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[Pre-Dice]Celest Nameway's Requests
Topic Started: Dec 6 2008, 01:12 AM (511 Views)
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Blessed
Description: Due to her unbreakable spirit, Celest has become Blessed by her own body. She's drawn into her locked powers enough times that her body has become used to drawing on her Limits. Because of this, her body has increased her Limits making what once was shocking, not so much. Now when she goes beyond her Limits in a Limit Break, her body doesn't tire out as much anymore.
Requirements: 40 Spirit 40 Endurance 40 Magic 60% Alignment and Higher.
Effect: Limit Breaks do not empty the Limit Break Gauge anymore. EX: Say she was at 60% of her Limit Break Gauge and used a Level 1 Limit Break, it would put her at 30% rather than 0%. Cannot use more than one Limit Break a Post.
Cost: None

New Ability :D
Edited by Cloud, Mar 21 2009, 01:28 AM.
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
I don't know Blessed seems a little hax to me. It would let you use some of your LB's in succession. You could use teleport to get behind someone and then attack with a level 2 or level 3 LB. I think there should be some sort of recovery period, like one or two post, were Celest can't use another LB. Just a suggestion. :)
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Added that she can't use more than one in a single post.
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Much better. + 1/4 approval. :D
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Altered it to make it less powerful.

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Blessed
Description: Due to her unbreakable spirit, Celest has become Blessed by her own body. She's drawn into her locked powers enough times that her body has become used to drawing on her Limits. Because of this, her body has increased her Limits making what once was shocking, not so much. Now when she goes beyond her Limits in a Limit Break, her body doesn't tire out as much anymore.
Requirements: 40 Spirit 40 Endurance 40 Magic 60% Alignment and Higher.
Effect: Limit Breaks do not empty the Limit Break Gauge anymore. EX: Say she was at 60% of her Limit Break Gauge and used a Level 1 Limit Break, it would put her at 30% rather than 0%. Cannot use more than one Limit Break a Post.
Cost: None


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Blessed
Description: Due to her unbreakable spirit, Celest has become Blessed by her own body. She's drawn into her locked powers enough times that her body has become used to drawing on her Limits. Because of this, her body has increased her Limits making what once was shocking, not so much. Now when she goes beyond her Limits in a Limit Break, her body doesn't tire out as much anymore.
Requirements: 40 Spirit 40 Endurance 40 Magic 60% Alignment and Higher.
Effect: Limit Breaks do not empty the Limit Break Guage anymore. EX: Say she was at 60% of her Limit Break Guage and used a Level 1 Limit Break, it would put her at 30% rather than 0%. Cannot use more than one Limit Break in a post. Doesn't have to keep each percentage.
Cost: 1 MP for every 2% Kept.


Put the changes in bold.
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Approved.
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Mana Engine
Description: An upgrade on the Steam Engine, making it run off of a person's magical energies rather than water. It eliminates the need for a fuel tank as it connects directly into a person by a few small implants built into the engine. Because of this, this engine deducts 10 points from the users MP at the start of a thread. To determine the MP to Gallon ratio for this machine just multiply the gallon usage by 3 (Round up).
Strength/Durability: 8
Requirements: 20 Machine Operation
Material: Bronze
Effect: Adds 10 to Strength; Fuel use Rank D.
Cost: ???


How much would this cost Gil Wise?
Edited by Cloud, Mar 25 2009, 02:09 PM.
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Because of how advanced it is, I'm not entirely sure the 10 Machine operation is enough. But for what your asking for it'd probably cost about 350 gil.
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Oh oops, I based it on the Steam Engine. I'll increase it. XD
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ok yeah, I can certainly see that working.
I'm gonna stick with 350 Gil
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Cannon Stream [Limit Break Level 2]
Description: The robotic arm of Celest's begins to shake violently as it draws parts of machines around it onto the arm, making it larger and larger with every part added on. It doesn't always get every machine as some are just out of the field's range. After the parts have been gathered, long wires drop from the new cannon arm onto the ground, pulling the Life Stream up from the ground into the cannon to be launched at a target. When the blast is finished, the parts are all launched off of the arm, returning it to normal. Whole machines that were absorbed are returned to normal.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2 Access
Effect: Deals 100 Damage + Total HP of every non-cyborg machine part added onto it. Machine parts must be PC owned. The OOC owner of the machine must give permission for it to be used, if they say no then their machine isn't effected by the field that draws it in. The accuracy of the blast is determined by (Agility + Machine Operation)/2.
Cost: None
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Cannon Stream actually seems horribly weak. As we just stated in the cbox not many people have machines as is and it also is completely dependent on others allowing their machine to be used. It only seems like this would be of any use during Epics or Sagas with lots of people and machines.
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Yup or when I also build up on her machines. ;)

