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[Pre-Dice]Kyosuke's Requests
Topic Started: Jan 1 2009, 03:06 PM (2,069 Views)
Takeru
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Looks good to me. Approved.
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Gin
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Lightsaber
Description: [Hands: 1] Using Materia as a focusing object, this small blade less hilt creates a beam of energy that is as strong as the sharpest crystal blade. The color of the blade is proportional to that of the Materia type being used as focusing object. These colors are green for magic Materia, yellow for command Materia and so on. If one who is infused with Mako wields the saber they can do such without materia to focus it. The color of the blade is the color of their soul, or more accurately their alignment. Gray for Neutral, Silver/White for a Pure Soul and Black for a Dark Soul.
Strength/Durability: 32
Materia Slots: O O O
Material: Crystal
Weight: 11
Cost: 2050


Slight edit to the Lightsaber. Added two Materia Slots and increased the price by 300 Gil Respectively.
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Final Riku
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Dynamite
I assume that it's not really a lightsaber (as in it cuts my arm off if I merely get touched)

1/4
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
No, it works like a normal weapon xD. It wouldn't have been approved the first time if it wasn't.
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Bag o Bones
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Meteorain (Lv3)
could have sworn i already approved this, so it's approved again.
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Gin
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Lightning Stab
Description: Using the Thunder Materia in Kyosuke's weapon, he slashes at his opponent to cause lightning to strike upon the location of which they are currently standing. The lightning does not only strike the target area though as it spreads in a circular pattern out from the initial strike at a range of Magic/2 in inches. This move is only usable once every three posts as if it was a Command Materia.
Requirements: Thunder Materia, 75 Weapon Skill, 50 Magic, 50 Strength
Primary Effect: Does damage based on [|(Basic Melee Attack) + (Basic Magic Attack)| / 2] x 1.5
Side Effect: Hits area around first strike in a circular radius the range of Magic/2 in Inches.
Cost: Lvl 1 costs 6 MP, Lvl 2 costs 12 MP, Lvl 3 costs 24 MP.

Holy Explosion
Description: Using the Restore Materia in Kyosuke's sword to enchant it with a Holy property, he slashes at his opponent to cause light which shines down from the sky in a straight line with a range of Magic/2 in Feet. The light used in this attack does double damage to any dark or evil creature struck by it though one bathed in the light won't feel much pain, if any, at all. This move is only usable once every three posts as if it was a Command Materia.
Requirements: Restore Materia, 75 Weapon Skill, 50 Magic, 50 Strength
Primary Effect: Holy Melee Damage x2 Vs. Alignment 25% and lower or characters that specifically state they are dark and/or evil. Attacks in a straight line with a range of Magic/2 in Feet.
Cost: Lvl 1 costs 6 MP, Lvl 2 costs 12 MP, Lvl 3 costs 24 MP.
Notes: If a person is none of the above they take Basic Melee Damage/2


Two new techs I thought up.
Edited by Gin, Feb 28 2009, 07:22 PM.
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Gin
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Balls of Steel - Ability
Description: Due to tough training, Kyosuke's body has become so strong that he gives the term "Balls of Steel" a new meaning. His Balls are literally "Balls of Steel".
Requirements: 50 Endurance
Effect: Kyosuke has Balls of Steel and take no damage from an attack that targets said area.
Cost: None


Totally NOT expecting this to be approved but I did it for the lulz anyway.
Edited by Gin, Feb 28 2009, 07:14 PM.
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Takeru
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The White Mage
A Restore Materia would totally not have that effect.

And as for the Balls thing...seems like it would be more of a technique, based off of a more generalized ability...something to do with using magic to enhance the body and such. Increase strength or speed, that sort of thing.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Balls thing was a joke as it says. It doesn't really do ANYTHING. As for Restore Materia, it really would since you can cast cure on undead monsters to hurt them. Always has been that way in FF games. As for against evil people I can see why not, but that's why I'm just using it to enchant my sword with a holy property then slash them.
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Bag o Bones
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They look fine to me. Enjoy.
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Gin
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Eyes of the White Dragon - Level 1
Description: Closing his eyes and focusing magical power into them, Kyosuke’s eyes turn a shade of white and light blue. While in this form, the young SOLDIER is able to see through objects as if he had x-ray vision. Depending on how hard he focuses he can see though thicker objects or more of them. Due to the concentration needed to maintain this power, Kyo cannot more or his eyes will immediately revert back to their natural form.
Requirements: 50 Endurance, 20 Magic and Spirit
Effect: Kyosuke eyes allow him X-Ray vision for as long as he doesn’t move in any direction. He can still rotate his body in a circular motion though
Cost: 5 MP to activate the effect.

Eyes of the Red Dragon – Level 1
Description: Closing his eyes and focusing magical power into them, Kyosuke’s eyes turn black with a red iris. While in this form, the young SOLDIER’s eyes are able to follow someone who has up to a speed and agility of 2x his own. There is a lag with this ability as his eyes only follow at a predicted path behind the person they are focused on. The higher the difference in stats between the two the bigger the delay is.
Requirements: 50 Speed and Agility, 20 Magic and Spirit
Effect: Allows Kyosuke to follow people with is eyes up to 2x faster then him with a greater accuracy then one who had normal eyes. This does NOT mean he can react to what he sees as his stats are not raised by the effect. It can only help for blocking purposes or tracking someone.
Cost: 5 MP to activate the effect.


