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Yon Shix Requests
Topic Started: Aug 30 2007, 02:47 PM (349 Views)
Tyrizken
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Jutsu

Name: Hitokugutsu, "Person Puppets"
Description: This Jutsu, allows the puppeteer to turn a still living human into a puppet. Because the puppet was once human, it can still use Chakra. First, the entrails are removed. Then, once the skin has been peeled off, the user cleanses them and draws out all of the blood. Once the bodies are preserved so they do not decompose, various gadgets are then installed inside of them. The puppet will maintain the same amount of Chakra as its original body held when it was alive. If the original ninja had any Kekkei Genkai or other blood-based traits, the puppet can retain those abilities as well.
Effect: Turns a subject into a puppet in 12 posts.
Requirement(s): Medical-130, Intelligence-100, Dark-75, and Ninja Skill-50.
Cost: Chakra-49.
Approved By Cloud/Cain



Name: Sakeru, "Avoid"
Description: When a foe comes to attack with a ninjutsu/taijutsu/weapon jutsu, by utilizing the chakra string to take apart the peices of the puppet (The head, body, arms, legs) one can control the puppets peices to separate and avoid the attack, when the puppet it un-built, they form a chakra sheild through the users chakra strings. The sheild is made by making the puppets peices form a circle infront of the attack and a blue chakra sheild is made, though it is a sheild, the users Ninja Skill+Intelligence/2 determines the strength of the sheild. Though to rebuild the puppet, one must take 1 post to put it back together. You cannot use this move twice in a row. Even though it takes one turn to rebuild the puppet and it gives the foe a free shot, the puppets peices can still attack and retaliate.
Effect: Takes apart a puppet to dodge the move to make a chakra sheild.
Requirement(s): 25 Ninja Skill, 18 Intelligence
Cost: 15
Approved by Cloud



Name: Shokku "Shock"
Description: By putting electrical chakra into the chakra strings and sending it to the puppet(s), one can cover them in electricity which lasts for 10 posts. The electricity shocks the opponent or anything that touches them when they are 5 inches away from the puppet, or closer. By throwing an Ionized water jutsu at the electricity, one can make a big BOOM, unless the electricity is stopped, or the puppets dodge, the puppets go BOOM.
Effect: Covers the puppets in electricity which shocks the foe when 5 inches away, or closer.
Requirement(s): 5 Electricity, 10 ninjutsu.
Cost: 1 Per post.
Approved By Cloud



Name: Tawaa Eiffel "Eiffel Tower"
Description: By making a "tower" Of chakra strings in the shape of the Eiffel tower, but only 10" in height, the tower CAN be made larger for 1 foot per +5 chakra. The use puts the puppet on top of the tower, then out of the puppets mouth comes out a kunai, but only goes halfwar out, just so its sticking out. Then the tower charges puppet first at the enemy, trying to stab them with the kunai, but the trick is, the tower spins at high speeds. This attack is very fast. This Eiffel tower can only go 10 yards forwards, but +1 foot for 5 chakra as stated above. This tower cannot turn left or right, cannot go up or down, so its a straight forward again. Though this attack it powerful, the kunai CAN be broken. The puppet is NOT off-balanced when it spins.
Effect: Stabs the foe if it hits
Requirement(s): 30 Ninja Skill, 15 Intelligence
Cost: 7, +5 for every added foot.

Name: Tsutsumu "Wrap up"
Description: By making the puppet go around the foe several times, the puppet ties the foe into a wrap, which traps the foe in chakra strings. The puppet then "Hugs" the foe at a strong rate, which can easily break the backbone. This attack is very inaccurate, as while being spunned around the first time, the foe can jump out of the strings, but once the foe is wrapped up..you can say bye bye to your backbone.
Effect: Breaks the backbone
Requirement(s): 20 Ninja Skill
Cost: 10



