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[Pre-Dice]Tada! requests!
Topic Started: Mar 21 2009, 02:09 AM (2,123 Views)
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Pending Abilities



Pending Techniques



Pending Limit Breaks



Pending Items




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Approved Traits

Name: Bird is the word
Description: Similar to the Leonine Trait "No thumbs for you" Chocobos do not have thumbs, and sadly cannot operate most equipment that requires thumbs. They can however use devices created for and especially for Large bipedal birds.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: Can only use specially made technology crafted for Chocobos
Cost:none

Name:Gold Chocobo FTW?!
Description: Chocobos are large and fast birds with clawed talons and strong legs. Humans have often used them as beasts of burden, and racing creatures in times past. With this ability a chocobo can move unhindered across any terrain it faces.
Effect: Can cross Zolom Swamp by foot

Name: Pink Chocobo
Description: A pink chocobo is a bird bred especially for Chocobo racing. This puts an emphasis on speed and agility over endurance and strength. As such these birds are faster but don't do well in the long run.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +15 to Speed and Agility -5 Endurance - 5 Strength

Name: War Chocobo
Description: Due to the experiments, this chocobo has been taught how to wield a weapon along side its rider. This way increasing the number of attacks the two together can make. The downside is that really stupid chocobos were born because of this trait. Much to the dissapointment of Shinra executives.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +10 Weapon Skill -5 Intelligence
Cost:None

The Night-time is my time
Description: The Widow Queen is creature of Darkness
Requirements: Widow Queen (FE)
Effect: Receives 20% more damage from Holy and Fire, 1% more damage from being kicked.
Cost: None

Flush of Youth
Description: How does she keep those great looks?
Requirements:
Effect: A Widow Queen will age half a year every thread. However, she learns from the ways of the vampires, and by drinking PC blood she restores her Age to 18
Cost: None

Speech of the Queen
Description: Her words of leadership inspire!
Requirements:
Effect: all allied Characters have deal 10% more damage and protects allies from Berserk, confuse, and other mental status ailments
Cost: None

Abilities


Approved Abilities

Name: Second Chance
Description: You are very lucky. You survive things other people die from, and walk away from your death bed on a regular basis.
Requirements: End 50 Spirit 50
Effect: If damage received is enough to KO your character, it instead puts them at 1 hp. This ability can only be used once a thread.
Cost:none

Smart Shot
Description: Sometimes, you know just where to shoot.
Requirements: 50 Gun skill, 100 Intelligence
Effect: Add Intelligence to Damage when using a gun.
Cost: None


Name: S Race Class Chocobo
Description: A racing chocobo by nature is a creature quick on its feet. Its always had to get the lead in a race or else fall behind. Chocobos have to be ready to burst into speed at any moment, and especially when the flag comes down.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: Auto Haste at the start of battle (Haste as per level 1 materia)
Cost:None

Horse and Jockey
Description: Chocobos are able to carry riders on their backs without any penalties.
Requirements: Chocobo
Effect: Reduce the weight of a rider by 1/4
Cost: None


Seductive Speech
Description: Her words...are sooo...alluring...@.@
Requirements: Charm, Spirit 50
Effect: A Widow Queen can Seduce victims with 40% less Spirit. Seduced victims will willing allow a Widow Queen to suck their blood
Cost: None

Create Poisoned Heart
Description: A Widow Queen can create a unique Servant out of a willing individual. They must first proceed through a ritual where she drinks almost all of their blood, and then they drink from her.
Requirements: Charm, Seductive Speech, Spirit 70, Magic 50
Effect: Gives another willing PC the Poisoned Heart Ability.
Cost: None

Careful Spending
Description: ?You know just how to use your MP.
Requirements: 50 INT, 30 Magic, 40 Spirit
Effect: Divides MP cost of Techniques by 2
Cost: None

Approved Techniques

Name: MP Shot
Description: Out of bullets? By focusing one's magical energy into the barrel of their gun, they can shoot without bullets.
Requirements: Gun skill 20, 20 Magic
Effect: Can fire gun without bullets
Cost: 1 MP per shot

Air Gun
Description: You pretend you are holding a gun and shoot someone...for real.
Requirements: Weapon Skill 50, Aero Materia
Effect: Can shoot bullets without a gun. Adds Damage from spell
Cost: Cost for spell

