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Looking Back To Go Forward
Topic Started: May 28 2007, 07:41 PM (74 Views)
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Fairy Boy Extraordinaire
Name: Hyuga, Neran
Thread Type: Self Training if sorts
Link to your Character Sheet: Hyuga, Neran
Link to Thread: Looking Back to Go Forward

Summary
A brief summary of the important events in Neran’s life through his eyes.

Stats you Used
Charisma – Childish charisma to become more friendly.
Intellect – Learning things.
Will-Power – The will to keep going.
Agility – Running around the house to avoid his friends.
Stamina - Running around the house to avoid his friends.

Learn/Obtain anything?
Nope.
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
Eff the waiting! You shouldn't have to wait for some Bull. >.< Not my problem if someone has an objection, they should have done it if they had one.

Grammar - 3 (Found 1 error, but you made up for it with your wide vocabulary)
Effort - 3 (It shows how you put your effort, so your grade shall not falter due to other's opinions)
Plot - 3 (Very interesting plot, kept me reading the whole time.)
Consistency - 3 (Your greatness shows as your consistency stays the same. xD)
Climax - 3 (I loved it. Very nice job.)

Grade: 15

You deserve it, you have waited long enough to receive a grade. If any other staff member has an objection, take it up with cloud because hes waited over a week to get graded.

Nuff Said.
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I'll wait to put in the stats until it is settled. It's graded, and as long as it isn't locked, I can add the stats later. And that should only take a day, especially with the story arc coming up. If it takes longer, I'm just taking the grade and whatever fall out comes with it. Anyway, what was the mistake with grammar? Anything you saw in the thread that I could improve on?
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
"handholds" I believe it is supposed to be "Hand holds"
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Ah, okay. That's just a regional thing I think than, cause I found it done both way. So it was nothing major. Anywho... If someone objects, I've got a total break down of the stats I've gained in my bio post, but until then...

Charisma – 3
Intellect – 3
Will-Power – 3
Agility – 3
Stamina - 3
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
Modded.
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