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[Pre-Dice]Sonoske's Requisition Form
Topic Started: Apr 5 2009, 12:55 PM (577 Views)
Bag o Bones
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Okay.

Well, it still does seem kinda weak for Level 1. you could probably go for 5 turns of lowered damage, or keep it at 3 turns and get magic as well.
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Kenny
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Name: Renzore (level 1)
Description: Lotus petals swirl around Sonoske and become a sort of secondary armor.
Requirements: Limit Break Access Level 1
Effect: Damage reduction of 10% to all non-magic attacks. Lasts 3 posts
Cost: 10 KP

~ I see where you're coming from, although it'd work better as a Technique, but I'll leave that option to you.

Either way, as it is, this is underpowered. To be honest you could get 40% of lowered damage for 3 turns, at no cost (as a Limit Break) although I can understand you might not be into powergaming.

Whatever you choose, I can give this 1/2 approval now, although if you want it to be better I'm fine with approving it again after you make the edits.
Edited by Kenny, May 10 2009, 05:36 AM.
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Lightning Wolf
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How about now? I changed it to be 30% for 5 posts
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Generally, Limit Breaks don't consume anything except the Limit Gauge. Then again, since your character is from a different world altogether, his body might behave differently. Cost/Effectwise, this is simply an extended Barrier. 1/2 Approved.
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[-Cloud-]
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Approved.
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Lightning Wolf
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New thing added checks it out!
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
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Apr 5 2009, 12:55 PM

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Description: [Two hands]
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Strength/Durability: 36 (54 When Attacking)
Materia Slots: None
Material: Reinforced Obsidian
Effect: The sword heals 10% of the damage it inflicts to it's holder. This sword also takes up one Accessory slot.
Weight: 12
Hmm, the effect means that it coast extra, I think a staff member needs to decide the cost before it can be approved.
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
I'll probably estimate 5000 for that sword: 4200 for the sword itself and around 800 for the draining effect.
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Strength/Durability: 36 (54 When Attacking)

I'm confused as to why it raised 18 in power when attacking. Two-Hands gives it + 5 to 41 but where does the other 13 come from?
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
It's a modification to the Material rules. Certain materials, particularly stones like Granite and Obsidian, work better as weapons, as an example. (Those get a 50% percent to damage dealt as a weapon, but are only 50% effective used as armor.)
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Gin
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Oh, that's right, it should be stronger then
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The sword looks good to me. Just make sure people know that it's durability is cut in half when you use it. +1/4
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Kenny
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May 11 2009, 05:38 PM
I'll probably estimate 5000 for that sword: 4200 for the sword itself and around 800 for the draining effect.
Strength/Durability: 36
Materia Slots: None
Material: Reinforced Obsidian
Effect: The sword heals 10% of the damage it inflicts to it's holder. This sword also takes up one Accessory slot.
Weight: 12
Cost: 5,000 Gil

1/2 approval.
Edited by Kenny, May 12 2009, 12:25 AM.
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Approved
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New technique up for reading and critiquing.

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Name: Cutting Winds
Description: By using some Ki and a fierce attack, Sonoske can literally cut magic attacks. This is done by beating back the spirit that powers the materia.
Requirements: Ki-strike, Pierce, 200 KP, 100 Katana Skill
Effect: When a magic attack comes at Sonoske he may attack it. If his Spirit Stat is equal to the caster's he takes off a quarter of the damage. If his spirit stat is 20 above it, he cuts it in half instead. If it is 50 above the others he negates the attack all together.
Cost: 50 KP
Edited by Lightning Wolf, May 26 2009, 08:50 PM.
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lost in thought call search and rescue
after looking it over several times and extended thinking I have decided

+1/4
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Gin
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1/2 approval, 1/4 needed
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Might want to word that a bit more carefully. As I read it, it's "0-19 above: damage reduced by 75%" (rather than TO 75% as you intended.)
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Lightning Wolf
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Edited it, thanks for pointing that out
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Kenny
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Name: Cutting Winds
Description: By using some Ki and a fierce attack, Sonoske can literally cut magic attacks. This is done by beating back the spirit that powers the materia.
Requirements: Ki-strike, Pierce, 200 KP, 100 Katana Skill
Effect: When a magic attack comes at Sonoske he may attack it. If his Spirit Stat is equal to the caster's he takes off a quarter of the damage. If his spirit stat is 20 above it, he cuts it in half instead. If it is 50 above the others he negates the attack all together.
Cost: 50 KP


You can probably get away with only 15-20 KP instead. 1/2 Approval either way.
Edited by Kenny, May 30 2009, 11:40 PM.
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I've changed it to 25 KP cost...if that is a problem says so...otherwise this thing has full approval.
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Approvinated
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