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^^ Hyuuga, Zevv ^^
Topic Started: Sep 25 2007, 01:45 AM (279 Views)
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Name: Hyuuga, Zevv
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Clan: Hyuga Clan

Personality:
Zevv Hyuuga is a very determined person, Believing anything can be achieved through intensive training. He always puts as much effort in both his Ninja missions, and training as he possibly can. You give Zevv a mission you can expect him to work his hardest to complete it. He takes pride in the fact that he is a Hyuuga, But he won't let it go to his head and effect his mindset when he needs is. He doesn't like the mindset of the other Hyuuga clan members around his age, the thoughts of "I can do anything because I am a Hyuuga." and the mindsets of "you can not defy destiny, you can only be great if you are destined to from birth." those thoughts are useless to him. So all in all he is very different in personality from the other Hyuuga kids his age. Some of his hobbies mostly revolving around something physical, he likes to research information on other clans and even the history of his own. When Zevv meets new people he gives his full name, expecting the same from someone else. Once he starts a conversation he goes into discussion about his clan, working into the others persons. He keeps a mental note on all clans he comes across, and if their clan interests him enough he will look them up later.

Appearance:
Zevv has the normal height and weight that the Hyuuga are known for. He keeps his hair short and a little untidy, But it stays out of his face during his training. His white eyes show his determined personality, and can seem very cold in combat. Zevv's clothing style isn't exactly well stylish, he ties his headband loosely around his neck, and he only wears what he feels comfortable training, and fighting in. His clothes are usually black, mostly made up of t-shirts with the Hyuuga family symbol on its back. Around winter time when it usually gets rainy in the desert, He wears a leather vest with a hood over his head to help keep rain out of his eyes. His style of pants rarely changes, during the summer when it can get unbearably hot he can be seen wearing shorts. Zevv also wraps his left arm in black tape for support, seeing it is not his dominate arm. Other than his changing style he always wears his belt only through two belt loops, letting it hang on his other side. He keeps a holster hooked to his belt to hold all his Kunai, and Shrunken. Zevv also keeps a Katana that he is lead to believe as his fathers, strapped to his back with a black leather belt, running along his chest. The swords hilt hovers around his right shoulder.

For better visual this is a drawing of him, its not the best but you should get the picture^^.
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Money: 100 Yen

Personal Status

Rank: Genin
Chakra: 50

Mental:
Charisma: 5
Intellect: 16
Will-Power: 10

Physical:
Strength:10
Stamina: 5
Agility: 5

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 0
Genjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 30
Summoning: 0
Sealing: 0
Medical Practice: 0

Weapon Practice:
Sword Skill: 5
Axe/Hammer Skill: 0
Fan Skill: 0
Pole-arm Skill: 0
Instrument Skill: 0
Armor Skill: 0
Shield Skill: 0
Ninja Skill: 0

Jutsu Types:
Fire: 0
Water: 0
Earth: 0
Wind: 0
Dark: 0
Light: 0
Ice: 0
Thunder: 0
Sound: 0
Sand: 0
Plant: 0
Bloodline: 20


Known Jutsu

Ninjutsu
None

Genjutsu
None

Taijutsu
Gentle Fist
Description/Seals: [None] The Gentle Fist technique allows one to expel chakra from their finger-tips or palms, so that if you were to punch someone, you wouldn't have to hit them to deal great damage. The Catch is, you must have the Byakugan activated to use this Jutsu.
Effect: Uses precise chakra to pierce/forcefully strike a persons inner coil system that transfers chakra around the body and disrupt its flow (causing damage to organs, tissue, and capably winding somebody).
Requirement: Bloodline = 10; Taijutsu = 20
Cost: 3 Per Attack

Hakke: Heavenly Spin
Description/Seals: [None] A very advanced Taijutsu passed down in the Hyuuga main house, it uses a solid amount of chakra expelled from the whole body (as opposed to imprecise bursts from only specific parts of the body, which is the most even your typical Jounin can manage) to stop any attack in its tracks, then push it back with equal force, making it a very efficient defense and also making it possible to use it as an offence.
Effect: The Hyuuga creates a 5-foot diameter barrier made of solidified chakra that expels foreign objects and (possibly) lifts up dust.
Requirement: Bloodline = 20; Taijutsu = 30
Cost: 20


