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Yukki Kidisuko
Topic Started: Sep 21 2007, 09:30 PM (139 Views)
Yukki_Kidisuko
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Name: Lystra Imogen Cellotei {} Usually known as Yukki Kidisuko.
Gender: Female.
Age: 15.
Clan: Cellotei.
Village: Village-less
Preferred Jutsu Type:Weapon Jutsu.
Personality:
Her thoughts mostly focus on whatever they are doing at the moment. Thinking ahead has never occurred to her.
She has a habit of blinking alot when nervous, surprised or sad.
Her dislikes include: Sickness, Injuries, Anything that could possibly slow her down. She becomes nervous around people she has never met, and thus has an instant disliking to them usually.
She enjoys Childish things, such as picture books and candy. She likes to read, eat, and occasionally annoy people.
She tends to stay close to people she knows, Although is it highly rare for her to actually get to know anyone. If faced with a surprise, she will fall backwards out of habit. Aside from what she may say, she hates the mere thought of dying. She thinks life should be lived as chosen, not dictated by someone else.

Appearance:
Hair: her bangs are sweeped to the left side, some strands hanging in her face. She has shoulder length hair the is somewhat waving on the ends. It's a dark crimson color.
Eyes: Her eyes are a greenish color, the color of fresh pine needles. They have little flakes of brownish red in them. Most people describe her eyes as "warm" a comment which she finds repulsive.
Skin color: she has pale ivory skin.
She has short fingernails which are clean and are a translucent white color. Her outfit consists of a white kimono tied up to her knees with a thin blue bow in back. She has white sandals.
Weight: 117 lbs.
height: roughly around 5 feet, with her sandals on.

Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

(Divide 100 amongst the stats you see below, remove this comment afterwords)

Your stats should equal 106!!!! Not 100...

Mental:
Charisma: 7
Intellect: 14
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength: 14
Stamina: 22
Agility: 23

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 0
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 3
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 0
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 10
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 3
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 0

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 0
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 0

Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu
None

Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit
None

Abilities
Beast-Speak
Description/Seals: [Natural] Very few actually find a use for this. You can actually speak and understand animals. This is something you are born with, and is considered a blessing.
Requirements: [Must Start with] None
Effect: Allows you to speak with and understand animals.
Cost: None

Spiritual Awareness
Description/Seals: [Natural] This is another trait born with. This allows you to see spirits and ghosts, and also certain types of Jutsu attacks that have the user leave the body as a spirit.
Requirements: [Must Start with it]
Effect: Allows you to see and speak with the dead
Cost: None


Walk on Walls
Description/Seals: [Focus] With this, you can walk on Walls and such. The effects of this are the same as the Water Walk.
Requirements: 10 Intelligence, 6 Will-Power and 10 Agility.
Effect: Allows you to walk on Walls.
Cost: None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

She strictly only uses kunai
Kunaix20
Description: Light Throwing Daggers With Light Blue And White Swirls.
Effect:
Weight: Light
Type: Iron


Armor/Clothing
Normal Clothing
Description: Her outfit consists of a white kimono tied up to her knees with a thin blue bow in back.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items

History

Lystra was born into a someone happy family. She had a mother and father and two siblings, both boys.
Her father died of sudden illness, and her mother, terrified that it would affect her children, took them into isolation.
Unfortunately, her two brothers had already caught it, and died too, leaving her mother ill mentally.
Her mother had killed herself not long after that, leaving Lystra to survive by herself.
Lystra thought many times about eating her mother to survive, but couldn't bring herself to do it.
She was taken in by a old woman, whose's family had long ago died. The woman took care of her for a while, teaching Lystra the basics such as cooking and cleaning. She also taught Lystra how to read and write, something Lystra had never even heard of.
She was later saved by Elyushi Hidrica Kidisuko, who wanted grieving over the loss of his own family.
The first time he saw her, he thought nothing of it. But as he looked back, he caught her eyes, and was entranced by their color. He later met up with her when she was sitting by the creek, looking out at the fish. He offered to take her in. She didn't want to at first, but as he visited her everyday she became used to him, and accepted.
"Elyu" as he was called, became her mentor shortly after they met. She became very close to him, and worked hard for his praise. She was able to talk to the spirits of his family, something that surprised and delighted Elyu.
When she turned 14 Elyu told her he had to go for a long period of time. Before he left, he asked her to marry him. She gladly excepted.
A year later, she received news that he was missing. She was devastated, but did not give up hope that he would come back some day. She even took on a new name, "Yukki Kidisuko" Using her lover's last name to support her hope that continues to live on.
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I got very confused with the jutsu's and such..please don't be too mad..T__T; I really tried..I'm just not used to this..
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Kiza!!!
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Thats okay Yukki! It confused me as well. Whatever questions you have you can PM me or IM me on MSN, YIM, or AIM! Oh!! I'm almost always in the c-box, too. So you can ask me questions there as well!

About the rest of your application, I'm sure everyone else will let you know the rest of the things you need ^^ So, I'll help you out with the Jutsu part!

First thing, I would say read the rules part about the Jutsu again, to get a better understanding of it, then if you still don't get it, I'll help you out ^^ Yay! <3
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Sarge
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few tid bits to help.

1) 2 paragraph for both Appearance and Personality is recommended. History should be at least 3 paragraphs

2) it says that she in unusually accurate and that she strictly uses Kunai. that would be Ninja skill not sword skill. If I were you I would but those points in fan, sword, and taijutsu into ninja skill.

3) you have 4 intel slots open which means you can have up to 4 of any combination of jutsus and abilities. Go to the Rules section and pick some.

4) In general go through the rules or else gnomes will rape you and steal your socks just like it says.

5) I'm telling you this as a friend so that you don't get ticked off when the mods come and say no.
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Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
A four in Intellect would mean you can have only ONE Jutsu/Ability as move slots equate to INT / 3 = Slot amount. Though I do realise that was a typo on your part Watashi. At the moment you have 4 move slots.

Everything you need to know is in the Rules section, it has Sub-forums for Jutsu, Clans, and the like. To know what Jutsu you can have you need to read their requirements and reference that to your stats. Moves without requirements have a standard 5-Stat setting. Which means you have to have 5 in a stat that is referred to in the move.

Personality and Appearance have to be a little more elaborate than that. It's good that you gave dot points but you need to expand on that. How does she react in situations, what's her outlook on life? How does she feel about others? Think of things that would be suitable for personality...or look it up.

Appearance, just look at yourself...how do you look? Face shape, body type, weight, length, clothing, minute details, general details.



We'll talk more when those are fixed.
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Yukki_Kidisuko
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okies..i worked on it some more..n_n; i think i messed more up tho..e.e;;
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[-Cloud-]
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I only saw one odd thing. Not against the rules or anything but...

She mainly uses Weapon Jutsu and only uses Kunai.... But... she has not a single stat in Ninja Skill (Which Kunai falls under). Then you have her skilled with swords and fans which she has neither of XD

Just wanted to point that out.
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Yukki_Kidisuko
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xD i know. I'll..I'll work it out somehow. X_x as long as it's not against the rules i dun want to change it. Dx
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