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[Pre-Dice]Shino Requests; a hybrid between the insane and logical
Topic Started: Nov 18 2008, 07:32 PM (631 Views)
shinoskay
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Shino virus
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Pending Traits

Defiance
Description: Particularly strong willed compared to a majority of the other clones some clones fight against the Sephiroth gene, this of course requires a high will power to do though and even though they fight it they dont always win.
Requirements: Sephiroth Clone, must start with
Effect: although just as insane, if not more, the clone does not fallow what the rest do and can resist sephiroths control but still has a constant compulsion to do what the other clones are forced to do.
Cost: None



Traits:

Shock Implant [Trait]
Description: This small machine has been implanted inside the central nerve system of the host's brain as a fail safe to keep them from rebelling. It acts as a receiver able to read and act on signals, so that whenever a certain signal is broadcasting a light electrical surge is used to paralyse them. So as to keep it from frying the hosts' brain by developing too much electrical charge, the host has a special EMP wired into it that will discharge any intense surge. It has the ability to record various several hundred signals.
Requirements:
Effect:
Cost:

Inner-Cranium EMP [Trait]
Description: This specially made device has the ability to discharge copious amounts of electricity that could prove lethal. Although too small to discharge anything from the exterior of the host, it is quite capable at handling anything in the interior of the Cybernetic Humans' body, including the Shock Implant which allows it to act on safe levels.
Requirements:
Effect:
Cost:

Transmitter Add-On [Trait]
Description: Wired to the Shock Implant is the Transmitter Add-On, sitting snugly between the Inner-Cranium EMP and Shock Implant. It has the ability to produce frequencies, signals - radio, digital, and etc. - of all types.
Requirements:
Effect:
Cost:

Pending Limit Breaks
None

pending experiment



Appearance: Apart from a normal human appearance, a Remote-Brained Cybernetic Human has bronze coloured eyes.

Personality: chaotic, temperamental and usually loners

Background:

odd requests(A.K.A. shino's requests)

one of the dial up smilies to be changed to a head that does a complete 360 roll and at some point its upside down (something close to this would be cool too).

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Approved Abilities

Approved Traits

Approved Limit Breaks
Edited by shinoskay, Dec 16 2008, 01:15 AM.
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shinoskay
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Shino virus
ok, i've added some stuff.
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[-Cloud-]
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Since you're different people you need to use different accounts, have different request topics and whatnot.

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[-Cloud-]
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
You cannot request Traits for pre-made Races. Only for Failed Experiments
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shinoskay
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you said we could use the same account... as for the requests, there only for a failed experimant, a failed experimental clone.
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Shin Draven
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The People's Champion
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Rage
Description: Unsure why, Shinoskay is easily angered when he does he quickly becomes irrational in combat. When angry he disregards the notion of Defend and doesn't much care for evading as such he no longer can block and has to force himself to evade which makes for a bad job at doing it. finally because he is angry his accuracy also is pretty crappy too but on the flip side his attacks do twice as much damage and are twice as fast. This lasts for two turns if a successful attack is made and five if not.
Requirements: Sephiroth Clone
Effect: opponent gets the taunt ability while in combat with shinoskay. while active Any attacks made by shinoskay do X2 damage and are twice as fast but shinoskay cant block, agility is halved. Lasts two if one of Shinoskay's attacks lands, five if Shinoskay keeps missing.
Cost: None


>_>

Basically he goes into "Beserk" status. Get's a x2 bonus to damage and speed. But Agility is halved and his ability to block is null. Hm....can you say: HAX. There is no point in blocking when he'd be able to DODGE. Clearly this will not be approved. Rage is basically Insanity w/ hacked stat bonus. Not to mention this lasts more than one turn. Hell no. There isn't even a Limit Break out there that can run that. No, try again.

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opponent gets the taunt ability while in combat with shinoskay.


And what is that about? It doesn't even make sense.
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[-Cloud-]
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No, I never said you could use the same account.

You can't make a failed Sephiroth Clone Experiment. No. That's a hybrid of two races which isn't permitted.

You can either be a Sephiroth Clone
or a Failed Experiment

Sephiroth Clones are already a Failed Experiment but have their abilities set out for one already.

Also, what Draven said.
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shinoskay
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yay, made a new one... you guys are ganna regret not approving rage... trust me.
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Ryuusei Seito
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I would advise you to choose your words wisely, Shino. Acting like that is a great way to get all of your requests shot down.
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Bag o Bones
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and here's the gun!

Ah-hem.

Pre-made races, such as Sepiroth Clones, cannot have custom traits.
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Takeru
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Neither is it okay to take an existing race, change one thing about it and then shove it under the umbrella of 'Failed Experiment'.

Sorry.
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shinoskay
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i wasn't, i actually want this to be added ass part of the sephiroth traits but I know that wont happen yet. As for the way I acted, i was just saying so later I can tell ya I told ya so....

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Kenny
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Shock Chip [Trait]
Description: This small shock chip has been implanted inside the central nerve system of Shinoskay's brain as a fail safe to keep him from rebelling. It's signal is recorded so that whenever it's broadcasted a light electrical surge is used to paralyse him. So as to keep it from frying Shinoskay's brain by developing too much electrical charge, it has a special EMP function that discharges any intense surge. It has the ability to record various several hundred signals.
Requirements:
Effect:
Cost:


I like this move a lot. All it needs now is a Requirement, Effect, and Cost.
Edited by Kenny, Dec 13 2008, 10:52 PM.
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Skyes
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Shino, again, you can't request traits. Those are only for Failed experiments, which you are not applying for. Either Sephiroth clone or not.

Also, I'd like to point out that Cloud and I talked to you about this before. Quite a few people did. The entire 'electrical ANYTHING in brain' idea is a really really REALLY bad idea.