Approved Limit Breaks

Name:Escape Plan [Limit Break Level1]
Description: In a tight spot? You don't have to go all out and blow your opponent to pieces you know, you could just retreat and try again later.
Requirements: Speed 25 Agility 25 Intelligence 30
Effect: Leave thread, or relocate out of melee range and restores MP
Cost:none

Approved Items


Cell Phone w/ Chocobo Bluetooth
Description: A Cell Phone of some of the most advanced qualities. It's appearance is up to you, but keep it realistic (Phones are as advanced as we have IRL). The phones have many capabilities including Email, Camera, Voice Recorder and even a Video recorder. Sadly the memory isn't that great so the Video Recorder can only hold five minutes. This Phone is altered so that A chocobo can use it, having voice commands instant of buttons and a head set.
Weight: 0
Effect: For all your Cell Phone needs
Cost: None

Sword XX196
Description:[Hands:2] This is a large beastly sniper rifle. It is designed with a very long barrel for an increased range and accuracy advanatage. The designer of the gun has left his mark in the side of the barrel; an Engraving left by Markus Sword.
Strength/Durability: 25
Materia Slots: 0
Material: Mithril
Weight: 5
Cost: 1450

Bahamut's Breath V .1
Description: A set of bullets that are specially made. The bullet's head has a separate set of of propulsion. After being fired, the bullet head's seal will melt and it will errupt into a beam of white hot energy.
Weight: 3
Effect: Ten Bullets; Deal 20 base damage each.
Cost: 400

Bahamut's Breath V .2
Description: A set of bullets that are specially made. The bullet's head has a separate set of of propulsion. After being fired, the bullet head's seal will melt and it will erupt into a beam of white hot energy.
Weight: 3
Effect: Ten Bullets; Deal 20 base damage each: AOE, dodge must be at least 40% more or they take 1/2 damage from the AOE. If their dodge is under your accuracy then they take regular damage.
Cost: 1200

Demon's Eye
Description: A genetically engineered eye with Four Pupil; The main pupil, and three smaller pupil that surround the main pupil. The eye's Iris is red. Equipping and unequiping this accessory requires the user to under go surgery.
Weight: 0
Effect: +15% Accuracy
Cost: 2300
Edited by Tada!, Oct 15 2009, 04:08 AM.
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Apocalypse (Lv4)
Might want to fix your bold font thing in the thread.

As for the trait... what exactly would it allow her to do? Explain this branch of magic. XD

Also, the Limit Break you have is looking more like an Ability than a Limit Break.
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*shrugs* Iunno, it just sounded like a good idea. Ultimus Arcanum will be a short list of spells that deal damage and status ailments. Is that any good? I'm completely open to suggestions.

Godless - Magic + intelligence = Damage and blind
Blade Net - Magic + intelligence = Damage and silence
Phantasm - Magic + intelligence = Damage and Fear
Asura - Magic + intelligence = Damage and Petrify

How is that for a limit break then?

And what about the accessory?

Edited by Tada!, Mar 21 2009, 02:59 PM.
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I'm curious as to how the Accessory would be useful if he can't use Materia XD

Also... you basically are making a way to use Techniques to create your own spells then?

That's really nifty idea XD

But please make all your requests in format and state how much damage the spell does.

EX: Damage from spell is equal to Magic stat
Edited by Cloud, Mar 21 2009, 02:39 PM.
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Tada!
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ACtually I'm scrapping that Idea and going for a chocobo!
Edited by Tada!, Mar 22 2009, 08:53 AM.
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Gin
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Name: War Chocobo
Description: Due to the experiments, this chocobo has been taught how to wield a weapon along side its rider. This way increasing the number of attacks the two together can make. The downside is that really stupid chocobos were born because of this trait. Much to the disappointment of Shinra executives.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +10 Weapon Skill -10 Intelligence
Cost:None

Name: Pink Chocobo
Description: A pink chocobo is a bird bred especially for Chocobo racing. This puts an emphasis on speed and agility over endurance and strength. As such these birds are faster but don't do well in the long run.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +15 to Speed and Agility -15 Endurance - 15 Strength


