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| Captain Cloud Aurenhart | |
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| [-Cloud-] | Aug 19 2007, 01:45 AM Post #1 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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Name: Captain Cloud Aurenhart Gender: Male Age: Twenty-One Clan: All traits of the Uchiha were erased frm his body. Village: Hidden Valley Personality: -Before the Ten Years- Cloud is a shy kid, not one that really enjoys being put in front of a bunch of people and showing off. The way he moves, acts and talks shows that he is not born in this village and his parents are from another place. Cloud is a little bit Insecure and really wants praise, especially after loosing his father whom would praise him quite often, especially in training. Over all, Cloud wants to be noticed, but does not want to make great accomplishments afraid of failure in front of people. So Cloud often finds himself training in secret until he is secure about how he feels. At one point in Cloud's life, he was naive and very obedient, but after meeting a few new people... his ways have slowly began to change. He has been speaking out more often than not now days, and is not as obedient as he was before. Although, the two people who have taught him are both completely different people, and have warped Cloud's views on life and how things work. It will be a long time until Cloud is completely sure how the world works and when his views on things settle down. -Ten Years later- After the death of Kurisu Cloud had become very silent and very solemn to himself. He was not much of a talker and was very efficient with everything he did. A look of dedication and determination was branded on his face since the war eight years ago. There are few people he openly talks to and expresses himself to. yet he still finds himself alone in his room at night leaking tears of sorrow of the father figure he lost those years past. He had made it his personal goal to find the man who killed his mentor, his brother and his friend. The man who taught him the ways of the east and proper mannerism. -After the Voyage- Cloud has become much more mature in the past year. Siegfrid became more or less a real father to him than he originally wanted to allow, but he can no longer deny it. He even calls him by father and declares himself under the same family name. Althought the two are not related by blood, Cloud thinks it the same no matter what. He is mainly calm now, no longer the blood-thirsty warrior he once was. He still enjoys a good fight, but would rather avoid fighting if he could. Although, despite all this... he is still a show-off and a cocky hard-ass. It's in his blood, despite his blood being run thin of any Uchiha prowess. Appearance: -Ten years ago- The first noticeable thing about Cloud is his bright blond hair that seems to spike out at all times. He has the back of his hair tied in a ponytail so that it doesn't brush against the back of his neck. As of current, Cloud only wears some baggy black pants and tennis shoes that seem to flow well with his dark blue T-shirt that is blank and sort of makes Cloud blend in with all the other kids and not stand out too much. The final noticeable thing about him is his eyes, they seem to be a glowing shade of green-blue that look as if he were radioactive almost. -Ten Years Later- After training under Siegfrid for several years Cloud changed his attire greatly. He now wears a hybrid of ninja gear and what looks to be a western style of armor. On his left arm he wields a strange metal shoulder that is poorly made, running down the left arm. It is quite heavy and can easily provide easy protection. His shirt consists of a dark blue vest which is a modified Chuunin vest of the valley. It is much tighter and much thinner than the average vest that they would normally wear. Branded on the back of this vest in a big white symbol is the symbol representing the Black Winds with the Valley symbol in the middle. Standing at about 5'11 he has tied on the right shoulder, the headband that Kurisu once wore many years ago. He had removed it from his body when he died eight years ago and tied it to his arm in memory of him. He even engraved Kurisu's name of Kurisu in kanji on the right and left sides of it. Because of this during the war he gained the battle name of 'Raging Spirit of the Water'. Cloud wears a strap of chain mail on his right hip ending just past his mid-thigh. As pants he wears baggy blue pants made of a tough leather material with brown boots similar to that of the western style. Cloud hardly fits in here in the eastern world, as well as the western. -After the Voyage- Cloud's hair has grown quite long and as spiky as ever. His wardrobe has changed a little as well. Instead of wielding his sword on his back like he normally does, he has a holster hanging off from his lower back that he holds it in. It rests against his bottom. His clothes are tight and black, while his sleeves come out like those of a robe, yet are cut out from the inner sides as if they are only half there. Beneath the sleeves are straps of cloth that hold them to his arms. It