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Sabaku,tatsugira
Topic Started: Sep 22 2006, 08:01 PM (94 Views)
Kilala
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Name:Sabaku, Tatsugira [Desert Severed from Light]
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Clan: Sabaku
Preferred Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Personality: He is cold, strange and unpredictable, and bi-polar to top it off. He holds alot of sorrow and is quite deppressed. His face is usual seen with a blank or gloomy expression, unless he has a really good reason to smile.He goes about talking to his shadow, being some what of a schizophrenic, seeming not to care too much for other people ever since his folks were swallowed by a huge, freakish sand pit. What happened to their lives, and not even knowing his father has made a deep impact on how he has developed, mentally. If he meets anyone he feels withdrawn and usually chooses not to speak. But deep within he longs for company. He also has a habit of biting the skin around his nails until it bleeds, The habit was most likely brought on like his shadow, for being lonely, or possibly nervous, although he rarely shows any signs of fear. He likes traveling, thinking, and training, and learning for the most part, and enjoys the feeling of victory. His favorite food is a crunchy scorpion and his favorite drink is cactus juice. He is not a very demanding person when it comes to accomidations. He could live outside if he had to. The only thing that really urks him is rude and ignorant people who can't see past their own thought sphere, and anyone who threatens him or something he lives for. If he is challenged to do battle, he will fight ruthlessly, not taking anyone lightly, and will punish harshly his enemies, even to their deaths which he thinks the scum of the earth deserves. He does it in a most odd way.

Appearance:
Appearance: Height: 4,8
Weight: 87 lbs
Hair: short light orange hair, spikey
Eyes: jade green/ normal shaped.
Description:
Tatsu's skin is colored lightly and his body is built well and has mild muscles, which makes good for agility. He deep dark colored pockets under his eyes, brought upon him in weary states and suffering long hours from unrest, being kept up by the thought of what had happened to his people. He also has a narrow, crooked slash mark embedded in each cheek by a kunai to symbolize the pain he’s gone through. For clothing he wares a cacky colored cloak made of thin wool, a black tunic with elbow length wide sleeves, lightweight grey cargo pants with kunai pouches, grey hand gloves with fingers exposed, bandages cover his legs down from his pants, and, wears black ninja shoes. He also wears a traditional Sand Village headband on his forehead, but it's rusted and stained.


Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status
Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

(Divide 100 amongst the stats you see below, remove this comment afterwords)

Mental:
Charisma: 1
Intellect: 13
Will-Power: 9

Physical:
Strength: 5
Stamina: 5
Agility: 7

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 15
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 0
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 4
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 3

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 25
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 20
Custom: 0

Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu
(Cloud Approved) Name:Abyssal Dune Serpeant [NJ]
Descripton/Seals: [Rat,Snake,Dragon,Rat] A sandstorm whirls around an unseen forming hole until it takes the appearance of a sand dragon coming out of it's burrow, it then proceeds to suck down the shocked prey into the abyss from which it came.
Requirements: 15 Ninjutsu 25 Sand
Cost: 18

Genjutsu
None


Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit
Shield of Sabaku:
Description: [Natural] A sort of double-edge sword, this amazing Bloodline Limit allows the user to control and manipulate sand around him. The sand acts on its own accord spiraling around the user at high speeds, deflecting all light weaponry and most Taijutsu, Heavy weaponry are slowed down considerable. Although the limit is quite powerful it comes with a cost if not monitored the user could easily run out of chakra in a battle especially if other jutsu are preformed through out the battle.
Requirements: 10 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: When activated, A portion of sand automatically blocks attacks and reduces the damage. Light Weapons are easily deflected.
Cost: Four every post used.

Sand Manipulation
Description: [Focus] The user possesses the ability to control all sands, whether it is drawing it in to surround him/her or sending it rushing at an object or opponent in a tidal wave. Of course this limit is limited by the source of sand it could prove quite powerful in the desert but produce little to nothing if in moist area or another area where sand is not located. The user can target and send a wave of sand at a foe from above it can even be deployed from below as long as the sand covers the area where the target is located.
Requirements: 20 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: Allows the member to control the movement of Sand. At Twenty, one can mearly move it in small masses, but someone at 200 Bloodline could create a devestating Sand Storm that could cover an entire city in moments.
Cost: 1 Every use.




Abilities
None


Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Basic Weapon:
none

Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description same as in description.

