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Session I; completed.
Topic Started: Jun 8 2007, 03:02 PM (47 Views)
Akira
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Name: Duo
Thread Type: Spar
Link to your Character Sheet: second sprite in siggy
Link to Thread: Session I

Summary
Duo received a letter from the captain of the Black Winds, Cloud. He met up with Cloud at the designated spot to test his skills. In the end Duo was given the permission to take the academy training of the Black Winds.

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Agility
Axe/Hammer Skill
Will-Power

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Crimson
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Grammar-2
Effort-1
Plot Development-2
Consitency-1
Climax-1

I found few grammatical errors, only three, but you really need to add some interesting words, otherwise it's quite dull. Now you could have put more effort into this, especially since it was with someone else. Now over all this is a good plot, yet you seemed to get shorter and shorter every post. You just kinda slacked off, and it was quite rushed.

Total=7
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Akira
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yea it was.
i believe cloud explained that already in his finished thread but w/e

Agility - 2
Axe/Hammer Skill - 3
Will-Power - 2
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Modded.
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