Name: Bird is the word
Description: Similar to the Leonine Trait "No thumbs for you" Chocobos do not have thumbs, and sadly cannot operate most equipment that requires thumbs. They can however use devices created for and especially for Large bipedal birds.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: Can only use specially made technology crafted for Chocobos
Cost:none

Horse and Jockey
Description: Chocobos are able to carry riders on their backs without any penalties.
Requirements: Chocobo
Effect: Carry a rider on back without any ill effects
Cost: None

Cell Phone w/ Chocobo Bluetooth
Description: A Cell Phone of some of the most advanced qualities. It's appearance is up to you, but keep it realistic (Phones are as advanced as we have IRL). The phones have many capabilities including Email, Camera, Voice Recorder and even a Video recorder. Sadly the memory isn't that great so the Video Recorder can only hold five minutes. This Phone is altered so that A chocobo can use it, having voice commands instant of buttons and a head set.
Weight: 0
Effect: For all your Cell Phone needs
Cost: None


All have 1/2 approval. The other two abilities id like a higher up to say something about and the limit breaks don't use the correct format, that and for level ones they seem to powerful.
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Thoughts in Chaos
I'll just get those later when I understand this site better.
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Dice
1/4 Approval, all you need is at least one more 1/4.
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Shining Finger!!!
I think im worth more than 1/4 *stamp of approval*

I didnt notice the abilities. What I would like to see in them is more OOP detail. Is the haste just a burst for the beginning, or are you in haste all the time? If it never goes away than I would feel happier with a set boost to agility that the leonines have.

Also as when people are riding you they should be treated as an object. Meaning that you should be able to carry not only them, but all their stuff. This ability as is will allow you to carry someone with 300 weight of armor a weapon, and a backpack full of stuff with your beginning 5 str. You could probably get away with reducing the weight of the person by a fraction (I would say between 1/4 and 1/2), but it still must be accounted for.
Edited by Panda Bard, Mar 23 2009, 10:20 PM.
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The Auto haste works as per the spell. Three posts of Twenty percent faster.

Your point on the second is very valid. I'll go ahead and put that in.
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They work for me. That's 3/4 now i think
Edited by Panda Bard, Mar 23 2009, 10:39 PM.
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Name: War Chocobo
Description: Due to the experiments, this chocobo has been taught how to wield a weapon along side its rider. This way increasing the number of attacks the two together can make. The downside is that really stupid chocobos were born because of this trait. Much to the disappointment of Shinra executives.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +10 Weapon Skill -10 Intelligence
Cost:None

Name: Pink Chocobo
Description: A pink chocobo is a bird bred especially for Chocobo racing. This puts an emphasis on speed and agility over endurance and strength. As such these birds are faster but don't do well in the long run.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +15 to Speed and Agility -15 Endurance - 15 Strength

Name: Bird is the word
Description: Similar to the Leonine Trait "No thumbs for you" Chocobos do not have thumbs, and sadly cannot operate most equipment that requires thumbs. They can however use devices created for and especially for Large bipedal birds.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: Can only use specially made technology crafted for Chocobos
Cost:none

Name:Gold Chocobo FTW?!
Description: Chocobos are large and fast birds with clawed talons and strong legs. Humans have often used them as beasts of burden, and racing creatures in times past. With this ability a chocobo can move unhindered across any terrain it faces.
Effect: Can cross Zolom Swamp by foot

Horse and Jockey
Description: Chocobos are able to carry riders on their backs without any penalties.
Requirements: Chocobo
Effect: Reduce the weight of a rider by 1/4
Cost: None

Cell Phone w/ Chocobo Blue tooth
Description: A Cell Phone of some of the most advanced qualities. It's appearance is up to you, but keep it realistic (Phones are as advanced as we have IRL). The phones have many capabilities including Email, Camera, Voice Recorder and even a Video recorder. Sadly the memory isn't that great so the Video Recorder can only hold five minutes. This Phone is altered so that A chocobo can use it, having voice commands instant of buttons and a head set.
Weight: 0
Effect: For all your Cell Phone needs
Cost: None


The above are all officially approved.
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It's all fine XD
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Tada!
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Thoughts in Chaos
Yay, thank you!
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Gin
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I had her put up revisions of two of her old traits because I realized they did nothing. 1/2 Approval from me, anyone second this so she can move on with her character?