Soaring Dragon Strike
Description/Seals: [None] This is a direct uppercut to the chin of the opponent, after spinning around once to apply more force.
Effect: Bone crushing Force
Cost: 0

Medical Jutsu
None

Summoning Jutsu
None

Weapon Jutsu
None

Bloodline Limit
Byakugan
Description: [None] To activate this, a Hyuuga must focus chakra into their eyes. The user seems to grow a center in their iris, which allows them to see the flow of chakra in a persons body. This has little use for them until Jutsus are developed later on. The clan can also see slightly better around them when this is activated.
Effect: Allows the Hyuuga to see the chakra flow throughout the body. When their Bloodline reaches 10, they are able to see a 180 degree angle around them. Meaning, they can see things to the side, like if they had eyes on the side of their head. Every 3 Bloodline the clan member has, allows them to see an extra 10 degrees. So in order to see the complete 360 degree they need a 54 Bloodline stat.
Requirement: N/A
Cost: 5 to activate it, 2 every post after that.

Precise Chakra Control
Description: [None] Hyuuga are born with exceptional control over their chakra, being able to focus great deals of chakra around their entire bodies without any trouble. This compared to most who have trouble dealing with one or two limbs at a time. Walking on water with the use of chakra and performing a Jutsu at the same time might appear more natural to a Hyuuga than compared to anybody else, but other than that, it is mostly cosmetic.
Effect: Lowers the cost of all Jutsu and bloodline Jutsu (not abilities or bloodline limits) by 20% (1 if below 10)
Requirement: N/A
Cost: N/A

Abilities
None

Equipment/Items

Weapon Inventory

Kunai X10
Description: Light Throwing Daggers
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Throwing Stars X10
Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Zevv's Katana
Description: It is a basic ninja Katana, except for the Hyuuga family symbol engraved into the sheath. It is mostly black wile in its sheath except for its guard,
and end they are a gold color. When the blade is drawn, it has a spectacular shine
and his name engraved into its blade
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: Iron

Armor/Clothing

Normal Clothing
Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description.
Effect: None
Weight: Light
Type: None

Items
None

History

Zevv's history is shrouded in mystery. His story starts at the age of five, anything before this age he cannot remember. So his story starts here...


Zevv grew up in the village hidden in the mirage. He was Born to the powerful Hyuuga clan. never knowing much friendship, except for his one best friend her name was Rikaru Tazuma. It was hard on both of them in the war, it was hard on all children.

At the age of seven, Zevv and Rikaru decided to become ninjas, and enter the academy. Unfortunately a week before the entrance ceremony, fate had played its

cruel hand on the two friends. they decided to go out and play a game of "pretend ninjas", under the cover of night. The dark send a blanket of unfamiliarity over the village, an the two friends got separated and lost in the dark. It seemed to happen so fast, The Hidden Village broke through the barrier, and attacked the Mirage. chaos and confusion fell over the village, as the Mirage and Hidden Village ninja clashed in a swirl of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. someone grabbed Zevv from behind, and hid him in a safe bunker. Time seemed to slow to a creep, Zevv could hear the battles muffled crashing, and the yells of warriors slain in battle. The end came in time, the war was over and the Trikage's life taken. The peace treaty was made, but most importantly the war was over. For Zevv the pain was just beginning, his best friend was never found, she wasn't counted among the dead nor was she counted among the living. The worst is assumed about her, Zevv seemed to be effected badly by the loss of his friend. Zevv enters the academy a week later feeling alone, losing hope of finding his lost friend. For the longest time he keeps away from the other kids. Sticking to his studies rather than looking for new friends. He becomes a student that they expect great things from, his grades are above average and getting better all the time.