In a thread by myself right now, it would do 170 damage. Until I add more onto my machine/buy her transforming motorcycle. :D
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Ikorose, Shinsou
If you want it I'll approve it but Kyosukes normal hit can do that without his abilities :/.
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Cannon Stream [Limit Break Level 2]
Description: The robotic arm of Celest's begins to shake violently as it draws parts of machines around it onto the arm, making it larger and larger with every part added on. It doesn't always get every machine as some are just out of the field's range. After the parts have been gathered, long wires drop from the new cannon arm onto the ground, pulling the Life Stream up from the ground into the cannon to be launched at a target. When the blast is finished, the parts are all launched off of the arm, returning it to normal. Whole machines that were absorbed are returned to normal.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2 Access
Effect: Deals 100 Damage + Total HP of every non-cyborg machine part added onto it. Machine parts must be PC owned. The OOC owner of the machine must give permission for it to be used, if they say no then their machine isn't effected by the field that draws it in. The accuracy of the blast is determined by (Agility + Machine Operation)/2. Causes Mako Poisoning if hit; Mako Poisoning inflicts 15% of base damage to the infected every post for 5 posts.
Cost: None


You convinced me to add that special Status Ailment that I originally was going to add, but thought would be too much, so I didn't.
Edited by Cloud, Oct 23 2009, 06:47 PM.
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So, assuming it hit and dealt 170 damage the mako poision would deal a total of 128 over 5 turns? If so Approved.
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Actually, I totally messed that up. It was upposed to be "base hp" not base damage. >.>;;

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Cannon Stream [Limit Break Level 2]
Description: The robotic arm of Celest's begins to shake violently as it draws parts of machines around it onto the arm, making it larger and larger with every part added on. It doesn't always get every machine as some are just out of the field's range. After the parts have been gathered, long wires drop from the new cannon arm onto the ground, pulling the Life Stream up from the ground into the cannon to be launched at a target. When the blast is finished, the parts are all launched off of the arm, returning it to normal. Whole machines that were absorbed are returned to normal.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2 Access
Effect: Deals 100 Damage + Total HP of every non-cyborg machine part added onto it. Machine parts must be PC owned. The OOC owner of the machine must give permission for it to be used, if they say no then their machine isn't effected by the field that draws it in. The accuracy of the blast is determined by (Agility + Machine Operation)/2. Causes Mako Poisoning if hit; Mako Poisoning inflicts 15% of base hp to the infected every post for 4 posts.
Cost: None


Which means it is their HP on the sheet without any boosts, etc.
Edited by Cloud, Oct 23 2009, 08:31 PM.
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Wait, so they lose 15% of their Max Health every turn for 5 turns?
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Which adds up to be 75% of their BASE HP.

Say you had 500 Base HP. You'd lose 75 HP each turn for 5 turns.

Even if you had a +50% boost to HP from MP+ (Making your HP 750) you would still only lose 15% of your base HP which is 500.

See?
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Thats what I was afraid of. 75%, despite being over 5 turns, seems like quite a lot and I'm not sure about this anymore. I should probably keep my mouth closed for the moment and see what others think.
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I'll reduce it to 4 turns, making it 60%.

Also note that Mako Poisoning is a status Ailment. Similar to Poison, but not cured by Antidote. It can be cured by Esuna or Remedy though or be blocked by anyone who has any item/trait/ability that prevents immunity to all status ailments.
Edited by Cloud, Oct 23 2009, 08:32 PM.
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15% of Base HP for 4 turns. Can be avoided, can be Immune, can be cured...

Approved.
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A Cyborg Upgrade request:
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Connect-All (Upgrade)
Description: If using a machine designed for it, one can connect the machine to their own body with this upgrade. The machine and the user then become one in a sense, adding their stats together. The machine must be designed to form around the user so that the user is using the machine's abilities and their own in combat at the same time.
Requirements: Cyborg or Android
Effect: Users stats and Machines stats come together.
Cost: 600 Gil


Don't know what this should do cost wise.
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Magnet Charge (Accessory)
Description: Whenever the user uses their MP for an Ability, Technique or Materia part of their magical energies used charges their own power source, granting them a power they can utilize in desperate situations. It is simply a black pendant that magnetically sticks to the center of the users chest. It is also quite heavy.
Requirements: Cyborg or Android
Weight: 4
Effect: Increases the user's Limit Break Gauge by 10% of MP used per post. EX: If 100 MP was spent in a post, it would increase LB gauge by 10%. If 10 Mp was spent, it would increase it by 1%.
Cost: 1,000 Gi


These are guesses price wise, feel free to correct 'em.
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Magnet Charge: my approval. Nice idea.

Connect-All: now that's difficult. I really like a useful idea, but what do you plan to do with this exactly? Basically, buy stats I'd think.
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Her machine currently can transform between a jet pack and a motorcycle. When I purchase the next parts to allow it to transform into a third unit (Battle suit) it'll utilize all three Bases, all three Engines and all the parts to be a machine-esq suit that forms around her body. She controls it with basic movements and her thoughts.

Think Samus from Metroid.
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