaying her hands, she mixed her sand with the giant well of sand. She raised the sand carefully, her arms moving like windmills. She started morphing the sand, shaping it into a long something. While she was busy doing this, Kairai carefully sneaked accross to another dune, then, thinking off a way to stop the elders creation in progress, he quickly decided on something. He started dashing at a nearby dune in open daylight were anybody could crealy see him, despite her bad eyesight. She finished froming her monster. It had fangs as long as Kairai, a body ten times longer than her house. His arms as long as him. The dragon roared into the sky, then started rotating his head, looking for the scent his master instructed him to find. Kairai started creating handseals behind the dune, watching the dragon in sheer horror, watching its levatating body spiraling around, its pupiless eyes rotating around, looking for blood. He created handseals, sending his sand underground in the elders direction. Then he ran out on top of the dune with a kunai in hand, the dragon facing him. "foolish boy, you just brought yourself demise!" The elder yelled. Smiling confidently, he created one hand sign. His sand exploded out from the ground underneath her, sending her flinging strait at her dragon. She dispersed the dragon before impact and started creating handseals. A small carpet of sand started forming underneath her. She floated down gently, then all of a sudden dashed at him. With no time to react he quickly started creating handseals. The elder pulled out a kunai and headed toward his neck. Before it made impact, sand crawled up kurais leg. When the elder made contact, the kunai snapped. To her suprise, a thin armor of sand snapped. When Sabaku opened his eyes, he saw a dust trail. He stared in wonder at his hands. They were a bit more tanned then before his battle. Realizing what he had just done, he dispelled the jutsu. His sand hovered around him, very weakly due to his little amount of chackra left. Meanwhile, the elder looked as tough she was considering something. All of a sudden, she pulled out a scroll and cut her finger. She ran the blood down the scroll and created handseals. All of a sudden, a dark figure appeared. She started waving her fingers, and the puppet dashed toward him. Without noticing, the puppet was behind him with a kunai next to his throat. "Game over", the Elder stated. Suddenly, behind him, he heard clapping. As he turned around, he saw his older brother. |
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| Silver Wolf | Sep 26 2006, 02:31 PM Post #9 |
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Going to go and copy the RP on to my history. |
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| Kilala | Sep 26 2006, 02:37 PM Post #10 |
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Weet!
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acceptable. I say helloooooo!! |
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| Rippah Da Kid | Sep 26 2006, 02:49 PM Post #11 |
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Don't CoC Jock!
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*stamps* approved -You will have to wait until the timeskip to do join the academy so until then just post around the village! -Academy students can only have 56 points fix this and your approved |
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| Silver Wolf | Sep 26 2006, 03:09 PM Post #12 |
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Kay done. |
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