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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 5 2007, 06:28 AM (55 Views) | |
| T@Z | Jun 5 2007, 06:28 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Motouro Haruhi Thread Type: Spar with Shiro Link to your Character Sheet: Motouro Haruhi Link to Thread: Head On Summary Sparred with Shiro, a Motouro clansman, and made him give up. Stats you Used Bloodline Intelligent Charisma Learn/Obtain anything? none |
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| Shin Draven | Jun 6 2007, 10:23 PM Post #2 |
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Grammar-2 Effort-1 Plot Development-1 Consistency-1 Climax-1 Total=6 I can personally say that I really didn't like that thread. No disrespect or anything, but it hurt me. So instead of saying how much I hated it, let me just say that you can learn a lot by looking at how our legendary role players post. Look at Endless, Mattox, or Cloud. They are quite good. Description is something that you lack in your posts and I wish I could help you make it better, so here. Go HERE, This may help. |
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| T@Z | Jun 6 2007, 10:57 PM Post #3 |
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HA-HA!
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Bloodline=2 Intelligent=2 Charisma=2 Thanks. I promise I'll do better next time. Its just that Ive been busy trying to come up with things for Bide... And that's its school time here in my place. But I knew excuses will never amount to anything so I give you my word, even if pigs wont fly and Bowwy wont have a girl, I'll do better next time. |
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| Shin Draven | Jun 6 2007, 11:04 PM Post #4 |
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