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Cain's; I half complied?
Topic Started: May 27 2007, 08:01 AM (494 Views)
Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Abilities

~Immortal Approved~
Hyouton no Jutsu (Ice Release Skill)
Description: [Focus] with this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Ice. Granting them control over this particular element, by way of Chakra infusion and manipulation though not as efficiently as Bloodline Limit abilities. Some jutsu depend on this ability.
Effect: Grants control over Ice and reduces Ice based jutsu cost - [Jutsu Cost divide 2 then minus the result.]
Requirements: 15-Ice, 10-Ninjutsu, 10-Willpower.
Cost: 3.
Note: Not to be confused with Bloodline. This cost comes in with every Ice jutsu used.


~Immortal Approved~
Oto no Jutsu (Sound Release Skill)
Description: [Focus] with this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Sound. Granting them control over this particular element, by way of Chakra infusion and manipulation though not as efficiently as Bloodline Limit abilities. Some jutsu depend on this ability.
Effect: Grants control over Sound and reduces Sound based jutsu cost - [Jutsu Cost divide 2 then minus the result.]
Requirements: 15-Sound, 10-Ninjutsu, 10-Willpower.
Cost: 3.
Note: Not to be confused with Bloodline. This cost comes in with every Sound jutsu used.


~Immortal Approved~
Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Description: [Focus] with this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. Granting them control over this particular element, by way of Chakra infusion and manipulation though not as efficiently as Bloodline Limit abilities. Some jutsu depend on this ability.
Effect: Grants control over Wind and reduces Wind based jutsu cost - [Jutsu Cost divide 2 then minus the result.]
Requirements: 15-Wind, 10-Ninjutsu, 10-Willpower.
Cost: 3.
Note: Not to be confused with Bloodline. This cost comes in with every Wind jutsu used.


~Kenny Approved~
Name: Tenka Jisatsu (Snow Suicide)
Description/Seals: [Focus] Leeching his insidious taint into the very snow he creates Cain can bestow upon the icy substance a curse. This curse is savage and unforgiving, causing the snow to become volatile so that the slightest touch from Taijutsu or some such force, which wills the infected to explode –otherwise ushered by Cain. An erratic cloud of blizzard-like vigour lurches forth screening the surrounds and ailing its victim with a terrible chill, effecting the mind and body.
Effect: Causes the hexed snow to explode (with pressure) and reduce all Physical and Metal stats of the victim by Five (5), with every explosion to a minimum of five (5).
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-25, and Ninjutsu-20.
Cost: Chakra-5.


~Kenny Approved~
Name: Retsu no Koori (Cold as Ice)
Description/Seals: [Focus] With clenched fist so aching white the ice of death will squeeze in tight. With nothing but a simple hand gesture, Cain forces his snow to crush in on itself making it solid ice, during this process; it can be molded into any shape he desires although restricted by the amount of Snow, he also must used both hands to mould. Opponents struck by this Ice suffer Icy effects (Loss of five (5) Physical & Mental stats, to a minimum of five (5)). However, as a drawback any Snow affected by this, is now affected by Taijutsu and weapons.
Effect: Causes snow to compact itself into hard Ice. Durability determined by Cain's Ice Stat.
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-15, and Ninjutsu-10.
Cost: Chakra-5.
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Weapons and Effects

~Immortal Approved~
Wind Palms
Description: This surgical implant inserts 20cm long tubes into both forearms which act as a focus for wind based attacks, emitting powerful blasts of air from small holes in the palms. This body augment grants the user control over Supersonic waves and air pressure. Plus the use of more advanced Jutsu.
Effect: Gives +10 to Wind and Taijutsu. Control of Air pressure and Supersonic sound waves.
Weight: light
Type: N/A
Requirements: 15-Wind, Wind Release skill, 10-Ninjutsu, 5-Taijutsu.
Cost: 5 Chakra


~Immortal Approved~
Melody Arm
Description: An implant fitted onto the users primary forearm. This metal gauntlet is perforated with holes on the topside which amplifies the vibrations inside it to their maximum like a speaker, so attacks of sound higher than 150 decibels are possible. Plus more advanced Jutsu with this weapon.
Effect: Gives +15 to Sound and Taijutsu. And Sound effects to Taijutsu attacks.
Weight: light
Type: Steel
Requirements: 15-Sound, Sound Release skill, 15-Ninjutsu, 15-Taijutsu.
Cost: 5 Chakra


