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Sabaku Marukyru; The Sands Rage On!
Topic Started: Aug 23 2007, 12:31 AM (41 Views)
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Name: Sabaku Marukyru
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Clan: Sabaku
Preferred Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Personality: Do to Marukyru’s childhood he is usually emotionally detached, not letting people read his feeling and simply not showing any. Although he is very capable of feeling and picking up on the emotions of others he just rather not show it. He is usually a calm and collected young man who tried to be respectful to all, but down inside him burns a deep hatred and prejudice. Burden with future of his clan and inheriting the prejudice for anyone outside of his clan from his father, and his own deep hatred for anyone tied to the Kappa Kurisu family. There is also a part of Marukyru that longs and thirst for combat and sometimes blood! Marukyru was always a catalyst for his people he was the strongest and most capable of them all, that stress or burden was a weight to strong for any one to endure. In order to ensure the prosperity of his people he was force to abandon a normal life or any kind of childhood for that matter. Marukyru accepted the fact that he was no longer a ‘free’ man instead he was a weapon that would swiftly bring death to all who opposed the Sabaku name. Many of his people compared him to the originator: Gaara, and much like Gaara Marukyru battled with a sinister presence within his soul which was not his own. The affliction known as the demon heritage causes Marukyru to become bloodthirsty and relinquish his humanity, fight as he might the affliction is much like a parasite feeding on his soul, it grows stronger and more bloodthirsty as Marukyru’s soul grows weaker and begins to fade. As Marukyru began fighting with this cancer like disease war broke out, while fighting the affliction took complete control causing him to massacre Shinobi without remorse. Now the affliction has become a part of Marukyru making him more sinister and manacle then ever before. He plans to make a utopia and in doing so he plans to cleanse the lands by destroying all who oppose him. In short Marukyru has become what he hated most a Tyrannical monster. The war and the decade passed have only opened Marukyru’s eyes both spiritually and literally he realized that he had been fighting his father’s war all his life and now finally has his own vendetta. His nation much like his soul lost and in ruins calls to him, the pride and bloodlust of his people fuel his tyrannical craving for destruction and utter oblivion! Marukyru is unstable and his wrath is like an active volcano ready to spew it’s fiery rage down on all in its path. Marukyru has willingly given his soul up to his demon affliction and plans to use it to destroy Kenji and all who oppose the Mirage Village and it’s ideals! Marukyru has tittered on the line for life and death so many times that the thought of being nothing more than a decaying relic of one once proud clan doesn’t bother him in the least bit. He has accepted his role as a ‘weapon’, a weapon that will carve a bloody path to the prosperity and good fortune the Mirage village lacks. Destiny is a cruel thing especially when it involves inflicting torture and the stripping of a young boy’s sanity

Marukyru - “Keep what you Kill!”


Appearance: Posted Image

He stands at 5'11 and weighs a little less than 160 pounds. Marukyru’s eyes are crimson symbolic to the flame, which burns intensely in his heart. Much like Gaara His hair is short, he has black hair, which is quite spiky. His clothes consist of a two-piece outfit, which is dark gray and blue. The shirt is sleeveless and the pants stop a little over his ankles. His build is more slender and ripped than bulky and made like an endurance runner do to the heavy strain on his body from his jutsu. Marukyru has ebony poncho draped over his body which falls a little bit below his knees it also has a hood on it that covers the upper portion of Marukyru’s face. He has grows taller and stronger and now his face his outfitted with a long crimson goatee that hangs off of his chin half way down his neck. His back is outfitted with a giant container the contents of which is tainted sand, the container is old and cracked showing it’s many years of use, it literally reeks of blood and decay and at times seems more sinister than Marukyru himself. The container is connected by a long leather sash that goes from one of Marukyru’s shoulder down to the opposite side of his waist holding the container in place firmly. Marukyru’s hands are heavily tapped due to the injures endure over the years.

Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 0
Intellect: 24
Will-Power: 15

Physical:
Strength: 17
Stamina: 10
Agility: 14

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 15
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 0
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 10
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 3

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 44
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 50
Custom: 0

Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu

Suna No Yoroi (Armor of Sand)
Description/Seals: [Ram, Dragon, Boar]. This jutsu uses chakra to cover the user with a thin, but very dense, layer of protective sand. While a good defense, it puts an unignorable burden on the user's stamina, both through chakra absorption and the fact that the sand makes them heavier and hampers their movement.
Requirements: Sand 10, Bloodline 10
Effect: Blocks great deals of damage, but cuts Stamina and Agility down to half.
Cost: 15 every time used


Sand Shield
Description/Seal: [Bird, Tiger]. The sand rushes towards the user and creates a barrier around them. Capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and projectiles, this sand shield can become stronger than steel. Avoiding it completely with extremely high-speed attacks, or merely overcoming the shield with incredible brute force can defeat it.
Requirements: Sand 10, Bloodline 10
Cost: 5


Desert Imperial Funeral
Description /Seal: [Tiger, Dragon, Bird, Boar] The user slams both hands palm down into the sand and emits powerful shockwaves that compact and greatly damage anything within the sand-covered area. Considering that the previous jutsu levels an entire forest, its soul purpose is to send debris along with the foe flying. The foe can be damaged by debris caught in the jutsu and ultimately if no escape is found the foe can be slammed into something sold with the force of a small automobile accident!
Requirements: Sand 20, Bloodline 25
Cost: 15

Desert Coffin
Description/Seal: [Tiger, Boar, Ox, Dragon, Bird, Rat] this jutsu uses sand to grab the opponent and cover their entire body. This skill is primarily utilized for rendering an opponent immobile, but can kill the opponent by suffocation or by being followed with the Desert Funeral. The Coffin Can deliver amazing crushing powers is estimated to deliver 200 pounds of pressure per square inch.
Requirements: Sand 40, Bloodline 50
Cost: 20



Earth Shatter [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Ram, Dragon, Ram] By focusing your chakra on the ground and in your fist, you can impale the ground causing the earth in a straight line to shatter and shoot up.
Requirements: 5 Earth 5 Ninjutsu
Effect: None
Cost: 5


Suna Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Sand Explosion Technique) [NJ]
Description/Seals: [Dragon] The user must be near a source of sand. Sand is gathered using chakra into a swirling ball that is hurled towards the opponent. The sand explodes on impact, causing cuts and a stinging feeling all over the target's body.
Requirements: 15 Sand 15 Ninjutsu
Effect: Scratches and possible temporary blindness
Cost: 10

Sand Drizzle
Description/Seals: [Bird, Dragon] The user of this jutsu causes sand to form overhead of their target before causing it to rain down multiple sharp and solid needles of sand capable of injuring or killing an enemy if they are not careful.
Requirements: 30 Bloodline and 25 Sand
Cost: 15

Third Eye
Description/Seals: [None, Focus] The user of this Jutsu creates an eye made of sand that is connected directly to the user's optic nerve. The eye can then disperse into sand and reform elsewhere for spying and surveillance purposes. The difference between this eye and the user's regular eyes, is that this eye follows movement based on the user's sand and bloodline stats rather than the user's agility stat. Therefore, if the user's bloodline and sand is higher than their agility, third eye will make it easier for them to follow movement. The Third Eye can travel up to 20 meters in any direction away from the user.
Requirements: 15 Bloodline and 15 Sand
Cost: 3 Chakra per post used.



Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit

Shield of Sabaku:
Description: [Natural] A sort of double-edge sword, this amazing Bloodline Limit allows the user to control and manipulate sand around him. The sand acts on its own accord spiraling around the user at high speeds, deflecting all light weaponry and most Taijutsu, Heavy weaponry are slowed down considerable. Although the limit is quite powerful it comes with a cost if not monitored the user could easily run out of chakra in a battle especially if other jutsu are preformed through out the battle.
Requirements: 10 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: When activated, A portion of sand automatically blocks attacks and reduces the damage. Light Weapons are easily deflected.
Cost: Four every post used.


