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Topic Started: Sep 3 2007, 12:46 PM (101 Views)
Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
The young genin woke for a good day of training. he appeared by the window seal. Cracking it open to get the breeze. He then felt the mourning breath along his chest. The mourning breath gave a chill as the white eyed genin steped into the shower. he then get ready for the day that was to come. He thought about the fight he the week before. The fight involved him and a man named Torak. The man was a theif, and a damn good one at that. He had was almost successful in taking the valueable Jewals.

Zulan left his apartment deciding on a course of action. He had not learned of a way to learn water ninjutsu. He then walked over to a raman shop. He took seat and asked for chicken noodle. He looked around the shop, still scarfing down food. The genin sat still trying to think of a good way to train. He finished his raman leaving a small tip and the bill.

Zulan walked around the village looking for any shinobi. He was in hope that he could learn from one of them. He was seeing no one around the large village. He then reached a high point in the village. He could see everywhere around the village now. Zulan was coming up with no Solution to his problem. Zulan sat down on a bench, so that he could think to himself. he sat on the bench, then thought of another skilled genin. He couldnt think of her name. He was happy in knowing that she was a skilled in water element.

He then ran around the village looking for the girl. He thought of every place she might be, even if he had never talked to her. He looked on the right side of the village then back to the left side. He was hoping he could find her before nightfall.
He then started getting tired running around the large village. He had looked almost everywhere in this village. He then told everyone he saw if you see the genin, tell her that Zulan is in the merchant area looking for you. He then waited in the merchant area for the girl. He hoped that one of the five that knew the girl would tell her.
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A gentle breeze made its appearance felt. The crisp morning sunlight graced the whole of Silvius. It was one of those days that made Amedare felt all giddy inside. A choir of birds sang to an unknown tune as the trees and its leaves danced in the merry melody. The Yuugo, equally beautiful and tempting, kept an insincere smile close to her lips. It was a weapon, concealed and ready for use. Amedare was all too familiar with it.

Her calm platinum ponytail swayed in the majesty of the wind. She walked through the many ants going about their everyday lives. Silvius was a place of commerce, a neverending tale of city life and mid-status drudgery. For Amedare, it was a place of opportunities; somewhere she can just be a shadow amidst the cold souls she did not know.

"Amedare..." Her long time companion, a calm and cold voice inside her head, broke her peace. If she didn't have control, she would have struck the passing merchant donning an arrogant smile. "Release me..." The voice's words never changed, it remained the same as if he had a script of his own.

Brushing aside strands of displaced hair, she went on her way and ignored the monotonous voice. It was her break, Shinnen had given her something worth her salt. It was a beautiful day to be at peace, to just go on with life. Amedare thought so but she had a grave feeling something was going to tear that vision down.

"Amedare, you have done well for me. Would you like to get something in return?" Shinnen asked her the same question hours ago, in the presence of Zabuza who had a faux smile.

Amedare couldn't care less of whatever he had to give her. If it was another lame mission, she was good for it. she had finished more of Shinnen's missions for Bide than for her own. Along with their training sessions, she was quite eager to prove she was not a shrimp as Zabuza would joke.

"A mission?" Those were the first to come out of her, she caught Shinnen's attention who was busy drinking rather than looking her in the eye.

"Actually, a break. but if you want-" Shinnen was cut off by the Genin. His brown hair remained calm as silver streaks glistened in the morning light. Out on the porch, the sun could tower over everything, even over Bide's Blue Rage. "A break it is." With a smile, she hurried to go. She had wanted a day to herself. Maybe this would be the stress reliever she gravely needed.

She trudged along the same path as she did once. Reminiscing over what had happeneed over the past few years, she thought about the future. with everything that she ahd gone through, she was quite skeptic about anything else. She was tired, she wanted to just fade away and forever go to sleep. But she thought otehrwise. She knew it would be a cold day in hell before someone like her gets peace, someone of the Yuugo.

"Eh?" Rustling over the bushes behind her caught her attention. Quickly, she grabbed her Sharkskin dagger inside her pocket. She was used to being stalked. fighting wasn't a new thing for this damsel.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
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A small boy sat in the bushes near amedare. He saw her sharkskin knife that had been drawn. The rough boy stood there in awe. The birds over his head sang a light tone. The boy then spoke to the girl. "Hmm" He Seid Lightly "There is another genin by the name of Zulan looking for you." The boy then spoke out of turn "He seid nothing of what he wanted." The boy was very bazare to look too. Most would try, and avoid so no begging could be involved.

Over in the merchant corner, near a Raman shop. Zulan sat at the merchant shop, He was thought of other ways to train. He had waited about fourty minutes. The skilled genin stood up to take a look around. Then in the moment of desperation, he wondered of there was any jounin that would teach him. He thought of every jounin he had known. Not many in his count mabye one. Then giving up on the idea. The Ziroshi's eldest son looked into the sky to see a few little birds flying. He seid to himself lightly "Why are we not as free as they are." Zulan looked back to the straight street infront of him.

