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| Kiza!!! | Nov 17 2007, 09:22 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Suzu Hagurake Yon. Gender: Female. Age: Seventeen. Clan: Yon. Preferred Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu. Personality: Suzu has three main keys to her personality that make her an oddity of a person. She is a kind and encouraging person to anybody who manages to get on her good side, which is quite easy considering she is open minded and loves to try new things. Suzu is the type who won?t actively go out and meet people. Instead, she prefers to sit off to the side and watch people mingle and interact with each other, studying them and how they act together. However, this does not mean she is shy. She simply prefers to have other people make the first move during interaction, so she rarely speaks first in a discussion. Once she gets into a conversation, she becomes engrossed in it and actively commits her mind to it as long as it isn?t mindless prattle or small talk. However, she is not necessarily a chatterbox either. Suzu is the type who will listen to a stranger?s problem and offer advice, though she is sort of a tomboy and tends to give gruff and painfully truthful solutions. She is not afraid to say what is on her mind, regardless of social status or personal feelings. Because of events in her past, Suzu has developed a bloated sense of justice over the years. Growing up as a person different from those around her, she understood at an early age what it felt like to be stared at and avoided. However, her parents taught her patience and understanding, so Suzu endured everything that bothered her as a child. Suzu is the type who would stick up for them someone who is being bullied or picked on. Because of this, she began to come to the realization that she was different from others for a reason, and that it was her duty and right to defend those who are being tormented. From here, she also developed a slightly undesirable quality as well. The third key point of Suzu?s personality can be summarized in one quote. In the anime/manga One Piece, the character Arlong said, ?Tell me, what hopeless difference is there between you and me? It?s our very species!? Suzu grew up to become extremely racist. She knows that she is racist, but she finds nothing wrong with it. She knows that humans and ?inferiors? (as she sometimes calls others) deserve respect as a living being, it?s just that she deserves more for the simple reason that she is a Yon. Whenever she thinks of somebody as inferior, she doesn?t necessarily think of it as a bad thing and has a hard time understanding why it offends people. It is because of her ?superiority? that she puts it on herself to live her life with one solid and unchanging rule. ?Administer justice.? Her superiority complex only added to Suzu?s firm believer in the concept of karma. It has gone so far to develop to the point that a good person who does something that she deems wrong will receive some sort of punishment at her hands. Besides that, Suzu is very straightforward and tends to act in ways that reflect how she feels. If she is in a good or a bad mood, it will be easy those around her to tell. Over the years, due to the emotional stress caused by others and herself, Suzu developed a slight case of Bipolar disorder, so her mood tends to sway in one direction or the other in the morning and usually doesn?t change until several hours into her day. However, these are usually only in chance cases in which she will be extremely set in one mood. Suzu usually is able to overcome this and lead her emotional life normally. Lastly, because she traveled a lot as a youth, Suzu feels confined when not allowed to move around from place to place and can become irritated when she remains in one place for too long a time. For this reason, she is likely to take unrewarding missions and jobs over well paying ones if she thinks it will give her a chance to leave the village and travel a bit. Appearance: Suzu has the appearance of a healthy, teenage girl. A healthy, teenage, Yon girl, that is. Most of her physical qualities are that of a well built but scrawny male. She stands about 5? 8? tall and is slightly better built than most girls in terms of mass. Her arms are slightly longer than normal length, leaving her lower two arms to dangle down to her knees. Her legs are slightly longer than normal, making it so that she gives the impression she is constantly slouching. Her breasts are a normal size for her age. As for her muscle build, she is slightly less developed and appears lean rather than ?built?. Due to her excess time in the sun, Suzu has developed a healthy tan over the years. Suzu is a person who dresses mainly for her own comfort, so she tends to wear a mix between men and women?s clothes. Depending on her mood, she may decide to go out in baggy pants and a tee shirt with two holes cut out to accommodate her arms or she may walk around in a stylish yet modest dress. However, whenever her mood is stable, she tends to wear an odd arrangement of clothes. Suzu chooses not to cover her fused toes and for some reason feels that it is best for her to wear Geta, the elevated wooded sandals that samurai usually wear. However, she does occasionally decide to wear socks. She wears a pair of