Sand Manipulation
Description: [Focus] The user possesses the ability to control all sands, whether it is drawing it in to surround him/her or sending it rushing at an object or opponent in a tidal wave. Of course this limit is limited by the source of sand it could prove quite powerful in the desert but produce little to nothing if in moist area or another area where sand is not located. The user can target and send a wave of sand at a foe from above it can even be deployed from below as long as the sand covers the area where the target is located.
Requirements: 20 Bloodline and 10 Sand
Effect: Allows the member to control the movement of Sand. At Twenty, one can mearly move it in small masses, but someone at 200 Bloodline could create a devestating Sand Storm that could cover an entire city in moments.
Cost: 1 Every use.


Sand creation
Description: [Focus] The user is blessed with the ability to use the minerals in the ground and air to create grains of sand; the users level and the mineral source in the environment only limit the jutsu.
Requirements: 25 Bloodline, 10 Sand
Effect: By grounding up the earth underneath or by pulling small parts of sand from the air, one can create a small potion of sand around them.
Cost: None

Abilities
None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron



Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items
Gorge
Description: Large container made of iron which is used to carry sand, usually carried on back.
Effect: allows user to deploy sand jutsu using the sand in the container.

History


“Prelude”

Fate…Fate is a cruel thing some may say, but others would tell you that it is just a punishment for sins. Whatever the cause fate can be broken down into a simple cycle: Birth, Life, and Death. These three things are almost always guaranteed, whether your fate is to live for 80 years or 80 hours this cycle of cruelty must be completed. That brings us to destiny a predetermined course of events often held to be an irresistible power or agency… Fortune if you will. These two agents play a huge role in anyone person’s life but even more in the life of Sabaku Marukyru. Do to the sins and deadly ambitions of others Marukyru’s fate was to live and die as the last of a dieing breed, and do to his own ambitions his destiny is to restore the Sabaku clans to its originally thriving days or die trying to do so.

“Downfall of a mighty Clan”

Marukyru’s grandfather was a noble and honorable follower of Gaara so when he died and the Sand village join the unified continent under the KageKage, he sent his son away to the Desert Canyon who only about twenty at the time. He and the other devoted followers of Gaara rebelled against Kurisu blinded by pride and devotion only to be slaughtered effortlessly by Kurisu’s men. Mean while knowing that the KageKage would send ANBU to the sand village to silence any other radicals Marukyru’s father Kyoshiro evacuated the people of the village who refused to bow to the corrupt KageKage. The once proud Sabaku Clan was now forced to live in the outskirts of the desert canyon like rats.

The noble people of the Sand village set up a village far from the rest of civilization, and attempted to live their lives. Kyoshiro urged by grief started to rally the last survivors of the sand village, he wanted to lead an assault on the KageKage’s strong hold and avenge the death of his father. But the people of the sand village did not support him it seemed that the grief had gotten to them, and killed their passion. With know followers Kyoshiro decided he would go alone to face the horrible Kurisu, but the day he was leaving his wife Katoma told him she was expecting a baby. Kyoshiro decided to stay and raise his child until it was time to go and avenge his father.

“Born to die Bred to fight”

Marukyru was born into a clan who survived genocide and into a world ruled by a tyrannical KageKage. So it was no surprise that his father decided to train him in the way of the Shinobi at a tender age of eight. Marukyru showed promise as a Shinobi and was considered a child prodigy in his village thus the village dubbed him Marukyru “The hope of Sabaku”. As Marukyru aged on the more ruthless the training and his father’s attitude towards him got, his father would make him perform jutsu in the scorching and unbearable heats of the desert until he passed out. These techniques might sound cruel to some but his father knew what he was doing, Marukyru was a Shinobi and a Shinobi is considered the ultimate weapon. Kyoshiro implemented these beliefs in Marukyru at a young age forcing him to be emotionally detached to everything around him except for the suffering of his people. This only fed the anger and hatred in Marukyru’s heart this was indeed a horrible burden to put on such a young boy’s shoulder, to successfully be the future of his clan he had to think like a murderer and let all his emotions go. Marukyru went along side his father on many missions and in each mission he proved more useful and powerful then even his father would have dreamed. Marukyru showed that the Sabaku people were only taping into a little of their bloodlines power and that’s when Marukyru’s destiny changed. Seeing this powers a few of the mean and Kyoshiro got together and planned to attack the KageKage with the help of Marukyru.

