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Elfen Liez
Topic Started: Sep 5 2007, 12:20 PM (166 Views)
Lala
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Bang, Bang!

The first shot fired was useless, flung away by the arms of a dark angel. Scarlet hair strung over the abyss for eyes this witch owned, used to watch the blood pour from the helpless doctors and nurses that were left in the room. The walls were stained red, inhuman hand prints painting the walls crimson. The white tiles were blocked from view, the glassy shine from this operating room and its lights gone and left for naught. This place belonged to the girl which lay on the theatre table, eyes half open and uncaring. Yellow, like a cat… and just as dangerous. She sat up. She was almost robotic.

“La la la…”

She hummed a tune, her expression dazed from the drama around her. The corpses which laid all around her frozen, she was the only one left.

No.

There was one other in this room who was alive, but he wasn’t moving anymore. A doctor flung onto a wall, then with unrecognisable speed he was moving inanimately across the room and then being pushed up and slammed against the ceiling. Her mental arms could feel him, fingers prodding his body for movement… and then there was a tremble. He was waking up. “Mm.”

If a smile could appear anymore sadist, then it definitely was something to concern over. The gun that had previously belonged to this doctor became afloat in mid air, slowly.

“… La la la…”

Crack…

The gun had pierced through the mans’ skull… and it oozed. Oh, how it oozed. Crimson as the blood that dripped from the ceiling, the woman blushed with excitement. Drops landed on her forehead, no care at all. What a deed she had committed, she wanted to commit again.

What is there left to do, but join the cause to stop her!

[no no.. no....]
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Shin Draven
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Whoever the moderator was that destroyed the link to the site should be shot. This is the advertising and spam forum. Lala has the right to post this.
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T@Z
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HA-HA!
Hm... Was not me. I was sleeping when this happened. Maybe she got it wrong?
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MascaraStory
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Lady sing the blues so well
Uhhhhck
Elfen Lied.
What a disturbing show that is.

It's quite possible that it was removed due to content.
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Panda Bard
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Shining Finger!!!
Usually if a link is destroyed its by cloud because they will not allow him to advertise NSL.
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Shin Draven
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The People's Champion
I don't think he was on around that time....
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T@Z
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HA-HA!
Prolly. I saw the last one. What was it again? Nvm. Whats the point of mutual respect if they wont let us advertise in their forum when they can advertise in ours?
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Shin Draven
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Such a shame.... I don't know the situation but I am not impressed none the less.
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[-Cloud-]
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Looking at the mod logs, no one edited this post. It seems that they didn't include the link.
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T@Z
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HA-HA!
he... i knew it. XD
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Shin Draven
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Wow, then people are getting retarded....
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Kenny
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Meteorain (Lv3)
Shame there's no link, that person was a nice writer... just like me hehe
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Mattox
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Eternal Legacy
Happens surprisingly often, sadly.
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Kaos
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Grenade Bomb (Lv2)
I forced them to forget to add a link with my mind.

Truth.

I AM BEYOND LOGS.

o.o
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[-Cloud-]
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
*Gasps*

No not that!
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Lala
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ty for the compliments but :unsure: uhm... am I allowed to spam here?

I showed some people my original post and they said that blood and gore so weren't my thing lol and I should stick with the nicer stuff........

“She looked up from the ground she lay on, her head limply facing the sky. The dotted fixture in the air, the spiralling looking glass of heaven, it only seemed to rain with lights and spectacles. It was simply, yet so beautifully just like him… the gentleman that took her heart. He would come running towards her with the force of a rainbow and the only gold laying in his arms would be her.

Just then the stream of a blue and red dashed across the portrait mantelpiece hooked up in the sky, a shooting star. She closed her eyes for a mere second, making a wish and almost hoping this single greatest moment would last forever. Inspiration, like no other.”

Join a writers’ paradise today!

http://z11.invisionfree.com/linsay_writers...ex.php?act=site
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Kaos
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Grenade Bomb (Lv2)
That's funny...

A writer's paradise is a board that doesn't exist?

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Kenny
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Meteorain (Lv3)
*snort* I'm glad somebody get's it =P
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