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[Pre-Dice]Kamina's request
Topic Started: Jan 19 2009, 06:05 PM (769 Views)
Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Deep Freeze
Description: Kamina lashes out at a specific part of his foe’s body and encases whatever he hits in ice.
Requirements: Ice Materia, 50 Casting, 50 Magic
Effect: Body part hit is encased in ice and becomes unusable for (spirit/20) posts. Fire Materia can melt the ice in half the posts.
Cost: 15 MP per use.

Shattered Steel
Description: When fighting to the death Kamina lets his darker side out for one final blow. He stabs his opponent with his sword and gives the blade one turn. Once this is done their fate is sealed. Their body freezes from the inside out until they are a living statue of ice. Once they’re frozen Kamina withdraws his sword and watches as they shatter into a million pieces.
Requirements: Death Match or Saga only, Ice Materia, This attack must reduce the target’s HP to zero otherwise it fails, 75 Casting, 75 Magic, Deep Freeze
Effect: This attack is a knock out and a killing blow in one. It may not be used outside of Death Matches and Sagas.
Cost: 30 MP per use (not like he’s gonna need to fight after using it)

Pending Limit Breaks
Soul Boost: [Level 2-1]
Description: After being pushed further than before Kamina's inner power comes to the surface. His aura condenses once more but stays spread out over his body. All his attributes are magnified, if just a little bit. The boost may seem brief but when used just right it’s a life saver.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2-1 access
Effect: For 2 turns (post) all of Kamina’s Stats are increased by 50%.
Cost: None


Possible edits in place. I would really like to see Magic and Casting raised to AT LEAST 50 each for Deep Freeze and possibly Spirit/20 for length since at 100 Spirit, which is easy to get, it would disable the use of a limb for 10 posts each. That being said id like to see Shattered Steel reqs raised above that of Deep Freeze just for the same of it though its just a thought and not "needed".

As for the LB you saw so yeah, edited to a possible solution.
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Bowwy
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MOOGLE AWWWWAAAAYYYY!!!
100/20 is 5, not 10.

<_<

Anyways I'm guessing the second technique is just for aesthetics, right? The blow has to actually FINISH the person, so it make sense.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
No no no no no Boppy, what I quoted were his moves WITH my changes in them. I just explained what they were.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Ok, after talking to cloud and getting my new status approved :P, i've updated both techniques. The Limit Break is still under construction. So its just the Techniques for now.

Deep Freeze
Description: Kamina lashes out at a specific part of his foe’s body and incases whatever he hits in ice.
Requirements: Ice Materia, 50 Casting, 50 Magic
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Effect: The body part hit is given Frozen Status and becomes unusable for [Spirit/20] posts. Fire Materia can melt the ice in half the posts.
Cost: 15 MP

Shattered Steel
Description: When fighting to the death Kamina lets his darker side out for one final blow. He stabs his opponent with his sword and gives the blade one turn. Once this is done their fate is sealed. Their body freezes from the inside out until they are a living statue of ice. Once they’re frozen Kamina withdraws his sword and watches as they shatter into a million pieces.
Requirements: Death Match or Saga only, Ice Materia, This attack must reduce the target’s HP to zero otherwise it fails, 60 Casting, 60 Magic, Deep Freeze
Effect: If someone's HP is dropped to 0 by this move in a DM or a Saga then they die regardless of accessories or abilities that say otherwise. Kamina is still able to claim their items.
Cost: 30 MP
Edited by Grey, Oct 18 2009, 02:45 PM.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Deep Freeze is missing its cost and if Shattered Steel has a cost like that then it can have 50 instead of 75 for reqs. You didn't need to take my suggestions completely literal.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Whoops, cost added for Deep Freeze, and Shattered Steel changed. ^^;
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
approved unless problems persist
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
New LB. Approve!!!

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Break Down [Level 2-1]
Description: Kamina is an Empath. His mind absorbs the love, the fear, the joy, the sorrow of others and holds it in. But what happens when he turns all that outwards and gives others a taste of what he experiences? He lets his power build and then releases it in a wave that forces others to experience what he does with his power.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2-1 access
Effect: Kamina releases a wave that deals Spirit x1.5 in damage to anything it hits in a [Total HP / 100] foot Radius. In addition to the damage taken what ever is hit by the wave feels emotions Kamina has absorbed with his Empathic abilities. These emotions are overwhelming to the afflicted and last for Kamina’s [Spirit/10 post]. The attack moves at the same speed as magic. This Limit Break starts with the emotion of Sorrow and all emotions shall be listed. It takes a 10 paragraph thread to gain a new emotion for this Limit Break.
Current Emotions: Sorrow
Cost:
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Tada!
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Too wordy. Plus your LB has a VERY short range. You ahve like 500 hP? That amounts to 5 feet. >_<
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Wordy? I'm not quite sure what your mean by that, but I did alter the move to be a sphere instead of a wave and changed the area of the attack.

