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Lilica Reynard; Obsidian 0ni565
Topic Started: Dec 11 2008, 03:59 AM (96 Views)
Obsidian 0ni565
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Name: Lilica Reynard
Alias: Rein
Race: Genesis Clone
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Hometown: Wutai

Personality:
Lilica is…weird, even for a Genesis clone. She’s loud, cocky, and despite her vast amount of knowledge, she still manages to come off as insane . But this is what you’ll find on just her surface. Once you get past her mad scientist like wall, its not hard to see her for what she really is, an inquisitive, and well educated young woman. But being a Genesis clone there are certain personality quirks she’s developed since her twelfth birthday. She has a tendency to obsess over something she covets, be it a weapon, a book, or even clothes. For some reason if she cant get it she might get violent, which is a problem considering her natural skill in martial arts. She'd beat you to a bloody pulp without a second thought, the fact that she got what she was seeking would be her only thought towards you. Her much less violent quirk is her speech impediment if it can be called that, Lilica will recite a verse or two from a poem or a book that’s relevant to the conversation. It’s not really a bad thing but it’s a quirk she finds tiresome.

Appearance:
Lilica hails from the oriental city of Wutai, and rightly so. Her frame is a little tall but nothing that cant be overlooked. Her full peach colored lips were always moving as she mutter a verse or two off to herself or went over some invention idea of hers. Although she was born in this city .it was obvious her parents were not her biological ones. She dyed her reddish brown hair dark brown as a child to fit in and let it grow. But even though she was dressing like she was naturally from wutai her odd but beautiful mako infused eyes give her away to the adults of the village,even when she tries to hide them behind her tinted riding goggles. Shes very athletic and since her martial arts rely on her figure and body to be in top shape, she works out religiously. She’s well toned and has a bit of muscel to her even though she looks like a little bookworm. Even though shes living in Wutai her apparel stands out abit, Her chest is covered by a dark blue tee shirt with the kanji for love inscribed on it, her shirts a bit small so her stomach is showing but since shes in great shape it just makes her look better. She has a pair of baggy white jeans she wears for every occation. her blue leather belt finishes off her pants with a silver buckle also emblazoned with the kanji for love. Due to Lilica's...unique take on life she'll sometimes wear her adoptive mother's long red scarf, covering the lower half of her face. she also might wear her white lab coat depending on her feelings. Last her kicks are surprisingly the only Wutai made item. she has custom made slik chinese kung fu slippers, that are soft enough to be comforting and sturdy enought to travel in.

Alignment: 45%
Rank: 3rd Kyu
Gil: 100

HP: 185
MP: 40

Stats

Intelligence: 20
Strength: 40
Spirit: 20
Endurance: 25
Magic: 20
Speed: 30
Agility: 30

Skills

Combat Gloves Skill : 0
Hand to Hand: 0
Casting: 0
Machine Operation: 0

Limit Breaks
None

Abilities

Reflex
Description: Desperation is a mighty thing, when the desperate are hurt and need power to call upon, they may find that they just might get the boost they need to escape certain death.
Requirements: 120 HP
Effect: Agility is increased by 30% when HP drops below half
Cost: None

MP Attack
Description: Tired of your attacks being basic? Add a bit of magical force behind them. What force? Your own!!
Requirements: 20 Magic 20 Strength 20 Intelligence
Effect: Makes attacks that do not cost MP cost MP to do more damage; Spent MP = Extra damage
Cost: None

One with Darkness
Description: With this ability, Genesis clones are able to add a Dark Element to any Spell or attack they do. It costs nothing extra, but may do extra damage to those who are weak to them. This does alter the attack's appearance most the time (Makes fire darker, attacks may glow black, etc.)
Requirements: Genesis Clone; 45% Alignment or lower
Effect: Adds Dark element to attacks of the user’s choice. May cause extra damage to those weak to it.
Cost: None

Magical Inclination
Description: Genesis Clones tend to have an inkling towards the use of Magic and Summoning spells. With this and this ability, the requirements for them seem to be easier to grasp.
Requirements: Genesis Clone
Effect: Lowers to requirements of the Casting stat by 25
Cost: None

Charm
Description: You're a pretty one aren't you? You can Charm almost anyone who may have a keen eye for you. They wouldn't want to hurt you, would they? Okay, maybe a little. But at least they wont hurt you too badly!!
Requirements: 10 Spirit; Character must be at least 18.
Effect: People of the opposing Gender deal 10% less damage to you
Cost: None


Traits

Enhanced Physique
Description: Due to how JENOVA cells work inside a body and the violent nature of the Genesis clones, their bodies are enhanced beyond a normal humans.
Requirements: Be a Genesis Clone
Effect: +15 to Strength and Speed
Cost: None

Constant Aging
Description: Due to the process in which Genesis was made, the body of a Genesis Clone is rapid. There is only one way to stop the process and that is to have the cells of a Sephiroth Clone or Sephiroth's cells injected into you. Aging only happens after the age of 12.
Requirements: Genesis Clone
Effect: Every thread ages the body by half a year. They can stop this by getting Sephiroth Cells from a PC Sephiroth Clone. Aging only happens after the age of 12.
Cost: None

