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Topic Started: Sep 3 2007, 12:46 PM (100 Views)
Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
The fighting style of the jounin was to great for clones. After moments the clones were defeated and wiped away. Zulan was tired of this shiraid of the fighting. He would attack and lose time after time. He stood observing the jounin with his faint breathing. He was not even getting a work out. The genin had no choice. Then Shinnen has a moment of weakness. His student was passed out or worse, and he had not intended. He knew now that he could strike the jounin. In battle you never get distracted or was this just a trap that the young genin would fall for. He pondered on his actions for too long. The jounin was turning to face the genin.

"Hey, Zulan is it? dont worry about Amedare, she'll be fine. You should be worrying about yourself now,"

"Yes" He replyed few moments passed as he looked into the eyes of the jounin. "I know nothing of your student." he says with no remorse. "How can i truely worry about her" Zulan had strange sound in his voice. He has never seid anything with no remorse. Altho what he says is very true. He knew nothing of her [ersonality. Only her short and sweet joke showed a child. He had not noticed the chakra for almost minutes after the fact. He studied the techninque of the taijutsu. He knew that it was a medical taijutsu fighting style. He then wondered of what abilty did the jounin study this. After a few secounds the jounin spoke to the tall genin.

"So, are you gonna give up or do you want to fail miserably"

Zulan replyed to the jounin with a fast note "I would much rather fail miserably then give into the enemy" He shakly moved his foot to his left. He made a fighting stance facing the great jounin of bide. He had almost nill chakra, and stamina. He couldnt hold his own for but a few secounds. He still could try his might with the jounin. He ran a few steps only to drop to his knees. He looked to the jounin still with his faux smile...

A few moments later He woke to his feet. He was in a type of house. There was a faint smell of brunch. The genin could even hear the sounds of birds. He could hear the wailing of the breeze. He breath in deep tasteing the brunch of something in the distance. He started getting the memory from the day before. The terrable endurance the genin had endured. He felt like something had smacked him in the head. He then rose from the bed he had slept in. Zulan looked around the room, it was a nice room. He heard something knock on the door. The young genin questions "Hmm come in??" The door then opened not showing who was entering the door....
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The previous day had given no blessing to anyone, at least not one known or seen with the naked eye. The skirmish Shinnen had for both Zulan and Amedare ended in distraught and disappointment. Both of them passed out before he could train them some more. The lack of chakra in Zulan's part nad the lack of stamina and will-power in amedare's prove to be their greatest weakness. Although, Shinnen was impressed by how they got to work as a team in such a short amount of time.

"Gotcha!" Amedare exclaimed, having difficulty in controlling her human emotions. She was too tired and weak to do so. She knew she was going to go down for the count. She was feeling tired, too tired, like the demon inside her had succeeded in groping her consciousness. "Must be the excitement..." She tried calming ehrself down as sweat continued to grace her cheeks.

"Stop smiling! You're already beat!" Amedare's mood changed after noticing Shinnen looked more confident than she was. The dark circles under her eyes justified the fatigued that had overcome her. A boisterous laugh escaped Shinnen. "Not quite."

Shinnen was just too experienced for her. in a flash, the shinnen caught by mud dissolved into water. he momentarily appeared next to the Genin. "Just like that?" With a gentle nudge, Amedare fainted.


After turning to Zulan and defeating the deido bunshin ambush, Shinnen overpowered the Genin much to his disappiontment. He had easily done so. he figured it was the lack of experience he had. Though it was admirable for him to continue fighting instead of just surrendering. He would make a good Bide Genin, he thought.

"Hey, Zulan is it? dont worry about Amedare, she'll be fine. You should be worrying about yourself now," The Jounin calmly smiled a faux sneer.

"Yes," Zulan loosely replied. "I know nothing of your student," the words escaped him donning an air of something not with remorse. "How can I truly worry about her." Shinnen smiled. he was telling the truth. he was a good Genin. A shinobi was known to hold his emotions for himself in the face of the enemy and he was exemplifying the fact well.

"So, are you gonna give up or do you want to fail miserably," He taunted him again.

"I would much rather fail miserably then give into the enemy," Zulan quickly countered Shinnen's fighting stance with his own. The Jounin figured it was quite amusing for someone to hold their ground in that condition yet it reminded him of his younger years as a Genin. He gained the nickname "Blue Rage" because of his hot tempered battle styles. Zulan rushed at him. The Jounin noticed the genin's awkward stance and he remained in a calm manner. A few seconds into running and Zulan fainted.


Shinnen stood tall over the fallen form of Zulan as he looked on at Amedare on the tree branch. "Sigh..." It escaped him with little effort. "And i thought it was going to be an interesting day." The fauz smile was still donned as he contemplated on the events right about. Zulan was a good ninja that follows the shinobi way but he lacked proper control and usage of chakra. Amedare on the other hand was a quick tempered shinobi that has the strength to suppress the demon inside of her but lacked the proper use of diversion. Both would make good Chunins someday, if they would do somthing about their weaknesses.

The next day, in the humble abode in the dwelling center of Bide, a genin was sleeping soundly, recuperating from the loss he had received a day before. The smell of steamed fish and cooked rice wafted through the mediocre home. from the outside, the birds were singing, bringing about serenity of a new day. Mere minutes later, a knock on the other was heard followed by a large bag being dropped on low ground.

"Hmm... Come in," Zulan was half conscious as he murmured the words that veiled the fact that he was not in his own abode. The door swang to a creak as a man with glasses walked in carrying a large bag full of what looked like stacked documents. "Oh, you're already awake. I'm Zabuza. Shinnen and Amedare will be back later." The same faux smile that Shinnen had worn was display on this other man's lips.

On the other side of the village, Amedare was within the grand lake that encased a far end of the whole carving. She was immersing her self in it, getting in touch with herself and becoming one with water. Shinnen sat on the edge of the lake, his legs crossed while his arms clasped in the seal of the Horse. The young Yuugo was meditating, trying to subdue the inner demon and trying to win herself back.
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