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Yon, Zythe; Yon Puppetire.
Topic Started: Sep 8 2007, 06:42 PM (224 Views)
Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Name: Yon Zythe
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan: Yon
Location: Bide
Preferred Jutsu Type: Puppetry.

Personality: Zythe is probly one of the high hoped men of his village. He has many things that give him hopes. One of his high hopes is to find, strength in puppetry at a younger age. He holds a strong strength, He hopes that one day he can become a legendary jounin. He hopes that one day, He can defeat those that killed his older sister Yon Emma. Zythe as a great fear of becoming old. He does not want to lose his abilty to defend his village. He does not want to become enable. Zythe has other fears as well. He has a fear of being enable to defend family members. When he was about five his sister was taken away never to be seen again.

Zythe has a normal reaction to most strangers. He does not avoid strangers. He naturaly tries to get to know them. Zythe does not do well with his enemies. He will most of the time Confront and defend something that has happened. He works hard to try and get to know people he likes, Even more so when there are girl he likes. Zythe does not have many secrets, not everyone has secrets.


Appearance: Zythe has a handsome face, Something that is never forgettable. His Skin is smooth for a male, most remark on it on touching. He has two light silver eyes gleeming like two moon midnight sky. He has medium linked going down to his eyes,very messy dark red hair. Zythe has almost no scar's on his body, for any he has are to small to be noticeable. He wears very loose clothing, Such has a robe. He wears a white and black robe. His robe is mostly white, Ending with black trim.Under these these robes are his two extra born arms. The arms that all yon family members are more with. Other then that there are his tight clothing he wears, they are made for Yon members. Zythe wears has a cloth that is around his neck, *Kakashi* and is able to bring around his mouth. There is birth mark on his right leg. The birth mark looked more like a small cut. He also is very tan, spending all his time outside.

Money: 30 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 10
Intellect: 20
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength: 5
Stamina: 5
Agility: 5

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 0
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 0
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 6
Medical Practice: 10

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 0
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 25

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 0
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 10


Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu
None

Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu

Tekishutsu (Extraction) [MJ]
Description/Seals: [Bird, Ram, Ox] When a patient’s body has a foreign object in it, such as the point of a shuriken, a senbon needle, or an arrow, it is important to remove the object without further harming the patient. Using this technique the medical nin places their hands on either side of the injured area and uses chakra to very carefully manipulate the surrounding tissues in order to remove the object without causing any further damage. Depending on the severity of the wound and nature of the object, it can take anywhere from a few seconds to a few minutes to remove it.
Requirements: Medical practice 10, Ninja Skill 10
Cost: 5

Teikouryoku (Power of Resistance) [MJ]
Description/Seals: [Serpent] A medical nin must always be aware of becoming a victim of whatever their patient is suffering from. With this technique a medical nin temporarily increases their resistance to diseases and poisons. It has no effect on diseases or poisons already affecting the medical nin. This technique improves as the medical nin grows in power and affords greater resistance to a wider range of diseases and poisons.
Requirements: Medical practice 7, Intelligene 5, Plant 5
Cost: 5

Shindan (Diagnosis) [MJ]
Description/Seals: [Bird] The first step in treatment is understanding the problem. With this skill a shinobi uses their hands to carefully probe a patient for problems. This technique is preformed by kneeling over a patient and slowly running both hands over their body, looking for signs of injury that may not be visible to the naked eye. It can detect things such as internal injury, improper heart rate, non-apparent bone fractures, poisoning, and disease. A ninja of higher rank has learned to use this technique to perform a rudimentary examination of a body to determine cause and time of death. A Genin using this skill takes several minutes of work to determine the nature of a problem, a Chuunin takes less than a minute and a Jounin requires only a few seconds.
Effect: Allows user to probe a body for anything medically wrong. Can take longer depending on the severity of the situation.
Requirements: Medical Practice 5
Cost: 2

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit
Growth of Four Arms
Description: The special thing about this clan, is each and every member is born with two extra arms underneath their normal ones. This allows them to hold more things, perform more Jutsu, and climb things easier. Although, this also can cause difficulty in swimming, and just gives the target something else to... well target.
Effect: Allows one to wield more weapons, perform two Justus at once, and perform special Jutsu.
Requirements: None
Cost: None


Seal Requirements
Description: [None] Having Four arms allows you to perform two seals at once. Meaning, starting at 1 sealing will allow you to perform Jutsu that require two seals. So every three Sealing you have, allows you to perform two more hand seals.
Effect: Every Three Sealing Skill allows two hand seals.
Requirements: Intelligence- 10
Cost: None


Double Jutsu
Description: [] By performing all of the hand seals and meeting the requirements to perform that many, you can perform two Ninjutsu at once as long as they don't require the use of the same body part. (IE: If it requires you to shoot fire from the mouth, don't expect to use the Sound Jutsu that lets you scream really loudly).
Effect: Allows two Jutsu to be performed at once.
Requirements: Bloodline- 10 Intelligence- 10
Cost: The Two Jutsu Chakra added together and divide by 1.25.