puts off a strange look, but allows a loose comfort with good mbility. He no longer wears the vest or the chain-mail. Money: 80 Yen Personal Status Rank: Captain/Chuunin (Special Double Classed) Chakra: 50 Mental: Charisma: 11 Intellect: 42 Will-Power: 20 Physical: Strength: 30 Stamina: 26 Agility: 30 Skills: Ninjutsu: 6 Genjutsu: 5 Taijutsu: 20 Summoning: 0 Sealing: 7 Medical Practice: 0 Magic: 5 Weapon Practice: Sword Skill: 22 Axe/Hammer Skill: 0 Fan Skill: 0 Pole-arm Skill: 0 Instrument Skill: 0 Armor Skill: 0 Shield Skill: 0 Ninja Skill: 5 Jutsu Types: Fire: 0 Water: 6 Earth: 0 Wind: 0 Dark: 0 Light: 0 Ice: 0 Thunder: 0 Sound: 7 Sand: 0 Plant: 0 Known Jutsu Ninjutsu Water Clone [NJ] Description/Seals: [Bird] The User Creates a Single clone of himself out of water. One can only make one clone for every 5 Water he/she has. Each clone makes the factored stats even more. (2= 1/2 3= 1/3 4= 1/4 etc) Requirements: 5 Water 5 Ninjutsu Effect: Create an exact replica of yourself that has half of your stats. Cost: 5 ea Sound Deflect [NJ] Description/Seals: [Snake] While holding the seal, your voice suddenly gets a low bass tone and will allow you to scream at the bowels of your lungs and create a minor sonic wave around you, deflecting any Light Weaponry. Effect: Deflects Light Weaponry. Cost: 5 Dispel Description/Seals: [Tiger] As you perform the seal, any illusions that are weaker than your Intelligence and Genjutsu stat are destroyed and gotten rid of. This can only be used once per post. Effect: Any Illlusions that are weaker than your Intelligence + Genjutsu x.5 is dispelled. Cost: 5 Replacement Jutsu Description/Seals: [None] Moving at High Speeds you can move out of the way of an opponents physical attack and replaceyourself with an object. You move so fast that it looks as if you had turned into that object. Effect: None Cost: 10 Magic Magical Archer Incantation: Spirits of <Element>, Drive! Description: One of the most basic magical spells that most mages learn when they are first beginning. This summons up an element to their hand and turns it into a projectile attack. The user first must focus the energy and then release it. The arrows move only towards where they were originally aimed. Depending on the element, it might have slightly different abilities, aka fire arrows doing slightly burnt skin, lightning arrows causing minor numbness. At first, only one arrow can be used, however the more powerful the mage becomes, the more powerful this attack becomes. This spell can be used for any elemental arrow as long as you have the stats, however only one kind of elemental arrow can be released at once. Requirements: 5 Magic, 5 of arrow’s element Effect: For every 5 magic and 5 of a certain element, a mage can launch one magical arrow of that element. The arrows cause minor damage at most, however as the magic level of the user increases, the power of these arrows do as well. Cost: 3 per arrow Genjutsu Water Illusion Description/Seals: [Bird, Tiger, Dragon] This illusion effects the eyes of a target. It makes them feel as if they are under water and they had opened their eyes to see. Everything is blurry and everything is wavy in the off side of the vision. This makes seeing things difficult. Requirements: 5 Genjutsu, 5 Water Effect: Causes Vision for a single person to blurr Cost: 6 Taijutsu Sound Wave Blast [TJ] Description/Seals: With a quick swift punch or kick, you can cause ball of sound to form by amplifying the mere sound of the limb breaking the wind into a small ball of sound towards a single target. The ball is no larger than that of a basketball. Requirements: 5 Sound 5 Taijutsu Effect: Causes Sound Damage Cost: 10 Medical Jutsu None Summoning Jutsu None Weapon Jutsu Deathblow Description/Seals: [None] After charging at your opponent you leap high into the air with your weapon behind your head, you bring the weapon downward as you fall to cause a great deal of force with your weapon which could easily kill an unskilled Ninja. Effect: Causes great damage, but slow. Cost: 0 Guardbreak Description: By putting additional force into a blow, one plows through the guard of an opponent. This creates a shockwave through the weapon and by extent the body, allowing an attack to follow. Effect: Creates a stun effect upon attacking, but consumes energy. *Can be countered if the user's (weapon skill*strength/2) is lower than the opponents Cost:1 Swordskill:20 Intellegence:20 Strength:15 Guard Impacting Description: Using a swift impact, the user quickly counters the attack, blasting it back at the opponent, leaving them open to counter-attack. It can also be used to deflect long range attacks. Effect: Allows the user to block and deflect attacks quite quickly.