The teenager started for his apartment for it was become dusk slowly. He thought about the female genin. Wondered if the message reached her ear. The genin wondered if she knew what he would look like. He moved along the long path that was the merchant corner. He was getting tired and was drawing near to his apartment. The young genin stoped just before turning into the living area. He heard a faint crash in the distance. Passing merchants side steped as Zulan walked toward the noise.
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Amedare looked at the boy in curiousity. He had come from nowhere. It was amazing for him to have crept up on a shinobi without even getting noticed. Amedare looked at him intently, observing anything and everything about this stranger. He was wearing rugs, red hair unkempt, and dirt everywhere. He looked like a beggar. In the streets of Silvius, she thought if people like him thrived. It would be quite amusing if he only went to see her. With her renowned smile, she walked up to him slowly.

"Really now? And how'd you-" As she came closer to him, her words trailed off. She was surprised, shell shocked, at what she saw. An impending danger, the boy donned her worst fear. He began to take notice of the awkward silence. He started to stir. He got up and started to slowly walk up to her. Her face was askew with a mockery of a smile. She was disgusted but her facial expression led the boy if she had suffered from a mild stroke. "Are you-" As the boy tried touching her, she grew more fearful. In a frenzy, she shouted at the top of her lungs and ran away.

"Aiyee!" Amedare comically ran off to the stalls, not noticing she was about to crash. She just wanted to get away from that kid. She feared the kid. That kid was taboo to her. She never wanted to see that kid again, not with snot dripping from his nose. In such an unfeminine manner, she crashed through a stall of watermelons.

Crash!

"What the hell?" The fat vendor, a man of great stature and smell, exclaimed as he failed to notice the impending event before it had happened.

The noise bothered the pasers-by, as well as the nearby merchants. The whole sound, the crash, broke the monotonous drudgery of everyday life. It was heard all over Silvius, she thought it. She couldn't have been more right. As she emerged from the mess, the menacing stare of the owner dawned on her. Everyone stared at her for a second before bursting into laughter. Painted with watermelon goo, Amedare bowed her head in shame.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
[OCC: are they too short? or was it the short manner of three only?]

Zulan thought about the faint sound to his left. He then walked down a short street. The street was packed with people. The loud nose of people threw off his thinking. He was normaly laid back. Still the day was becoming a nuiseance for him. The young genin eyes traveled back and forth. He was not finding the cause of the noise. The young genin read the signs as his eyes traveled. Ziroshi's Eldest asked a few passing travelers. The travelers pointed him in one direction. The genin saw the other teenager. The genin noticed the gathered crowd around her. She was the one" he thought to himself "Thats the girl." He then seid low "She will train me she has too."

He then steped over to the girl. He then seid at her reach "Need Any Help?" moments later he says "there things i would like to talk to you about" He then studied her face and her body. She was a girl that he would love to look at more than once. Her face was fair skined and very smooth looking. He looked at her long pulled up her. He wished he could know more about her at this point. Wondered if they could become good friends. If this training will bring them closer. He says once again to her "Need Help?" Now Sending his hand close to her.

Zulan Studied her body at this point. He was a man of course, he had the same wants as men. Her Curves were normal for her age. Zulan didnt take in account for her eyes till, he was of course at eye level. Her ice blue eyes made him chill by how expressiveness of there ice field. He could not Express the words in his own mind. He just stood there in awe to here built. The teenager for her hand to touch to his. He then seid out loud to the people around "Nothing to see here get a move on" With a sarcastic voice. That was a lie for the mentally challanged. Who would not want to stay.
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i don't like the skins.. so simple... but reguardless welcome
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With goo all over her, Amedare raised an eyebrow at the boy who began shooing the crowd away. This was a first, catching thousands of people's attention and getting saved by someone of the opposite sex. In her lifetime, Amedare had promised herself everyone that she would do whatever it takes for everyone to notice her. She just didn't expect it to be this way.

"Dammit," she lowered her voice as to not be heard by anyone else. She turned her head to one side, refusing the outreached hand before her. She never wanted to take anyone's help, especially not from some strange boy who just happened to pass by. Judging from the guy's appearance, Amedare surmised he was nothing more than some Genin trying to be someone important in this world. isn't everyone?

From out of the corner of her eyes, a lone figure stood. His hands on his hips and a silver helmet glistening in the morning light. He shook his head a couple of times signifying his disappointment and disbelief at the events that ahd transpired. Amedare frowned at the gesture. She hated being treated as a kid. Being clumsy was not helping her standards.

"Amedare... that was... cute," he commented as he approached the girl. He performed several seals in rapid succession. He was too fast for his movements to be easily seen. With a Tiger seal ending his performance, a gush of water appeared from out of nowhere and rained over Amedare. In a quick but unfeminine fashion, she was washed off from the goo. Her clothes, being opaque and not allowing anyone to see anything under them, did not faze at the pressure of the water. With a smug look, she took notice of her master. "Shinnen-sensei..." she acknowledged him before bowing her head.