“Final Confrontation”

The sun blazed down on the village in the desert as the men of the village and Marukyru said good-bye to the elders, the women, and the children of the village. They were on their way to avenge the death of their forefathers who died at the hands of the KageKage trying to protect what was most sacred to them. They went to the fortress of the KageKage and stormed it cutting down and killing Shinobi and citizens alike, but they never made it to the KageKage. The soldiers of the fortress met them and out numbered them, Marukyru’s jutsu held them at bay, as the other men were lead by his father to find the KageKage. After a few minutes of intense battle Marukyru’s jutsu prevailed and for the first time in his life he had not only killed a man but he killed a fleet of men. The people who witnessed this slaughter began calling him the “Desert Demon”. Marukyru was a little shaken by what he had done but nevertheless he kept going on with the mission without hesitation. When Marukyru reached the room in which his comrades and father were in, his soul was almost ripped from him. What he witnessed was unbearable for anyone especially a kid his age, his comrades were torn to shreds they all lay motionless on the floor, which was painted with the crimson liquid in which gave them life. Marukyru was frozen and overwhelmed with grief and began to sob as he slowly walked over to his father, who he held in his arms. His farther smiled at Marukyru and spoke: “My lovely son don’t cry, for I have found peace along side Gaara and your grandfather. The ANBU did this to us…so I want you to have my sword and escape form here-NOW!” With that Kyoshiro departed to the afterlife and Marukyru grabbed his sword and escaped from the fortress back to his home.

“Destiny forms”

One year has passed since the death of the KageKage and the incident with his comrades. Now Marukyru trains in the art of the Shinobi trying to help his clan reach its former glory!

-------------- The Sands of Time -------------

“Prelude”

Peace is defined as freedom from quarrels and disagreement, harmonious relations, basically a period of time without hostilities and war. Men will go through extraordinary measure to capture this very elusive idea, men have even gone as far as waging war to obtain it. Peace is irony at its best for the simple reason that peace can only be obtained or recognized after a hostile situation and most commonly war. Without the conclusion of a blood stained battleground or the end of a most loathed feud peace cannot be forged or recognized. The irony is in order to obtain a serene hostility free period of time many beliefs and sometimes lives have to be sacrificed, In short…In order to get peace you must make war!

“A Demon Resurrected”

War spread throughout the lands like a wild fire conjured from the depths of Hades, a war so sadistic that the god of war himself would have pleaded for a treaty of some kind. Unfortunately there would be no peace treaty only the inhumane sacrifices of human lives, in hopes to ensure that one of the opposing forces would come out victorious. The two forces being the Hidden Valley and the Hidden Mirage both had a vision of peace a utopia if you will, the only problem was that in order to cleanse the land and build this serene paradise one of the two villages and it’s followers had to be driven into oblivion. It’s quite ironic that both villages longed for a time without violence and an era without the need of Shinobi, but could not coexist with one another; instead they ravaged the lands with bloodshed, orphaned hundreds of children, and widowed many more wives and created a world divided and far from any kind of utopia. While the villages clashed and the lands grew fearful and weary a demon lay dormant waiting for his chance to bring death, and send the world into oblivion while satisfying his thirst for blood.

Marukyru was force by his superiors to take the homestead and stand idly by while his comrades stared death in the face; they fought courageously and died honorable. Marukyru was forced into seclusion like a dormant beast trapped for an eternity, His rage fabricated into a furious inferno lashing out at any who came in contact with him. While in his seclusion he grasp a better knowledge of his bloodline and his control over the sands, he now possessed the power to make the sandstorms curvature to his wield. Although he trained his mind and body he could not train his soul and little by little his affliction caused his soul to decay like a cancer, soon there was nothing left but the affliction and the thirst for blood. The affliction came in the form of a curse a curse, which was inherited by the Sabaku people from the demon residing in the originator: Gaara. The uncontrollable thirst for blood drove many Sabaku clan members to a life of murder or insanity; in the case of Marukyru it drove him to a blood lusting state of mind. Marukyru tried resisting the fate of his people but fate is one thing that no man nor demon can escape nor overcome, so slowly he succumbed to it as his soul silently rotted away into a void of darkness and despair. Just as Marukyru seem to lose his humanity he was visited by a much more sinister creature then himself, the figure was draped in ivory garments and reeked of death. With a swift tongue and manacle thoughts the creature known simple as ‘Sin’, warped the mind of Marukyru and unleashed the dormant monster.

