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| [-Cloud-] | Jun 8 2007, 12:20 AM Post #1 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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Name: Cloud Striff Thread Type: Dual Training/Spar Link to your Character Sheet: Siggy Link to Thread: Name Here Summary Cloud tested Duo to see if he had what it took to be in the Black winds. During the process Cloud used Mirror Wheel to copy a Jutsu that Duo used in battle. Stats you Used Bloodline Taijutsu Ninjutsu Water Learn/Obtain anything? Diving Falcon Strike Description/Seals: [None] This technique is very powerful and can easily fracture a bone if an opponent does not defend properly. The user must have his back facing the opponent and flip backwards, while spinning in the air so that he lands with his heal smashing into the opponent. The flip that is performed is known as a 'flair' and it is when you start off doing a back flip or front flip, and land as if you had done the other. Effect: Basic Taijutsu Attack Cost: 0 |
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| Crimson | Jun 8 2007, 01:06 AM Post #2 |
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Grammar-1 Effort-1 Plot Development-2 Consistency-1 Climax-2 Alright I found quite a few grammatical errors, not to mention that there were few interesting words. I think you could have gone farther with this, I mean it was short all together, I think you could have done more, I mean I have seen you done more. The plot itself was good, and you kept with it most of the way, yet, you seemed to slack on your posts. It would have been more interesting if you hadn't slacked as much, it just felt like the thread was rushed, yet filled with action. Total=7 |
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| [-Cloud-] | Jun 8 2007, 01:09 AM Post #3 |
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It also took a month to finish
XD Me and Akira started that thread almost a month ago. It was rushed due to the Saga starting soon. But I didn't expect anything great from the thread. Bloodline- 2 Taijutsu- 3 Ninjutsu- 1 Water- 1 I will update myself. |
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