At this time, Shinnen noticed the young boy beside the two acquantances. He had an expression of awe. Shinnen wondered if he was in shock with the Legendary Jounin present in front of him or with the pretty girl that was now bathing in summoned water.

"And who might you be?" he smiled at the young Genin as he faced him.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
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He was standing there as she seemed to think to her self. He wondered if he should just of retracted the hand by this point. "Dammit," He never heard her say anything. Only the movement of her lips. She of course refused his help. He then steped away to the site of the girl. He gave her a glance before another man walked to his side. "Amedare..that was.. cute" Zulan looked to this man with a fast sigh now. He then noticed further into the man's appearance. He was a jounin only to be told. By the way he walked. You could see the many he killed.

He was now in awe by the jounin standing infront of him. He looked at the mans apperance, his Silver helmet showed a great deal of light into Zulan's eyes. He blinked and looked away only to look back to the strong jounin. The jounin was walking up preforming handsigns as the speed of a cheetah. He saw but one of the many handsigns preformed. The handsign was a tiger handseal, water then appeared over the girl splashing onto Zulan now. He then turned to the Jounin studing him now.

The jounin then asked a question, "and who might you be?" Zulan noticed smile on his face. He seid fast to jounin "Zulan Ziroshi Sir" followed by a bow to the jounin. Ziroshi's finest son has a strong voice filled with animbition. The jounin could tell the genin was not here to look at a young girl. A strong breeze passed by the group now. The breeze griped Zulan's long hair carrying it around him. The hair waved for a few secounds, only to show his age in full. He was sixteen going on seventeen in about a month or two. He steped back a bit to rack his hair back into there places. He then speaks again "..Your the jounin...Shinnen? Correct?" He then studied the man again. He noticed he was more then just a jounin. How he stood showed that he has killed more then just hundred men.

The genin looked down to the fourteen year old now. Then looking back to the jounin near him. "Your Amedare," He States also asking "...I was wishing for the training of this girl?" After a few moments Zulan says "I just need a start on the water element."
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The Jounin blinked for a few times before digesting what the young Genin had to say. He wanted to train with Amedare but Amedare was going to train with Shinnen. Quite a dilemma for him. He looked at the boy with much awe, wondering if he knew who Amedare really was. She looked like any other Genin so what's the point of training with someone you don't know if you have no clue she has the right knowledge to back her skills up?

"Ah... So," Shinnen finally said and clasped his hands together. Amedare knew that smile. It was a faux smile he donned last time they were in a training together. She thought he was going to give her the prize but instead, he had appeared from her back only to imprison her in a water cell. She wondered what may be the implications of such. "Would you like to join in our training for the day?" said the Jounin still with his faux mask still on.

Amedare's jaw dropped. Did she hear right? Was Shinnen going to train her with some strange boy? What would Alex think? She narrowed her eyes, trying to stare Shinnen down. It was jus timely that Shinnen's faux smile makes him narrow his eyes to an extent that they would like slits to the opposing view. In this condition, his eyesight are down by some percent. Amedare couldn't believe him and to fail using her disgusted look at him. Things were shaping up.

"The water element... is Amedare's little specialty," He commented last, striking Amedare at her heart. Her specialty? was it really? If it was then he would know her very well. Amedare's heart was melted by the information. Hoshigaki Shinnen was a good mentor and if she had the power to make him, he could be a great dad.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
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Zulan sat there wondering what the jounin was thinking. Still getting no reply back from the jounin. He sits there studing the white haired jounin. He felt a calmness around this jounin master, but still a toughness in him. He felt as if he could talk to him easy, and get a response with a joke. He seems as tho he had to have killed many other jounin. Zulan siting there thinking to him self gets a final reply from the man.

"Ah...So" followed by a loud clap.

Zulan didnt know what to think as he looked on the face of the genin. The genin knew something was going to happen. There was something about the smile. Zulan kept a thought in his head. The smile the man was showing disturbed him for some reason. Mabye it was the way the other genin was looking at the jounin. He did not know how to take on the matter till the jounins spoke.

"Would you like to join in on our training for the day?" the smile was still was apon the face of the jounin.

He sat there looking into the air. Now thinking on what he seid now. Only a glance over the other genin. He saw that she had droped her jaw basicly, looking almost angry about these things that were transpiring. Zulan knew that she was not the nicest person he had met. Zulan just sat there studing the personality,Along with the situation that is Transpriring. He thought she would have seid something. But looking over to her at this point, she only looked at her jounin Sensai.

"The water element... is Amedare's little specialty"

Zulan of course thought that she was a good at water. he started to think in his head. "Man i should of have gotten more info before bejoining myself into this situation." He then started say "Alright, I mean if its ok with you." Now looking Amedare in the eyes. Something about her made him think she hated him. She had a body language that felt like he should belong training with them. But he knew he had put her on the spot. All she could say at this point is Yea im fine with this.

