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Special Ability; for a new character
Topic Started: May 21 2007, 04:43 PM (119 Views)
Takeda
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Hyper Hobo
I am working on another character right now, and I need to get this jutsu approved for him.

Nightmare Eye [GJ]
Description/Seals: [Focus] The ability to look into someone's eyes and focus your chakra into a sick, empty feeling that enters the victim's body. This is something that is developed by someone who has come in contact with a large amount of negative chakra or a powerful genjutsu that does not harm the recipient.
Effect: You can create a debilitating fear effect in someone just by them making eye contact and maintaining chakra focus. It can be dispelled by pain or by normal genjutsu methods.
Requirements: Genjutsu 20, Willpower 15, Charisma 15, Intellect 15
Cost: 5 + 2per post maintained.

Is there a better way I could word this, it is equivalant to Oorochimaru's special staredown technique, kinda... I posted it a while back but got no imput on it, thanks again!
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
I would say boost the Genjutsu requirement to 15 or 20. Seems way to powerful for only a genjutsu pf 10.
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NanoSong
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Seal Evil
Also, maybe you should put the [GJ] symbol, which implies that it can be dispelled. If it cannot be dispelled via the Dispel technique, you need to incorporate some sort of "out", similar to how Orochimaru's technique can be dispelled through pain.
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Shin Draven
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Hmm... Draven say that you need to up the all stat requirements to at least 20. And I think Geki made a move like that before. Check this forum for it.
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Takeda
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I added the ability to escape from it and how, and I also upped the requirements, how's that?
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