brown, loose, bellbottom pants than hang down and nearly covers her toes. Moving up, Suzu wears a loose, tan shirt that has had its sleeves cut off and fits somewhat snugly around her neck. In replace of what would be sleeves, Suzu wears detached sleeves that were cut from tight, black, long sleeve shirts that fit over her arms. They start at her knuckles and reach to almost an inch away from where they are supposed to attach to the shirt. They are attached by loose threading that simply keeps them from slipping off. Suzu wears her scroll pouches so that they hang off her hips and her shuriken/kunai holders on the forearms of her two lower arms. Suzu always wears a bead necklace given to her by her short-lived lover, only taking it off for sleeping and bathing. Suzu?s cute face is complimented by her various facial qualities, a few of which are her deep silver eyes, her oddly thin lips, her pointed nose, and her blood red hair. Her face, which is neither too long nor too squished, comes into a slightly pointed chin. She usually wears her signature lopsided grin, leaving her mouth slightly open so her right canine tooth stands out. Her thin eyebrows are able to move a great deal, allowing Suzu to give her face a great deal of emotion with only their use. Suzu?s hair hangs off her head, flowing straight down to the middle of her torso before it stops. Suzu doesn?t wear any jewelry besides her necklace, but occasionally takes the time to paint all twenty of her fingernails black. Other than that, Suzu has a small birthmark on her left breast that greatly resembles the Japanese kana for ?Heart?, which looks somewhat like a fish hook with the point facing left Village: The Village Hidden in the Mirage Money: 20 Yen Personal Status Rank: Genin Chakra: 50 Mental: Charisma: 11 Intellect: 15 Will-Power: 12 Physical: Strength: 8 Stamina: 10 Agility: 11 Skills: Ninjutsu: 3 Genjutsu: 0 Taijutsu: 0 Summoning: 0 Sealing: 7 Medical Practice: 0 Weapon Practice: Sword Skill: 0 Axe/Hammer Skill: 0 Fan Skill: 0 Pole-arm Skill: 0 Instrument Skill: 0 Armor Skill: 0 Shield Skill: 0 Ninja Skill: 24 Jutsu Types: Fire: 3 Water: 0 Earth: 0 Wind: 0 Dark: 0 Light: 0 Ice: 0 Thunder: 0 Sound: 0 Sand: 0 Plant: 0 Bloodline: 20 Known Jutsu Ninjutsu True Clone Description/Seals: [Spider, Sky] Growing out of your back is an exact replica of yourself, except for the fact that he has two arms, and you do as well. Part of your own body comes off of you and there is two of you standing there as if you were twins. Your Physical and Mental stats are cut in half and you have those stats equally. Effect: Creates a True Clone Requirements: None Cost: 10 Genjutsu None Taijutsu None Medical Jutsu None Summoning Jutsu None Weapon Jutsu None Bloodline Limit Growth of Four Arms Description: The special thing about this clan, is each and every member is born with two extra arms underneath their normal ones. This allows them to hold more things, perform more Jutsu, and climb things easier. Although, this also can cause difficulty in swimming, and just gives the target something else to... well target. Effect: Allows one to wield more weapons, perform two Justus at once, and perform special Jutsu. Requirements: None Cost: None Special Seals Description: This is definitely something only this clan can do; it is perform new seals that require four arms to do. This clan had created new ways for Chakra to flow through their body and into Jutsu that are more powerful. A list of the Five Seals of Yon will be listed before the Jutsu. Effect: Allows Rare Jutsu to be performed. Requirements: Bloodline- 20 Cost: None Seal Requirements Description: [None] Having Four arms allows you to perform two seals at once. Meaning, starting at 1 sealing will allow you to perform Jutsu that require two seals. So every three Sealing you have, allows you to perform two more hand seals. Effect: Every Three Sealing Skill allows two hand seals. Requirements: Intelligence- 10 Cost: None Abilities Object Control Description/Seals: [Focus] This is the control of non-living or willing objects. This is most known for Puppet masters. You create strings made of chakra that connect to an object (As many as up to ten, one for each finger, twenty for those of the Yon Clan). This will allow you to create all sort of movement with objects. Requirements: Intelligence of 10 and Ninja of 5 Effect: Allows the control of Objects Cost: 1 every post used. Equipment/Items Weapon Inventory Kunai X10 Description: Light Throwing Daggers Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Throwing Stars X10 Description: Projectiles with sharp edges all around. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: Iron Puppet Name: Blutige Messer Type: Man Puppet Material: Wood Weight: Medium Specialty: Weapons Weaponry: Hands/Feet: While not a hazardous, or technically even a weapon, all six hands have three fingers and a thumb, giving the ability to hold objects. The two feet are designed the same way, only they have two fingers and a thumb. Armor: None. Accessories: None Modifications: Retractable Blade Description: A blade that is hidden within an arm, leg or mouth that is able to be jerked out of the location at whim. Requirements: 20 Ninja Skill Effect: Adds a retracable blade to an Arm or leg. Weight: Medium Material: Iron Description: Blutige Messer stands roughly six feet from head to toe and consists of two legs, one almost rectangular piece for the body, two arms, and a head. The arms and legs are divided into segments the way that human appendages are: upper and lower. Blutige Messer?s hands both have three fingers and a thumb while its feet have two finger-like toes and a thumb. The mouth is a simple hinge jaw with the lower jaw split in two, much like Karasu?s. A zigzag pattern has been carved inside the mouth to make it appear like Blutige Messer has sharp teeth. Blutige Messer has a single glass eye in the middle of its head that seems to always look at its opponent. Lastly, Suzu has added long, black yarn that is long enough to run down to Blutige Messer?s shoulders so that it appears to have messy hair with long spikes. Stats: Speed = Ninja Skill / 2 (12) + Intelligence / 2 (7.5) ? Negative effects of material (0) = 19.5 Power = Durability (4) + Ninja Skill / 2 (12) = 16 Defense = Durability (4) + Ninja Skill / 2 (12) = 16 Traps = Ninja Skill (12) + Durability (4) = 16 Armor/Clothing Normal Clothing Description: The normal Clothes the character wore in the description. Effect: None Weight: Light Type: None Items None History Suzu was born as a single child to a small family in a modest sized clan of Yon located on the outskirts of a deciduous forest that was unfamiliar with the world outside of their village. During her time there, she grew up like any girl might; learning how to climb, making friends, flower arranging, and so on. However, Suzu did not really enter the interest that would change her life until her fourth birthday. On that day, a traveling merchant passed under the village, but was stopped by several curious Yon who wanted to know what he was. He showed then what he had, and the entire village immediately became interested in all of the foreign items, which were simply incredible to them. Needless to say, the Merchant sold out his stock in nearly the first day and came back several times with more goods such as spices and foods. On one of his various trips, he happened to bring a porcelain doll collection, which did not interest anybody in the least. However, Suzu happened to be passing with her mother one day and caught sight of it. She immediately fell in love with the dolls and wanted nothing else. Her mother bought them for her, and Suzu loved them to death, playing with them every single day and keeping them in very good care. She acquired other dolls through the years, but she loved none more than she had loved her first set. When Suzu was halfway between four and five years old, her family decided that they would leave and explore this strange world of things beyond the forest. They were packed and gone within the very same day. Suzu and her family traveled around the known globe for many years, learning new things and experiencing anything there was to experience. Suzu spent a good nine years of her life traveling with her family, and she enjoyed it all. There were some places they went where the people were wary of them because of their appearance, and there were some places that turned them away for the same reason. However, they always managed to find some place in the end, and that was what mattered. However, the older Suzu got, the more she began to notice things. People around, regardless of whether they hid it with a smile or not, always had something in their expression that other Yon didn?t. As time went on, Suzu began to realize that it was uneasiness, worry, and occasionally distrust. She was too young to understand exactly what this meant, but things were to become clear very soon. The night Suzu turned thirteen, her parents were murdered. Their bodies were found in an alleyway, butchered almost beyond recognition. No investigation was done about it, so Suzu demanded that the family do something. However, the only two that were left in Suzu?s family were her grandparents, neither of which were capable fighters. So, Suzu took things into her own hands, began her own investigation, and learned the truth. A gang had killed her parents and was traveling to a nearby town. Suzu soon stole a sword and immediately took to pursuit, but was not able to catch up with them. Eventually, she came to the village where they were headed, only to find them fleeing for their lives. A traveling martial artist and his student had been attacked, but defended themselves and killed several gang members in the process. Disheartened that Suzu was unable to do anything, she returned to her grandparents. One night, her sorrow was overwhelming and her thoughts began to dwell on suicide. However, she had a thought. Killing herself would solve nothing, so she must find a reason to keep herself alive. It was then that she promised herself and her parents that she would always stand for what is right and deliver justice. It was then that she became an enforcer of Karma, as well as slightly racist. From there, the three began to travel again, but the grandparents? age was starting to catch up to them. They eventually decided to stop and live peacefully until Suzu was old enough to take care of herself. The all agreed that they would set up their lives at the next place that they came to, which happened to be the Village Hidden in the Mirage. They are at first turned away because the village had no use for two old folk