Items
Sabaku Gourd- Big clay pot of sand he wears on his back with a belted strap around his chest. It’s filled with blood stained sand from his homeland.

History

Tatsugira was raised by his mother in what was left of the Village Hidden in the Sands after many had moved out of the area what with the KageKage's new world order. However that did not mean his clan left. They stayed right where they came from because they strongly believed in keeping traditions.

His mom taught him how to survive in their harsh corner of the world, and when he was five he was sent out into the desert to camp over weekends, and then weeks eventually, where he learned through personal experience and got a really good hold on his chakra concentration, doing handseals, and moving sands to his will.
For begginer's jutsu practice, he made sink holes, dust devils, and small animations, shifting sand to look like a living desert dweling animal made of sand, except birds ofcourse. He tried doing that, but being so young it was really hard. But that didn't mean he gave up hope. He pushed himself to increase his jutsu power, sometimes till he nearly died of dehydration.

In the village he enjoyed playing games using his skills with the other kids, but he found out most others picked on him for physically being a wimp, or tried to bring him down by telling him he sucked at jutsu's because they were jealous of his feats. He didn't really do anything past yelling on occassion however, because he wanted to be nice and kind. However, all of that was about to change.

Several years later, on Tatsugira's tenth birthday, it so happened again that the KageKage’s ANBU were set out to control or obliterate any village that wanted separation,and the Sand Village Hidden was deemed a possible threat. And now they were coming, for the last time, for all of the village’s older, stronger shinobi had gone to Kinoha to settle the score, unaware of the pre-dispatched team that meant them harm back at home in the Wind Country.

Tatsu was so happy that day. He just got the coolest present ever; his grandfather’s Sand Village Headband. He really liked it. It was tarnished and stained, but it was still in good condition otherwise. He was really honored. Tatsugira thanked his mother and ran out to the canyon to do some training. He never got to see the look on his mother’s face. She started crying when he left.

Half way through the day, he saw one of the biggest dust clouds ever, and to his horror, it came from his home. So without further ado, he leapt off the cliff he was on, slid down the sand slide, rolled, and ran all the way back home as fast as he could, and found himself in a battle for life and death.

His mother, wounded but fighting told her son to run away and save himself. But, Tatsugira wouldn't have it. He told her no, and turned to fight the attackers, not caring who they were just that they went away and left them alone. He fought as best he could, and used his kunai and shuriken, but he was unskilled, and being light and not very strong, he got beat to hell and back. He didn't give up, he couldn't. Battered and laying in the sand, he heard his mother scream again, and that was the final breaking point.

Bloodshot eyes, and wrecked with bloody cuts and bruises, little Sabaku Tatsugira got up and stood tall, a wild look in his eyes, and his face madder than had ever been seen before. He used the seals rat, snake, dragon, and rat again, quickly and violently with his hands. He would use a combination of the small techniques he had been practicing and make them into one of the biggest, scariest thing ever seen.

A huge cyclone of sand whirled around. And he was the master. Unseen in the eye of the storm a giant sink hole appeared. And, yelling harshly in his agony and anger, He made a giant sand serpeant form and it appeared to come out of the hole. The swift cry of wind made it sound like it was roaring. This frightened everyone in the area except him because he was on the focus of it. And he made it lunge at the enemies and feeble were their counters. Nothing worked on their part, for they were soon sucked into the abyss. Then Tatsu fainted, having used up all his chakra in the devastating attack.
Days later, he had awoken in Rice Country. Why he was here it was beyond his knowing. He had never been to such a place. Everything was green and wet. He didn't really like it. Shortly after waking up, he got on his feet and wanted to run out the door and far away back to the desert if he could. But he was wobbly and fell down on the wood floor, and then a masked woman came in and saw him and picked him up and gave him an elixer.




Tatsu didn't trust her. He tried to get up, pushing himself, and got on his knees, but the woman came up to him and told him to take it so he could regain his strength. And seeing that she was being ignored more, she told him she wouldn't hurt him, besides she found him alone in the desert. Tatsugira snagged the elixer and smelled it, and he asked her what she was doing there in a cold voice. She then took off her mask, revealing a friendly face with green eyes and purple hair. She was no one he knew. He tried to get up again. Then the woman told him that she was there with the resistence control squad. Listening, and not liking, but knowing the elixer was not poison, he drank it and was able to get up after a few minutes. Then he proceeded to ask her why she saved him, and she told him because he was just a kid, besides, he was lucky he survived.