*Can be countered(close range only) if the user's (weapon skill*agility/2) is lower than the opponents Cost: 0 Swordskill:20 Intellegence:20 Agility:15 Abilities Gedo mark Description: [Curse] It is a curse Cloud gained after the war, the once bold Uchiha blood running through his veins is running thinner by the day from this mark. The seal is on the back of his right shoulder blade and destroys any bloodline traits of the person it is placed on. Stats in the bloodline stat can be added to other stats and all moves used by the bloodline can no longer be used. Fun, right? After the mark has destroyed the bloodline limit in a person, it fades away. Requirements: Bad luck... and a bloodline limit. Effect: Removes bloodline limits from whomever it is put on. Cost: None Western Linguistics Description: [None] One can quest for the ability to use Western Magic allowing them to use spells and abilities unknown to the eastern world. This ability allows you to know the incantation's and the way they speak there. Effect: Stated above Cost: 0 Summon Chakra Description/Seals: [Focus, Tiger] One of the few abilities that requires a seal for concentration. This Ability increases your max Chakra by a set amount. Depending on your Stamina you can summon a load of chakra. For every five stamina you have you can summon two extra chakra points by focusing on it. You're forced to hold the seal of the tiger and focus on it to summon the chakra. The Chakra you summon stays with you in the thread until you use it. A quicker way to use it is to just use the seal of the tiger in front of the seals of a move you are currently using. Although, you must pause for a moment when you hold the seal of the tiger. Say you have ten Stamina you would be able to summon five Chakra., if you summon all of your spare chakra you are drained of your stamina and cannot fight very easily anymore. So using this is for large Jutsu's or for last resort. Requirements: Willpower- 5 Stamina- 5 Intelligence- 5 Effect: Summons Chakra. one Chakra every two stamina. Cost: None Walk on Walls Description/Seals: [Focus] With this, you can walk on Walls and such. The effects of this are the same as the Water Walk. Requirements: 10 Intelligence, 6 Will-Power and 10 Agility. Effect: Allows you to walk on Walls. Cost: None Leather Skin Description/Seals: [Endured] This shows that your body has gone through quite a lot and can take minor cuts and scratches without them effecting you by a great deal. Such as an annoying cut in between your fingers, that would normally cause a person to not use that hand as much, but for you.. it is just a minor annoyance. Requirements: 20 Will-Power Effect: Causes small and minor wounds to not bother you too much. Cost: None Equipment/Items Weapon Inventory Kunai X10 Description: Light Throwing Daggers Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Throwing Stars X10 Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Broad Sword Description: A rather large Iron Broad Sword that is about as long as Cloud is. The Handle is roughly two feet long and the blade makes up the rest of the length. Effect: None Weight: Medium Type: Iron Armor/Clothing Normal Clothing Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: None Items None History Cloud was born into a family of swordsman and woman: his mother, father, sister, and two brothers were all personal guards to the leader of an old Village. Cloud's father was quite old in his timeline. His skill was once unmatched, but with age, his skill slowly faded. The long blonde wavy hair soon turned grew and began to fall out in his early fifties. Cloud's mother, held a secret within her, she was a part of the Uchiha clan, but had never known of it. She held the traits of it, the black hair and the dark eyes, all of it very visible. Cloud and each of his siblings each had qualities of their parents, from the mix of long wavy hair, to short spiky hair, blonde hair, black hair, black eyes and a dark-green blue shade of eyes were in all sorts of combinations between them. Cloud was the youngest, and was trained with a sword at an early age, but was also trained to learn Sound Jutsu as well from his father. It wasn't until the leader of their village was attacked that the training ended. Cloud was placed in a tent by himself as every armed swordsman and woman had gone off to fight the opposing force. The family of warriors had a plan to ambush the opposing force, only to meet their end as a powerful swordsman had stepped in and destroyed them with ease. Cloud was frightened, and stayed in his tent only to find a very tall man with a huge sword come in. This man did not understand Cloud's strange name, and decided to give him the name of Cloud as he took him with his group. Many months have gone by, as the group cloud was now a part of grew larger with more skilled swordsman showing up, left and right. Cloud was trained by this large swordsman all throughout these months, but unlike the training given to him by his father, it was brutal and difficult for a child such as Cloud to deal with. To his new master that he called Uncle, he was treated like some form of family, in an odd way. But, to every other member of the group, Cloud was treated like a slave and was told horrible things. It wasn't until one very night that Cloud's view on the world was flipped upside down, causing his views on his 'uncle' to be changed forever, Cloud was never told about his family, and had always believed he would see them again one day. It wasn't until after Cloud turned ten that one of the members of their group tore Cloud's world up. It was a celebration that night, the group had