and a child, but were soon admitted anyways when they offered their services as scouts and workers. They were given a small home and expected to work until they the village was able to get more citizens. From there, Suzu?s life became harder. She spent every day working as an errand girl on construction crews, her four arms helping her to carry many things. Her work was long, tedious, exhausting, and usually unrewarding. She hated it, but she always had her dolls to come back to. Eventually a ninja academy opened, so Suzu grabbed the chance to get away from the construction crews and joined. Fighting for the Village of Mirage was infinitely better than carrying water to perverted men all day. She then spent the majority of her time practicing her ninja techniques, seeing as how her previous job had left her with no love for manual labor. One day, she learned of ninjas in the past that had used Puppets to fight. She instantly loved the idea and took up studying it. However, she was often times interrupted by things that bothered her in her class. Her classmates were alright for the most part, but there were several students who simply delighted in bullying others, especially Suzu. Whenever Suzu saw a person being picked on, she was always there to stand up for them however she could. This got her the attention of the schools delinquents, who often time stopped her to insult her and beat her up. She managed to hold her own in a fist fight, but always ended up losing. The bully?s never really got to her, but there was one person in her class who did. There was another girl close to Suzu?s age in the class who Suzu had saved on various occasions. Eventually, Suzu pulled her aside and explained to her in many straightforward and possibly insensitive words that she needed to start standing up for herself. The girl nodded and shuffled off. Later, Suzu found that she was being picked on again and was about to go help her. However, the girl stood up for herself and was promptly beaten up. Suzu ran to the scene and dispersed the fight. Suzu half expected to get an earful from the girl, but instead the girl stood up and kissed her. This gave Suzu quite a shock, and she took time to herself to think about it. She found nothing wrong with it, and her grandparents were off at the time, so she decided that it could not be a bad thing. Suzu and the girl, who she later found out was named Kishari, started to see each other and became a regular couple. Eventually, as she expected, Suzu was approached by the regular bully about her and Kishari. Suzu had been expecting this, but was quite surprised when he actually pulled a knife on her. The guy attacked her, but Suzu managed to defend herself, using random objects to fight the guy off. The guy accidentally cut himself and left, swearing vengeance at her. That night, Suzu returned home to find her entire doll collection smashed into splinters. She cried for the entire night. When the light of dawn hit her window, she decided that it was time that this bully met Karma. The next day, Suzu approached the bully and wasted no time to beating him to a bloody pulp with anything that could be conceived as a weapon. By the time the instructors pulled her off, the guy was covered in blood and had to be rushed off to a hospital. The bully?s gang learned of this and decided to get back at Suzu. Since they couldn?t beat her in a fight, they decided to get back at her the next best way. The next day, Kishari did not come to the school, and she was announced dead that noon. Suzu went berserk, personally leaving class and going out to kill the gang herself. She found them and began to fight, each blow making her slowly realize why she was the one doing this. She was special. She was unique. She was superior. Eventually, all the gang members were prone on the ground, and Suzu found a sharp piece of metal to kill them with. However, she thought of Kishari, and decided not to. She never heard from the gang again. Suzu?s grandparents learned of this, but rather than being angry, the decided that Suzu was now blossoming into a soldier and was ready to learn the abilities of the Yon. A few years later, the Village Hidden in the Valley declared war on the Village Hidden in the Mirage. Not quite ready for combat yet, the students of the ninja academy were sent to act as carriers, messengers, and medics on the field. Suzu was employed as a water carrier, and had a relatively easy time. The war ended quickly and without incident, sending Suzu back to her normal life with her grandparents. However, when Suzu had turned seventeen, news of a new threat for a land far away reached the Village Hidden in the Mirage. War had started up again, and Suzu was now a likely candidate for a soldier. She was abruptly placed on border patrol, and was essentially unimportant as far as any real fighting went. The war over with, Suzu having done virtually nothing, she returned home and was met with a small surprise. In memory if Suzu?s first time in combat, though she didn?t really do anything, her grandparents had saved their money and bought Suzu a new ?doll?. Suzu was confused about it, until she recognized it for what it was. She happily took her first puppet and has used it as her preferred method of fighting to this day. |
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