Name: Hyouton: Touketsu Buki (Ice Release: Frozen Weapon) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, and Ox] Cain imbues his weapon with the effect of Ice, then without mercy attacks his victim savagely. Every time that Cain hits his opponent or defends with his weapon, a small burst of frost plumes out in a spray, creating symptoms similar to frostbite, which numbs and prevents fast movement. This also prevents a wound from naturally healing with any decent speed. This also means that medical jutsu that is used for healing is required to cure the frostbite effects first.
Effect: Afflicts an opponent with frostbite, debilitating their stats by five (5) with every hit, to a minimum of five (5)
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-15, Ninjutsu-15.
Cost: Chakra-6.
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Ice Jutsu

Name: Tenka Bunshin (Snow Clone) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger] Ushering the mighty winds to blow with a deathly Chill, Cain collects the essence of fear into the form of Ice and Snow. If playing in a winter’s scene already he need not summon the winds, instead let the Snow rise to life in his image. Living with his treacherous nature the Clones defend and attack at will, using their warmth less bodies to bring an “Ice Touch” to their victims. These vile creations don’t die easily, glancing off bladed weapons and absorbing Taijutsu thanks to their malleable forms, requiring to be slain by Fire and Ninjutsu. Their power is derived from (Ninjutsu + Ice) + (Intellect / Charisma) / 2. And spread evenly across Physical and Mental.
Effect: Creates a clone made of snow that attacks with Ice Touch, and is immune to Weapons and Taijutsu unless augmented by Fire.
Requirement: Ninjutsu-15, Wind-15, Ice-15, Ice Release, Wind Release, Wind Palms, and Winds of Change.
Cost: Chakra-7 (With Snow), Chakra-14 (Without Snow)


Name: Okami Namida (Mistress Tears) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, Tiger] Forcing his will into the skies Cain can form an apparition horrid enough to cower the dauntless, as enchanted clouds drag their weary forms together. Like a lover slain this airy mistress weeps painful throws of Ice formed Needles upon the misfortunate victims, letting them feel the chilling sting of a tortured soul.
Effect: A snow cloud forms above the battlefield and rains down Ice Senbon, which size and ferocity grow with skill.
Requirement: Ninjutsu-25, Ice-20, Wind-15, Ice-Release.
Cost: Chakra-6

Name: Ketsueki Koori Choushi (Blood Ice Vein) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, Bear, and Ox] Crafting his essence into the visible form of a Senbon Needle Cain hurls this abomination at unwilling prey. Once struck their veins scream with a stilling freeze which surges through their entire bloodstream, from the inside out. Unfortunately, the inflicted do not actually freeze and are only pained by invading chakra. Debilitates Mental & Physical stats by five (5) for six (6) posts to a minimum of five (5).
Effect: Gives a distracting freezing feeling to the victim debilitating their performance.
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-20, Ninjutsu-20, Ninja Skill-10.
Cost: Chakra-6.

~Kaos Approved~
Name: Hyouton: Kansen (Ice Release: Infection) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, and Ox] Calling the savage freeze into his hand Cain slams his palm onto the ground where the Ice begins to leech out fixing him there. From this a 12x12 inch “tendril” of Ice snakes (As fast as Cain's Ice stat) out across the ground at a relative pace towards an intended target. If the Jutsu ensnares the victim, the Ice forces itself into the assaulted part of the target, such as their feet in the guise of frozen veins, and binds it to the ground. If Cain wishes, this invasion may expand to encase the victim partly (Instantly) or completely (two posts). However, Cain must hold his position. Targets may escape if they use Fire Jutsu, or have strength 1.5x more than Cain’s Ice stat.
Effect: A binding attack, which increases by one (1) “tendril” every Ice-5.
Requirement: Ice-20, Ninjutsu-20, Ice-Release.
Cost: Chakra-5.


~Kaos Approved~
Name: Hyouton: Kansen Wana (Ice Release: Infection Snare ) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [None] After using Ice Release: Infection, Cain viciously clenches his free hand into a fist causing the bound sufferer to have the selected part of their body crushed.
Effect: Crushes part of their body that is bound.
Requirement: Hyouton: Hakruen, Ice-15, Ninjutsu-15.
Cost: Chakra-7.


Name: Koori Nigiri (Ice Grip) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, Ox, and Tiger] When Snow is his playground Cain wills the deathly cold into the form of a hand, this enchanted apparition rises up from the snow covered ground to place the target in its clutches. This sinister Jutsu allows for interrogation, restriction, or just plain execution if his prisoners aren’t strong enough. Escape allowed on Fire/Strength 45% greater than Cain’s Ice Stat.
Effect: Imprisons a target in a hand of Ice.
Requirement: Ice release, Ice-15, Ninjutsu-15.
Cost: Chakra-7.