just gone through a successful mission with a good pay, and as usual... the members of the group made Cloud serve them alcohol of all kinds. One of the swordsman had had just a little bit too much to drink that night, and Cloud knew this, so he had tried to deny him anymore. This was a mistake on Cloud's part... "What.. you think you're better than me!?" The drunk man said sitting on a cut down tree in the middle of the Silent forest. "Just because you get yer trainin from the boss don't mean anythin! I got skill and experience.. you're just a boy." The man said as he stumbled around, using the tip of his sword to hold him up. "If you think you're so tuff, then fight me." The man said pushing Cloud back, causing him to trip over a branch, landing on his butt. Normally, if the men were sober they would stop him, but they were all too interesting in seeing a show to care. "That's a good lad.. grab your sword... come fight your cousin Vinny.." The drunk said with a small jerk in the body from drinking too much. Cloud picked himself up as he removed the large wooden sword from his back, holding it with both of his hands, staring at the swordsman. The drunk man held his right hand up, calling Cloud forward by waving his hand towards him. "Ok... here I go.." Cloud said to himself, about to engage in his first real battle with an experienced swordsman. Cloud charged at him, leaping high into the air, performing a move that his uncle had taught him a while ago. 'Deathblow..' Cloud thought to himself as he slammed the sword down, only to find it land in the hand of the drunk. "What a weakling you are ladd..." The man said, kneeing Cloud in the diaphragm, and kicking him to the side. "I don't know why the boss spared ya.. he should've killed your scronny ass with the rest of your family.." The man said laughing, only to be backed up by more of his drunk friends. "NO! My family isn't dead!" Cloud said as he picked himself up, looking at the man with hateful eyes. "Look whose been deceived, huh? He has been serving the man who slaughtered his family without even knowing!" The drunk man laughed aloud as everyone else joined in with him. Cloud was traumatized, his hands were shaking, his heart pace increased as he slowly lifted himself up, staring at the man who has just informed him of the past. "What are you going to do, Cloud?" The drunk man said as he walked over to Cloud about to put his hand on the boy's shoulder when Cloud threw a punch into the mans gut. This was no ordinary punch, it was filled with a Sound Taijutsu that created a small ball of sound that ripped apart the mans clothes and flesh, sending vibrations and a loud sound noise from about the village. "I'll kill you!" Cloud said as he lifted his sword high into the air and rammed the edge into the stomach of the fellow swordsman. As Cloud removed the blade, he stood above the body, staring at all the other drunk swordsman, breathing heavily as they all stared beyond Cloud. Just behind Cloud stood his 'uncle' who seemed very displeased and very disappointed. Cloud turned to him, staring at him in fear as his master backhanded him across the face, sending Cloud on top of the pool of blood that formed near the corpse. Cloud's uncle was at a loss of words, and said nothing to him as he shot a quick glare to all those around the fire, holding alcohol in their hands just before he turned his back to them, going back to his tent. Cloud picked himself up as blood dripped from his hands and chest and ran off towards the well that they have. Everyone only stared at Cloud and whispered things about him as tears began to swell up in Cloud's eyes. He held them back, not wanting to show weakness in front of the group. 'He killed Vinny' Cloud heard over and over as he ran off to the outer edge of the camp where the lookout usually resides. Cloud let it all out, every tear.. all the pain and sorrow that he had been put through only to serve a man who had destroyed those he cared for. That was when someone showed up, dressed all in fur... this man had a gentle aura about him that was unlike any of the men at the camp other than one warrior who fought with his emotions in the battle. "My name is... Cloud" were one of the final things said when Cloud went with the man on an impulse decision. He wanted to get away from the camp and let things calm down, but did not realize that he had just betrayed his small group of swordsman. -Ten Year Skip- Many shadows have passed by the face of this young master as the days of his youth shred page by page in the night of lust and fear. He grew in the shade with a friend by his side raised by a ninja, prince of the water. This man was known as Kurisu and had taught him many things in life including how to use Ninjutsu better than most of the students in his rank had ever known how to do. Cloud was truly gifted, not in the art... but gifted and blessed to have such an adviser at his side as well as a great friend by the name of Serge. It was when a terrible fret of nations rose to the present that his life took a turn for the darkness in the realms of his time. A desert and a valley rose from the very grounds of the earth clashing into one another