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Topic Started: Apr 25 2009, 12:02 AM (58 Views)
Ryuusei Seito
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Let The Light Surround You
Nother song, dunno if it's complete yet.

This ship is sinking
Waves are washing us away
What were we thinking
Defiant to our final day

Struggle against the tide
Won't take us alive
Stare down into the deep
We'll just have to keep
Fighting for the
Right to call this
Life our own

The sea was so calm
When we shoved off years ago
Somewhere it all went wrong
Swept off course by the flow

We have to stay afloat
We cannot give up hope
Too far to swim ashore
Don't give in, just ignore the
Sharks waiting to
Tear us a
Part limb from limb

Reach out for you
Pull you out of the dark
Holding you tightly
I see a spark of
Light in the distance
Rescue has arrived
Can they make it in time?
Will we still be alive?

We fell overboard
Into a sea of pain and hate
Save us from ourselves
It's not too late
We're drowning in our dreams
Dragged down by our ambitions
Nothing was as it seemed
Don't want to die in submission

Pull us out
Pull us out
Pull us out
Pull us out
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Bag o Bones
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Meteorain (Lv3)
Looks good, but what style of music is it in?

Metal, Rock, Pop, Country (lol), Other?
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Ryuusei Seito
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Let The Light Surround You
Like everything else I write, hard rock or metal. Take yer pick.
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UberKidd
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Ubby-Kun!
Doesn't sound metal or hard rock. >__>

Sounds like Death Cab/Yellowcard ish. I like it. ^-^
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Ryuusei Seito
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Let The Light Surround You
It's kinda ballady, but it's still hard rock-ish.
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Phade
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Big Shot
Irish-rock is the feeling I got....
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Lucifer
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Dynamite
No chorus?
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Kenny
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Meteorain (Lv3)
Ryuusei Seito
Apr 27 2009, 08:31 AM
It's kinda ballady, but it's still hard rock-ish.
Pub-rock.

Here's hoping you become the next U2 :)
Edited by Kenny, May 1 2009, 08:06 AM.
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Ryuusei Seito
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Let The Light Surround You
Lucifer
May 1 2009, 04:48 AM
No chorus?
Channeling my inner prog for that one. No chorus needed.
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Ex-Turk
Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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