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Zeke Oborn
Topic Started: Jun 10 2007, 06:54 PM (121 Views)
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Name: Oborn, Zeke
Gender: Male,
Age: 15
Preferred Jutsu Type: Weapon Jutsu.
Personality: He is often misunderstood because of his black bat-looking wings, the deformity was never his fault, but people peg him as evil just for his appearance, he is actually the purest, friendliest, noble kid you'll ever meet, but he's also stubborn, and quick to anger, and a little braggy.
he loves to party when he can find a place that ignores bis wings and lets him in anyway, all in all he's a very devoted shinobi.
his evil-looking wings have also prevented him from ever having freinds, and he has to endure harsh teasing from the other genin... but no one dares to insult him on his own.
He does have a tough side, when he unleashes his anger he forgets all about rules and boundries and just focuses on beating the hell out of his opponent at any cost.
He does sometimes have a SERIOUS attitude problem also.

Appearance: http://images.quizilla.com/A/AN/ANG/angeli..._DemonAnime.jpg
he only wears the eyepatch in battles he know he can win, the spike on his left hand is his custom thruster he uses for close range combat.
the chain is used to perform instant aerial strangulation, it requires amazing dexterity to weild ,but the spikes at the endo of his boots are much easier to use, one kick causes more damage than if you rammed a railroad spike into them.
The eyepatch is also used as a suppressant, it was handed down for generations, and it suppresses the wearers evil side within the eye, but the second he removes it all the hatred, anger, and evil of his ancestors comes flooding into his body, almost becoming unbearable to himself.

Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 10
Intellect: 10
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength: 10
Stamina: 10
Agility: 21
Skills:
Ninjutsu: 10
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 0
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 0
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 10
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 0

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 5
Sound: 0
Sand: 0
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 0


Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu
Water explosion jutsu

Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit
none

Abilities
None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory


Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Trident Thruster
Description: His own customized attack weapon that is always strapped to his hand, even when he's asleep.
effect: none
weight medium
type: iron

Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items
None

History
Zeke was born one-of-a-kind... that is, with two bat looking wings growing outta his back (beleive it!)
he cannot move them in any way at all, they're just there, kinda useless.
whenever he cuts them off they just grow back, so he's just learned to live with them.
His father was the biggest hypocrite in history, his mother died when he was three.
he grew up being teased more than anyone else and wasn't even expected to make genin, his almost nonexistant taiutsu and genjutsu put him in a rut, but he did pretty well in other regards, a less than average ninja from a less than average town.
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ImortalFighter
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You stats equal 116. You cant just have a picture. Your personality is very lacking, and i want to see alot more in your history. With 1 stamina you would only be able to keep up a constant run for about... 5 second before passing out. Your character is very flawed.
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Braver
now, o perfect one?
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
....Link the picture... Add A LOT more to your appearance... Not just a sentence... With 1 strength you would have the power of an infant... Your personality is still very lacking...
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Braver
now is it okay?
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
Your stats add up to 109. 3 over 106. And i will never approve of that blood line limit. EVER. And i said LINK the picture...
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Braver
then goddammit why didn't u say so at freaking first?!?! it coulda saved me a whole lotta damn typing!
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
Because i didn't look it all over. I pointed it out most noticeable flaws. So please do go ahead and explode on me, it will only end in your demise.
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...sorry, but the wings STAY if only for decoration.
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
You will be unable to fly, or do any actions with them.
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Braver
deal, i just like the way they look.
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ImortalFighter
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Cloud Said I'm "Super Cool."
Alright. Fix up the other stuff then.
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Shin Draven
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The wings can stay. and it is possible to have them be a genetic mutation. You can create a bloodline out of this later on if you desire. I'll tell you how later, but until then. No more about that.
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