One Winged Angel
Description: Unlike Sephiroth Clones, Genesis Clones have a single black wing that protrudes from the left shoulder. This wing only shows when they are using a Limit break. This wing allows them flight during that time and vanishes after the limit break is used.
Requirements: Genesis Clone
Effect: Sprouts a Black Wind from the left shoulder during Limit Breaks. Vanishes after the Limit Break ends.
Cost: None

Weapons

Combat Gloves
Description: [Hands:2] Two black leather gloves with solid iron balls encased with leather on the back of the hand and the knuckles.
Strength/Durability: 20
Materia Slots: O O
Material: Iron
Weight: 5

Armor

Leather Wraps
Description: A leather tunic Lilica customized for easy and unrestricted movement, it’s a bit racy, as it completely hugs her upper body, but why should her great mind be restricted to looking plain?
Strength/Durability:10
Materia Slots: none
Material: leather
Weight: 2

Accessories
None

Materia
None

Items

Cell Phone
Description: A Cell Phone of some of the most advanced qualities. It's appearance is up to you, but keep it realistic. The phones have many capabilities including Email, Camera, Voice Recorder and even a Video recorder. Sadly the memory isn't that great so the Video Recorder can only hold five minutes.
Weight: 0
Effect: For all your Cell Phone needs
Cost: None

History

‘See, the human mind is kind of like … a piñata. When it breaks open, there’s a lot of surprises inside. Once you get the piñata perspective, you see that losing your mind can be a peak experience. The memories of one female are not great but due to these bleak images, can the truth be unlocked. It just matters in thought, what you think that truth actually is…’
- Unknown Speaker


The quaint town of Wutai … it refused to conform of the life altering changes made by conglomerate electric company Shinra. This company brought about change but the native of the Wutai were led by their elders which found that this company used a material source of the planet and it was slowly draining it. Due to this the Wutai natives refused to conform to the changes Shinra brought about to the rest of the world. But this memory does not begin in Wutai or even know of its existence. It starts in a large building with an unnumbered amount of floors, each with separate divisions and work stations; Shinra Electric company to be exact.

On an unnumbered floor, yeah its unknown still; there was a medical team that helped with the health of their employee’s, especially its militia. Within this department there was an exceptional mind who was yep you guessed it, unnamed. His mind was highly advanced and intrigued by an anomaly. There was a single entity who came from nowhere as a legendary figure. This mans aim was on the darker side of things and to replicate the man in many ways. The only problem is that the man died, or did supposedly. But at the time of his body retrieval a bit of hair was recovered along with blood samples.

The body was never seen again but the scientist got it from the Turk that snagged it and paid the man his promised earnings as the man went into a lab and eventually, after some years created an enzyme in stasis form. Thinking, he needed a woman to inject it into or trick into it. He looked at one of his trusted assistants and smirked. He wanted to come meet the man’s family and celebrate his latest achievement. The assistant didn’t know but he agreed to let the devious man take him and his wife out. The devious scientist injected the enzyme and locked it into a pill only to be released upon the surroundings of liquid, blending in with it’s area quickly. All was set, now he needed to bait his prey.

-

On the fateful night the assistant was given a promotion for the scientists own agenda. The scientist slipped the enzyme pill into a champagne glass of his assistant wife and she drank it to the devious mans delight. The night ended and soon the women was pregnant right on time.

-

(Time would pass)

‘My child was nothing more than a plan!!!’

The once assistant now older than and more distinguished than at the time of his first promotion found out his little girl was nothing more than a set-up. An artificial creation of a dark mind. With that in mind he read more and found out all about his senior’s plan and took his family and ran to Wutai, changing their names through connections and basically starting life from scratch. Knowing his girl was a artificial creation, he never spoke a word of it to his wife nor to his kid. They lived life peacefully for the next 20 15 years. They spent their lives as a resident of Wutai and he noticed several curves within his baby girl while she grew in the years reminiscent of him.

Anger, rage, lust for combat and plain overall control…

Lilica Reynard…
Genesis Clone…
Age: 20…

She would find out what for better or worse really meant.
Edited by Obsidian 0ni565, Dec 16 2008, 07:11 PM.
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Alright, a few things I noticed.

1) You made it so all your Skills have at least 5. Skills do not get that bonus, only the stats do. It was most likely a misunderstanding.

2) You listed Charm under Traits when it is an Ability.

3) You HAD your Iron weapon at 2 weight with 20 Durability/Strength. I understand it was a two handed weapon. But that doesn't lower the actual weigh. Just when you are using it you treat it as it were cut in half when it isn't. Understand? XD

4) Weapon Skill 1 needs to be renamed to the type of weapon you're using. If you want to call them Gloves, Fighting Gloves, etc. Up to you.

5) Your Gil is at 700 when it should only be at 100.

Outside of that. Great character so far. I enjoyed reading her personality and History a lot. You have a lot of talent as a writer.
Edited by Cloud, Dec 11 2008, 02:21 PM.
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Obsidian 0ni565
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ok, I think I fixed the problems.
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Great, only one last problem.

The weight for your weapon is now too high.

The weight to Strength ratio for Iron is 1:4.

So every 4 Strength adds 1 to Weight. Since you have 20 Strength it would have 5 Weight.

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ok NOW im finished ^_^
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Approved :D
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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