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| dragonbountyhunter | Feb 25 2007, 03:12 PM Post #1 |
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lost in thought call search and rescue
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Name: Shoushi, Shoujo Thread Type: Spar Link to your Character Sheet: in sig Link to Thread: Explosive Rematch Summary Shoujo and Toshi met things did not go well for Toshi Stats you Used intellect dark summoning sand Learn/Obtain anything? |
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| Mattox | Feb 25 2007, 05:14 PM Post #2 |
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Eternal Legacy
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A few grammar and spelling errors here and there, but such is nigh inevitable. Commas though man, Commas. You gotta use Commas. I'd rather see to many than not enough. This one, seeing as I can see you put substantial effort into it, earns you an 8. Seriously, Commas. You need to add a bit more punctuation to your writing, and it'll improve ten-fold. |
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| dragonbountyhunter | Feb 25 2007, 07:57 PM Post #3 |
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lost in thought call search and rescue
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intellect 1 dark 3 summoning 3 sand 1 I will edit myself |
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