(Any better?)
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The wispy clouds floated overhead. It was a crisp and warm morning, the birds went on with their singing as the elaves turned to joining them with their graceful dances. Just like any other day, everyone went about their business. They knew they should keep on working to live, to survive. One day of laziness may lead to them being out of teach with nature. Bide was a village known for its strong economic stability mainly because it adherred to teh etachings of Motehr Silvius. The pearl of the orient, a mixture of East and West, Bide was no novice when it comes to discipline of its denizens.

Over to the other side of Silvius, on a lone field with a wide lake adorning it, stood three ninja of Bide. One was the legendary Jounin, Hoshigake Shinnen. The other two were Genins trying to prove their worth against fate's never ending meddling. The lake twinkled like silver stars. Amedare had been here before, she knew the same feeling that the lake had given her when she trained with Shinnen days ago. It was bliss, peaceful and serene. Merging with the lake, being one with it, was something she had felt for the first time and something that she wanted to do again. Her eyes lit up at the thought of Shinnen training them for the same reasons again.

The Jounin stood a mighty stance, his brown hair covered by the silver helmet that was complementing the silver streaks of hair that made him look more regal than ever. His eyes, as iced blue as Amedare's, lit up in such a way that reminded the young girl of happiness. She smiled at the thought of Shinnen taking pride in being a good mentor.

"Okay! So let's begin," he said to the two who were confused. Amedare looked at Zulan unconsciously but reverted back to looking straight into the eyes of Bide's Blue Rage. She raised an eyebrow as he continued to down his faux smile. "Begin with what?" she went on.

Taking a good look at his students, Shinnen quickly performed several seals much to their disbelief. He was too fast to determine whether he was going for an attack or a defence. Amedare readied her Sharkskin Dagger at impulse. If anything was going to show up, she would destroy it before her competition would. Out of the corner of their eyes, the lake grew a whirpool in its center and it began to grow even more. In seconds, the whirlpool gushed up in a spiraling manner and began to yearn for their flesh.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
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Heavenly clouds slowly glaze over there heads. The mourning was is very warm. Zulan after getting a good nights sleep was told to report here. On the other side of Silvius, Near a wide lake. He looked at the jounin standing strong now. Zulan looked into his ice colored eyes, much like Amedare's eyes. only to wonder what she was thinking. He then looked back to the Legendary Jounin standing infront of him. Zulan looked over to the lake. He started to admire the elegance of the lake. He could see the reflection of his own hope and dreams. He then took another look at her. She was smiling at the jounin now, He only guessed it was something about the jounin.

"Okay! So let's begin,"

Zulan thought to him self wondering what did he mean. He then noticed Amedare look at him for a moment. He looked back to her, only to catch her turning back to the legendary jounin. He then turned back to the jounin with a confused look on his face.

"Begin with what?"

The jounin still having his Smile began to preform handsigns at a high speed. Zulan sat trying to read the handseals. He read not one of the Handseals. He then looked to his side to see Amedare was pulling a weapon to her side. I got ready to be in defence mode. To his side He noticed a large pool of water spining at him. Zulan made a fast movement rolling and ducking to the blast of water. The water passed over his head. The water slamed into the tree behind him. The water made cuts all around the tree. Zulan stands up from ducking, now facing the mizu Bushin.
He looks at the jounin now beleive he is real. He didnt know what was going on.

The clone ran at him throwing a punch at Zulan face. Zulan rolls backward throwing a solid kick at him. The clone recoils by spining, and landing on the right of him. Zulan kicks off the ground landing on his feet. The clone charges at him again. He now notices that its just a simple mizu clone. He didnt want to waste to much chakra. Instead he spins into the air throwing a nice kick to his left shoulder. The kick was solid, throwing the clone back. The clone breaks away into water near a tree, and a few bushes. He then looked finding Amedare no where He then jumped over to a tree to the left. He tried to make him self unseen to anyone. He then makes two handsigns as fast as he could.

*Ram-Ox*

The clone makes him self known trying to draw the jounin out. The clone goes farther away from the real self. The clones steps around acting as if he didnt care. He was trying to make him mad at his mistakes. Zulan just watched for any movement in any near area. He didnt see anything but off in the distance he saw Amedare. he didnt know what she was doing. He kept him self concealed to everything around him. The clone jumped into hideing at the site of Amedare. Zulan sat, and studied Amedare for anything like genjutsu.


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Amedare winced at the sight of the huge water spiral heading for them. Quickly she jerked herself at the opposite end of Zulan. The water missed either one of them but it did not miss the tree. Shinnen was quicker as Amedare had expected him to be. The tree looked like it had been ripped to shreds by giant claws. She thought about what would have happened if it had hit eitehr one of them. Shinnen was serious this time. the Yuugo narrowed her eyes, determination to subdue the Jounin before the other Genin filled her.

"Amedare..." She winced at the thought of the voice interfering once more. She had tried so hard to hide her bloodline just because of teh fact she was not strong enough to be one. If any other found out what she really was, they might try to turn her in. She knew Shinnen knew about her and the fact that he has not turned her in yet made her feel quesy at times but thankful nonetheless. It was one of the reasons why she still holds the Jounin in high regards. "Free me and we can destroy this Jounin. I will share my power with you..." Relentless, the cold and calm voice continued to mingle with her subconsciousness.

