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[Pre-Dice]DBH's requests
Topic Started: May 17 2009, 09:16 PM (243 Views)
dragonbountyhunter
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Pending Limit Breaks

Name: fist of endless energy [Limit Break Level 1:2]
Description: Through intense training Toby learned to further boost his own abilities and becomes physically more powerful for a short time. During this time a second limiter the body places on itself is unsealed. Once the time has ended Toby is afflicted by a bone deep weariness that renders him all but helpless for a time.
Requirements: limit level 1:2 access
Effect: increases strength, endurance, agility, and speed by 25% each for 4 posts. Once the fourth post is up decreases strength, endurance, agility, and speed by 25% of the unbuffed value for 3 posts.
Cost:n/a




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Toby's approved requests

Approved Abilities

Approved Techniques

Approved Limit Breaks

Name: Fist of the unbound mind [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Toby having trained hard his whole short life has found a way to push himself hard and go further then before. By releasing the natural limits that are plased on his body by his own mind Toby gains physical abilities. This is a double edge sword as after a short time its benefit fades and leaves the boy suffering from bone deep exhaustion.
Requirements: Limit level 1
Effect: boosts strength speed agility and stamina by 15% for 3 posts. The same stats are then reduced for 3 posts by 15% of the original stats.
Cost: none

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Alice's approved requests

Approved Abilities

Approved Techniques

Approved Limit Breaks

Name: Whisper of the Black Wind [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Alice’s eyes glaze over and she begins to chant. “The black wind whispers, A malady all a burning, Feeling of life all in agony.” Once the chant is finish the person the chant is directed at becomes afflicted with and arcane malady. The malady comes in the form of a black cloud that condenses about the target. If they avoid the cloud it forms an orb which will fly in the direction they were last in when it condensed it can affect anything it hits once it begins to fly including Alice herself. Both the cloud and orb move at Alice’s magic speed.
Requirements: limit level 1 access
Effect: deals magic stat times .1 damage for 7 posts
Cost: N/A

Approved Items

Broom of flying
Description: A broom that was enchanted by a witch. It allows the rider to fly about or simply hover off the ground. Sadly black cats are sold separately. While the broom is simple enough to ride it requires a fair amount of agility to cast from.
Weight: 3
Effect: permits one to fly about just like a witch. While riding has no requirements it requires 20 agility to ride in a lady like fashion. It also requires an agility of 50 to cast magic while riding the broom. Additionally magic damage is reduced and requires 100 magic to cast at maximum power being reduced by 25% increments at every 25 point interval of the Magic stat. Note that while flying the rider is immune to ground type damage.
Cost: 3000 gil
Edited by dragonbountyhunter, Nov 15 2009, 06:17 PM.
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Bag o Bones
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For level 1 this seems about right, but you can probably drop the lowering of stats after the initial boost.
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Bag o Bones
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Okay, you explained how this worked via MSN. so approved.
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dragonbountyhunter
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Ok I came up with an idea to alter Toby slightly. Some people on the staff know what this plan is already. So it’s not like this request is entirely out of the blue.

Character alteration: It is my plan to send Toby back in time by ten years. The sending and perhaps bringing him up to current will be done in a series of STs. If it is not a simple do the sending then re request him 10 years older then. Toby will be unavailable for anything other then his series of sts to bring him to the current time. To send him back through time he will encounter a unique form of beholder.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
You can just request him to be 10 years older if you want, it shouldn't be a problem.
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dragonbountyhunter
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I could but that would only really work if he had no interatcion with other characters which he has. Plus I have the thread worked out the way I wish it to flow so an IC reason for the sudden change in age I feel is needed.
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Gin
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I was just saying I don't think anyone would mind if you did this as it doesn't really harm the site in anyway of give you any super powers.
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dragonbountyhunter
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combineing all requests to one thread and added the first limit to Alice to be requested
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[-Angeles-]
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The limit seems a little weak to me.
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dragonbountyhunter
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edited teh limit and added an ability for when ALice hits the mark for 6 abilities
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Tada!
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Dominating PErsonalty is a bit too powerful, Compare it with Clouds ability -

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Art of Persuasion.
Description: A strong mind is one thing, but a strong conviction is another. One with a strong spirit can convince others they are right even if they are wrong. This charismatic attack can make anyone believe that the user is telling the truth and can convince anyone of anything if they are powerful enough. However, one cannot control another's actions, simply convince them of things to alter their emotions and mindset.
Requirements: 100 Spirit
Effect: Able to convince others of almost anything so long as the users spirit is higher than the targets (Intelligence + Spirit)/2
Cost: None
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Drathmar
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Limit seems to be a bit weak still, as it would do magic * .7 total. Make it do magic *.2 for 7 posts and it would still be a level one in my opinion.