Name: Sanbou Kyuukai "Buddha's Three Treasures Vacuum Destruction"
Description: By having kanji signs in three puppets mouth which mean Buddha. The Law and Order of monk. When combined the meaning is "The Doctrine of Buddha". This move is utilized by making three puppets make a pyramind, 2 on the bottom, one on the top. They use Wind chakra to pull them into the middle of the pyramid. When something goes through the middle of the pyramid, usually it is destroyed(or killed). While doing this puppet jutsu, the puppets cannot defend, so they can be destroyed by an outside force.
Effect: Sucks the foe(s) into a vacuum of destruction.
Requirement(s): 70 Ninja Skill 50 Wind, Seals to put into puppets mouths.
Cost: 25


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Poison bomb(Puppet-addon)
Description: A Small purple cloud that poisons the foe. It drains 1 stamina per post for the rest of the thread. It can only be used ONCE per thread.Thia bomb is rarely usd to to the fact it can turn out against you, for you, or as a double-edged sword.
Effect: Poisons the foe, makes them loose 1 stamina per post for the rest of the thread
Weight: Light
Type: None
Requirements: 40 ninja skill
Cost: (To be determined by mod)


Poison Bomb
Description: A Small purple cloud that poisons the foe. It drains 1 stamina per post for the rest of the thread. It can only be used ONCE per thread. This bomb is rarely used due to the fact it can turn out against you, for you, or as a double-edged sword.
Effect: Poisons the foe, makes them loose 1 stamina per post for the rest of the thread.
Weight: Light
Type: None
Requirements: None
Cost: (To be determined by mod)



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[-Cloud-]
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Add Dark onto there.... if there is any kind of dark art, that would be one.
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Tyrizken
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I was thinking about dark, but didn't know if it would count, anyways, edited ^_^
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Name: Hitokugutsu, "Person Puppets"
Description: This Jutsu, allows the puppeteer to turn a still living human into a puppet. Because the puppet was once human, it can still use Chakra. First, the entrails are removed. Then, once the skin has been peeled off, the user cleanses them and draws out all of the blood. Once the bodies are preserved so they do not decompose, various gadgets are then installed inside of them. The puppet will maintain the same amount of Chakra as its original body held when it was alive. If the original ninja had any Kekkei Genkai or other blood-based traits, the puppet can retain those abilities as well.
Effect: Turns a subject into a puppet in 12 posts.
Requirement(s): Medical-130, Intelligence-100, Dark-75, and Ninja Skill-50.
Cost: Chakra-49.

There we go, this is just a suggestion. You don't have to use it if you don't so wish.

As you can see it's virtually the same just more descriptive, I increased the time needed to convert since it is a complex procedure and has a lot going for it. Changed around and increased some of the requirements and increased the Chakra cost.

You don't need to state the need for add-ons as it's logical and self explanatory...if you don't have it you can't use it. Same with Jutsu, if it still has Chakra then it should be able to do what Chakra is used for.

Seem fair?
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Tyrizken
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Yep, love it =D
Ill edit my post now.
~Editted

Is it approved?
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Cain
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I approve "Person Puppet." but since I made it you'd better get another mod's approval.

As for "Avoid." it gives you no advantage really, if the attack takes out the puppeteer then it's over. Whereas if you take the puppet out you still have the puppeteer left.

How about making it so instead the pieces can attack or something?
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Tyrizken
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Okay...hmm.. *idea*
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Human puppet- Approved

Avoid- If someone is attacking with Ninjutsu, why would their Strength be a factor? No need for the first equation. Just say the strength of the shield for there is an equation already to determine Jutsu, Taijutsu, and Weapon Jutsu strengths.

Puppets cannot talk... just make your character insane and have him think they talk to him. No need for an ability.

Poison bomb- It needs to state WHAT the poison does. Does it drain stamina every post, does it half a certain stat, does is cause severe pain? Also state it can only be used ONCE per thread.