By now she was used to it all. The same small eyes that haunted her at night belonged to the same voice that tempted her to reveal herself at this time. But she was strong. She knew better than to unveil her greatest mystique. It would be a waste of time, a stupid gesture even. Clutching her Sharkskin dagger, she motioned to rush at the Jounin. However, a gang of mizubunshins appeared in front of her. She had no idea where Shinnen would be. She was not yet that good with clones.

"To your left," The voice told her. Right on her left was a mizubunshin, as quick as the original and ready to kick her sideways. With a quick jump, she evaded that kick. She landed behind the mizubunshin and struck it with her dagger. Still, the otehr was too fast for her. With a swift manner, it struck her on her gut, sending her flailing backwards. Amedare hit the opposite tree back first. Clutching her stomack in pain, she spat out blood. It wasn't serious but it tasted too awful for her. She grew more furious at the thought she had been beaten by a clone made of nothing but water and chakra.

Slowly, she stood up. The clone winced at the sight of this. It thought she would stay down for good. From afar, on a huge tree branch, Shinnen watched on as his student showed signs of being a Yuugo. He rested his back against the trunk and crossed his arms together. A smile streaked across his face as he shook his head. The silver helmet continued glistening through the morning light.

"Is that all you got?" Amedare asked the clone, getting confidence from the taste of her blood. The clone stepped one foot back, sweat or something that looked like it, graced his left cheek. Amedare narrowed her eyes, intently gazing a hole through the water clone's form. She was trying hard to contain her inner demon and was successful at this point. Finally gaining enough ground to fully stand back up, she winced at the pain she received from her gut. "'Cause I have a surprise for you." she said and darted through the mizubunshin.

Amedare delivered swift blows to the clone but the opponent easily parried them. every punch, every kick, every blow, was evaded by the clone. Amedare grew frustrated as she spun to deliver a massive spin kick. Surprisingly, it hit nothing but air. The clone stood his ground on the opposite end as Amedare stood hers. She was starting to sweat. She glanced at her right and saw Zulan who was just standing there as if he did not care.

Dammit!

Shinnen grinned at the things that had transpired. "More?" With a quick jest, as he always did, he performed another set of seals and unleashed five more mizubunshins, having a total of 6 on the battlefield. Amedare could not belive her eyes. Shinnen was serious this time around. Unconsciously, she held the dagger by its hilt as hard as she could. She was furious at what was happening. Even Shinnen's mizubunshins were as quick as him.

Damn...
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The genin sat in the bush near the events of Amedare's fight. The copy of Zulan was hiding near the fight. The genin made the command to help Amedare. He knew she would most likely refuse. Thus reason he didnt make the command sooner. He moved threw the brush of tree and bushes. It had seemed that the night was becoming foggy. He wondered what would come of the battle now. Would Shinnin end this spar, or did he cause this fog of nature. Bide's genin gained a closer view to the battle now. The clone had been helping Amedare now few a minute. She seemed as if she was talking to her self in her head. He made of course no motion of this event before joining the battle.

The genin knew this was just a clone. It was the only way that shinnin could watch the battle. Even when Zulan jumped into the small scale battle. He knew he would need some kind of back up. Before he could think anymore. He saw the clone brushed to the side by the Mizu Clone. The clone was not mud for the clone was not injured. He made a few handseals to go along with a new jutsu. "Shuriken No Jutsu" Then in the shadows of the bushes where Zulan sat. Something had kicked him out of the bush. He had no idea to think. only that two of his three shuriken he made cut the target. The mizu clone busted into water. Only because of my distraction did we defeat the clone. He then turned around to check what attacked him. he slide out of his sleave four senbons. He aimed into a spray of the needles. The needles took to the air as he threw at the bushes.the bushes moved in escaping away from the needles. Zulan made a gestur to Amedare to help lookout.

Zulan turned back away from her. Silently walking into the bushes He heard something behind him. He never paid any attention. He then rushed into the forest still silent looking back and forth for what ever kicked him. After about five to ten minutes, he had found nothing. He looked back only to see a small trail that he had made. He then turned moving back threw his trail. He looked to the left and the right as he went back. He gets closer to where Amedare is again. He jumped out of the bushes to see her still with her SharkSkin Dagger out. Zulan says "Sorry" He looked to the right. Something was moving over there this time he didnt know what he should do. He looked over to Amedare. His looked showed concern for what tho. He looked back to the bushes. He pulls out a kunai, in reaction to whatever could be in the bush. He was starting to show to Amedare another side. He was almost concerned for there life. He was scared that Shinnen was not just going to toy with them. Zulan looked into the sky thinking of his past.