“Hell on Earth”

Sin successfully provoked the sand demon and in doing so unleashed a wave of death on all who opposed the Mirage village. Marukyru stealth fully approached a Hidden Valley camp covered in the darkness of night. The camp was occupied by many hidden valley Shinobi and the very son of the man responsible for the Sabaku’s downfall…Kappa Kurisu II! Marukyru ran his bloodthirsty tongue across his lips as he anticipated the time to attack. Slowly but surely the demon affliction took a whole of Marukyru’s essence, but this time it was different Marukyru invited the blood lust and planned to use it to bring a swift death to all who he encountered. Quickly Marukyru summoned his chakra and his sand, the desert swirled with violent sand storms as if reacting to the turmoil in the heart of Marukyru. The Shinobi residing in the camp realized the disturbance in the desert and rushed out side only to come face to face with the grim reaper, before the could react the panic stricken Shinobi were washed away and crushed by repeated waves of sand, which seemed to be created by Poseidon himself. The sand and the air were full of death as crimson mist poured from broken bodies spread over the battlefield. Kurisu driven by his passion for his people attacked the dreaded sand demon Marukyru welcomed the fight. The fight was an intense one as the two titans clashed but soon the victor was decided as Marukyru found himself standing over the lifeless and broken body of Kurisu.

Marukyru finally avenged his forefathers by destroying the last of the Kappa bloodline thus ridding the world of the tyrannical race. Although Marukyru had accomplished one of his main goals he was not yet finished or should we say he was not quite satisfied, his inner yearning for blood and annihilation was not yet quenched so he returned to his camp awaiting a counter attack. Marukyru’s wait didn’t last long as a passionate and vengeful Kenji Isamu broke through the defenses of the mirage village and made his way to the gate. He demanded for Marukyru to show himself and answer for the deaths at the Valley encampment, Marukyru fueled by his lust for obliteration haste fully answered the call! The skies seemed to darken and crack with violent outburst of thunder as the two gladiators stared off the ebony skies were frequently illuminated by jolts of lightening, as if the very heavens were reacting to the very emotions swirling through the two men’s hearts. The heavens must have sobbed deeply that day for enough rain dropped from the skies to flood and wash away both villages, and if that wasn’t an omen of things to come the multiple funnels of sand swirling around the two was. The battle was something that you would read in Greek mythology the titans clashing with their respective elements, the ground shattered as destruction swiftly settled in and wreak havoc on the earth and the hidden mirage village. Moments later there was an explosion much mightier than any one ever recorded, Marukyru and Kenji were sent falling from the heavens…they were now one in the same…fallen angels for their respectful villages.

“Destiny formed II”

Marukyru awakened in the ruins of the desert outskirts battered and bruised and contemplating whether or not he wanted to carry on living. The war had ended and Marukyru was sure that his side was not victorious he had nothing left to fight for; all he had was a thirst for combat and two new goals. First and foremost Isamu Kenji had to be killed Marukyru wouldn’t rest until Kenji’s body lay broken and bloody under pounds and pounds of sand. His second goal was to exterminate all people who did not follow the mirage way, he planned to create a utopia and to do so he had to wipe the earth clean of all who opposed his ideas. Marukyru stayed secluded for eight long years practicing and mastering his jutsu, and also coming to terms with his lust for power and blood. Now is the time for Marukyru to resurface and time for the world to tremble at his very sight! He seeks the destruction of the Valley and Kenji for proof that his existence still has a purpose.
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