As Tada said, dominating personality is too strong with to low of a requirement.
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dragonbountyhunter
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its not meant for use against players really its mostly for a series of techs I will be making after she learns it but if it looks wrong maybe suggest how to make it better
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Art of Persuasion.
Description: A strong mind is one thing, but a strong conviction is another. One with a strong spirit can convince others they are right even if they are wrong. This charismatic attack can make anyone believe that the user is telling the truth and can convince anyone of anything if they are powerful enough. However, one cannot control another's actions, simply convince them of things to alter their emotions and mindset.
Requirements: 100 Spirit
Effect: Able to convince others of almost anything so long as the users spirit is higher than the targets (Intelligence + Spirit)/2
Cost: None


Your dominating personality is essentially the same as my Art of Persuasion yet a bit unbalanced. Make the effect more like mine.

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Name: Whisper of the Black Wind [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Alice’s eyes glaze over and she begins to chant. “The black wind whispers, A malady all a burning, Feeling of life all in agony.” Once the chant is finish the person the chant is directed at becomes afflicted with and arcane malady.
Requirements: limit level 1 access
Effect: deals magic stat times .1 damage for 7 posts
Cost: N/A

Name: fist of endless energy [Limit Break Level 1:2]
Description: Through intense training Toby learned to further boost his own abilities and becomes physically more powerful for a short time. During this time a second limiter the body places on itself is unsealed.
Requirements: limit level 1:2 access
Effect: increases strength, stamina, agility, and speed by 25% each for 4 posts.
Cost:n/a


The first one needs to be avoidable somehow.

The second one is too much of an increase among too many stats for too long a period of time.
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edited the limits and removed the ability will post a revised version of what I want closer to when Alice can learn it
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Drathmar
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Name: Whisper of the Black Wind [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Alice’s eyes glaze over and she begins to chant. “The black wind whispers, A malady all a burning, Feeling of life all in agony.” Once the chant is finish the person the chant is directed at becomes afflicted with and arcane malady. The malady comes in the form of a black cloud that condenses about the target. If they avoid the cloud it forms an orb which will fly in the direction they were last in when it condensed it can affect anything it hits once it begins to fly including Alice herself. Both the cloud and orb move at Alice’s magic speed.
Requirements: limit level 1 access
Effect: deals magic stat times .1 damage for 7 posts
Cost: N/A

So basically this is an attack with speed=magic so accuracy would be [magic + casting]/2 and they can dodge based on that?

If so, +1/4.
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dragonbountyhunter
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yes thats how it works
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Drathmar
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+1/4 Then.

As for the other one eh, I dunno, I'll let a mod look at that one.
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Whisper is approved.

Fist is a bit overpowered for Level 1, even with the after effect.


The broom is worded a bit oddly to me. Would you mind explaining it?
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Broom of flying
Description: A broom that was enchanted by a witch. It allows the rider to fly about or simply hover off the ground. Sadly black cats are sold separately. While the broom is simple enough to ride it requires a fair amount of agility to cast from.
Weight: 3
Effect: permits one to fly about just like a witch. While riding has no requirements it requires 20 agility to ride in a lady like fashion. It also requires an agility of 50 to cast magic while riding the broom. Additionally magic damage is reduced and requires 100 magic to cast at maximum power being reduced by 25% increments at every 25 point interval of the Magic stat. Note that while flying the rider is immune to ground type damage.
Cost: to be determined

ok since I am not sure what you wanted explained Bones I am just going to hit anything I think was confusing

riding: no requirement
riding side saddle: 20 agility (incase you are not sure that's were she has both legs hanging off the same side its considered a more lady like way to ride horses or was at some point)
Casting: reduced by magic stat until 100 while riding the broom has no effect if she is standing on the ground holding it
magic= 25-49 magic damage is reduced by 75%
magic= 50-74 magic damage is reduced by 50%
magic= 75-99 magic damage is reduced by 25%
magic= 100+ no damage reductions
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[-Angeles-]
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Why are you having the magic reduced >.> If you want a magic reduction just have it educed by twenty and leave it be?

Anyway, I guess it's alright in my opinion. It just allows you to fly around and cast magic, which is something pretty much anyone in the forum can do now. Plus it has Agility requirements and a temporary spell reduction.

1/2 approved.
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Approval finished on broom.
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Bag o Bones
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It has come to my attention that I forgot the price.

3000 gil.
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Gin
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My Spongebob and Patrick bandaid tells me to approve the LB, that is, it is approved so long as no one has complaints which I haven't seen yet.
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[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE!
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