It showed the time he spent with his brother. The time he spent with his father before he left. Zulan seid unconcously "Ill be a great ninja" only to be repeating his father. Taijin his brother was now around 12 or 13. Zulan didnt know what to think about his life as a genin. He didnt think he would make it past genin. This jounin was so skilled, he shoulded so much strength. All the genin could do was make a few handseals. None of his jutsu could really kill a man, Or a ninja only slow them down. He then looked back around him now, seeing amedare eyes with a glance. Her eyes reminded him of his mothers. His mother was one of the best Water Ninjutsu users. Her eyes were blue like the full moon's light glaring apon a icy blue ocrean. The genin tearing just a bit in his right eye. He then shoves his kunai infront of him. Ziroshi child still was looking straight into Amedare's eyes. He then turns thinking more into his past. His mothers long black straight hair. He missed his mom so much, she loved him dearly. One thing about Amedare was the way she looked like her. It made him feel soft, he then closed his eyes and reopened to look infront of him now. This made him get over all the fears he had. The fear of dieing was nothing to him, The fear of being a weakling went away. Zulan was ready to fight the next challenge.

"Damn it Just Attack!" He says just low enough for the two of them to hear.
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Amedare stood still. Her thoughts whirred her to a trance. In a prison made of water, a bubble full of liquid, she sat still. She clasped her knees close to her chest. A lullaby lulled her to wake. Her platinum hair played with the water around here. Strangely, she found herself breathing normally. Looking far beyond her, her iced blue eyes spew out an emotion of surprise. Two deadly eyes, smaller than normal, were looking straight at her with no other remnants of itself visible.

"Amedare..." From out of nowhere, the voice began to call for her again. Its cold tone made it seem ghostly or dead. Amedare tried shrugging it off. It may just be an unsure dream. "It is not a dream, Amedare. I come for you," Amedare's eyes widened at the tone of this.

Forgetting she was in a water prison, she opened her mouth to shout to find she could normally speak in it. "Who are you?! Where are you? Speak!" Her ill temper had gotten the best of her once more. She only noticed so after her words have been freed from her. With her conscious now getting a hold of her soul, she slowly tried to calm herself down. It would be of no use to argue with the voice if he was in control of this world. She was imprisoned in what she knew not what. it wouldn't be smart to provoke the more powerful to make her situation more demeaning.

"Who I am will be revealed much later, when you get stronger... As for now, I need you to accept my chakra... I will share my power with you... You will have a taste of immortality but only today. If you want more, you know how to get it... Release me!" The voice continued ranting at her. As it ended its reign, it boomed until it finally dissolved to nothingness.

Amedare pondered at what it might have tried to really mean. She thought to herself as she failed to notice everything melted back into reality. She was back where she stood, still panting after that hit she received from the mizubunshin. Sweat fell from her face and as it did, it glistened a mournful silver in the morning light. The five new batch of mizubunshins, with the sixth old one in their middle, looked menacingly at both Zulan and Amedare. With her trance, she had only now to witness Zulan's own actions.

"Damn it! Just Attack!" She heard Zulan's voice provoking her and it just irritated her more. Zulan had already taken care of the original mizubunshin by throwing shurikens at it. After running to away to scout, Zulan was quick to return before any of the five remaining mizubunshins attacked Amedare. They were hesitant, she knew it but she knew not why.

Over the trees, Shinnen watched gleefully at the two who stood there ground. After kicking Zulan out of hiding, he returned to his former base and sat on his hind legs. He looked like a frog in this position but he could care no less. It was a strategy, just incase things get out of hand. "What a horrible looking pair, these two make," He giggled like a child.

Amedare closed her eyes and saw an ethereal void of nothingness. death was not reassuring but neither was fear. Amedare thought about everything else she had done and she would like to do. A smile formed on her lips. Slowly, she looked back up and opened her eyes to view the mizubunshin still hesitant at them. "Don't be afraid. Don't you want to bleed for your fantasy?" She jokingly said and readied her dagger before her. Quickly, the bunshins began to move. They rushed at both Zulan and Amedare, quickly taking a fast pace.

Snake, Rat!

"Kirigakure no Jutsu!" From out of nowhere a thick mist veiled both the Genins. All the mizubunshins stopped to gawk at the surprise Amedare had unleashed. She continued smiling as the mist continued to grow thicker. "Summon more Deido Bunshin to distract the Mizubunshin," she whispered to Zulan only to be hread by them both. She was unconsciously doing this though, she wanted to prove to herself she can do this without the help of that inner demon of hers. "I know where Shinnen is, I'll spring to attack him. You, on the other hand, get ready to perform Mud Shot on him when he lands. Got it?" Amedare did not wait for Zulan to answer back. As her instinct ushered for her to move, she quickly sprang out of the mist heading for Shinnen's current location.

"What the?!" The Jounin, taken aback at being found out, quickly jerked backwards to avoid the dagger strike Amedare had for him. He landed opposite Amedare as both had a stare down. "You are getting good," He donned his faux smile once more.

Amedare smiled her own as she waited for Zulan to hit the Jounin with enough accuracy so she could take him down. Her heart was pounding fast, every muscle of her body was in use, she was taking it good for a training. Amedare sneered menacingly, infused with dark secrets that only a few knew.
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Zulan waiting for the movements of the six mizubushin clones. He looked fast over to the other student. He finished the three secound daydream. He had always had very strange dreams. His dreams would last for hours, and still yet be two or three secounds in the real world. Many knew when he would day dream. Usually snaped out of it fast. He then looked back to Amedare. Knew that she had devised a plan. He waited for the order like a dog. This was not in his nature in case he did not care. He knew that together they could defeat the clones,and defeat shinnen ending this spar or sorts.

