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| Self-training Done; finally! | |
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| Maniac12 | Oct 16 2006, 06:19 PM Post #1 |
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Seihizu Reikokusuke
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Name: Seihizu Reikokusuke Thread Type: Self-training Link to your character sheet: Rei Link to thread: Pursuit and Capture Summary: Rei is interupted during his academy lessons to undertake a mission for the village itself. However he quickly realized that this mission, while no-less important than before, is not what it seems. Eventually it turns into a lesson that he will never forget, and what that begins to mold him into the Shinobi he will one day be. It also puts him 'on the map' as far as his sensei are concerned. Stats you used: Intellect - Successfully maintained pace with a Shinobi much higher in skill and experience than himself. Agility - Always utilizes his superior speed, both to outrun Jutsu and to surprise his opponent. Ninjutsu - Utilized defenses against Genjutsu, as well as several of his clan-based Jutsu to protect himself and corner his opponent. Genjutsu - More observational than practical, was given and survived a crash-course in what might possibly become his greatest strength. He absorbs the information and eperience with vigor. Sword-skill - Maintains a constant defensive stance with his sword and uses it to cut through foes ninjutsu and overpower him in weapon taijutsu. That's about the only ones I think I truly stressed. If whoever grades this thinks otherwise, feel free to elaborate. This was mainly to raise Genjutsu, and aside from taking academy lessons I could think of no other way. |
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| [-Cloud-] | Oct 16 2006, 10:49 PM Post #2 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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I got this one |
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| [-Cloud-] | Oct 16 2006, 11:01 PM Post #3 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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Alright, I don't know if this is your two month or not... so I will give you two different grades. 11 if it is just a normal ST 22 if it is a Two Month Skip one I thought it was really well written, I would've preferred your extremely long paragraphs to be spaced out a bit more simply because if they are too long I might get distracted and forget where I was, ya know? It isn't a huge issue.. just a convenience for the reader XD |
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| Maniac12 | Oct 17 2006, 09:28 AM Post #4 |
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Seihizu Reikokusuke
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Oh no, this wasn't my two-month. That one comes next and will be a bit longer, hopefully, though I'll try to tone down my paragraph lengths. Anywho... Intellect: 1 Agility: 1 Ninjutsu: 1 Genjutsu: 5 Sword-skill: 3 |
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| Mattox | Oct 17 2006, 05:26 PM Post #5 |
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Eternal Legacy
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alright, you're updated. |
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