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[Pre-Dice]History edit
Topic Started: Mar 30 2009, 09:52 PM (46 Views)
Haine
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Ok, i kinda messed up on Saeta's history the first time and i want to fix it so it makes more sense and it has more detail.


Original History
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Saeta was born in Midgar and had a fairly ordinary life up until they were eight. On their eight birthday Saeta's father got her a toy gun, At first she was disappointed but soon became obsessed with it. She practiced with it often and got fairly good at using it. When she was twelve she learned of Soldier and two years later she set off to try out, it was at this time her father gave her her own gun, Nemesis. She applied for soldier at Shinra but didn't get accepted and tried life as a trooper instead.

It wasn't a bad life but she learned of Sephiroth ,the strongest SOLDIER in history and she wanted desperately to get accepted to SOLDIER. When she was sixteen her group was sent out on a low level assignment when they were attacked. Only Saeta and another member of her group survived, but when questioned on what attacked them neither could answer. The other survivor was critically injured in the attack and died shortly after, Saeta only received minor wounds. She was soon declared dead and taken to Hojo's laboratory were she was silent even as they started their experimentation, soon afterword though she went slightly mad ranting about what had attacked her group before finally going comatose.


Experiments on her continued though, even though Saeta has no memory of them. One day two years after the experimentation started,for no apparent reason she regained consciousness, her memory was missing large chunks and she was still silent as before. Then she learned of what Sephiroth had done and what she had become. She heard voices telling her about reunion and Mother. She wandered about the lab wondering what had happened, and found it inexplicable abandoned. Finding her weapon and even her clothes that she had worn into the lab she used what little Gil she'd had to go to Kalm. Now she is trying to find her family, to find anyone she knew, and to control the new madness in her.




Expanded History
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Saeta was born in Midgar and had a fairly ordinary life up until they were eight. On their eight birthday Saeta's father got her a toy gun, At first she was disappointed but soon became obsessed with it. She practiced with it often and got fairly good at using it. When she was twelve she learned of Soldier and four years later she set off to try out, it was at this time her father gave her her own gun, Nemesis. She applied for soldier at Shinra but didn't get accepted and tried life as a Sentry instead.It wasn't a bad life but she learned of Sephiroth ,the strongest SOLDIER in history and she wanted desperately to get accepted to SOLDIER. When she was eighteen her unit was sent out on a low level assignment when they were attacked. Only Saeta and another member of her group survived, but when questioned on what attacked them neither could answer.


The other survivor was critically injured in the attack and died shortly after, Saeta only received minor wounds. She was soon declared dead and taken to Hojo's laboratory were she was silent even as they started their experimentation, soon afterword though she went slightly mad ranting about what had attacked her group before finally going comatose.Experiments on her continued though, even though Saeta has no memory of them. One day several months after the experimentation started,for no apparent reason she regained consciousness, her memory was missing large chunks and she was still silent as before. Then she learned of what Sephiroth had done and what she had become. She heard voices telling her about reunion and Mother. She wandered about the lab wondering what had happened, and found it inexplicable abandoned. Finding her weapon and even her clothes that she had worn into the lab she used what little Gil she'd had to go to Kalm. Now she is trying to find her family, to find anyone she knew, and to control the new madness in her.

Saeta's last memory
"Saeta!! Don't stand around, get with your unit" a man told her with a stern though obviously amused smirk on his face. "Yes, Sir" she said quietly turning and walking off to where three other people had gathered. " Whats the deal with this assignment anyway? what are we doing here?" A Women around Saeta's age dressed in a Sentry uniform asked. "Dunno, apparently some kind of recovery operation." one of the others replied. Then there was a loud scream of twisting metal.
"What was that ?" Saeta asked uncertainly. " An equipment accident?" The other women suggested. "I don't think so..."Saeta said a chill creeping down her spine.