Zevv had grown a lot by his eleventh birth day, he was doing really well in the academy. Tho Zevv went a long time without friendship, he was well in his third year in the academy before he found two kids he could relate with. Kiren was one who lost her father During the war with the hidden village. Vissa was one that could relate most to to Zevv, his brother went missing around the same time as Rikaru. They made a promise with one another to find the missing people, Kiren really had no purpose for doing so but she did anyway, possibly for revenge. They worked as hard as they could to become a team of great ninja, they trained hard together and often to hard. Zevv at one time put Vissa in the hospital. It is a long story

-< It was a sunny day they decided to train in the desert with a little game they created, it was a kind of game where they hid themselves amongst the desert, and to reach a preset goal, if they encountered one another before reaching the predetermined area they had a little match, the loser was decided when the first person hit fell to the ground. Zevv had came across Vissa and they started the spar as usual. It started with a round of hand to hand combat, until Zevv made a mistake and missed Vissa. As Zevv righted himself and turned around he found that his friend had vanished. Figuring that he hid himself amongst the sands of the desert, he concentrated trying to spot Vissa amongst the desert sand. Not knowing at the time that he had activated his Byakugan, but before this time he never knew what the Byakugan was like, and this being the first time ever using the Byakugan. He didn't realize his vision was far better than before, he naturally thought Vissa had cast some new Genjutsu he had learnd. Vissa burst from the ground ready to strike not knowing what was about to happen. Zevv was caught offguard and he reacted with a gentle fist thrust to Vissa's Left chest area, He felt Vissa's ribs crack, as he flew a good distance from the strength of the punch. Zevv knew Vissa was hurt bad when he didn't get up. Zevv ran to his friend, and as he did so he thought "He should be able to get up, iv hit him with much harder thrusts before." Kneeling down next to Vissa, he knew something was wrong instantly, by Vissa's erratic breathing. Zevv didn't hesitate to pull his injured friend onto his back. He ran as fast as he could to the village's hospital, He wished Kiren was there, she was the one studying the medical Jutsu. Vissa was rushed into emergency care as soon as he was through the door. Zevv explained what happened to a nurse, explaining the hand to had fighting right down to Vissa laying on the ground unconscious. The nurse also seemed really interested in the fact that Zevv was Hyuuga, this didn't help Zevv at all in his panic as the nurse ran off with the information he gave her. He started to leave, and to find Kiren, to explain what happened and maybe find out what happened. As he reached the door he ran headfirst into her. they both stood up and brushed themselves off, Kiren was a little more red in the face by the way they landed, Zevv landing right on top of her. He explained what happened to Kiren, just to find she knew just as much about what what was happening as he did.

Several hours later the nurse came through the door explaining that he was alright, and explained that the chakra flow to his hart and left lung had been

cut off, and that it was a miracle that he was alive. Zevv knew instantly what happened, as the nurse went into explaining something Zevv already knew. After all it was what the Hyuuga were known for, it was the Byakugan and the gentle fist style. Designed exactly for what he did to Vissa. Zevv Blamed himself for what happen. He continued to blame himself until Vissa was released from the hospital, and told him that it wasn't his fault, after all bloodline traits can just seem to pop out of nowhere, right?.>-

There graduation was postponed due to the war with the westerners. Seeing the mirage didn't play a major role in the war and wasn't effected as harshly as
the hidden valley, but it still felt the winds of war. The graduation ceremony was held the day after Zevv's fifteenth birthday. After the ceremony he headed home after saying goodbye do his friends for the day. He unlocked his door and readied himself for bed. As he climbed into his bed to go to sleep, he jumped up with a start, he had laying on something long thin and hard. He flipped back his sheets to uncover a spectacular sword with a note tied gracefully to its sheath. Zevv picked it up and read the rather fine writing
<you father left this to me to one day return to you, i have followed his last words and removed his name from the blade and engraved yours upon it, Zevv you do not know the great history behind this blade and it is to long to leave in this letter, i hope to one day meet you and tell you it's tale>
he read it four or five times over. "what could this mean" he said to himself , as he lifted his new Katana and unsheathed it. The glare of its blade left lights shining in his eyes, even though it was very dark in the room. Zevv could barely sleep that night, he did not want to wake up to find the blade had just been a dream, and the thought kept floating from the depths of his mind "who left it." But he also could not wait to show his friends.

