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[Pre-Dice]The Watchers' Requests; Yeah it's ready
Topic Started: Feb 12 2009, 03:54 PM (231 Views)
Grendel
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Approved Failed Experiment

Failed Experiment: Android

Appearance: As various and random as humans except artificial.

Personality: Androids fall into two areas that seem to determine their overall personality. There are those with an emotion subroutine and those without. After this, Androids can go any way that they were either programmed to believe or what they learn through experience and watching others.

Background: Androids are a complex technology that have only been around for the last dozen or so years. This coupled with the fact that they look exactly like regular humans makes it difficult for them to be found at all. Thus, after their creation Androids can fit into any crowd without difficulty. To say it simply, after creation an Android can come from anywhere.

Name: Above Average Parts
Description: As an android, you are naturally designed to be greater than the average human at... well... everything. As such, you creator endowed you with special gifts and boosts to put you above the rest of the world. Sadly, while your metal body has certain benefits your physical state your lack of insulation also adds certain penalties to your defenses.
Requirements: Be an Android
Effect: When you sign up you get a bonus 70 Points to spend. Also, while you take 25% less damage from melee and ranged attacks you take 50% more damage from Lightning attacks.

Name: Cold Hands, Cold Processors
Description: As an android, you really don't have any connection to the life stream or modern medicine. What does this mean? No Materia, no magic and no afterlife. Ever. Then again, certain spells that would suck for organics really don't bother you much anymore.
Requirements: Be an Android
Effect:
1. Can't use materia unless it's for throwing purposes.
2. Can't cast magic.
3. Can't heal from potions or 'Heal' magic. Items that cure status ailments still work.
4. Immune to Poison, Berserk, and Sleep.


Name: Battery
Description: Even the most awesome and amazing gadget runs off a battery. As such, you'll have to recharge yours every once in a while to run at full efficiency.
Requirements: Be an Android.
Effect: After every three threads you have to do a thread in which you hook yourself up to a power source and charge up. This can be any power source so long as it can be transferred into electrical energy (i.e Mako, steam, coal et cetera). To Recharge your battery, you need to write a 10 paragraph. For every thread after the third in which you don't recharge your stats are cut in 1/2 for each thread (not permanent so DON'T CHANGE THE CHARACTER SHEET!!!!). After five threads without charging you shut down (turn off) until somebody else does a 10 paragraph thread to recharge you.

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Gravitational Beam Emitter
Description: [Hands: 1] A small black pistol that has a box-like barrel and fires bolts of pure energy rather than bullets. There is a cross design that covers the front and trails down the sides. Also, there are four blue lights on the front around the barrel hole that light up depending on the power in a shot.
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Strength/Durability: 40
Materia Slots: N/A
Material: Adamantium
Weight: 20
Cost: 3000

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Energy Cells
Description: A small blue glowing box that serves as ammunition for the Gravitational Beam Emitter.
Effect: 20 shots: 15 base damage each.
Cost: 700

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Power Shot [Limit Break 1-A]
Description: The Gravitational Beam Emitter doesn't have four lights for just decoration. With a flip of a switch, the gun is turned onto a more powerful setting for one shot. This one shot has a wider beam, increasing it's accuracy by 25%. Also, the damage is increased by 20% for this one shot.
Requirements: Gravitational Beam Emitter .
Cost: Uses four shots instead of one.
Edited by Grendel, Mar 14 2009, 01:43 PM.
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Grendel
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Ready
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Bag o Bones
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Everything looks okay. Remember that in Limit Breaks, ammo isn't used.

As a personal opinion, I really would like to see other drawbacks in the FE world other then just "No Materia ever." It might be just me, but it kinda seems overdone.

Also, you might be able to buy custom bullets sometime in the near future if you don't want to quest for them.
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Gravitational Beam Emitter
Description: [Hands: 1] A small black pistol that has a box-like barrel and fires bolts of pure energy rather than bullets. There is a cross design that covers the front and trails down the sides. Also, there are four blue lights on the front around the barrel hole that light up depending on the power in a shot.
Strength/Durability: 40
Materia Slots: N/A
Material: Adamantium
Weight: 20
Cost: 2100


Adamantium = 1k Gil, 20 Weight = 2k Gil = the weapon should be costing 3k Gil or 150 Paragraphs.
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Grendel
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Eepies. Thanks for pointing that out. I think looking at all the iron weapons in sign ups messed with me.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
I think what happened was that since you don't have any starter armor or weapons here you made it such that you have 725 Gil or something and used that to pay off some of the quests. Then again, 2100 is still an odd number if you did that.
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Grendel
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Topic update. I kinda needed... a newer version.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
You have my 1/2 approval but, how would you then heal?
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Grendel
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custom item later on. Repair kit: a dumbed down repair pack to heal minor damage for machines.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Works for me. I like the way you thought it out too. Reminds me of PSO.
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Grendel
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retracted
Edited by Grendel, Feb 26 2009, 07:30 PM.
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Bowwy
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MOOGLE AWWWWAAAAYYYY!!!
70 extra points?

Madness!
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Grendel
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bump
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Bag o Bones
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I'm wondering, you may want to wait for the Android class to be put up. Not get that many downsides, and possibly move some of your pluses to custom abilities?
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Grendel
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>.> I thought Cloud was forgoing that one for the others. I'll wait then.
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Grendel
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Yeah. I've been waiting too long. This guy was supposed to be a special model, different from Androids like Clones are to humans. So, somebody please approve meeeeee!!!!
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Well, I can't approve it but I can re-give my 1/2 approval. Which I am doing by the way.
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Grendel
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Bump
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Trait is fine by me. Approved.
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Grendel
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Yay! Thanks!
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The White Mage
[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE!
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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