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Soul's Thunder; Uchiha only....
Topic Started: Apr 8 2007, 10:25 AM (143 Views)
Shin Draven
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Bloodline Move for Uchiha

Thunder of Uchiha Might
Description: [NJ, Dragon - Rat - Bird - Ox - Snake - Dragon] This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into the user's arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity, but oddly enough the chakra will appear red because of the Uchiha's closeness to the fire element. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to many birds chirping, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes an electric crackling sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything. This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows their enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, but it is possible to avoid the drawback because of the Sharingan eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to a few times a day.
Cost: 40
Requirements: Ninjutsu-25 Thunder-25 Agility-40 Bloodline-20

Yea, this will be a low grade Chidori for the Uchiha clan only. The move requires 26 in Sealing to do in one post. As well as the high chakra requirement should make it feasible.
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UberKidd
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I see almost no problems with it other than the fact that the bloodline is higher than the ninjutsu and thunder requirements. It should be the other way around, seeing as the main part of the attack is thunder ninjutsu. XD
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Shin Draven
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Changed.
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UberKidd
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Raise ten to ninjutsu or thunder, or 5 to both, then it seems fine to me.
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Shin Draven
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changed.
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Gekijou
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My friends call me Galileo or "Gal" for short.
It looks fine to me.
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Mi Suo
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not to be annoying, draven and Gek, but i think a new requirement should be added. I think Taijutsu would be added because in the show, kakashi says that it's a Chop, or a thrust, which in turn would be a taijutsu, with added element and chakra power.
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Gekijou
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My friends call me Galileo or "Gal" for short.
I was thinking the same thing, I guess 10-20 Taijutsu wouldn't hurt.
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Shin Draven
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Bloodline Move for Uchiha

Thunder of Uchiha Might
Description: [NJ, Dragon - Rat - Bird - Ox - Snake - Dragon] This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into the user's arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity, but oddly enough the chakra will appear red because of the Uchiha's closeness to the fire element. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to many birds chirping, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes an electric crackling sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything. This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows their enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, but it is possible to avoid the drawback because of the Sharingan eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to a few times a day.
Cost: 30
Requirements: Ninjutsu-25 Thunder-25 Agility-40 Bloodline-20 Taijutsu-20

Okay, with all the requirements, I'm going to down the chakra cost by ten.
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Mi Suo
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Greased Lightning
I don't think the chakra cost should be so high. First off, it's not the actual chidori as the description says, so it should not be as powerful, thus not that taxing on the chakra pool. and i think the ninjutsu stat should be lowered for the move is a taijutsu move at heart, mixed in with chakra and thunder element. I really don't even think the ninjutsu stat is needed.
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Gekijou
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My friends call me Galileo or "Gal" for short.
Mi Suo, this isn't your move, this is Draven's move and it is acceptable as is. If he wants to change it, he can and I will look it over.
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Mi Suo
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eh, alright. Was trying to help so it would be more accessible and easier for him to use. But alright.
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Shin Draven
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Thunder of Uchiha Might
Description: [NJ, Dragon - Rat - Bird - Ox - Snake - Dragon] This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into the user's arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity, but oddly enough the chakra will appear red because of the Uchiha's closeness to the fire element. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to many birds chirping, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes an electric crackling sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything. This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows their enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, but it is possible to avoid the drawback because of the Sharingan eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to a few times a day.
Cost: 30
Requirements: Ninjutsu-25 Thunder-25 Agility-40 Bloodline-20 Taijutsu-20

Mi Suo, you don't seem to understand, look at my character profile, I know Precise Chakra Control. So the cost of this move will be 20% less for me anyway. Meaning it will actually cost me 24 chakra.
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