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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 10 2007, 06:54 PM (121 Views) | |
| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 06:54 PM Post #1 |
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Braver
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Name: Oborn, Zeke Gender: Male, Age: 15 Preferred Jutsu Type: Weapon Jutsu. Personality: He is often misunderstood because of his black bat-looking wings, the deformity was never his fault, but people peg him as evil just for his appearance, he is actually the purest, friendliest, noble kid you'll ever meet, but he's also stubborn, and quick to anger, and a little braggy. he loves to party when he can find a place that ignores bis wings and lets him in anyway, all in all he's a very devoted shinobi. his evil-looking wings have also prevented him from ever having freinds, and he has to endure harsh teasing from the other genin... but no one dares to insult him on his own. He does have a tough side, when he unleashes his anger he forgets all about rules and boundries and just focuses on beating the hell out of his opponent at any cost. He does sometimes have a SERIOUS attitude problem also. Appearance: http://images.quizilla.com/A/AN/ANG/angeli..._DemonAnime.jpg he only wears the eyepatch in battles he know he can win, the spike on his left hand is his custom thruster he uses for close range combat. the chain is used to perform instant aerial strangulation, it requires amazing dexterity to weild ,but the spikes at the endo of his boots are much easier to use, one kick causes more damage than if you rammed a railroad spike into them. The eyepatch is also used as a suppressant, it was handed down for generations, and it suppresses the wearers evil side within the eye, but the second he removes it all the hatred, anger, and evil of his ancestors comes flooding into his body, almost becoming unbearable to himself. Money: 100 Yen Personal Status Rank: Genin Chakra: 50 Mental: Charisma: 10 Intellect: 10 Will-Power: 10 Physical: Strength: 10 Stamina: 10 Agility: 21 Skills: Ninjutsu: 10 Genjutsu: 0 Taijutsu: 0 Summoning: 0 Sealing: 0 Medical Practice: 0 Weapon Practice: Sword Skill: 0 Axe/Hammer Skill: 0 Fan Skill: 0 Pole-arm Skill: 10 Instrument Skill: 0 Armor Skill: 0 Shield Skill: 0 Ninja Skill: 0 Jutsu Types: Fire: 0 Water: 0 Earth: 0 Wind: 0 Dark: 0 Light: 0 Ice: 0 Thunder: 5 Sound: 0 Sand: 0 Plant: 0 Bloodline: 0 Known Jutsu Ninjutsu Water explosion jutsu Genjutsu None Taijutsu None Medical Jutsu None Summoning Jutsu None Weapon Jutsu None Bloodline Limit none Abilities None Equipment/Items Weapon Inventory Kunai X10 Description: Light Throwing Daggers Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Throwing Stars X10 Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Trident Thruster Description: His own customized attack weapon that is always strapped to his hand, even when he's asleep. effect: none weight medium type: iron Armor/Clothing Normal Clothing Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: None Items None History Zeke was born one-of-a-kind... that is, with two bat looking wings growing outta his back (beleive it!) he cannot move them in any way at all, they're just there, kinda useless. whenever he cuts them off they just grow back, so he's just learned to live with them. His father was the biggest hypocrite in history, his mother died when he was three. he grew up being teased more than anyone else and wasn't even expected to make genin, his almost nonexistant taiutsu and genjutsu put him in a rut, but he did pretty well in other regards, a less than average ninja from a less than average town. |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 07:16 PM Post #2 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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You stats equal 116. You cant just have a picture. Your personality is very lacking, and i want to see alot more in your history. With 1 stamina you would only be able to keep up a constant run for about... 5 second before passing out. Your character is very flawed. |
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| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 08:01 PM Post #3 |
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Braver
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now, o perfect one? |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 08:14 PM Post #4 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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....Link the picture... Add A LOT more to your appearance... Not just a sentence... With 1 strength you would have the power of an infant... Your personality is still very lacking... |
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| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 08:39 PM Post #5 |
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Braver
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now is it okay? |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 09:02 PM Post #6 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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Your stats add up to 109. 3 over 106. And i will never approve of that blood line limit. EVER. And i said LINK the picture... |
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| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 09:03 PM Post #7 |
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Braver
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then goddammit why didn't u say so at freaking first?!?! it coulda saved me a whole lotta damn typing! |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 09:13 PM Post #8 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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Because i didn't look it all over. I pointed it out most noticeable flaws. So please do go ahead and explode on me, it will only end in your demise. |
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| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 09:14 PM Post #9 |
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Braver
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...sorry, but the wings STAY if only for decoration. |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 09:21 PM Post #10 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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You will be unable to fly, or do any actions with them. |
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| Scipio | Jun 10 2007, 09:21 PM Post #11 |
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Braver
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deal, i just like the way they look. |
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| ImortalFighter | Jun 10 2007, 09:27 PM Post #12 |
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
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Alright. Fix up the other stuff then. |
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| Shin Draven | Jun 11 2007, 03:37 PM Post #13 |
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The People's Champion
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The wings can stay. and it is possible to have them be a genetic mutation. You can create a bloodline out of this later on if you desire. I'll tell you how later, but until then. No more about that. |
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