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Endless Nights Of Study
Topic Started: Jun 16 2007, 07:35 PM (77 Views)
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Fairy Boy Extraordinaire
Name: William Neran
Thread Type: Self Training
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Summary
An experiment by William. Read more to find out. Studying, coming home.

Stats you Used
Intelligence, Will Power, Ninja Skills

Learn/Obtain anything?

None
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Shin Draven
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Grammar- 2
Effort- 2
Plot Development- 3
Consistency- 2
Climax- 2

Well done, Will. I have to say that it was a pleasant read, though I am an action junkie and would have liked to see more, it was a excellent thread that had a good plot and character development. The ending put me to sleep (ironic, since the guy fell asleep). I Give you an 11.
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Ya, one of my worse threads. ^.^; It was long, boring and rather annoying to write, but I wanted to get the hang of writing with him. I could have done better, since this really wasn't an effort put forth for it. Thanks a bunch Draven.

Intelligence - 3
Will Power - 5
Ninja Skills - 3
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