Name: Hyouton: Shishou Reikon (Ice Release: Stabbing Soul) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Ox, Ram, And Tiger] Holding the Seal of the Tiger Cain wills Ice chakra to form a sphere before his hands. From this, rapid successions of frozen lengths shoot out in any direction infront of Cain. These lengths shape into the form of small thin spears and fly a max of 10 metres before melting.
Effect: Ice Spear barrage.
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-15, Ninjutsu-15.
Cost: Chakra-2 (per spear).

Name: Hyouton: Soeki (Ice Release: Plague) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Ox, Ram, and Tiger] Not content with the normal spread of his sinful essence Cain commands a plague to show itself, the forms of five floating skulls shimmer into view ready to do his bidding. Hurling forth these monstrous creations without any particular aim they strike, being volatile in nature they explode spewing a wave of snow out five metres in every direction. Once it settles the height is no more than an Inch, but the cold is evident, slowing all but Cain.
Effect: Covers an area in snow, and lowers enemies physical & mental by five (5) to a minimum of Five (5)
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-20, Ninjutsu-20.
Cost: Chakra-8.

Name: Hyouton: Koori-Ki Sousei (Ice Tree Dense Growth) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Ram, and Ox] Expanding his creative and sinister use of Ice and Snow Cain demands the chilling substance be wrought to the visage of Frozen trees. Each creation explodes from the ground where Cain wishes, they are 30cm in diametre while clawing to 10 feet into the sky. Immediately after their initial sprouting from the Earth, thorn covered branches splay outwards attempting to snare their misfortunate prey scratching and clawing as they grow. Each branch finishes growing by four (4) feet and covers the entire length of the “tree.”
Effect: Creates sharp trees of ice, which attempt to trap and injure an opponent.
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-25, Ninjutsu-25.
Cost: Chakra-6. (Per tree)
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Sound Jutsu
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Wind Jutsu
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What in the name of hell? >.<
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Updated.
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Name: Tenka Jisatsu (Snow Suicide)
Description/Seals: [Focus] Leeching his insidious taint into the very snow he creates Cain can bestow upon the icy substance a curse. This curse is savage and unforgiving, causing the snow to become volatile so that the slightest touch from Taijutsu or some such force, which wills the infected to explode –otherwise ushered by Cain. An erratic cloud of blizzard-like vigour lurches forth screening the surrounds and ailing its victim with a terrible chill, effecting the mind and body.
Effect: Causes the hexed snow to explode and reduce all Physical and Metal stats of the victim by Five (5), with every explosion to a minimum of five (5).
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-25, and Ninjutsu-20.
Cost: Chakra-5.

What kind of explosion? Like BOOM fiery explosion or like a cloud explosion?

Name: Retsu no Koori (Cold as Ice)
Description/Seals: [Focus] With clenched fist so aching white the ice of death will squeeze in tight. With nothing but a simple hand gesture, Cain forces his snow to crush in on itself making it solid ice, during this process; it can be molded into any shape he desires. However, as a drawback any Snow affected by this, is now affected by Taijutsu and weapons.
Effect: Causes snow to compact itself into hard Ice.
Requirement: Ice Release, Ice-15, and Ninjutsu-10.
Cost: Chakra-5.

Do note in there that in order to form something large like a shield or sword you would need enough snow and to use both hands. Also state the durability of anything made is equal to that of your Ice Stat.
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It's kind of hard to explain the type of explosion. It definitely isn't fiery (That'd melt the snow x.x) but it does go boom like that. It isn't a cloud like smoke, but a lot of snow being hurled about like a blizzard.

So boom explody blizzard explosion. It kind of relies on common sense...and good interpretation of the description. =P

And Editted.
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It'd be pressure then, no? An explosion of pressure.
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Works for me.
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Kenny
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Approved!
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Name: Tenka Bunshin (Snow Clone) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger] Ushering the mighty winds to blow with a deathly Chill, Cain collects the essence of fear into the form of Ice and Snow. If playing in a winter’s scene already he need not summon the winds, instead let the Snow rise to life in his image. Living with his treacherous nature the Clones defend and attack at will, using their warmth less bodies to bring an “Ice Touch” to their victims. These vile creations don’t die easily, glancing off bladed weapons and absorbing Taijutsu thanks to their malleable forms, requiring to be slain by fire and Ninjutsu. Their power is derived from (Ninjutsu + Ice) + (Intellect / Charisma) / 2. And spread evenly across Physical and Mental.
Effect: Creates a clone made of snow that attacks with Ice Touch, and is immune to weapons and Taijutsu.
Requirement: Ninjutsu-10, Wind-10, Ice-10, Ice Release, Wind Release, Wind Palms, and Winds of Change.
Cost: Chakra-7 (With Snow), Chakra-14 (Without Snow)