Two new Abilities =3
Edited by Gin, Mar 7 2009, 12:04 AM.
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Shin Draven
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Byakugan/Sharingan take one... >_>

They need magic effects as well as intelligence. Since you are applying your magic to your eyes...meaning you need intelligence to process what you're seeing. If not, you basically just caused yourself a sensory overload and killed off your brain. Good luck :)
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
I had decided to add a 20 magic requirement to them after a talk to Boppy even though they really don't have ANYTHING magical about them other then the cost and the mention to make it sound cool. I decided to be nice and add a 20 spirit stat requirement too though since you did make all the NSL Doujutsu and you DO have a point but these abilities are weak as hell with their current level. I add spirit and not int by the way because int does not do what you are thinking of on this site, spirit does as all the hearing, smelling and seeing techs use that instead. You really have to look at how weak these skills are too. X-Ray vision is nice but its only as far as Kyosuke can NORMALLY see and if he has to move he pretty much just wasted 5 MP. As for the other, one could literally say at its current level that it does NOTHING since at the ABSOLUTE MOST all it can do is help me block which I will still take damage from a blow, just reduced.
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Takumi
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+1/4 approval to those two abilities.
I see nothing wrong with them.
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Bag o Bones
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Meteorain (Lv3)
post up your edited version, please.
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Gin
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Eyes of the White Dragon - Level 1
Description: Closing his eyes and focusing magical power into them, Kyosuke’s eyes turn a shade of white and light blue. While in this form, the young SOLDIER is able to see through objects as if he had x-ray vision. Depending on how hard he focuses he can see though thicker objects or more of them. Due to the concentration needed to maintain this power, Kyo cannot more or his eyes will immediately revert back to their natural form.
Requirements: 50 Endurance, 25 Magic, 25 Spirit
Effect: Kyosuke eyes allow him X-Ray vision for as long as he doesn’t move in any direction. He can still rotate his body in a circular motion though
Cost: 5 MP to activate the effect.

Eyes of the Red Dragon – Level 1
Description: Closing his eyes and focusing magical power into them, Kyosuke’s eyes turn black with a red iris. While in this form, the young SOLDIER’s eyes are able to follow someone who has up to a speed and agility of 2x his own. There is a lag with this ability as his eyes only follow at a predicted path behind the person they are focused on. The higher the difference in stats between the two the bigger the delay is.
Requirements: 50 Speed and Agility, 25 Magic, 25 Spirit
Effect: Allows Kyosuke to follow people with is eyes up to 2x faster then him with a greater accuracy then one who had normal eyes. This does NOT mean he can react to what he sees as his stats are not raised by the effect. It can only help for blocking purposes or tracking someone.
Cost: 5 MP to activate the effect.


I knew I forgot to do something
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Bag o Bones
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Meteorain (Lv3)
Since these can't really be used offensively yet...

Approved.

I fear what higher levels will bring, though.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Thanks Bones. Don't worry about the higher levels too much though, the stat reqs are going to have HUGE increases in comparison to the increase in abilities power.
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Gin
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Sonic Slash
Description: Having become proficient with his weapon, along with being rather fast and agile, Kyosuke has learned to slash his sword as such high speeds that it sends out a wave of air in the direction of his strike.
Requirements: 50 Strength, 50 Speed, 50 Agility, 50 Weapon Skill
Effect: Range is (Speed / 5) in feet and Damage is Physical Melee Damage
Cost: None


Just something I thought up. May be worked on but I thought I would put it out their for some input.
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[-Angeles-]
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1/4 approved?

I can do that right?
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Indeed you can, maybe in the future it will become a 1/2 though =3.
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I can do halves?
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
It was a joke. Everyone can give 1/4ths but I was saying maybe you would become a Sentry soon since Cloud said you were one of his favorite people in the c-box eairler xD. If you did you could give 1/2s from then on out.
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Shin-Ra Haori
Description: Given to SOLDIER's who show exceptional potential, this haori is laced with crystal to make it strong and durable. There are small golden diamonds, alternating from big to small, along the bottom of the haori. Right in the center of the upper back there is a black and gold Shin-Ra logo to show who made the haori along with what association the person wearing it belongs to. Due to the technology incorporated with the suit though, it still flows in the wind as if it was made of cloth.
Strength/Durability: 30
Materia Slots: None
Material: Crystal
Weight: 10
Cost: 2580 Gil


Changed the Haori a lot to make it more original and to fit in with CoC. No need to keep blatantly copying other stuff when I can make it my own xD. Time for re-approval
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Hmm...any particular reason for the extra 1080 in cost? Crystal is 500 base, and the weight adds 1000 to the cost, making it 1500.
Edited by KurisuMurei, Apr 5 2009, 12:31 PM.
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