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Catch The Kid!; Mission
Topic Started: May 10 2007, 08:03 PM (64 Views)
NanoSong
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Seal Evil
Name: Myou, Tsu
Thread Type: Mission w/ Jutsu Learning
Link to your Character Sheet: In the Sig
Link to Thread: Catch the Kid!

Summary
Tsu, with much disdain, accepted a relatively sub-par mission with no danger. It involved her having to learn how to be more sneaky and less rambo-esque. Also, she gained a puppet out of the deal, but no money.

On a side note, although its more than 16 paragraphs (if you count a paragraph as five sentences), I feel like I kinda squished the ending. :(

Word Count: 2414

Stats you Used
Ninja Skill
Intellect
Willpower

Learn/Obtain anything?

Man Puppet
Description: A puppet shaped like a man, has the basic joints in the waist, knees, elbows, wrists and ankles. Has nothing special about him and can do basic Taijutsu attacks.
Requirements: 5 Ninja Skill
Effect: none
Cost: 70 Yen

Retractable Blade
Description: A blade that is hidden within an arm, leg or mouth that is able to be jerked out of the location at whim.
Requirements: 20 Ninja Skill
Effect: Adds a retracable blade to an Arm or leg.
Cost: 50 Yen

Light Step
Description/Seals: [Natural] After reaching a certain point, your steps become so light that you make no sound when you walk or run. You still make vibrations which can be heard by certain 'special' shinobi.
Requirements: 20 Agility
Effect: Makes your Steps light as a feather
Cost: None
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Tony
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Clear Tranquil
- Grammar - 3
- Effort - 3
- Plot Development - 1
- Consistancy - 2
- Climax - 1

Total - 10
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I liked this thread nano. Since i role played with tsu, I know she's just a plain old girl and the mission fitted her well. It's sog reat to see a charactert that isn't emo and that cna actually be role played well. Youd eserved the ten. You could have gotten more but the ending wasn't keeping up with the rest of the thread. Still good so don't worry. ten is your grade. Spend it wisely young padowan.
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NanoSong
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Seal Evil
Ninja Skill - 1
Intellect- 1
Willpower - 8

Thanks!
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Shin Draven
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The People's Champion
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