Up the requirements on that. Also, If someone were strong enough a weapon could easily severe this as well as a taijutsu attack. Nothing is immune to anything. Yes, it CAN take it more than anything else. But there is not such thing as "Has No Effect" Status. Taijutsu an Weapon Jutsu may do half the damage on it though, That's fine by me. :P


I will be approving your stuff randomly and in spurts. You have A LOT to approve... o.o
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Editted. Are those requirements betterer?

Hehe, and you've only made one of my customs more useful by making me change the Snow Clone. =D

It's all good, take your time...just let me know when they're approved. I have so many more than what you see here. Oh, and Ice release: Infection, and Infection snare have kind of been approved. Since Kaos approved my character sheet. Is that cool?
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No, those moves are way over-powered.

I don't think Kaos saw them...


Name: Hyouton: Kansen (Ice Release: Infection) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, and Ox] Calling the savage freeze into his hand Cain slams his palm onto the ground where the Ice begins to leech out fixing him there. From this a 12x12 inch “tendril” of Ice snakes out across the ground at a relative pace towards an intended target. If the Jutsu ensnares the victim, the Ice forces itself into the assaulted part of the target, such as their feet in the guise of frozen veins, and binds it to the ground. If Cain wishes, this invasion may expand to encase the victim partly or completely. However, Cain must hold his position. Targets may escape if they use Fire Jutsu, or have strength 45% more than Cain’s Ice stat.
Effect: A binding attack, which increases by one (1) “tendril” every Ice-5.
Requirement: Ice-5, Ninjutsu-10, Ice-Release.
Cost: Chakra-4.

----The Ice has no speed, meaning the opponent would have no idea if they could avoid it or not.


Name: Hyouton: Kansen Wana (Ice Release: Infection Snare ) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [None] After using the White Ripple technique, Cain viciously clenches his free hand into a fist causing the bound sufferer to have the selected part of their body crushed.
Effect: Crushes part of their body that is bound.
Requirement: Hyouton: Hakruen, Ice-15, Ninjutsu-15.
Cost: Chakra-5.

What is the 'White Ripple' attack and up the chakra. This can easily be used as an auto-kill technique.
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>.>

I had a speed in there...but for your sake I made it more obvious. Even though the Sabaku Desert Coffin has no speed (As far as I can tell anyway.)

<.<

White Ripple isn't anything...it's not supposed to be there. It's gone now, also changed Ice Release: Infection so Ice Release: Infection Snare isn't the auto-kill capable attack you're so afraid of. Heh again, even though Desert Graveyard can kill and doesn't have restrictions like I've put.

Not really over powered at all, if you think about it.
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Name: Hyouton: Kansen (Ice Release: Infection) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Tiger, and Ox] Calling the savage freeze into his hand Cain slams his palm onto the ground where the Ice begins to leech out fixing him there. From this a 12x12 inch “tendril” of Ice snakes out across the ground at a relative pace towards an intended target. If the Jutsu ensnares the victim, the Ice forces itself into the assaulted part of the target, such as their feet in the guise of frozen veins, and binds it to the ground. If Cain wishes, this invasion may expand to encase the victim partly or completely. However, Cain must hold his position. Targets may escape if they use Fire Jutsu, or have strength 45% more than Cain’s Ice stat.
Effect: A binding attack, which increases by one (1) “tendril” every Ice-5.
Requirement: Ice-5, Ninjutsu-10, Ice-Release.
Cost: Chakra-4.

~ Instead of 45% more can we make it a simple 1.5x more =P just for the sake of easy maths.

Increase requirements: 20 Ice, 20 Ninjutsu.

Let's be honest, it is a pretty good move for a level of 5. In the rules, it says 5 means, "Below Average." This isn't a below average move. I hope I explain my reasoning behind my decision properly xD

Chakra should be... mmmm... 5? May as well increase it that little bit while your editting the other stuff... that and I want to be a pain =P
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Heh, pain. I editted. But now it's going to have to be removed from my character sheet...unless I leave it inactive until such requirements are filled.
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Just don't use it till you can. I wouldn't have a problem with that.
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Perfect. Thanks, mate.
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