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Name: Pink Chocobo
Description: A pink chocobo is a bird bred especially for Chocobo racing. This puts an emphasis on speed and agility over endurance and strength. As such these birds are faster but don't do well in the long run.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +15 to Speed and Agility -5 Endurance - 5 Strength

Name: War Chocobo
Description: Due to the experiments, this chocobo has been taught how to wield a weapon along side its rider. This way increasing the number of attacks the two together can make. The downside is that really stupid chocobos were born because of this trait. Much to the dissapointment of Shinra executives.
Requirements: Failed Experiment
Effect: +10 Weapon Skill -5 Intelligence
Cost:None
Edited by Gin, Mar 24 2009, 10:57 PM.
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approved.
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Tada!
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New abilities being Requested!
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
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Mar 21 2009, 02:09 AM
Name: Sharp shooter
Description: You used to bulls eye wamp rats back home, and they're not bigger than two meters.
Requirements: 30 sniper rifle
Effect: Accuracy Increase by 10
Cost:

Name: MP Shot
Description: Out of bullets? By focusing one's magical energy into the barrel of their gun, they can shoot without bullets.
Requirements: Gun skill
Effect: Can fire gun without bullets
Cost: 5 MP per shot

Name: Dum Dum shot
Description: Fires a special bullet designed to tear up the flesh.
Requirements: Non-cyborg
Effect: Deals Standard damage, and 10% of the original damage over three turns
Cost: 10 MP

Name:Escape Plan [Limit Break Level1]
Description: In a tight spot? You don't have to go all out and blow your opponent to pieces you know, you could just retreat and try again later.
Requirements: Speed 30
Effect: Allows you to leave a thread or simply relocate to a distant location via means of a "pre-established" escape plan
Cost:none
Um, are these for another character? if so then they should go in a different thread.
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Why? Isn't that a waste of Forum space? This is "Tada! requests" after all. >.<
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Gin
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Normally people do "Characters Name Requests". Nothing wrong with using the same thread but just wanted to point that out.
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Added new techs, Gin said he'd like a staffer to observe them.
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Gin
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Well since no ones said anything I'll just give my 1/2 approval anyway
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
All right lets look at these.

So basically you get one more post to try and heal or escape. Sounds alright, +1/4
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Name: Second Chance
Description: You are very lucky. You survive things other people die from, and walk away from your death bed on a regular basis.
Requirements: End 30 Spirit 30
Effect: If damage received is enough to KO your character, it instead puts them at 1 hp. This ability can only be used once a thread.
Cost:none


This one needs more requirements. I would say making it so you need at least 20 in magic and gun skill, just to make things balanced.
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Name: MP Shot
Description: Out of bullets? By focusing one's magical energy into the barrel of their gun, they can shoot without bullets.
Requirements: Gun skill
Effect: Can fire gun without bullets
Cost: 1 MP per shot


The Limit Break looks cool to me. +1/4
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Name:Escape Plan [Limit Break Level1]
Description: In a tight spot? You don't have to go all out and blow your opponent to pieces you know, you could just retreat and try again later.
Requirements: Speed 25 Agility 25 Intelligence 30
Effect: Leave thread, or relocate out of melee range and restores MP
Cost:none
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i think all but the limit break need higher requirements.

Second Chance: though the effect isn't that great if you look in the rules under "numbers explained" you will see that with the stats you chose that you would have below average abilities. I would think it would require at least above average which would be 50 in Spirit and Endurance. Also i think there needs to be some limit to it to. i mean you are not going to get hit for 500 damage by a fire ball and still be like "i still have 1 HP!"

MP Shot: *points to grey's post*

Limit break looks good

1/2+1/4+1/4=1 whole so the limit break is approved
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I editted MP Shot.

I editted the requirements for second chance, There already is a limit to it. One can only use it once per thread. If an Enemy is truly that overpowering than they shouldn't have a problem killing a weakened opponent with only one hit point. Plus, if I'm upping the requirements, It should have at least the effect I've stated, shouldn't it? You yourself said that in the end the ability isn't that great.
Edited by Tada!, Apr 2 2009, 02:11 PM.
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