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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 18 2007, 07:16 AM (52 Views) | |
| T@Z | Sep 18 2007, 07:16 AM Post #1 |
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HA-HA!
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Name: Yuugo Amedare Thread Type: Mission Link to your Character Sheet: Sig Link to Thread: Son of War Summary Took Alex Uzumaki to Bide Stats you Used Water Bloodline Learn/Obtain anything? Utility Belt Description: A simple belt with pouches made especially for bottles of water. Effect: Carries 6 water bottles, 3 on each side. Weight: Light Type: None Water Bottles (6) Description: Bottles of water that refreshes and replenishes Amedare’s ability for water jutsu. Can sometimes be used to procreate water jutsus if there is no water around. Effect: makes water if there is none, produces jutsu that requires 5 in water stat. Weight: Light Type: None (Both were already approved by Will) |
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| [-Cloud-] | Sep 22 2007, 02:29 AM Post #2 |
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
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Items are okay, no real practical use other than for Water Ninjutsu. Which, what would stop someone from having a pot to carry around with water? Anyway. - Grammar- 1 - Effort- 2 - Plot Development 3 - Closing- 1 - Climax- 2 9 LOTS of type-os, spelling errors and a few grammatical issues. Using abbreviations without closing them off with a period... you did the whole 'seh' thing when you meant she as well as spelled Silhouette wrong a few times. Plot was awesome, your posts were long and full... but the threads ending seemed rushed. |
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| T@Z | Sep 22 2007, 02:44 AM Post #3 |
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HA-HA!
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It was rushed.
XD thanks. Ill fix myself. Water - 5 Bloodline - 4 |
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