There was loud scream nearby and Saeta knew it wasn't an accident. She drew Nemesis and scanned the area for any sign of what was happening......At first.....Nothing. Then she heard gunshots. "C,mon" she said to her squad mates as she ran toward the gunshots. However before she got there the sounds cut off and it was ominously silent. They rushed sound to the other side of the temporary command near the reactor and froze at what they saw. Two of the other units of Sentries lay dead in various forms of gore, all of them obviously killed with a weapon. Saeta looked down down and tried not to throw up.

Saeta bent over and examined some of the corpses,they had been cut cleanly with some sort of blade.....but the only people who could overpower three units of Sentry's would be a SOLDIER. As she thought this she saw a flutter of motion in her peripheral vision and opened fire at it with Nemesis.. But whatever it was had already gone and she was left with the sound of her heart pumping in her ears. Then she hear a sharp wet sound and turned to see one of her squad mates falling over, their chest had a gash do deep they had almost been cut in half. "What the hell? " one of her partners screamed rushing forward. "Wait!!!" Saeta began but it was too late. their was a flash and she to fell to the ground from a similar slash mark.


"Look out!!!" She said turning to check on her surviving teammate. That's when she saw it. Dressed in a long black leather coat and carrying a long curved sword in one hand. it moved quickly toward him and he somehow manged to see it and tried firing. But the thing rushed forward and punched him in the ribs sending him flying. Her last teammates corpse flew into her knocking her over and driving the wind out of her lungs. She struggled to breath as the body lay on top of her, it felt like her ribs had been cracked. She almost struggled to move but froze as Sephiroth started toward her , he was going to kill her, she was going to die. Except she didn't. Sehiroth walked right past her and her partners corpse with nothing but a small smirk. After that she didn't move at all.Eventually she passed out, when she woke up people in Shinra uniforms where carrying her squads bodies away. Then she heard it " This ones alive!!!!" a voice called out. "Well put her in the truck" another shouted. Saeta remained completely still not even twitching as she was roughly picked up and put in the back of a truck causing intense pain in her ribs.She passed out again.When she woke up again she still didn't move. She heard voices, she saw people , she felt needles under her skin. Stills he didn't move. She didn't speak. She just watched. And then there was a blue green as she was submerged in mako and everything went black.

After Awakening
Saeta woke up several months later still in the mako chamber, She panicked for several moments as she struggled to get her bearings. She wiped mako off her face and stepped out of the chamber. As she stepped out of the tank she caught her reflection in a metal cabinet........Something was.....wrong. What had happened to her eyes?No.....Everything was different. Different from what? She tried to think of what she used to look like but the result appeared to be muddled. She caught a glimpse of a face with blue eyes and blond hair but that was all she rem embed....so what happened? Where was she? Why was she her?She didn't remember anything.....Her Name.....Sae?....no.....Saeta. Yes, that was it......now what should she do? She spotted a door and opened it. It had clothes in it, lots of clothes,why were they hear though? She grabbed a black shirt and jeans and put them on before opening more doors.

In one of the next ones was a variety of weapons ranging from knives to small rifles. As she stared at the closet of weapons something caught her eye, a black gun with three barrel's in a leather holster belt. "Nemesis" She whispered sliding the gun out to see the name engraved along the pistols grip just where she knew it would be. She grabbed the gun and buckled the belt on, She continued walking bare foot around the laboratory looking for clues, or even a way out. She tried another door and it lead to a long hallway with a set of stairs. She walked to the end of the hall and started up the stair staring in awe at the building as she passed. She slowly ascended and came to a steel door at the top of the steps which she opened with some effort. She shut her eyes as bright sunlight blinded her momentarily and took a step back.


She stepped out to see a wooded area bathed in sunshine as took a step forward looking down as she felt the dirt between here bare feet. She walked a bit away from the entrance which was looked like the entrance to a bomb shelter and as she neared a gap in the trees she saw a town in the distance, She looked back to the shelter then to the town. There was nothing left here for her..no answers.....Nothing. She slowly began walking through the greenery toward the town , as she passed through a clearing bathed in sunshine a small smile touched her lips. There were some good things in this world she didn't remember. She'd just have to try to find them........


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