as if the world itself were fighting over something so trivial as a debate over which is better. The battle favored in the side of the valley which the young child of darkness lived his days within, but still took a blow on which he nae not recover. The gift so stated beforehand fell at the hands of the Demon of the Desert, creating despair in his heart. A young child by the name of Serge gracefully attacked this demon as the hair of the wondrous prince lay in the hands of Cloud mercifully. Water swelled in the eyes of the child as the pure blue eyes of kindness and joy changed shape and form unlike before. Blood swelled over the iris of the young child as pure hate swelled within his body. His fingers grew numb and his lip quivered. The tears in his eyes mixed together with the blood forming a solid red color surrounded by black on his iris. The pupils grew dark crying tears of black water. A single drop of water fell stained on the iris on both eyes as the young boy lifted his head up looking at the demon with intentions of murder. It was a battle the pursued upon the desert where Cloud nearly took the life of his brothers killer along the side of his friend. But his fate escaped the grasp of his fingers as the young demon fled into the homelands of his terrain. All hope was lost for the young warrior of another world... until a past figure he was taken in by aroused a new hope, a new glory within his heart. A tank of a man by the name of Siegfrid. He towered over the battlefield, being begged by the young ninja warrior to be taken back and to allow him to complete his act of vengeance upon the world. Siegfrid looked into the red eyes of hate, seeing something similar in the boy he had seen once before and allowed such a task to be completed. Cloud rushed into battle along side the Kage and Black Winds, ignoring any orders to fall back. He stood when others fled and took down every foe that stood in his path at only the age of thirteen. Thirteen years of age, only a genin had destroyed a number of men of the Mirage village causing the name of 'Raging Spirit of the Water' to be branded on him forever. Fear invoked into the hearts of the Mirage villains as Cloud fought along side Siegfrid, trying to match his master toe for toe. Sadly he only had taken on a fraction of the enemy as his new adviser... but he did master a technique he had witness the man perform which had shocked even the warrior from the west. After the battle was won Cloud made it home with a feeling of sorrow engulfing his body. A loved friend was dead and he was not satisfied with the death of the Mirage men... he desired the blood of another man. The demon of the desert was on his hit list and Siegfrid knew this. Night after night Cloud wait by the window before he slept wandering if there was such a thing as an after-life and if Kurisu would be in such a place. This was when he decided to take initiative about things. Year after year Cloud trained under Siegfrid, learning a new technique almost every day with his sword of mass destruction. He was able to hold his own against the tyrant of weaponry. This sent shivers down the spines of the men who once harassed Cloud as a child in ye older days. After the ten years passed, Cloud had become a fearsome foe that had taken on missions that no other ninja dare to pursue. It was this the death eight years ago that made him who he is and caused him to follow the steps of Siegfrid over his previous mentor. -The Voyage- Kurisu... returned to life. How odd, he had been around for years and never said a word to Cloud... a person who regretted everyday of his life not being able to save him. Cloud hated Kurisu for it, but understood at the same time. This drove him to become closer with Siegfrid. To the point that the two went to war together fighting the westerners. Well, this wasn't the reason why... they were being invaded by them but he chose Siegfrid over the man he missed for eight years. After the war, the two went away for a few months. This Voyage, changed Cloud forever for during this little trip, Cloud was cursed. A strange Mage found Cloud's eyes quite appealing. This built up into jealousy causing the Mage to curse Cloud. For a week, Cloud could not see. The Mark caused immense pain in his eyes and caused him to rest while Siegfrid went off without him leaving him into the care of a few trusted people. Cloud awoke one day, feeling as if was missing something. He could not activate the Sharingan anymore, in any way. It was odd and caused a great deal of physical pain for a while. It almost crippled him for another week, but Cloud endured it and went on. Two weeks from then, he found Siegfrid and the two went back to Valley. There Cloud is now, not really doing anything... he just sort of walks the streets waiting for something to come his way. Ever since he was cursed, he changed all together into a strange apathetic person who cares without ever showing it. Instead, he acts on it. |
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| Kaos | Aug 19 2007, 02:19 AM Post #2 |
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Grenade Bomb (Lv2)
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