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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 7 2009, 09:57 PM (125 Views) | |
| Neo Knightwolf | Apr 7 2009, 09:57 PM Post #1 |
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Pending Abilities Appearance: Being of Leonine origin, Banua assumes the external physical build that of his feline brethren. Few things separate him from other Leonine, those being the large wings sprouting from his back and the fact he stands on his hind legs due to genetic experiments. Personality: Having been experimented on since before he can remember has inflicted major psychological damage, contributing to a large distrust in all races; not just that of Humans. He witnessed Humans trying to create more powerful beings out of beings that already had massive power and wanted more. Disgusted by this, he strives to prevent the hunger for power from infecting his being. This contributes to his lack of socialization; even when around others of his original species. Background: Banua has vague memories of his original home, but the memories of his second home haunt him constantly. It was a six by six cage crowded by other cages in a ShinRa facility. His earliest memories consist of being infused with cells from Aves (birds) and that of humans to make him into Chimera of sorts. Being apart of project Icarus eventually led to his escape. During a flight test his used the aerial techniques he developed to release himself from a shock collar and out fly the guards escorting him. Now he roams, trying to find a place to call home avoiding large cities and groups of people. Traits: Ariel Mutation (Trait) Description: The mutation or evolution that Banua’s body underwent left him with large, powerful wings and a body full of hollow bones. Though this does increase the likelihood of fractures or complete breaks, it does have it’s benefits. Requirements: Leonine Evolution Effect: Increase Speed and Agility by 15; Enables Flight; 10% Damage Increase due to Increased Fracture Rate Cost: None Human Mutation (Trait) Description: Ariel abilities were not the only ShinRa “blessed” Banua with. Somehow the mutation gave him the option to either travel upright like a man, or like his fellow Leonine race. In addition he was given an appose-able thumb instead of the feline/canine Du-claw. Requirements: Leonine Evolution Effect: Allows Upright Walking and Gripping. Cost: None Abomination (Trait) Description: After undergoing experimentation by ShinRa, Banua slowly lost his connection with the planet, and soon the bond all Leonine share with the astral beings known as “Summons”. Requirements: Leonine Evolution Effect: Bars Banua from ever feeling changes with the planet and summoning creatures to fight along side him. Cost: None Pending Techniques Pending Limit Breaks --- Approved Abilities Approved Techniques Approved Limit Breaks Edited by Neo Knightwolf, Jan 7 2010, 01:42 AM.
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| [-Angeles-] | Apr 8 2009, 01:04 AM Post #2 |
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Ex-Turk
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Ariel Mutation, Human Mutation, and Abomination all have my 1/4 approval. |
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| Final Riku | Apr 8 2009, 05:06 AM Post #3 |
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Dynamite
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1/4 to all |
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| Kenny | Apr 8 2009, 11:30 PM Post #4 |
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Meteorain (Lv3)
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Proof read some of this, and then you have my 1/2 approval. |
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| Neo Knightwolf | Jan 4 2010, 03:05 PM Post #5 |
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Big Shot
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How about now. |
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| Takeru | Jan 4 2010, 06:57 PM Post #6 |
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The White Mage
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If these are Traits for a Failed Experiment or a Beast, then I'd like to see the rest of the information that is supposed to go along with this. |
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| Neo Knightwolf | Jan 7 2010, 12:11 AM Post #7 |
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Big Shot
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Alright, this good enough? I'll add more detail when it comes time to post this in sign up... this is just a general thing so you can get the gist of what he's going to be like. |
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| Bag o Bones | Jan 7 2010, 12:36 AM Post #8 |
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Meteorain (Lv3)
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So does the last trait mean that he can't summon at all? Also, for the brittle bones thing, I think that would be better stated by an endurance lack of some sort, or by taking more damage or something. |
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| Neo Knightwolf | Jan 7 2010, 12:42 AM Post #9 |
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Big Shot
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Yes, the final trait means he can't summon at all. He wont technically be using any magic except for his limits. Also, y'all decide how much damage he'll take from crushing blows and falls... stuff like that. If anything he'll probably take about 15% damage... since he's also lighter and falls wont hurt him that much more.. but if you hit a bird.. it's gonna hurt.. and he's technically not a bird, just more hollow wings.. it's kinda complicated.. I'd say it would be a 10% to 20% more damage. |
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| Bag o Bones | Jan 7 2010, 12:45 AM Post #10 |
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Meteorain (Lv3)
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Ok, then clear up the language about the summoning bit, and go for a 10% increase in damage due to the bone thing and it should be good. |
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| Neo Knightwolf | Jan 7 2010, 11:17 AM Post #11 |
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Big Shot
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done |
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| Takeru | Jan 10 2010, 10:47 AM Post #12 |
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The White Mage
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Approved. |
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| Takeru | Jan 13 2010, 03:04 PM Post #13 |
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The White Mage
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[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE! |
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| [-Angeles-] | May 12 2011, 02:31 PM Post #14 |
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Ex-Turk
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you |
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