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| Father?; Someone has Anger Problems... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 12 2007, 07:57 AM (61 Views) | |
| UberKidd | Mar 12 2007, 07:57 AM Post #1 |
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Ubby-Kun!
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It was a rare day in the desert. An odd weather system had closed in and surrounded the village, and the Mirage Village was getting rain. The adults stayed inside, being unaffiliated with the rain, they didn’t know what to do. The children were doing just the opposite, though. They were running around, and splashing water everywhere. Toshi was out there, too, but not for the same reasons. Toshi Tokagawa was hungry. This was a very bad thing. He was irritable, he could barely walk, and his eyes were red. He stumbled into the bakery, drawing attention to himself. Toshi did not care though, because he was hungry. He quickly grabbed a seat at an empty table, and ordered some baked goods. There he waited, vision faltering and consciousness waning until his food came to him. Wolfed it down with gusto, and without noticing all of the eyes watching him. When he had finally finished, Toshi walked up to the bar counter, and discussed payment. It was then that a man walked up behind him. As Toshi turned around to look at the man, an old habit of checking for danger, he heard the man sigh. “Son!” He whispered. Immediately, Toshi’s eyes widened and his hands shot right down for kunai. He snatched two, and held one in each hand. The blades pointed down as Toshi mimicked the man with a wicked tone and the taste of fire in the air. “Son?!” He cried out loud. It took a minute to register in his brain, but once it did, Toshi jumped into the air and kicked the man in the stomach. He flew back, and went through a window. Toshi dashed out of the bakery after him, and charged at him once again. This time, the man drew a sword. Toshi charged, still burning with anger. He made a slash for the left, then ducked down for a spinning slash to the man’s legs. The man easily blocked both attacks with a long sword. Then, Toshi rose up quickly, dragging his kunai along the man’s body. The man proved his skill once again, and parried the hit with a flash of steel. Toshi then ducked around, and circled the man. He then rose up with another slash along the body. This time, the man only jumped back and dodged it easily. Toshi could see words forming on the man’s mouth, but he could not hear. He could only hear roaring flames inside his head as he took out years of rage upon his father. Toshi could tell this man was his father. They were the same. He matched the very description his mother often told him as a young child. Toshi was going to kill him for what he had done! Quickly, Toshi jumped up, and from above, he outstretched his leg and kicked the man in the face. The man stumbled back, but then quickly regained his balance and put himself into a defensive stance quickly. Toshi decided to try something different this time, so he leapt upon a small house. From there, he hurled six shuriken at the man. They enclosed from many different angles, and approached the man. The stream of shuriken seemed to cut through the rain as it soared at the man. Unfortunately, all of his work turned out to be useless when as the shuriken approached, the man dropped his sword and made one hand seal that Toshi was not affiliated with. That hand seal seemed to have done something, because the shuriken clattered against some kind of invisible shield. Toshi gasped, but galvanized himself for another attack. This man was his father, and his father deserved death! ((To Be Continued)) |
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| UberKidd | Mar 17 2007, 02:07 PM Post #2 |
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Ubby-Kun!
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Soon, Toshi was ready to mount another attack. He ran down the slope of the roof, and dove from it towards the man. Each step he took on the roof made a sharp clink sound, giving his position away. His father turned to see Toshi diving from the roof, performing the Dragon and tiger seals. The old man gasped, and made two more seals. A shield appeared in front of him, just as Toshi exhaled, and blew fire into the air. The Pheonix Fire jutsu impacted with the shield, and began to melt it. Unfortunately, the shield was too strong, and as the flame jutsu came to and end, the shield was still standing. Toshi quickly drew his sword now, and dashed around the shield. There, he found the man to be waiting with his own steel. Toshi dove at him, then led that initial dive into a feint in which he made a quick slash for the man's back. After that, Toshi rolled out of the way. Once he was a safe distance from his target, Toshi stood up to see the man fall. He had done it. He had defeated his father. Toshi felt bad though, for all the anger he had had earlier. It was a large difference, from the point where he had wanted to kill this man to the point where had was actually dead. As Toshi watched the man, he felt something hit on the back of his head. As he fell to the ground, his eyes lay on the figure of the man crumpled on the ground. It had been a clone, a fake. I can't beleive I fell for that.. Toshi thought, as his eyes slowly closed. |
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