EDIT:

Oh, and Shock. Un-ionized water does not conduct electricity. The Kappa Clan is able to create Un-Ionized water on the spot due to their bloodline. Meaning their water would NOT make it go boom until it is mixed with dirt, sand, rust or something for a period of time. Then it conducts electricity. State that if Ionized water touched it it will go boom. Then it is approved.
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Tyrizken
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edited. ~ =D
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you gotta love clouds suggestion... Wouldn't it be easier to just go mad?
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~Added New Stuff.
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The type of teh Poison Bomb.

Your Eiffel tower sounds too much like godmod to me. Fix the description and add limits.
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What do you mean what type of poison bomb?

Oh and what about wrap up?
Ps: I fixed up eiffel tower ;p.
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The poison bomb's type should be none. See your type which says gas? Change it to None.

If the tower can not turn, how can it spin?
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when i mean turn, i mean turn left or right. ill add that
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If it spins, would the puppet be off balanced? Add that too. XD
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Done? Everything approved? D:
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LOL. I dont find anything good about it but remove the one hit kill comment and we're good.
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Tyrizken
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NOW is everything , every single jjutsu accepted? DX
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Name: Tawaa Eiffel "Eiffel Tower"
Description: By making a "tower" Of chakra strings in the shape of the Eiffel tower, but only 10" in height, the tower CAN be made larger for 1 foot per +5 chakra. The use puts the puppet on top of the tower, then out of the puppets mouth comes out a kunai, but only goes halfwar out, just so its sticking out. Then the tower charges puppet first at the enemy, trying to stab them with the kunai, but the trick is, the tower spins at high speeds. This attack is very fast. This Eiffel tower can only go 10 yards forwards, but +1 foot for 5 chakra as stated above. This tower cannot turn left or right, cannot go up or down, so its a straight forward again. Though this attack it powerful, the kunai CAN be broken. The puppet is NOT off-balanced when it spins.
Effect: Stabs the foe if it hits
Requirement(s): 30 Ninja Skill, 15 Intelligence
Cost: 5, +5 for every added foot.

Add the cost to 7 and i might approve it.



Name: Tsutsumu "Wrap up"
Description: By making the puppet go around the foe several times, the puppet ties the foe into a wrap, which traps the foe in chakra strings. The puppet then "Hugs" the foe at a strong rate, which can easily break the backbone. This attack is very inaccurate, as while being spunned around the first time, the foe can jump out of the strings, but once the foe is wrapped up..you can say bye bye to your backbone.
Effect: Breaks the backbone
Requirement(s): 25 Ninja Skill
Cost: None~(Where do you see chakra being used?)

Chakra is used to manipulate the puppet's movements: 10. Make the requirements 20 Ninja Skill.

Poison Bomb
Description: A Small purple cloud that poisons the foe. It drains 1 stamina per post for the rest of the thread. It can only be used ONCE per thread.
Effect: Poisons the foe
Weight: Light
Type: None
Requirements: none
Cost: 120

Add more to the effect and the description, play with words. XD
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T@Z... You accepted a move that breaks a backbone for only 20 puppet skill. I thought the site didn't allow insta-kill moves, especially not for 20 puppet skill and 10 chakra. As inaccurate as it might be, that still is accurate enough to be, how do I say... cheap. Why not factor in the fact that someone with high stats would probably be totally unaffected by a puppet wrapping around them? If anything, it should be a constriction move with a small chance of damaging people because of lower strength.

Well, not that I care, I'm just here to drop by to talk to Cloud about crap, but still.
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HA-HA!
Actually, i have not approved anything yet but the Eiffel tower thing. I was going to reply about his PM with this topic in mind but i havent had the time because of schoolwork.
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Ah, so it's just a member mislabeling things as accepted. M'kay, that clears it up. Phew, thought you were slipping for a second there.

So ya, Wrap up and eiffel tower haven't been accepted kiddo. They're only accepted when a staffer says "Accepted" directly. They first wanna play around with them and see how they look as people do things differently.
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No, Tyrizken, bad Tyrizken. I said I might accept them. I still have to go over those things I "approved". I didnt directly say they were approve. Sorry.
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oh ;p
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