Tatsu sneered at her face, and he ran towards the door. But the female ninja locked it using object control and told him then that his parents and everyone else in the area had been sucked down underground and he needed to learn to control himself. So, against his will, she did just that, and taught him. He was there for several weeks in Rice Country. There he learned more to focus, and also began to learn how to use kunai and shuriken in a better way, and, having a need what with the moist terrain, he created a hard clay gourd to hold sand. However, the woman saw how much he wanted to leave, so she let him.

Sabaku Tatsugira had been traveling around the world ever since. he saw a lot of things he had never seen, and decided it would be for the best to familiarize himself with them. He met alot of problems along the way, but was able to slip out of them, mostly by acting random and scaring the shit out of people. Then eventually he had gotten enough money to be able to make it back to his homeland. When he got there, he was alone, and he felt broken. He stayed there, and lived in a cave, since the whole village had sank. He cried, and he beat himself for crying. And his shadow became his only friend.


He lived alone like this for months, almost a whole nother year in fact, striving to perfect the jutsu he knew and come up with new ones. He hoped that someday he would be strong enough to make a difference in the world, and be the hope of his clan, since to his knowledge, he was the sole survivor of the desert. He filled his gourd with the bloodied sand where his home once lay.



Sample RP:

Tatsu trudged through the mounds of dirt. His shadow followed him, long and stretching behind him like some behemoth. His eyes cast at the ground. He kept on walking in silence, not knowing where he was going exactly, just going. Pictures flashed through his mind. There was a happy picture of his mother. It was only two years ago, but it seemed like forever. He felt as if someone or something just ripped the photograph in two, and perhaps that's what really happened.

'Why did this happen? Why do people hate us? Shadow-Chi? How could we have done such a horrible thing? I don't want it to be gone. i don't.....' He thought. As he walked, he took a kunai from it's pouch and held it, gripped tightly in his left hand. It was cold steel.....coldness.....that's exactly how he felt, cold and alone. But soon, it became warm, and eventually it was a bit hot.

The sun beat down on his shoulders. The young boy's hair shone brightly like fire. The fire on the sea of dunes that was this desert in the Wind Country. The child's darkned eyes opened, bright green shining in the sunlight. He sneezed. He had been gone from here too far long. He had to adapt to the climate once more. He hated this......he clutched the iron blade.

He thought of the ANBU. They destroyed his home, and beat him and his mother, and she had died. And where was everyone else? Were there not anyone to fight them off? It seemed as though there weren't. Thinking on this he clenched his teeth and sighed, a bit raspy. He stopped in his trail. The sand swirled about him, as if it was swayed to his emotion. He payed it no mind however. He just stared at the blade, and in it's reflection he saw simply death. Death of his family.....how he wanted the ANBU dead......but then, he saw himself, looking past the images, the reflection was clear.

"I am the cause of this? It was me......it was my fault!" He yelled. Tears streamed down his face. He slumped to hsi knees in the sand, and cried for a few minutes, until, he snarled visciously. He took the kunai in his hand, and slashed it across his own face, tracing the tears. His eyes were wide, but he made no sound, taking in the pain of it. He let the excessive blood fall to the ground. It was where it belonged.

"Now everyone will know my pain. I don't have to cry anymore." He said weakly. He dropped the bloody kunai into the ground, and he stared at his hands. His hands that could do so much destruction. He tought, looking there at them, and seeing the blood, and feeling the wounds, that he could do something great with the powe he had. and then he said, getting back on his feet, as he placed one hand on one kneed and propped himself back up. He stood tall and looked back up at the hot white sun, and said....

"I will fight for my name, so that I will not be forgotten. I will make a difference. All my enemies will pay."
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Your stats add up to 91 I beleive. My Calc wouldn't open so I did it manually. Also, could you fix the little problem with the alignment of the stats... they seem a bit jumbled in the elemental section.
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added those 15 points. 10 to bloodline. 3 to intel. 1 to strength. 1 to stamina. fixed elemental stats. one moment.
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complete.
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Approved...now you need two more mod apporavles
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Actually she just needs one. You just had to give her permission and then aprove it.. thus aproving it twice. I just give it the ole Stamp.

*Stamps*
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