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[Pre-Dice]Torin's requests
Topic Started: May 28 2009, 08:47 PM (400 Views)
dragonbountyhunter
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Pending Abilities

Pending Techniques

Name: dance of crimson tears
Description: A slash that cut a foe deeply. The result is a bloody wound that results in further pain then just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: deals three rounds of damage at 25% 15% and finally 5% the percentage is based off the initial strike if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10


Pending Limit Breaks

Name: Eyes of the dragon [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin using a ancient art passed down by his mother metamorphs his eyes. This enhances his vision beyond the norm. The enhancement also increases his reflexes slightly permiting him to react at the same level as his vison permits. Unlike other abilities he knows this does ends after a short time has past.
Requirements: Be Torin
Effect: Increases dodge by (spirit+agility+speed)/3 this effect ends after two posts
Cost: N/A


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Approved Abilities

Approved Techniques

Approved Limit Breaks

Wind Blade [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin swings his blade rapidly in an arc. From the tip of his blade is a cutting trail of air.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 1 access.
Effect: Extends his blades on a 5:1 ratio. For every 5 weapon skill, the sword elongates by 1 foot.
Cost: None

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Edited by dragonbountyhunter, Jul 3 2009, 07:55 PM.
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Bag o Bones
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Soooo...it doesn't do any extra damage, it just makes his sword longer based on how much skill you have in it?
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that is correct
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Next question. How long does it last?
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dragonbountyhunter
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the same post it is used
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So for 1 post, you get an elongated sword. Honestly, I think you could get some more out of a level 1 limit break.

Wind Blade [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin swings his blade rapidly in an arc. From the tip of his blade is a cutting trail of air.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 1 access.
Effect: Extends his blades on a 5:1 ratio. For every 5 weapon skill, the sword elongates by 1 foot.
Cost: None

And i hope you don't mind, but I prettied up your request.
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thank you for making it look nice

if you think about it it pretty powerful becuase even if they know he can do it they won't know how long the extension is and it will only get longer teh better his weapon skill becomes
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*Shrugs*

Well, it's your limit.


By the power of Necromancy and all that is undead...

Approved.
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dragonbountyhunter
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many thanks
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added new items for consideration
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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: A slash that cut a foe deeply. The result is a bloody wound that results in further pain then just the initial slash.
Requirements: Agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25% 15% and finally 5% the percentage is based off the initial strike if it hits 1 point of damage then the following rounds are void.
Cost: 15


This is 15 MP for a total of 145% damage. Take it down to 10 MP and I'll approve it.

Name: Eyes of the dragon [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin using a ancient art passed down by his mother metamorphs his eyes. This enhances his vision beyond the norm. The enhancement also increases his reflexes slightly permiting him to react at the same level as his vison permits. Unlike other abilities he knows this does not end after a short period but rather it only ends when he wills it to be so.
Requirements: Be Torin
Effect: Increases dodge by (spirit+agility+speed)/3 this effect does not end until canceled
Cost: N/A


This is a bit odd...but not overpowered. However, I have to insist of an actual post limit which I suggest to be 2 posts.


Edited by Bowwy, Jun 28 2009, 06:49 PM.
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edited
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Hmm...the whole thing about techniques having to be based off of a trait, ability, or Materia...how do we get around this?

And I concur with Bowwy on a time limit for the limit break, particularly if you want it at level 1. Doubling the dodge rating (more or less, depending on the Spirit stat) is quite powerful, particularly if it lasts for the remainder of the battle. Having it for that long is closer to level 3.
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I wasn't really thinking about the whole ability/materia thing....but...some techniques don't have abilities as reqs...hm....I'm not sure on this one, though.
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if I need an ability then I can add one tomarrow after work

also I will look at the limit again at the same time
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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: With an enchanted slash, the empowered blow causes a foe to be deeply cut. The result is a bloody wound, a striking gash, that results in further pain than just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25%, 15%, and finally 5% the percentage is based off the initial strike if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10


Note bolded text. Can you rephrase this, because I'm confused at what it does? :)

And I like the idea of your Limit Break (reminds me of Eragon lol), but yeah, the 2 post limit needs to be made.
Edited by Kenny, Jul 1 2009, 08:17 AM.
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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: With an enchanted slash, the empowered blow causes a foe to be deeply cut. The result is a bloody wound, a striking gash, that results in further pain than just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25%, 15%, and finally 5% the percentage is based off the initial strike if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10


Correctly me if I'm wrong but this attack does a total of 45% damage......wouldn't this be considered bad?
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edited the limit break
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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: With an enchanted slash, the empowered blow causes a foe to be deeply cut. The result is a bloody wound, a striking gash, that results in further pain than just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25%, 15%, and finally 5% the percentage is based off the initial strike if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10


Correctly me if I'm wrong but this attack does a total of 45% damage......wouldn't this be considered bad?
No, it's like bleed damage.


Imagine Torin using this on Kyosuke. It deals 50 damage.

The next turn, Kyosuke takes 13 damage.


Turn after that, 8 damage.

turn after that, 3 damage

For a total of 74 damage. It's 145% damage over a course of 4 turns.
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Yeah, I just looked at the pretty numbers and not the skill. 1/2 approved with a repharsement like Kenny asked.
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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: With an enchanted slash, the empowered blow causes a foe to be deeply cut. The result is a bloody wound, a striking gash, that results in further pain than just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25%, 15%, and finally 5%. The percentage is based off the initial strike, but if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10

~ 1/2 approved.

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Name: Eyes of the dragon [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin using a ancient art passed down by his mother metamorphs his eyes. This enhances his vision beyond the norm. The enhancement also increases his reflexes slightly permiting him to react at the same level as his vison permits. Unlike other abilities he knows this does ends after a short time has past.
Requirements: Be Torin
Effect: Increases dodge by (spirit+agility+speed)/3 this effect ends after three posts.
Cost: N/A

~ 3 posts is too high. 2 is just right.
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edited the limit again
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okay 1/2 on those two
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Name: Eyes of the dragon [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: Torin using a ancient art passed down by his mother metamorphs his eyes. This enhances his vision beyond the norm. The enhancement also increases his reflexes slightly permiting him to react at the same level as his vison permits. Unlike other abilities he knows this does ends after a short time has past.
Requirements: Be Torin
Effect: Increases dodge by (spirit+agility+speed)/3 this effect ends after two posts
Cost: N/A

~ Fully approved.

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Name: Dance of Crimson Tears
Description: With an enchanted slash, the empowered blow causes a foe to be deeply cut. The result is a bloody wound, a striking gash, that results in further pain than just the initial slash.
Requirements: agility 30 Katana 30
Effect: Deals three rounds of damage at 25%, 15%, and finally 5%. The percentage is based off the initial strike, but if it hits 1 point of damage then the fallowing rounds are void.
Cost: 10

~ Fully approved.
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