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Break Down [Level 2-1]
Description: Kamina is an Empath. His mind absorbs the love, the fear, the joy, the sorrow of others and holds it in. But what happens when he turns all that outwards and gives others a taste of what he experiences? He lets his power build and then releases it in a wave that forces others to experience what he does with his power.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2-1 access
Effect: Kamina creates a sphere with a [Total HP / 10] foot Radius that deals Spirit x1.5 in damage to anything inside it. In addition to the damage taken, whatever is hit by the sphere feels emotions Kamina has absorbed with his Empathic abilities. These emotions are overwhelming to the afflicted and last for Kamina’s [Spirit/10 post]. The attack moves at the same speed as magic. This Limit Break starts with the emotion of Sorrow and all emotions shall be listed. It takes 15 paragraphs to absorb and learn a new emotion.
Current Emotions: Sorrow,
Cost:


I also added a new Technique. Feedback is welcome.
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Ballistic Blade
Description: After obtaining decent skill with both his sword and his guns Kamina has figured out a way to combine their attributes into one. Kamina launches his sword at a foe and then fires a bullet after it. The result turns his blade into a deathly fast projectile with more of a punch behind it.
Requirements: 30 Chokutô Skill, 30 Handgun Skill, 50 Agility, 40 Strength, 30 Intelligence
Effect: Does Weapon Damage [Weapon Strength + Strength] + the Base Damage of the bullet used. The projectile speed is equal to [Sword Speed + Bullet Speed]/2.
Cost: Sword and Materia inside it become unusable until recovered.

Edited by Grey, Oct 29 2009, 01:19 PM.
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Lightning Wolf
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BANG BANG BABY!
switch "usable" to unusable in Ballistic Blade's cost, otherwise...

+.25
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Fixed.
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Drathmar
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LB is interesting, I would lower damage to like spirit * 1.2 since its an AoE and has an additional effect, at least that is my opinion.


Ballistic Blade + 1/4.
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Haine
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Agree with Drath on the LB

+!/4 to Ballistic blade
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Ok Damage changed to 1.2.

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Break Down [Level 2-1]
Description: Kamina is an Empath. His mind absorbs the love, the fear, the joy, the sorrow of others and holds it in. But what happens when he turns all that outwards and gives others a taste of what he experiences? He lets his power build and then releases it in a wave that forces others to experience what he does with his power.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 2-1 access
Effect: Kamina creates a sphere with a [Total HP / 10] foot Radius that deals Spirit x1.2 in damage to anything inside it. In addition to the damage taken, whatever is hit by the sphere feels emotions Kamina has absorbed with his Empathic abilities. These emotions are overwhelming to the afflicted and last for Kamina’s [Spirit/10 post]. The attack moves at the same speed as magic. This Limit Break starts with the emotion of Sorrow and all emotions shall be listed. It takes 15 paragraphs to absorb and learn a new emotion.
Current Emotions: Sorrow,
Cost:


And I made a slight edit in Ballistic Blade. The edit is in bold.
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Ballistic Blade
Description: After obtaining decent skill with both his sword and his guns Kamina has figured out a way to combine their attributes into one. Kamina launches his sword at a foe and then fires a bullet after it. The result turns his blade into a deathly fast projectile with more of a punch behind it.
Requirements: 30 Chokutô Skill, 30 Handgun Skill, 50 Agility, 40 Strength, 30 Intelligence
Effect: Does Weapon Damage [Weapon Strength + Strength] + Bullet Damage. The projectile speed is equal to [Sword Speed + Bullet Speed]/2.
Cost: Sword and Materia inside it become unusable until recovered.

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Bowwy
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What do you mean by "bullet speed?" Because last time I checks, bullet travel really fucking fast.

Also, 1/2 on the LB. I'm not really sure how making your opponent sad will kill them, but go for it.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
1: Its meant to combine the Throwing Speed with the Shoot Speed.

2: The point is to gain more emotions to the point where anyone hit will suffer a mental break down. Imagine being happy, sad, angry, suicidal, and every other emotion all at once. Its mostly for RP purposes since it has no statistical value.
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Drathmar
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I figured he meant throwing speed (strength) + gun speed (speed) and then /2 to take the average.

If thats what he means +1/4 again.

+1/4 to the LB now.
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Bowwy
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MOOGLE AWWWWAAAAYYYY!!!
Okay then.

1/4 to that ballistic crap.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Three day bump. Ballistic Blade still needs 1/2 and Breakdown still needs 1/4.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Three day bump...number 2....
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[-Angeles-]
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Hmm, 1/2 approved on both.
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Bag o Bones
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If they still needs it, then they're approved now.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
New Iteam Request:

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Gaian Ring of Earth
Description: Gifted by the spirit of the earth this ring allows minor control over earth, but when combined with its four brothers can summon Gaia's greatest hero.
Requirements: Bestowed by the spirit of the planet.
Effect: Allows the user to control and shape the land around them. Earth moves at a speed of magic, and costs 2 MP a turn to control. When Captain Planet is summoned using the earth ring the casters Spirit becomes his Sprit and Endurance stats.
Cost: 2 per turn. For power 5 per turn for Summon.
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Takeru
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Seems alright to me, so unless another Staffer takes issue with something (the MP costs most likely), this is approved.
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