The three friends were finally Genin, they were finally full fledged ninja. They were set to a team together by there teacher. He seemed to know that they would have argued if they were split up, and that they were already a well matched team to begin with. They were set with there Jounin teacher, he was a odd person by the name of Kai Lee. They started there advanced training, and they were dong well at it, Until Zevv had badly cut himself with his new sword, and as he sat in the hospital recovery room. Kiren had came by for her almost daily visit to tell him, that they were set a mission to check out a place called the "black winds fortress". Weeks later Zevv was fully recovered and ready to go and train with his team, only to find that they still have not returned from there mission. Zevv was devisated by the news.h ran to the Trikages office, and only heard the same story. The kage told him what happened, that they were captured by some unknown ninja near the Village hidden beyond the crypt. They didn't know of there whereabouts, and the Trikage had sent whole search team to search for them. Zevv was astonished by the news, he had no idea of what to do. The Trikage told him to rest up as much as he could, and that he would begin training with a replacement teacher until the problem was resolved.

Zevv Was very worried about his friends as he began his training. His new replacement teacher was a member of the Hyuuga clan, as he was and he was very strict as well as very demanding, perfect for Zevv. He learned a lot about his clans past that he never knew. He was also trained in the Gentle Fist Taijutsu. and he even learned the advanced Hyuuga clan Jutsu The Hakke better known as the Heavenly Spin. He gained a lot of experience with the Byakugan as well. Zevv worked with all his might on his training, always wondering where his friends were...

His story continues...
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Hakke: Heavenly Spin
Description/Seals: [None] A very advanced Taijutsu passed down in the Hyuga main house, it uses a solid amount of chakra expelled from the whole body (as opposed to imprecise bursts from only specific parts of the body, which is the most even your typical Jounin can manage) to stop any attack in its tracks, then push it back with equal force, making it a very efficient defense and also making it possible to use it as an offence.
Effect: The Hyuuga creates a 5-foot diameter barrier made of solidified chakra that expels foreign objects and (possibly) lifts up dust.
Requirement: Bloodline = 20; Taijutsu = 30
Cost: 20

this requires 30 Taijutsu you have twenty

appearnace and personality need to be longer

your stats add up to 100 not 106
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dragon
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Ok i belive i made his personality and appearnce more thurogh and i fixed the problem with the heavanly spin jutsu, i just accedentaly switched the bloodline and taijutsu mixed up


so all in all i hope its better now ^^
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Panda Bard
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first off: the things that say dont change the below, or your stats should = need to be removed.

Second: adding extra spaces doesn't make it look longer it makes it look less professional one line between things in enough.

Third: I would still like to see a longer Description, and Personality, this is a 1st shelf clan, and we expect a lot out of you to play one
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OK i did all i could think of to the personality that i can currently think of now :( .
i added a nifty new Katana to the mix i worked it into the history, items, and appearance iv looked it over for the please remove before posting things, and i reduced everything in the app to one line difference i cant think of anything also i can do to make it better :( i hop it is OK to you all now :lol:
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I'm going to go out on a limb and say you are better off playing a non bloodline character first.

Somehow, I don't think you are capable of playing one. Call me crazy, but you should make a non one first to encourage us that accepting this 'Hyuuga' isn't going to be a waste of our time.
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Shin Draven
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How about this....You give this a once over, and edit that history a little more. Kaos, don't be worried about his "ability" to role play as a bloodline or non-bloodline. He wants a Hyuuga, so let him have one. Personally I think that if he invests time in it, he has much potential.
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dragon
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ok i have fixed the spelling on it im lookin it over now
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Cain
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Well...Dragon's app is actually better than some bloodline characters that have been approved in the past. So yeah.

Dragon, if you promise me that you'll work 10x harder with your spelling and grammar and proofreading then I shall approve you here and now.
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dragon
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PROMISE !!!!!!!!!

and sorry I'm still looking over the history i got side tracked
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Cain
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Darkness Embodied, Fear Incarnate.
Ok, if you fail to keep your promise this character will be pulled and you will be banished from all clans in the database.

Here you go princess...

*stamps forehead*

Approved.
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