Abilities:

Object Control
Description/Seals: [Focus] This is the control of non-living or willing objects. This is most known for Puppet masters. You create strings made of chakra that connect to an object (As many as up to ten, one for each finger, twenty for those of the Yon Clan). This will allow you to create all sort of movement with objects.
Requirements: Intelligence of 10 and Ninja of 5
Effect: Allows the control of Objects
Cost: 1 every post used

Hidden Strings [Natural]
Description/Seals: After using chakra strings long enough, even the newest of puppet masters can learn to hide the glow of the chakra that usually comes when they are attached to a puppet. This allows for stealth work with puppetry or for other uses of object control.
Requirements: Ninja Skill 10, Intelligence 10
Effect: Allows chakra strings to be invisible, for more stealthy manuvers.
Cost: None

Scroll Writing
Description/Seals: [Natural] This allows you to have the ability to write and use scrolls. With this, you can write down Jutsu and have them used by anyone, this makes traps and written seals easier to.
Requirements: Intelligence of 10
Effect: Allows the creation of Jutsu Scrolls and Seals. Every Five Intelligence brings your Scroll Writing ability to 1.
Cost: None



Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

(Kunai and Throwing stars MAY be replaced with another projectile. Needles, Arrows, ect. They must remain Light and Iron.)

Senbon Needles X10
Description: Light Needles
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron


(You may have ONE Basic Weapon with Medium Weight, it is made of Iron, Bronze or Wood with no special effects.)

Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items:

Puppet Name : Notch
Type : Human
Material : Wood
Weight : Light
Specialty : None

Weaponry : None
Armor : None
Accessories : None
Modifications : None



History: Zythe was born with four arms giving him the abilty of most of his clan. But when he was born his family had a small feud about a few things. Some beleived they should make branchs of the tribe. In the end of the feud, My father and my mother and Distinct relatives. All left for the mountains farther away from there clan home. My part of the tribe is not on good term with the rest. They left on bad ties with the rest of the tribe.

Zythe never knew where he was born, only that they are never going back. But instead of our part of the tribe living and being in a village we lived some where in a mountain. After a few years He began his training as a ninja. I was to mainly work on my puppet use. With four arms puppet controling become much easier for me. Only when he thought things were diming down. Five Rogue Ninja came into our encampment. My father and my mother fought for us to win. In the end they captured his sister escaping away. My father and other powerfull ninja in the tribe left for them. He kept up with his training do his same things his father taught him. After a few weeks later, the tribe members return. His father and other family members had to call of the search.

When Zythe became elven his father and him started work on his very own puppet. He had a practice puppet, but was not very usefull for a real fight. He worked with the practice puppet, only because he didnt have his real puppet yet. They placed many weapons into the puppet. Zythe trained long and hard giving him the Hidden strings onto his Object Control. this will come in handy for the years to come. The young genin finishes up with his puppet, he is about fourteen. His father Jo'Nia takes him to Bide to begin his life as a genin.
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Panda Bard
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Shining Finger!!!
I think having four arms would be a very distinguishing characteristic and worthy of mention in your description.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Hmm Your right im going to add it in there some where.
I also need to know about my Puppet is that fine?
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Hmm Yea i Guess Im Done.
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Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Only allowed to have one basic weapon in/on the puppet. No lethal poison.

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Tyrizken
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NSL Mafia: SupaMan
I know im no mod but...what village is he in? .-.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Not Yet Decided ill decide if this is accepted.
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Panda Bard
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Shining Finger!!!
You dont need to be in a village, hmmm wheres a good example. A certain panda *cough* me *cough* has been in a village since NSL 1 where it was mandatory
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Well i like bide i want another in bide but then again, i dont know.

Mabye Crypt. mabye mirage or the other
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Endless Skies
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Jeeze, quite a few people have totally not read the puppet rules at all, have they? Even the mods. That's kinda... disheartening. But I won't point it out, that would be...

. . . Oh why not, it is my system.

*Now, what is the basic material of all puppets? Wood. Meaning it has a starting durability of 8, since puppets are neither heavy or light to begin with, though that can be changed depending on the make. To upgrade your little puppet, you’ll have to pay for it like any other weapon, not counting the attachments, which are initially, if metal, made of iron. There are some special puppets out there you have to quest for as well. However, unlike other weapons, you can not use a puppet as a starting weapon. You have to pay the 70 for it, even if you want to start with it. Why? Because puppets are much more versatile than a wooden sword.*

As I see that part has been disregarded, I will re-iterate, once again.

You may start out only with a basic puppet if you pay for it. That means a basic human puppet with no add ons. No needle shooters, no weapons, no nada. Your puppet is basic. You may upgrade it later through requests, but it starts out basic. And yes, there have been other puppets to slip through the rules as a 'starting weapon', but guess what? I didn't catch them. I caught you. Have a wonderful day. So, either drop the add ons and loose 70 zenny or drop the puppet.

And I feel so much better now. Stress relief is good.
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T@Z
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HA-HA!
LOL @ Will.

If its any consolation, Zach, we can RP together to get those add ons of yours. Instead of paying "zeny", we can make a thread consisting of paragraphs that would be sufficient for it. Note the Yen and Mission/Quest System on the Finished Topics forum. LOL. Problems with it? You know what to do, PM me. Im quite busy so I didnt catch this, sorry...
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Mattox
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Too much Ragnarok, Will? :P
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Ok now tell me if its accepted and i did read the Puppet thing read it million times but huu just not good enough in the Basic Material i thought it was just kinda tips on w/e lol so sorry mate
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Come on im done.
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Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Bloodline limits don't count to Intellect slots. So you can have more Jutsu/Abilities if you so wish.

Heh, sorry for the puppet thing that'll teach me to only read T@Z's puppet post in sign-ups.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Alright.
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Zach/Torjo.Kazana
Venom - Darkness Is only my arm reach.
Hmm i beleive this is fixed now.
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Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
We'll all live.

So here you go princess...

*stamps forehead*

Approved!
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