He then noticed her saying something toward him "Don't be afraid. Don't you want to bleed for your fantasy?". Zulan heard her sarcastic voice, enabling no anger to rise in the teenager. He then jumped into a stance with speed. She made a few hand seals to go along with the attack apon them.

Snake, Rat

"Kirigakure no Jutsu!" A mist filled the air out of no where. The Mizu's pace then seased not beleiving her skill. She gave a few orders, pacing into the thick mist now. Now he then thought of a plan threw what she seid. He had the perfect plan in his head now. He just had to get the mizu clones in another area. Zulan then preformed handsigns in rapid succession.

Ram, Ox!

"Deido Bunshin No Jutsu" Zulan draws out enough chakra for six clones to face the other clones. Zulan had the clones hide in the mist. he then waited for there battling to start. He looked fast threw the mist. The genin heard fight between at the copies. After a few more secounds. There was pitched combat in the air. He gave the order to force them into a farther spot. They slowly fought untill there fighting was a simple whisper. He slide out of his sleave, two senbon needles. He looked back and forth for any sign of movement. After about a minute, movement spured. The blue blur was in the air almost free falling to the ground. He then aimed, and threw one of the needles. Shinnen of course dodged with a backhandspring apon hiting the ground. Zulan threw the last needle making him jump high into the air. He then preformed more handseals. Along with saying the name of the jutsu.

Ram, Snake!

"Mud Shot" He seid as shinnen floated in the air. The mud picked up off the ground, flying into the air now. The aim was perfect, the only person that could of dodged it was a Nature Taijutsu master. He looked at the shot almost at awe. He then fouces his chakra to see how much chakra he has left. He had his mind to beleive he had just enough jutsu for a few more bushin clones. The clones he had sent to fight were still off in the distants in pitched combat. He heard water and mud flying. One of the mizu clones was running this way. Only to be followed by a mud clone. The clones both burst into the water, and mud. Time had been a great deal. They had over done there time...
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Shinnen was as catious as ever. As quick as Zulan was with his needles, Shinnen was quicker by evading them with a back hand spring. Amedare looked on, breathless, at the events that was transpiring before her. She was panting, breathing heavily. She was still tired from all the action. However, a smile still lingered on her lips. She was enjoying what was happening probably because she knew Shinnen was about to get caught in his own trap.

"I never knew you were such a gymnast!" Amedare shouted at the Jounin, jokingly provoking him to ease up and be filled with the fatal emotion of flattery. Shinnen landed back opposite him and the two had a staredown. Student to mentor, both had no intentions of backing down. Amedare was intensified, she was ready to end this now. She was feeling all the blood in her body pumping outward at the same time. Bloodlust... She read about in the academy. It was one of the signs of someone hungering for more power. A developed characteristic of almost all the missing-nins known to man, Amedare felt quesy just thinking about it.

In rapid succesion, Zulan threw another needle prompting Shinnen to make no other choice but to jump way up. There!" His sight tore a hole through the undergrowth that sheltered Zulan. However, before he could safely land down, three shots of semi-solid mud ganged up on him. In a frenzy, they caught him in both of his arms and on his mid section.

"Gotcha!" Amedare thought, her infamous smile growing wider as her confidence was fed. She felt she would want to gloat after this skirmish. Imagine, a student beating the teacher on her own? Well, not really but if it was the case then she'd take Zulan down after beating Shinnen. She felt her heart pump more rapidly. It felt as if it was on soldier pills. "Must be the excitement..." She told herself to calm down. She reverted back to looking at Shinnen.

With no way to run or hide, the Jounin was thrown by the mud to the opposite tree trunk, trapping him like a wild creature. He tried to get free, wriggling around, but to no avail. Amedare's grin grew more sinister. She was the victor, only her and no other. To one side of the battlefield, the bunshins dispersed into what they once were: mud and water.

Amedare's smile vanished as a grin formed on Shinnen's lips. The trapped Jounin was more confident than ever. Amedare felt cold, she was shivering by this time. she knew not what the cause was but she knew it would be a distraction on her part. Wiping her pain off, she pointed accusingly at Shinnen and threw her voice at him. "Stop smiling! You're already beat!" Her eyes had dark circles around them, she looked fatigued like she had no sleep for forty days. Shinnen gave a boisterous at the sound of Amedare. "Not quite."

In a flash, the Shinnen that was trapped by the mud dissolved into water. It was a mizubunshin! Amedare thought it could not be. He had chakra in him and he smelled like blood. How on earth could he take time to switch himself if that was the case?! Anger filled her at the last moment of her consciousness. Her vision became blurry, fatigue overpowered her, she was losing her balancing at the end of it all. Like a blur, Shinnen appeared before her and pushed her back with a flick of his finger. "Just like that?" Amedare fell back, lying on her own spine, unconscious and out of strength to go on.