Also, your explanation leaves a shit load to be desired. If it released EMPs, you'd fry the circuitry of the chip. An Electromagnetic Pulse's main point is to stop surrounding circuitry. Also the fact that it stops mechanical stuff from working around you, which is kind of a bonus or drawback either way. But for it to do that, it'd require to be a big thing, not just a chip. EMP machinery is made SPECIFICALLY for EMPs for that very reason. It isn't capable of being fried because it's specially constructed, however that's pretty hard to do.

And that is even if it would work. A chip is used to operate machines, not to be a machine. Chip = programming, not the actual components.

I know what you're trying to do with this and it won't work.You want a universal controller for lots of robots at once. The problem is that if the machine implanted in to you is simply made to SHOCK you, they wouldn't bother giving it more than one frequency as that would most likely be stupid if it they're trying to -control- you with it. Also, as a receiver, it would have no capability as a transmitter.

I'd saw you need to revamp this quite a bit. For what you want, you'll need something bigger than you can fit on your spine or in your brain without them needing to remove skin to let it outside of your body. Even within the fact that FFVII removes a lot of our limitations, you can't just cop out and say "It's all in a chip". Chips are not machines, they're simply programming. It'd have to be a machine of some sort.

Seriously. You seem to want to make everything hard. Have an external remote or something. Jeeze.
Edited by Skyes, Dec 13 2008, 11:04 PM.
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shinoskay
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(posted outburst in spam)



ok, now that i am calm again...... actually, there are a lot more limitations here.... making it harder..... i am making an experiment and its not a clone... please read previous posts.
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Wait, so you're making a Cyborg then?

See the Cyborg race.
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Skyes
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Ya and from what I can tell from cyborgs, basic skeletal stuff requires machine to control. You'd need a lot more control for this, plus as I said before, universal remote with that many signals won't be small enough to fit below the skin or in your skull. It'd be sticking out.

Also, I'd like to point out again:

A shock discharger INSIDE your skull? You'd fry your brain. And stop calling it an EMP. It isn't one.

http://www.patentstorm.us/patents/4880957/claims.html
http://www.freepatentsonline.com/3935508.html

This is what you're after.

Shino, it's doable, however your cyborg would need probably part of his skull removed and parts sticking out of him. He won't look human unless he has a hat on.

That and you'd have to request all of this stuff not as traits but at interchangeable parts you'd have to pay for.

So mostly, end verdict...

As is, don't work. Idea works. Execution, not so much. Work on execution and how you're going to do it.

I'm not attacking you here so stop acting like I am.
Edited by Skyes, Dec 16 2008, 04:07 AM.
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Kenny
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Pay good attention to Will's comment about a hat. And think Astro Boy.

Eeee ^__^
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Lucifer
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I'll say what everyone else is saying in one word: no.
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Rippah Da Kid
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I actually like Skyes version of it, it would be kinda cool to have a cyborg walking around with machinery sticking out of it's head.
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shinoskay
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not to me, and for the sake of preventing another misunderstanding i will explain the design as i have invisioned it. see my little avatar in my sig, the one with the two round circles on his forhead, he's my shinoskay. The two round cirlcles (because cirlces are round) are essentially the antanna's. as for the emp, it actually is, EMP means electro magnetic plus and as far as i know our bodies produce an electro magnetic field as well as it can carry a charge and then discharge it.... is simple terms, like going down a slide and then poking someone to shock them with the static, almost everyones done it at least twice.... i hated the fact that it was done to me so many times in elementary, BUT MOVING ON. so actually it will be physcally visible to the naked eye. the rest i have pretty well planned out too, once the traits are approved i plan to request the abillity called tech prodige`e or however its spelled where at the loss of say, fourty helf i will start out with plus thirty machine op skill or something like that.

on another note within the same topic i finally figured out why i would have such a device on me or even why it would be capable of recording multiple signals like it does. As i typed this i also came to think maybe my "EMP" device might have to be ground based, meening when i dischrge it only machines on the ground or some how connected to the ground are affected. I would appreciate more advice.

finally in terms of appearance, after seeing some of the tech in the games i've played and movies i've watched with Cloud in them and assuming that since this is after cloud's time i can also only assume that the tech would have improved at least a little and they had some pretty high tech stuff from what i saw.... this is just an obvservation and an assumption, if i'm wrong please tell me through pm and i will recalculate and plan my character.

my theory on the level of tech is the only reasone i figured the design of the device would be acceptable.


P.S.

i almost forgot, i'm not sure it would be classafied as a cyborg becuase i a do things a little different then one of them and so thats why for now i have been making it as a failed experiment. once again if i am wrong please pm me.
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This isn't after Cloud's time... technically it's before it since the RPG is taking place before the main game of FFVII happened.

Also; it would be classed as a Cyborg simply because that's what it is. A Cyborg.

Cyborg
–noun
a person whose physiological functioning is aided by or dependent upon a mechanical or electronic device.

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Jingasa_Tha_One
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Shino for an example of what a cyborg would be like. Look up barret from final fantasy. I think he is a cyborg cause his arm was a gun and it could change back into hand format whenever he needed. It was similar to megaman in a way, lol.

But that's a note. A cyborg doesn't have to have sensory devices within him. I think that would vastly make you a full android cause cyborgs still have brains. You could probably have something like a scouter from dbz. It could be goggles that was used to get you information and stuff.
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Gin
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Barret is indeed a Cyborg Tony, Cloud even referenced him in the Cyborg Race history.
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KroniK
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Shino i used to say this to you all the time... People are not going to let you make an army of ANYTHING... in NSL you wanted an army of puppets, now you want an army of robots... Same MO. It didn't work for NSL what could possibly make you believe it could work for CoC when its basically the same staff?
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