Shinnen then turned to where Zulan was. He smiled, a bit fatherly, and pointed at him. "You!" He made the motion for the Genin to come at him. Shinnen showed himself to be atrocious and arrogant which were contradicting his real personality. On the battlefield, Shinnen was Bide's Blue Rage. But this was not the battlefield. Shinnen was able to control himself. The bloodlust in him was no more than a weak pulse.
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Very worn out, He looked at the helpless jounin now. He beleived it was over to his victor now. Then the other genin formed sentinces of bloodlust. "Gotcha" She had a very large smile. He looked to her with his pure white eyes. He then looked back to the jounin in captive. He was very worn out he took a knee to catch his breath. A large smile appeared apon the face of the jounin. he weakly stood up ready to face the jounin now. Ziroshi genin was not good at any techninque of real attack. But he knew that he could try and defeat the respected blue rage of bide. He took a long heavy breath threw his nose. He knew that the jounin had something up his sleave. The girl then seid loudly "Stop smiling!" / The hardened genin thought to himself, "its not that easy is she really being blinded as so" He had a good head on his shoulders. Wasnt easly tainted by bloodlust, like other genin. But still was not as strong as most others.

Moments later the jounin seid a few words that Zulan didnt quiet catch. With in moments the jounin turned into water. He not being to surprise, still closed his eyes in greif. He then looked to his left where the other genin was. He heard a bunch of comotion, With the fall of the genin. He didnt know what he could do to stop her fall. He then looked to his right. The jounin taunted him to attack him. A powerfull Eagle sored threw the sky darking by the minute. The eagle showed what true power can be. He looked up at the powerfull bird over head. He breathed one last hard breath before looking back into the eyes of the Blue rage. Ziroshi's Zulan didnt know much about his fighting style. He knew a few things such as his liking to toy with us. He got into a stance, waiting for the jounin to move a step. After about two or three minutes. He added having to wait for the jounin. Getting more and more impaitant he rushes blindly at the jounin.

The teenager threw a hard jab, followed by a jump back kick. After landing he jumped into triple back fist stance. He threw the three back fist punchs. He didnt know what was going to happen only that the more time he could waste the better. He beleived that Amedare was thinking up a plan at this moment. He continued to throw kicks and punchs, slowly they became weaker and weaker. After a few more waste of energy punchs. He slide back into a sort of fighting stance.

"Just defeat me!"

he seid to teh jounin He knew he should not of seid it to the blue rage. I mean he was training him, he cant be so impaitant. He jumped back from the combat. He spun out a kunai, spining in back and forth pausing it in place. He then looked at the blur rage. Felt the anger ride up his skin to his face. He then felt a burning sensation in his heart. He now knew he would not lose he would give it his all. He made a few more handseals.

Ram, Ox

Clones bursted out of three mud spots. They moved around at a fast rate. Two ran down the middle. While the others went down the sides. One in the middle jumped over to the other side of Shinnen, jumping right over him. They come into a almost diamand around him now. They all charge at him at once. They all throw solid kicks, and punches at the jounin. Zulan didnt beleive this was going to work, only something to stall the jounin till the other genin can arrive. She should have full chakra left, and/or stamina.
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With his superb ability in the shinobi way, Shinnen was quick to anticipate the blatant attacking strategy of the deidobunshin and the young Genin. Easily parrying all the kicks and punches he was receiving, he looked like he was dancing in the middle of the skirmish. The mist was beginning to grow thin, almost becoming just a fragment of its former strength. Duck, sidestep, and jump; Shinnen was pushing for boundaries while having fun at the cost of chakra. he still had his faux smile on. Gradually, he changed his views from the bunshin to Zulan and to Amedare. He began to worry if she was alright. He never intended to make her pass out. He actually had no idea why she did pass out.

The deidobunshin began to strike Shinnen in unison. At this point in time, he backflipped unto the ground, leaving a mess of mud from where he was. The deidobunshin had destroyed themselves without him exerting much effort. He was a learned. A shinobi that ahd done countless missions for Bide and the Ishikage. Surely he would not fall to a Genin of unknown status.

Quickly glancing back to Amedare, Shinnen performed handseals and his hands began to glow a fair shade of blue. With his faux smile, he continued to look at the boy. This was a medical technique that could be used in conjunction with Taijutsu. He rarely uses this on missions, simply because its hard to maintain good vantage point on the field. He was never a hand-to-hand type of guy. He was more of a strike a single blow and leave them all dead kind of guy.

"Hey, Zulan is it? dont worry about Amedare, she'll be fine. You should be worrying about yourself now," Shinnen's voice was still at normal tone, there was no hint in him being the Blue Rage he was known as. Chakra Scalpel: a technique known to most proficient Medical Nin. Could it mean Shinnen had dabbled in the field? Surely you jest. Holding his hands in an attacking position, he moved to an attacking stance himself. "So, are you gonna give up or do you want to fail miserably?"
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